[My 10th And Final Story] Darkness Never Dies

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  1. mochi

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    Nice chapter! I just checked out the other ones you wrote while I was away, and they're great!
     
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    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Katy_
    @CaptainJackValdy
    @Snakehammer19
    @TheHarryzx
    @pikachu
    Characters With Minor Roles:
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Sven007
    @TwageTomato
    @Kryokin
    @SandyTheDog
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    Chapter 17 - To The Mountain And Sea
    The darkness in my eyes slowly faded to grey.
    I opened my eyes, and in between the trees was the sun, just above the sea in the distance.
    I slowly crawled to the lake to get a drink and check my appearance.
    I lowered my head, but I paused when I noticed my reflection.
    The fur on my body was gone. My teeth and nails were back to normal. I wasn't a wolf anymore.
    I noticed my clothes thought slightly shredded due to the posture I had last night.
    So I got on my feet and woke Sandy up who was snoring louder than an elephant.
    "5 more minutes..." He murmured.
    I poked his fur again.
    "Mum, I said 5 more minutes."
    After poking him 5 more times, he finally got up.
    "Jeez Mum, you are so stri- oh hi Louise. Sorry, I was dreaming..." He yawned.
    "I can see that," I responded.
    "Oh, you're normal now. Nice to see you without the bushy fur all over you. You probably stank really bad too." He said.
    "But I don't understand... why? Why did I transform into a random creature? Is this world cursed?" I questioned.
    "Perhaps the orb you touched caused this." He explained.
    "The orb?" I asked.
    "Don't you remember? We went in a cave and found an orb. Then you touched it and you started to act weird, then you ran away-"
    He paused and widened his eyes.
    "Umm... where exactly are the others?" He gasped.
    "There you are! We were looking for you for hours! Sandy, what the hell were you doing?"

    A booming voice made my hands feel stiff.
    I turned around, and of course it was Kry with his face looking as red as an apple.
    "And what the heck was wrong with YOU!" He shouted at my face.
    "You just ran away like we were the dust in the wind. Seriously, was there like a fly chasing you or something?" He continued to argue.
    I wasn't sure what else he said. I just tried to ignore his rage.
    Then he pushed me.
    "Hey!" I hissed.
    "Wake up! Quite being so weird!" He shouted.
    I frowned and looked at Sandy.
    "Now now, Kry. We stayed here because we were tired, too weak to walk. So we rested here and decided to go to the others in the morning. Which is... now." Sandy explained.
    "Hmmph." He murmured.
    He brushed off the dust off his shoulder and then turned around and walked forward.
    I slowly followed him behind, but kept a metre gap between us just in case he would punch or kick me.
    Sandy was walking beside me. He looked so tired.
    I picked him up and let him rest in my arms.
    'I do feel quite odd or out of place whenever I with a large group of humans.' I remembered him saying that to me last night.
    I looked at him snore in my warm arms.
    "Oh thank goodness you found them!" A loud voice made Sandy snap awake.
    He leapt out of my arms and stood next to me.

    I looked at the group that had a small fire behind them.
    The flame sitting on the wood seemed small, almost about to disappear due to the breeze starting to blow stronger.
    "Jeez Louise, you look terrible. What happened to your clothes?" Twage asked, looking disgusted.
    "Twage, you can't just go up to people and say they look terrible, you donk." Agent S argued.
    "I umm... uh..."
    I struggled to look for words.
    "She bumped in Captain Jack. That's what happened." Sandy answered.
    "I.. I did?" I whispered.
    He winked at me then looked at Twage.
    Even though it was an excuse, it was true. I did almost bump into them.
    "Did you kill them?" Harry gasped.
    "No... I escaped them before they could kill me." I explained, scratching my head.
    They all looked each other. I looked at Sandy, looking a bit disappointed.
    "Pika pika?" Pikachu asked.
    "He said if you bumped into SnakeHammer." Agent S translated.
    "Wait... you can understand him? When did that happen?" Twage said, looking confused.
    "Well when you were all looking for Louise, I instead spent the whole time learning Pikachu's language. So now I can communicate with him." He explained.
    "So you pretty much did not help out at all..." Kry sighed.
    "Well... it helped me and Pikachu, but... now you guys. Heh." He shrugged.
    "Anyway, yeah I did see him. And well... he did seem quite bossy to the Gods. Especially Katy, too," I answered.
    "and... SnakeHammer said to them that he doesn't need you anymore, Pikachu... I think he thinks you're his enemy, now." I continued.
    His mouth dropped. His ears hung beside his face. He leaped off Agent S's shoulder and rushed away from us, heading to the sea.
    Agent S rushed to him and grabbed him before he could drown into the sea.
    "PIKA!" It cried.
    "No Pikachu! Don't you dare drown on purpose!" He cried.
    Then lightning buzzed around its cheeks, and lightning then leaped all over Agent S.
    He let go and Pikachu leaped into the water.

    Undead rushed into the water and dived down.
    We waited for a minute, wondering if they'll return.
    Luckily, Undead's head rushed out of the water with Pikachu in his hands.
    He walked towards us. Pikachu seemed unconscious, possibly dead.
    "Oh my lord..." Twage gasped.
    Undead pressed his ear on his chest.
    "His heart rate is slow, about to stop. We cannot let another group member die... no... we cannot let that happen again." He said.
    I remembered how the death of Blab made him seem more upset and angry. I couldn't imagine him more broken.
    "How do we save him?" I asked.
    "We must go to a high peak, close to the clouds. Then a lightning must shoot at Pikachu, restoring his energy which will save his life." Undead explained.
    I looked behind me and I noticed a steep, large mountain, almost touching the clouds.
    "Yep. That's where we need to go." He said.
    Agent S then came back and dropped to his knee's.
    "Oh no..." He whispered.
    "Agent S, we can save him," Sandy said.
    But that didn't cheer him up. His mouth was left hanging.
    He picked him and kept him close to his arms.
    Undead explained to Agent S about where we will go, but that still didn't fix his frown.
    So we rushed forward into the forest again, towards the mountain.

    We reached the roots of the mountain. The mountain seemed way too steep to just walk up.
    I looked around, looking for ways to get up there.
    "Twage, don't you have a spell that can make us float up there?" Undead asked.
    "I forgot how to spawn it... ehm..." He looked worried.
    Then at the corner of my eye was stairs made of ice, spiralling and reaching the very top of the mountain.
    "Could someone carry me while we go up there?" Twage asked.
    "Well... there's no other way, so let's go-"
    "Umm, doesn't it seem strange that a staircase made of ice appeared in the middle of the forest?" Kry interrupted Agent S.
    "The only one who could have done this is Crystal, one of Captain Jack's Gods." Undead explained.
    "Does that mean that they are on top of the mountain already?" Harry asked.
    "Most likely." Twage sighed.
    "We must go there, though! I don't care what it takes, we must go up there no matter what!" Agent S cried as he stared at Pikachu in his arms.
    I looked at everyone. We didn't really have a choice.
    So I walked to the stairs. I stepped on the first step.
    Before I could take another step, I felt my feet slightly move. I thought I'd fall.
    I quickly gripped my hands on the railing on the stairs and slowly walked up.
    The rest then went on the stairs. Twage kept slipping onto his head though.

