World of the Damned. (A chapters series + Custom characters.)

Good story . Publish this IRL and make it a book, NAO. Don't take the publishing seriously...I just like the story.

 

Update, nao. Or I shall murder you

 

It's not as easy as it looks. I've talked to him and he said he still had some reversing and editing an other stuff to do. Lets jut be patient and wait for chapter 1

 

._. Why so serious. I was being sarcastic. And plus. Made a story 8 pages each chapter on quotev. Finished it in a week. 27 chapters

 

OHHHHHHH I thought you were being serious... Ooops. :P

 

I made an entire chapter so far, but I need to edit it where it is not 10,000 characters, so that it still ends up making chronological sense and not seem choppy and such.

 

Why not just seperate it into two parts and make them seperate posts? It's fine if it's a chapter.

 

I finished the main part of the chapter, I just need to add a few more characters in. Also, for those who are wondering why they weren't part of the prologue, I am trying to add as many people possible, but I am doing it in order, based on who posted first.

 

Don't be pressured take your time.

 

Chapter 1: The Forest.
New characters appearing:
@CrazyIcicle (