    When we reached the top, I was crawling. My legs felt so weak. I thought they'd fall off.
    "If only if... there was an... elevator instead..." I said as I gasped.
    "That would've... saved my legs..." Sandy commented.
    I kept gasping as I tried to catch some breath.
    I slowly got on my feet and noticed the view.
    I heard a soft thunder echoe above me.
    Agent S stood next to me with Pikachu in his arms.
    "Okay... do we just lay him on the ground and wait for thunder?" Agent S asked.
    "I'm afraid so." I nodded.
    Agent S walked forward. Everyone stood behind me.
    He dropped to his knees, about to lay Pikachu in the grass.
    Suddenly, a squid spawned right in front of him.
    The squid grabbed Pikachu with it's tentacles.
    It then leaped away from Agent S and gave Pikachu to Captain Jack, who also had Katy and the Gods behind him.

    Captain looked at Pikachu and chuckled.
    "Hahaha. Fancy seeing you all here. What are you doing here?" He questioned.
    "We were... umm..." Harry struggled to search for words.
    "They came up here to heal Pikachu by the lightning above to make him awake again." Mystery answered.
    "Thank you Mystery." Captain Jack said.
    "How... how did you know..." I gasped.
    "I can read minds. Right now you are thinking of Blab." Mystery answered.
    I paused, looking shocked.
    "SnakeHammer, please. Pikachu will die without lightning resurrecting him. Please, save him." Twage pleaded.
    "Don't listen to them idoits. Bunch of donks." Katy hissed.
    SnakeHammer stared at Pikachu.
    "It is none of my buisness." SnakeHammer said.
    He raised his hand. Thunder bursted from above.
    I thought he'd resurrect Pikachu. I thought he'd help.
    "What did I tell you? Don't listen to them idoits!" Katy shouted.
    But I should've known that there was still darkness in his heart.

    A lightning zapped right behind me, making me gasp.
    The floor cracked in between me and the group.
    The crack reached from one side to the other of the mountain.
    Then the floor started to slide backwards.
    I slipped and fell as the floor got seperated from the mountain.
    And I continued to fall as the others stared in shock.
    Harry jumped off as well and reached his hand out.
    But my back then entered the water, and it was pitch black.

    I waited to be awoken. I waited and waited.
    My eyes opened. They were flooded with water.
    I was breathing fine. I looked at the rest of my body.
    But my legs had changed.
    They were formed into one tail, covered in red scales with a fish tail at the very end.
    "I'm... I'm a mermaid... great." I murmured.
    "Just bloody great." I complained.
    I looked to my left, and noticed Harry there.
    I thought he was drowning, but he was breathing just fine.
    "You can breathe underwater?" I gasped.
    "I... I can?" He gasped.
    He looked at himself.
    "Captain Jack must've given me the power to breathe underwater as well when I was born. I never knew that." He said.
    "What about the others... and Pikachu... and..."
    "We will return to them. But we did land quite far away from shore, and you did float further away from it when you were unconsious for a bit." He explained.
    So I began to wave my tail up and down as I pushed forward, aiming to get back to shore.
    To Be Continued...
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    Good chapter! The story is really great so far.
     
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    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @TheHarryzx
    @pikachu.
    @CaptainJackValdy

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    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Katy_
    @Snakehammer19
    @Sven007
    @TwageTomato
    @Kryokin
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    Chapter 18 - Captain Jack's Cave

    I continued to swim to the shore.
    I looked below, but the sand was still quite low on the sea floor.
    My strength started to drain fast. My tail and arms felt weak.
    "Louise, don't give up now. They'll think we're dead if we continue to wait." Harry said.
    I tried to push forward, but after one push I just stopped.
    I took a few minutes to catch my breath.
    I fell to the sand below me and laid on my back.
    Harry floated above me, looking quite unimpressed.
    "Oh Louise. You're better than this." He complained.
    I shook my head and avoided eye contact.
    I turned my head and Harry also sat next to me.
    "I thought you were better than this." I chuckled.
    "Hush." He hissed.
    I continued to stare at the water above me. Tiny snowflakes of white floated by.
    The sun was right above the water. It shined onto the waves.
    After a few minutes of staring at the sun, I pushed myself off the sand.
    Harry then hopped off the sand and looked at me.
    "Okay, I'll let that slide, but we better not stop again," He said.
    I kept nodding my head while rolling my eyes.
    Then he kicked his feet and waved his arms. I waved my tail up and down to gain speed.

    The sand was almost reaching the surface. I could touch the sand was I swam close to the top.
    The sand then led out of the water. So I quickly jumped my head out of the water.
    I felt the warmth touch my face and light enter my view. Particles of water flew around me then returned to the water beside me.
    I crawled to the shore, dragging my tail.
    Once my whole body was out of the sea I took deep breaths.
    But my tail felt strange.
    It felt like they were ripping and being separated.
    I looked at my tail. It was stretching.
    Then the scales ripped, and I noticed my pale legs.
    My pants were still on, my shoes too.
    "Thank goodness your pants stayed on," Harry said.
    I gave him an annoyed look then stood up.
    The ripped tail remained on the ground.
    "Pika?"
    I quickly looked forward, and a small creature stood there, tilting it's head.
    It was yellow with bright, red cheeks. Tall ears and also a zig-zag tail.
    But I couldn't believe my eyes. It was Pikachu.

    "Pikachu, I thought you were unconscious. I thought you were going to die." I gasped.
    "Pika pika chu." He said.
    "Where are the others?" Harry asked.
    "P-Pika! Pika Pika!" He exclaimed.
    He quickly rushed forward. He stopped, looked at us then pointed to the forest.
    We quickly followed him. He continued to rush forward.
    Ten minutes past and my legs felt like they could break.
    Pikachu stopped and stared at the distance.
    I looked up, and I saw the mountain we were on before.
    A large chip of it was gone.
    No one was on the mountain. I wondered if everyone was already gone.
    "Pika..." He sighed.
    "Perhaps Captain Jack, Katy and the Gods captured them and brought them to their base. I know where their base is located, but..." Harry paused.
    "When I used to work for him, in the base I saw a brainwashing machine in there. I remember Captain Jack saying that as soon as he captures you and the group, he'll brainwash you and turn you and the others into Gods like the others." He continued.
    "We must hurry then! I don't care if we're tired, we must boost straight there, no breaks." I cried.
    "Pikachu..." Pikachu groaned.
    Pikachu looked exhausted. He'd probably faint if he kept running.
    So I then placed him in my arms.
    But before we could run, I went over to a pond.
    I looked at my reflection and thought I saw Blab in the reflection.
    "Please... protect my friends..." I whispered.
    I thought I saw Blab give a quick smile, then the reflection of me returned.

    My legs felt like my machines. I kept running as Harry led me to the base.
    "Half way there. The base is quite hidden, though." Harry explained.
    I sighed and continued to run.
    Pikachu kept staring at me, occasionally moving its ears.
    "We're almost there Pikachu... maybe we could see SnakeHammer too," I whispered.
    His eyes raised. He looked surprised by my comment.
    Ten minutes past and we reached another mountain. Slightly shorter then the last one though.
    "Well... this is it." Harry said.
    I looked around, quite confused.
    "Umm... are you sure?" I asked.
    He nodded.
    He then continued to walk while staring at the mountain.
    But after 5 minutes walking around it, the mountain had a large cave in it.
    Inside was dark gray bricks, leading down to an infinite tunnel.
    Harry walked forward and pushed a brick that was slightly sticking out.
    Then the cave lit up with green lime torches.
    "Don't worry, there are no traps. Go on." He said.
    I stepped forward. Pikachu shivered in my arms.

    The tunnel kept going down. I thought it would never end.
    Then there was a dead end.
    "Are you serious?" I shouted.
    "Hold on." Harry paused.
    He went forward and pushed a brick.
    "Password." A computer voice said.
    "Darkness never dies." Harry answered.
    "Password correct. Opening main gate."
    The wall then shifted up.
    Next to the walls were chairs with a helmet sitting on skeletons.
    Some still had flesh, but all of their heads lost it's flesh.
    "These were all failed experiments. Captain Jack tried to make these poor people Gods, but the machine was too powerful and ended up melting their head and some of the machines even melted their bodies." He explained.
    I shivered as I continued to walk.
    Then there were large containers with purple liquid inside.
    I couldn't quite see inside of it due to a fog on the glass.
    I whiped the glass, and noticed a brain side of it.
    Around ten tubes were stuck inside of it.
    It looked so rotten. Some parts of it had large green bumps all over it.
    I thought I'd vomit, and of course, Harry kept making the atmosphere worst.
    "His second experiment was to try and enter chemicals into their brains, trying to change their minds and remove their memories and make the chemicals make them go crazy. But all it did was poison the brain and make them rot." Harry said.
    Then there was a skeleton on a chair with a tv in front of it. The tv just had static on it.
    "His third experiment was to make the victim watch a channel of what their power would be. I remembered one guy forced to watch fire on a tv for a week. He ended up burning half of this base after that." He explained.
    There was a small screen on the wall. Nine different scenes was shown on it.
    Two of the screens showed us in the hall way. The other six were other rooms with more skeletons with failed experiments, and one of them had Captain Jack and my friends.
    They had tubes connected to their brains while being chained and also plastic on their mouths with a tube connecting to a large tube filled with gas.
    "And this was his final experiment. They'd get inserted with drugs into their brain, making their brains then get controlled by a dark power that is random. Then the gas would make them calm and not attack Captain Jack for a week. After a week they'd then be encouraged to trust him, and they usually would then do. If he activates the machine, they'll then be encouraged to then forever hunt for us non-stop. All they'd think about is us dying. All they'd want is for us to be dead."

    He quickly then rushed forward. I quickly rushed up to him.
    We reached an iron door. I pressed my ear on it and heard blurry voices.
    "You crazy witch! You deserve to die in a hole!"
    "Oh hush you little fat tomato."
    "Twage, enough."
    "Okay lads. Now, is the machine almost charged SnakeHammer?"
    "Yep. Almost ready."
    I gasped and took a step back.
    "How do we get in?" I questioned while sweating.
    "Pikachu, do you know any moves that can charge through the door?" Harry asked Pikachu.
    Pikachu ran away from the door then faced it.
    He then charged forward with lightning spazzing all over his body.
    He charged right into the door.
    The door fell forward onto the ground, and I noticed Captain Jack's and Katy's horrified faces.
    "H-How did you get h- ahh nevermind. Gods! Kill them now! SnakeHammer, activate the ma-"
    Before Captain Jack could finish, Pikachu already broke all the machines and chains on my friends.
    "Why you little gold hero." Agent S smiled.
    Pikachu hopped on Agent S's shoulder and rushed towards me.
    "How did you g-"
    I quickly pushed him out of the way before an arrow could stab him.
    "No time for talk. Let's get out of here, now!" I cried.
    The group rushed past me. I followed them forward.
    "Damn Louise. I swear if you waited one more second we would've been dead." Kry commented.
    "Thank Harry and Pikachu." I said.

    Before we could rush out of the cave, the main gate shut.
    "Intruder alert. Locking down all exits." The base called.
    I leaned against the wall as the God's walked forward.
    "Cheeky little idoits." Katy hissed.
    "I can't wait to suck their blood..." Squidling hissed.
    "Calm down the edge Squidling." Melody said.
    Robo began to walk forward with his hands on his hammer.
    My vision started to glow red. I felt something burn against my hand.
    The hammer was then about to squish me.
    Twage tried to shoot fire at Robo, but it did nothing.
    But I stopped the hammer with the palm of my hand.
    "Go... to hell." I whispered.
    And my hand on the hammer then bursted into flames. The hammer caught fire and spread to Robo.
    My feet hovered off the ground. I clasped my hands together and sprayed fire at them all.
    However, Mystery then spawned a giant glove and covered them all as the fire danced around it.
    The glove despawned. Mystery frowned.
    Robo continued to shout as fire danced around it's body.
    Crystal quickly sprayed cold ice at Robo which made the flame calm down.
    Once the fire was gone, I noticed a bit of his helmet gone now.
    There were black ashes around his eye due to the fire.
    But I was distracted by his eye. When I looked forward about to spray more fire, Katy took a step forward and threw a spear at me.
    And then it was just darkness. I kept hearing stuff. I heard screaming and shouting, but I couldn't see or move.
    "Do not let the darkness consume you..." A soft whisper sounding like Blab whispered in my head.
    To Be Continued...
     
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    I'm so sorry for the late reply.
    I was half way through this chapter, until I suddenly deleted it all by accident.
    Not only that, but school has been killing me again, making me avoid the things I love. Please read this thread about what's been happening lately and how I really feel: http://www.itsjerryandharry.com/threads/an-open-message-to-my-sadness.97115/

    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @CaptainJackValdy
    @Snakehammer19
    @Katy_
    @TheUndeadBrave
    Characters With Minor Roles:
    @Sven007
    @TwageTomato
    @Kryokin
    @SandyTheDog
    @pikachu.

    Characters Mentioned:
    @TheHarryzx
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 19 - The T-Rex's Roar
    I heard the calls, screams, and shouts.
    My eyes were superglued shut while I couldn't feel anything.
    It was like being dead but still hearing things.
    It was painful, hearing all my friends scream in horror, while I had no idea what I was doing.
    "Louise, stop!" They'd scream.
    I wanted to shout, but my mouth was shut.
    But suddenly, it stopped.
    The screams and shouts paused. All I heard was mumbling and footsteps.
    'Did... did my friends die...'
    'Are they dead?' my mind would assume.
    I wanted to wake up. I needed to know what's happening.
    But I remained in the dark abyss.
    After trying to move or shout ten times, my eyelids started to feel lighter.
    My view was blurry. The colour grey dominated my view with handfuls of flesh colours.
    One dot of flesh came closer. I saw the mouth and eyes as it stared at me, but I couldn't figure out who it was.
    "She's awake!" It said.
    "W...What..." I murmured.
    My muscles felt weak, while my vision was still blurry.
    "Louise?" Someone said.
    After staring for long enough, my vision started to get clearer.
    Apparently, Undead was in front of me with Sandy next to him, licking his paws.
    "Can you see me?" He asked.
    "Y-Yes." I whispered.
    "Are you in pain."
    I shook my head.
    Then my view was completely clear.

    We were still in the cave, but not in the dungeon. I could see the entrance still near the back of the cave.
    I looked to my left, and there was the forest.
    Everyone was sitting around the cave. Agent S and Pikachu were sitting on a rock while Kry leaned against the wall, arms crossed. Twage was sitting on the floor. I looked at Undead and Sandy in front of me. I raised my hand and patted Sandy.
    "What... what happened," I asked.
    "Why do I feel so weak."
    "You... you don't remember what you did, do you?" Undead said.
    I sighed and shook my head.
    "Well... we went to the mountain to heal Pikachu, but Captain Jack, Katy, and the Gods were there. SnakeHammer shot a lightning near you, making half of the mountain collapse. You and Harry fell, and... what actually happened to you when you fell? How did you survive." He paused.
    "I... umm..." I struggled to look for words.
    I began to sweat, wondering if he'll think if I'm crazy.
    "I... landed in water. Harry was able to breathe, while..." I paused and looked away.
    "Well?"
    "I became a mermaid. I don't know why." I said.
    "That must've been one of the powers you gained from the orb you touched in that cave near the beach." He explained.
    "Anyway, you then came to that dungeon where we were trapped, about to be turned into Gods, until you saved us, but..." He avoided eye contact with me and sighed.
    "Let me finish. When you broke in, you then went... crazy. You had fire in the palms of your hands, grabbed the spear that Katy tried to stab you with and sprayed fire all over the place. We almost got burned, but the door opened and we asked, and you went unconscious." Sandy explained.
    "I... had fire?" I gasped.
    He nodded.
    When I said those words, Kry marched towards me.

    "You sick woman! You almost killed us! You bloody idoit!" He hissed.
    "Kry, you do not understand how uncontrollable her power is." Undead said calmly.
    "Oh yeah, sure. While look at you, able to spawn shields and stuff, and Twage able- well... almost able to control what he does, while you fling your arms around, not caring about us and almost burning the whole place down." Kry shouted.
    I felt the spit fall on my face.
    "Kry, you need to control your anger." Sandy said.
    "Oh shut up you useless beast!"
    Sandy whimpered. I stroked his back as he laid on my legs.
    "Kry, that's enough." Agent S said as he hopped off the rock.
    "Pika Pika!" Pikachu growled.
    Kry looked at everyone. He marched off and stared at the entrance to the dungeon.
    "You must understand the rage inside of him..." Agent S sighed.
    "I know." I answered briefly.
    Twage then came over, looking confused.
    "What's his problem? I was daydreaming while there was a ruckus over here." Twage asked.
    "Kry... he's slowly getting more uncalm everyday due to our mistakes." Sandy sighed.
    "Hmm, I see," Twage said.
    "W-Wait. Where's Harry?" I asked.
    Everyone looked at Undead.
    "He got captured by Captain Jack." Undead answered.

    Suddenly, the ground vibrated, and a booming, loud roar shook our ears.
    I pressed my hands on my ears, but the roar was so loud that I thought my ears would explode.
    The sound of the roar calmed down, and everyone looked shocked.
    "What the hell was that?" Twage gasped.
    Undead helped me get up. My legs still felt not as strong.
    I slowly walked while limping to the outside of the cave.
    And I thought it was an illusion.
    I thought it wasn't real.
    But there it was.
    A giant T-Rex, right in front of me.
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    "Oh... my lord." I gasped.
    It then turned towards me.
    I quickly bolted back into the cave.
    And I felt the stomps follow me right behind me.
    I screamed and gasped as I saw the others.
    Then they all saw the T-Rex too and shouted.
    "I thought they were extinct! The internet lied to me again!" Twage complained.
    "Wait, what's happening to it's chest?" Agent S said.
    The chest of the T-Rex started to open.
    A transparent, red flesh was shown, and there was something blurry and dark inside.
    I looked closer, and there was a PERSON in there.
    There were tube sticking into it.
    "Whoever that is, we better save it!" Sandy exclaimed.
    I looked behind me, and Kry was still staring at the entrance.
    "Kry, are you going to help?" Undead asked.
    He remained still. I sighed and concentrated on the T-Rex in front of me.
    And out of the fog was Captain Jack, Katy and the Gods.

    "G'day lads. What do you think of this beast?" Captain Jack giggled.
    We remained silent.
    "Hmmph, dog must've caught their tongue." Katy chuckled.
    Sandy growled.
    "Or the mouse." SnakeHammer laughed.
    Pikachu also growled.
    "Anyway, that's enough talk today. T-Rex, kill them." Captain Jack commanded.
    Twage shot a fire ball at the Gods, but SnakeHammer spawned an electric ball.
    The fire and electric combined, and created an explosion.
    Dust and smoke filled my view. I coughed and waved my hand to push the smoke away.
    Then I saw the feet of the T-Rex run just past me, and I saw heaps of spell get shot near me.
    Ice spikes, eye crushing music, mini arrows, floating gloves, a bunch of squids, electric and Robo charged towards me.
    But due to the smoke, it all went past me, but I began to worry about the others.
    I turned around and began to run. I escaped the smoke, and saw the others.
    However, Undead seemed hurt. There was an arrow in his shoulder and parts of his skin bleeding.
    "Agent S, take him back to the cave and fix him up." I commanded Agent S.
    He picked him up and rushed to the cave.
    "Twage, can't you fire some spells?" Sandy hissed.
    "I can't, or it'll just create another explosion!" Twage gasped.
    Then Melody played his harp.
    The music felt like it was controling my mind.
    I stayed calm, but my eyelids felt heavy.
    Sandy was already on the ground asleep, while Twage was about to fall asleep too.
    But suddenly, the T-Rex then slammed to the ground, making the ground vibrate, making us awake again.

    I saw the eyes of the T-Rex move under it's eyelids, about to wake up again.
    "God dammit Melody! You had one job!" I heard Katy shout.
    "Calm your mouth woman!" Melody hissed.
    They began to argue while we tried to figure out what to do.
    "We must cut the person inside of the T-Rex out." Sandy said.
    "But how? My spells will just instead burn the person inside!" Twage gasped.
    Out of no where, Kry came and had a knife on his hand.
    He stabbed the chest of the T-Rex, letting light red blood ooze out.
    "Ehh..." Twage said uncomfrtably.
    Kry kept cutting the layers of the chest, then went inside of the chest.
    "I hope he has a shower when he comes out..." Sandy sighed.
    While he was inside, the clouds began to grow dark and bunch up.
    SnakeHammer then raised his hand and flung it down, and the clouds started to growl.
    Pikachu quickly jumped in front of us and spawned an electric ball.
    The lightning zapped right onto the electric ball. The lightning stopped while the electric ball bursted.
    Then Katy charged straight at us.
    She had a spear in her hand and was about to stab me.
    Pikachu tried to shoot a lightning at her, but the point of the spear blocked it.
    She was about to stab me, until I grabbed the very point of it.
    But I was not the one that did that.

    In fact, I wasn't the one moving. It was like my mind stopped taking commands from me.
    And I saw fire blaze on my hand.
    I floated into the air as my vision turned faintly red.
    I saw Kry escape the T-Rex with the person in his arms, but then he saw me, and he scrunched up his fist.
    I sprayed fire at him, but he quickly jumped out of the way, instead on the T-Rex.
    It's scales burned and turned black. It spread to it's head and melted it's teeth and tongue.
    Then I spawned a giant fire ball above the Gods.
    It was as big as the T-Rex.
    I then flung my hand down, and the fire ball crushed right onto them.
    A large explosion rang my ears. The tree's around had fire dancing on them as smoke flew into the sky.
    The smoke covered my view. The smoke then slowly faded, and Mystery had a shield around all the Gods.
    "Good little Mystery. Looks like you aren't so useless after all." Captain Jack said.
    "Why didn't you do that before whenever we got attacked, you idoit!" Katy hissed.
    All the Gods looked at Mystery, worried. Mystery looked down still frowning.
    "Now you better use that more often young lady. Don't think that saving us once will make us like you." SnakeHammer complained.
    "Anyway, thanks for playing lads. That was an interesting experiments. We will study your weaknesses and attacks in our new base, so your attacks will now be uselss against us. Ciao!" Captain Jack explained.
    "How many bases do you seriously have?!" Twage shouted.
    Captain Jack then spawned a portal.
    I sprayed fireagain, but Mystery's portal was still up.
    When they all entered the portal, I shot another fireball one more time, creating a cloud of smoke puff up.
    I floated back to the ground. As soon as my toes touched the ground, I fell on my back, breathing heavily.
    I saw Kry next to me. His face was bright red.
    He still had the knife in his hand, and stabbed me.

    To Be Continued...
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    Hi. Sorry that I haven't posted a chapter in a while.
    School is making me loose my interests that I love. I used to love singing and dancing, but due to the lack of support, I was worried that I'd continue to be bullied if I continue my hobbies.

    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @TheHarryzx
    @Kryokin

    @CaptainJackValdy
    @Snakehammer19
    @Katy_
    Characters With Minor Roles:
    @Sven007
    @TwageTomato
    @SandyTheDog
    @pikachu.
    @TheUndeadBrave
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 20 - Kry's And Anger
    I looked to my left, and the knife was right in front of my eyes.
    "You almost killed me... on PURPOSE!" Kry shouted.
    He kicked my hip. A thunder of pain struck.
    He grabbed the knife and tried to stab me right in the chest.
    Agent S came just in time and grabbed his hand and shoved it back, away from me.
    Twage helped me get up and Sandy whimpered as he came towards me.
    "Kry, for goodness sake, killing her won't help at all," Twage shouted.
    "Well soon she's going to kill us all!" Kry argued.
    "You need to give her time to control her anger. You raging at her will just increase her rage." Undead said calmly.
    But Kry still struggled to shove Agent S's hand off his knife.
    I noticed the sky having a mixed colour of purple and red.
    Then the sky went to dead black, and I felt my hand shake.
    Kry shoved and held his knife beside his head.
    He then swung his hand forward, about to stab me.
    But my hand struck forward, and my claw stabbed through the knife.
    I flicked the knife out of my claw, making it fling by.
    I rolled onto my belly and stood with all four of my limbs.
    I noticed the grey fur all over my arm with the sharp, long claws.
    "What the hell?!" Kry gasped.
    I looked at Sandy, looking slightly worried.
    Kry quickly rushed to the knife near a tree and rushed towards me.

    A purple shield spawned around me. Kry continued to stab the shield, making cracks grow around it.
    It then collapsed and he was about to stab me.
    I grabbed the knife with my teeth and threatened to stab him with it.
    I hissed and growled and slowly crawled forward, lowering my head.
    Sandy jumped in front of him with legs spread out.
    "Louise, I know you are mad at him, but killing him will increase the darkness inside of you," Sandy explained.
    I continued to crawl forward. Sandy and Kry slowly shoved backwards.
    I leaped forward, about to charge right into Sandy.
    But Twage then grabbed me and walked back.
    I shoved and wiggled as he brought me back to the cave.
    When there was shade, my posture started to go straight and the rage calmed down.
    "Louise, he isn't evil," Twage said calmly.
    "Pika Pika!" Pikachu said as he pointed at the body, leaning against the wall of the cave.
    "Look, he saved him." Twage said.
    I looked at the body. It was breathing slowly with its eyes closed and head tilted back.
    I walked towards it. I examined the body.
    Then I realised it was Harry.

    His robe with ripped and torn with blood and cuts on his arms.
    "He was the one in the T-Rex's chest?" I asked.
    Pikachu nodded as he sat close to him.
    Harry's eyes opened. The pupil was black, almost dead with no colour.
    "Who... who are you." He whispered.
    My eyes widened.
    "His memory... was wiped?" I gasped.
    "Indeed." Undead said as he walked forward.
    Agent S was holding Kry's arms as they walked forward.
    I looked at Kry. Rage remained in his eyes.
    "I'm... I'm so sorry... the darkness inside of me is slowly growing... I cannot control-"
    "You monster!" He cried.
    "You bloody monster!"
    "You bloody attacked me!"
    He continued to shout while I remained dead inside.
    "Kry, you don't understand-"
    "Shut up! Shut up, shut up, shut up!" Kry repeated.
    Agent S was then shoved and Kry charged forward, with his fist scrunched up tight.
    Undead quickly grabbed his fist before it could punch my face.
    "Kry, the darkness in you is no weaker than the darkness in Louise." Undead said calmly.
    "In fact, it's stronger than hers."
    Kry stared at Undead for a minute, then sighed.

    "I believe I'm not wanted anymore," Kry said.
    "Kry that's not tru-"
    "Enough." Kry interrupted Sandy.
    "The rage inside of me seems to make you all hate me now." Kry sighed.
    "Well. Then I must leave." He continued.
    "Exactly where are you going? Are you going to work for Captain Jack?!" Sandy gasped.
    "No. I will avoid him and you all so none of you can rage at me anymore." Kry explained.
    Kry looked at everyone and sighed, then turned and headed to the forest.
    I stared at him as he walked off as the bushes and trees then covered his existence.
    "Well... looks like he's gone." Agent S sighed.
    "I know he gets angry a lot, but I didn't want him to leave." Twage said.
    "He will return." Undead said.
    I looked at him as my eyes widened.
    "But darkness is involved if you want to convince him to come back." He continued.
    "Oh no. No, we cannot do that." Sandy said.
    "But he cannot go alo-"
    "No. We cannot let the darkness inside of you grow. We cannot. I'm sorry, but I refuse." Sandy said.
    "Oh come on Sandy." Agent S said.
    "Pika... chu." Pikachu sighed.
    "We cannot," Sandy said.

    "What are you doing?!"
    I quickly turned around, and Harry was being held by Katy, who was standing right next to a portal.
    "H-Hey! You better give him back!" Sandy growled.
    "Oh yeah, sure. When's he's dead!" Katy giggled.
    "What is your problem lady?!" Harry shouted.
    "Oh nothing. Anyway, ciao!" Katy giggled.
    She hopped into the portal.
    I quickly rushed towards the portal before it closes.
    "No Louise! Come back!" Twage gasped.
    "Pika Pika!" Pikachu cried.
    "I'm getting him back!" I cried.
    I dived right into the portal, and then it was silent as darkness wrapped around my view.

    I landed right on my stomach. I tried not to cough or gasp since when I looked up, Captain Jack, Katy, and the Gods were right there.
    Katy was right in front of me with Harry in her arms.
    "Nice work Katy." Captain Jack said as he patted her back.
    None of them noticed me yet. They all kept looking at Katy and Harry.
    "Now all we need to do is catch Louise! Ha ha!" Katy laughed.
    SnakeHammer then looked at me and smiled.
    "I don't think that is necessary," SnakeHammer said.
    "Why?" Katy asked.
    "Because we already have caught her." SnakeHammer giggled.
    They all then noticed me and held their hands and weapons forward.
    "Now now, let me take it from here." Captain Jack said.
    "Can we hurry up and kill her! Her existence makes me gag!" Katy hissed.
    "Not yet." Captain Jack said.
    "Wow. You're nice, letting me live for another couple of minutes instead of dying already." I said sarcastically.
    Captain Jack giggled.
    "Foolish little girl." Captain Jack chuckled.
    He slapped my face. My cheek began to burn.
    "Get up if you want to live a bit longer." Captain Jack commanded.
    I got on my feet. SnakeHammer grabbed my arm before I could do anything.

    I noticed this place. In fact, it was like we were just here before.
    Then I realised that this is the exact same dungeon we were in before.
    The walls were burnt and some of the skeletons on the ground were born.
    "We managed to fix this place after you tried to destroy it," Melody commented.
    I rolled my eyes as I stared at the walls.
    We went in the exact room that my friends were in before.
    I saw the broken chains on the floor with the tubes filled with gas also shattered with nothing in them.
    SnakeHammer shoved me into a seat and quickly put new chains around my arms and legs.
    Harry was placed in a seat next to me.
    "What is this place... lady, do you know who these people are?" Harry asked.
    "I know exactly who they are." I groaned.
    "Wow, your memory isn't so stupid after all!" Katy giggled.
    "What is your name..." Harry questioned.
    "Louise," I answered.
    "Well Louise, my name is-"
    He paused and his eyes widened.
    "Ahem. My name is... what the... what is my name... I thought I had one... I-"
    "Your name is Finn," SnakeHammer answered.
    "It is?" Harry gasped.
    "No, it isn't, it's Harry." I tried to whisper.
    "Yep! That's your name!" Katy also answered.
    I frowned as he smiled when he heard his name.
    "Wow, Finn is a great name!" He giggled.
    "But it isn't-"
    "Okay, is the machine ready?" Captain Jack questioned.
    "Yep. Insert the tubes." SnakeHammer answered.

    Robo leaned against the door with his hammer beside him. I still could see his eye that looked quite mad.
    "Ow!" I gasped.
    I felt a sharp pain go through my arms.
    The pain engulfed my fear. I just wanted the pain to stop.
    "What are you going to do to her?" Harry asked.
    "Oh, just receive some of her dark blood inside of her." Katy chuckled.
    "Dark blood? Isn't blood red?" Harry gasped.
    "Not in this special snowflake." Squidling laughed.
    "Okay. Activate the machine." Captain Jack said.
    Then zaps of pain went up my arm.
    I could feel my strength get engulfed by the pain and slowly get weak.
    Then the pain stopped. I felt so weak. I thought I was going to vomit.
    "Perfect," SnakeHammer said.
    SnakeHammer handed a small container to Captain Jack.
    "Lovely. Look at that." Captain Jack said as he examined the container.
    The liquid inside was charcoal dark but had hints of red in it.
    "Now Harry, while we insert this into you, your brain will also receive some chemicals that'll make you receive some darkness and rage. Now enjoy the ride!" Captain Jack giggled.
    "Wh-What? What darkness? What is going on?!" Harry gasped.
    "Harry, just stay calm..." I whispered.
    "His name is Finn, you idiot!" Katy shouted as she slapped me.

    I heard him grunt as tubes got inserted in him.
    Then a large metal helmet was put on him with a tube connected to a large container with dark smoke.
    "Get these things off me!" Harry shouted.
    "Too late..." Mystery said.
    "♪ ...to turn back nooooow... I believe, I believe, I believe- ♪"
    Melody then got punched in the stomach before he could finish.
    "Hey, that's my favourite song, okay?" Melody hissed at Arrow who kept giggling.
    My head felt so heavy. I couldn't keep my eyes open.
    I couldn't move my head or limbs since they felt so empty.
    I ended up closing my eyes to try and build up my strength again.
    "Activate the machine!"
    Then I heard an explosion. I was about to wake up, but I was already unconscious.
    To Be Continued...
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    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    Hi guys!
    I've been in a better mood lately so the story will be back on track now :)

    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX (Louise)
    @TwageTomato (Twage)
    @Kxmiy (Harry)
    Characters With Minor Roles:
    @Sven007 (Agent S)
    @SandyTheDog (Sandy)
    @pikachu. (Pikachu)
    @TheUndeadBrave (Undead)
    Characters Mentioned:
    @Kryokin (Kry)
    @CaptainJackValdy (Captain Jack)
    @Snakehammer19 (SnakeHammer)
    @Katy_ (Katy)
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 21 - The Planets Of Shadows
    I awoke.
    My eyelid still had constant weight, but I managed to keep them up.
    I thought Kry was in front of me, but it was just Undead, looking down.
    I shifted my hand. He then looked at me.
    "Ah you're awake. Are you feeling okay?" He asked.
    I nodded, even though I felt a bit unawake.
    Sandy then waddled towards me. He had the usual sparkle in his eyes.
    "We have good news and bad news," Sandy said.
    "What's the good news?" I whispered.
    "Good news is, the darkness inside of you is gone. So yay, you're okay." Sandy explained.
    "Bad news?"
    "Bad news is... all your powers are gone, and Harry appears to have those powers, and worst of all, he's working for Captain Jack again."
    I quickly got on my feet.
    "Wh-Where is hell is he?" I gasped.
    "Gone."
    I widened my eyes.
    "Oh yeah, welcome to your fifth adventure." Agent S said as he walked towards me.
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    Millions of new plants sprouted around that looked hardly liked the ones on earth.
    New species of animals flew and galloped around.
    "Let's call this planet..." Twage thought for a second.
    "...Earth!" He cheered.
    Agent S lightly slapped him.
    "You donk, that name is already taken." Agent S hissed.
    "How about... Arphor." Undead suggested.
    "Arphor huh? So like, 'R' then the number four?" Twage asked.
    "Spelled like A-R-P-H-O-R." Undead answered.
    "Why not A-R-F-O-R?" Agent S asked.
    "Doesn't matter! Arphor it is!" Sandy hissed.
    I stared at the view, examining ever little detail.
    "How can those small chunks of land float in the middle of nowhere?" I commented.
    "I don't know. Gravity?" Agent S said.
    "Pika Pika." Pikachu said as he sat on Agent S' shoulder.
    "W-Wait, where's Kry?" I gasped.
    "Don't you remember? He left." Sandy answered.
    My heart immdietatly sped up.
    "He l-left?" I gasped.
    "Yeah. Did you forget?" Twage asked.
    I shook my head.

    "Is there a way to get him back?" I asked.
    "Yes, but darkness may start to grow in you again." Undead said.
    "What do we have to do?" Agent S questioned.
    "We must harm one that was once us." Undead suggested.
    "Who?"
    "Harry."
    I could hear my heart vibrate through my body.
    "No. We cannot." Sandy sighed.
    None of us then answered.
    "Pika, pika chu." Pikachu commented.
    "Hmm" Agent S said.
    Pikachu pointed at his belly and then rubbed.
    "You're hungry, right?" Agent S asked.
    Pikachu nodded and frowned.
    "Well, how do we know that the plants here are safe to eat?" Twage asked.
    "Perhaps we can find an intelligent species here that may contain food that is safe for us," Sandy suggested.
    "What if the things they eat aren't right for us to eat?" Agent S asked.
    "Pika!" Pikachu shouted.
    "I think we should stop arguing and just see." Agent S suggested.
    We finally agreed with what he said and turned around and walked forward.

    The mossy grass was quite soft, almost like a pillow.
    "Can I just say that the grass on Arphor is much softer than on Earth's?" I commented.
    Everyone agreed.
    "I seriously want to sleep on it right now." Sandy groaned.
    I looked at his eyes and they were slightly closed.
    I picked him up and let him rest in my arms.
    "We can sleep on the grass later," I said.
    "Look in between those red trees. Look really closely." Agent S said.
    I looked closely and squinched my eyes.
    I saw a grey window with grey wood around.
    "A hut?" I said.
    "Not only a hut. A BUNCH of huts!" Agent S cheered.
    "A village!" Twage cheered, waking Sandy up.
    "Wh-What? A village? Where?" Sandy gasped.
    He hopped off my arms onto the ground and sniffed the air.
    "Twage was about to charge forward, but Undead stopped him.
    "We must introduce ourselves politely so they do not think we are harm." Undead explained.
    "Pika chu." Pikachu groaned. His skin was slightly pale.
    "Okay, but we better introduce ourselves quickly and try and ask for food or anything edible." Agent S said.

    We walked forward as we each hid behind a tree.
    I stood on one leg and leaned slightly to my right.
    No life was seen in the village. Just empty huts.
    Then I thought I saw life.
    It walked forward, looking at each of the small huts and shelters with emptiness in its eyes.
    Then it stopped, looking down at the single puff of grass in front of his feet.
    "Wait... something is not right about it." Undead said.
    I looked at Undead, staring at it.
    "Look at its eyes... closely." He said.
    I looked at its eyes.
    And in the deepest abyss of its pupil was red.
    "Harry..." I whispered.
    When I said that name. It looked up, directly at me.
    I gasped and quickly hid behind the tree, standing as straight as I could.
    He stood on his toes, and very slowly, he then lifted.
    "My gosh..." Sandy murmured.
    He was then above the height of the huts.
    And a flame burst in the palm of his hand.

    The flame danced above its hand as the tips of the flame turning to smoke.
    "No..." I murmured.
    "He's going to burn the village down! Run!" Twage gasped.
    I heard everyone's footsteps behind me, but I remained as I stared at him.
    "Louise!" I heard Sandy shout.
    I refused to answer.
    My hand was grabbed and pulled away. I still kept my eyes on Harry, who was just floating there with the flame still in his hand.
    "He's not doing anything." I said to Agent S.
    He didn't stop and kept running as I was forced to also run.
    We finally stopped, and we could just see the head of Harry as the trees covered the rest of his body.
    "He's just floating there..." Twage said.
    Harry then lifted his hand with the flame in front of him. He stared at the flame, dancing in his hand.
    We kept silent, waiting for his next move.
    And then, he threw the fire at the village.
    Fire sprayed from his hand as the trees caught ablaze.
    "What has Captain Jack done to him... he's no longer human, he's chaos." Undead said.

    Then Harry turned his head to us, and we all immediately ran in the opposite direction.
    I heard fire being spread as it grew near us.
    The grass below my feet didn't feel soft anymore. It felt hard, making my feet sting everytime I took a step.
    The strength in my legs started to drain fast.
    The sound of fire stopped. I paused and turned around.
    Luckily, the fire wasn't close enough to harm us, so we were safe for now.
    "Is there a way to cure the darkness in him." Twage asked.
    "I'm not quite sure." Undead sighed.
    "Pika..."
    Pikachu looked terribly sick. We had to find him food soon.
    "Pikachu is getting weaker." Agent S exclaimed as he pressed his hand on Pikachu's forehead.
    "His forehead is warm as well." He continued.
    "He must have a fever as well then." Undead explained.
    "Is it possible for yellow mice to have fevers?" Twage gasped.
    "Probably." I shrugged.
    Sandy then barked.
    His nose was pointing at a direction.
    In the distance was another village, but with brighter wood and only a couple of huts with fields of crops.
    I pat Sandy on the head as he licked his nose.
    "I knew I smelt something!" Sandy giggled.
    "Hopefully the citizens there will let us take some crops to feed Pikachu..." Agent S said while worried.

    When we arrived there, the citizens there were actually similar to humans.
    They clothes were shaggy and poor and their skin was pale. Their fingers were more spread out like a frogs hand and also had a long tail too like a hairless wolf tail.
    They gave us confused looks. Even some small ones quickly ran to their adults.
    They started to whisper to each other when they froze in place.
    One came forward and started to speak a weird language.
    "Hey... I know that language!" Twage gasped.
    "YOU understand that language? You don't even understand how a toaster works..." Agent S sighed.
    "We learnt it in wizardry school!" Twage cheered.
    "Wait, wait, wait. So out of all the millions of languages in the entire milky way, this was the chosen language." Sandy gasped.
    "It's a long story. Maybe one of the teachers is from this planet... I can't remember." Twage shrugged.
    "Well talk to them!" Undead commanded.
    He stepped forward and spoke, and the citizens seemed to understand as their faces lit up.
    They then had a long conversation. Twage then paused and turned to us.
    "Apparently they like tomato's too!" Twage cheered.
    "Twage, ask them if they have any kind of food that's edible." I asked.
    Twage spoke again. They then pointed at hut,
    "Someone in that hut will be able to help you with whatever you need." Twage explained.
    "How do you say thank you in your language?" Sandy questioned.
    "Ree." Twage answered.
    We all said ree more then five times.
    I stood at the door. Everyone stood behind me.
    I slowly pushed the door open.
    To Be Continued...
    Character requests are now open! In need of one female character. Please feel free to ask to be added if you are a female. (I'm not being sexist by the way, I'd just like to balance the genders in the story since there is more males then females.)
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    Hi! Since the work in school is calming down due to the holidays coming, I'll be able to post chapters more regulary, at least twice a week instead of once. :)
    Characters With Major Roles:
    @LouiseXminerX (Louise)
    @Kxmiy (Harry)
    @SandyTheDog (Sandy)
    Characters With Minor Roles:
    @Sven007 (Agent S)
    @TwageTomato (Twage)
    @pikachu. (Pikachu)
    @TheUndeadBrave (Undead)​
    @CaptainJackValdy (Captain Jack)
    @Snakehammer19 (SnakeHammer)
    @Katy_ (Katy)
    Characters Mentioned:
    @Kryokin (Kry)
    And A New Character Awakens...
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 22 - Xeno

    Once the door was open, it was dark inside with only a hint of light near the back of the room.
    Sandy started to then growl and bent down.
    “Appears to be a foe in here…” Sandy growled.
    Suddenly, we heard a growl back that was slightly higher pitched.
    Sandy responded with more hisses and growls. He crawled forward.
    Then out of the shadows appears the nose of a creature.
    They were then both growling, both mouths close.
    Then the creature leaped onto Sandy. It bit Sandy’s tail as Sandy hopped back.
    Sandy then bit it’s belly and it fell on it’s back.
    The creature continued to try and bite Sandy’s face off as Sandy kept biting it’s belly.
    I grabbed Sandy as he wriggled and struggled to escape my arms.
    “Let go! We must fight like real dogs otherwise I’ll be known as a coward!” Sandy shouted.
    The creature tried to jump high to bite Sandy.
    “Tio hos ga loom ba dee!”
    We paused. The creature then crawled backwards.
    A sharp shard began to appear out of the dark and came forward.
    I noticed a fist wrapped around the handle of the spear.
    The face was then visible.
    A woman.

    Her hair was in a pony tail and has thin strands of hair sitting beside her face. Her hair was bright pink.
    She had sunglasses on her head with gloves that had ends cut off, showing her fingers.
    She had shorts and a shaggy t-shirt and also had an ocelot jacket. She also had a belt with many different kinds of gadgets in it.
    “Karba! Tee ra kilbo see!” She hissed.
    “She’s saying to go away and never return.” Twage translated.
    She then paused. She placed her spear onto the ground.
    “You… you speak English?” She gasped.
    We all nodded.
    “Then… you must be from that blue and green planet! Was it called Earth?” She gasped.
    “Indeed.” Undead answered.
    “Oh… oh my…” Her eyes widened.
    She kneeled down onto one knee with her spear pointing up.
    “I’ve heard… many great things about you earthlings…” She said.
    “We’re called humans.” Twage commented.
    “Humans… yes… you see, a satellite crashed here which continued information about earth and you humans who lived there. You listen to music and your planet contain so many great creatures and have fascinating technology…” Her eyes sparkled.
    “You see, I used to be from Earth. However due to something going wrong when I was in the womb of my mother, my heart had stronger walls and muscles to continue to beat for hundreds of years. When meteors hit earth, I was sent in a tiny aircraft into space. Ten years later I landed here with my dog.” She explained.
    “Seemed like a risky past you had.” Agent S said.
    “Indeed. We then crash landed here with many injuries. The people that live here then saved me. I decided to live here with Mandy and I’ve created a science lab here to research about all lives in space.” She continued.
    “Mandy?” Sandy titled his head.
    “That’s my dog.” She answered.
    Sandy stared at Mandy. I realised how similar they looked. They both had splashes of brown and white on their fur and had a similar face. The only difference was that there was bandaged around one of Mandy’s leg and she also had a small pink flower on her ear.
    She then widened her eyes.
    “W-Wait. Hold the phone. Your dog can talk?” She gasped.
    “It’s a long story.” Sandy said.
    “Oh my wow.” She picked up Sandy and raised him high.
    “A dog that can talk… marvellous!” She laughed.
    “Pika…”

    Pikachu’s skin was so pale and his ears were no longer straight. They hanged beside each side of his face.
    “What kind of creature is that?” She asked.
    “He is apparently terribly sick. He needs food and medication.” Agent S said.
    “Well hello apparently terribly sick. I’m Zeno. Spelled with an X. So Xeno.” She said.
    “I mean, his name is Pikachu. Probably the only creature in his species that exists.” Agent S corrected.
    “Oh. Anyway, I shall help him. Oh yeah, come inside my fellow people!” She said.
    The light turned on. There were dozens of shelves with books and potions that glowed neon lights.
    At the very back was a desk. Xeno sat on the chair with Pikachu in her lap.
    She got a spoon and fed Pikachu something.
    “He should be good as new tomorrow.” She smirked a smile.
    “Anyway lads, so hi.” She waved.
    We looked at each other.
    She then placed the sunglasses over her eyes and laid back on her chair with her feet on the desk.

    Suddenly, we heard screams of horror outside.
    We rushed out, people were running all over the place.
    Xeno came out too. She was confused and shocked.
    “Why is everyone going all coo-coo?” She gasped.
    “Oh no…” I gasped.
    I walked forward, and there he was: Harry.

    “Make everyone go as far away as possible.” I commanded.
    Xeno nodded and began to shout.
    “Zeen da coop ya boo! Zeen da kappa ya!” She called.
    Twage also repeated what she shouted.
    “You go inside and take care of Pikachu.” Agent S told Xeno.
    She nodded and rushed inside and slammed the door.
    “Twage, prepare your spells. Undead, prepare your shield.” I commanded.
    “Ready when you are, skipper.” Twage said.
    “Usually you are never ready for anything.” Agent S sighed.
    Twage hissed at Agent S as a small yellow flame appeared in his hand.
    Harry stopped when he was close.
    “Harry! What has Captain Jack done to you! Turning you into a monster instead of our friend!” I shouted.
    He remained with his dead frown.
    “Why is destruction the only thing you want?” I shouted.

    Then he gasped and fell to his knees. He grabbed his head, almost pulling his hair out.
    “What’s wrong with him?” Sandy gasped.
    I took a step forward. He was murmuring something.
    “ He-Help…” He gasped.
    My eyes widened.
    “Harry… escape the darkness…” I whispered.
    “You can escape the darkness.” I continued.
    “H-Help… me…” He murmured.
    Then he paused and stood back up.
    I took some steps back, afraid of his actions.
    He stood on his toes, and slowly he lifted into the air.
    He clasps his hands together, and a great flame appeared on the tip of his fingers.
    Just before he could attack, Undead created a large portal around us and even protected most of the huts.
    Harry sprayed fire towards me, but the shield protected us.
    He then grunted and continued to spray fire.
    Twage then fired a fire ball at him.
    But before the fire could touch him, he disappeared.
    The fire ball then landed in a pond, and Harry reappeared.
    “He… he can teleport too?” Agent S gasped.
    Then suddenly, Captain Jack, Katy, and the Gods appeared behind him.
    “…and teleport others to him too.” Undead added.

    “Good morning lads!” Captain Jack laughed, almost making his teeth fly out.
    “You’re all looking extra ugly today!” Katy giggled.
    Sandy growled.
    “Anyway, don’t you just love what I did to poor little Harry? Thanks to the blood you had inside of you, he’s now more powerful than ever!” Captain Jack explained.
    “You turned him into a monster…” Undead hissed.
    “I think he looks stunning!” Katy commented.
    “Nah, I think I’m more stunning thanks.” SnakeHammer said.
    Immediately, Twage threw a blue fire ball straight at them…
    But Mystery then grew a shield around them.
    “Not too fast, wizard boy.” SnakeHammer hissed.
    He then threw a lightning straight towards us.
    I quickly leaped onto the ground.
    I looked up, and Harry was slowly walking forward towards me.
    Twage charged forward and tried to punch him, but Harry punched him right in the face first.
    Agent S also ran forward, but he got kicked right on the chest making him fall to the ground in pain.
    Undead and Sandy were about to charge forward, but Harry sprayed fire at them, making them stay on the ground and not move.
    “Beautiful! Just beautiful! Greatest performance I’ve seen all week!” Captain Jack clapped his hands with joy.
    Then Harry held his hand right in front of my face. A flame slowly grew.
    Suddenly, a tip of a spear was in front of his face.
    He turned his face, and Xeno was there with Mandy beside her.
    “Ka ka bar tool da ra! Kio see ba shia tra!” She shouted.
    Mandy began to bark.
    Then Harry stared at her and moved his hand over to her face with the flame still growing in the palm of his hand.
    Mandy yelped and slowly took some steps back towards their hut.
    Xeno held still, holding her breath.
    Then I heard a gun shot.

    Harry froze and the fire in his palm vanished.
    I grabbed the spear out of Xeno’s hand.
    “Louise! Don’t-“
    But I already stabbed his shoulder.
    He fell back, he closed his eyes and dropped to the ground and remained unconsious.
    Blood sprayed out of the wound.
    “Why would you do that?” Agent S gasped.
    I looked up and Captain Jack, Katy and the Gods were gone.
    “Now he’ll never trust you. He’ll never be on our side!” Sandy shouted.
    “I could’ve changed the state of his mind, but due to that memory in his memories, I’m afraid I can’t change it…” Xeno sighed.
    “Now look what you did!” Twage hissed.
    Everyone started to shout at once while Mandy kept barking.
    “I thought you’d never be strong enough to do that.”



    We all paused. Everyone pointed at the view behind me.
    I turned around.
    “Looks like there is still some strength in you huh?”
    He stepped forward with a pistol twirling around his finger.
    “Well, because of that, I shall return to your group.”
    There he was, standing right in front of me, known to be gone forever.
    It was him…
    Kry.
    To Be Continued...
    Thank you very much @Blurryface for volunteering to be a part of this story! Due to her answering some questions about her personality, appearance, etc., I was about to make her a part of this story.
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    Thanks For Reading!!! :D​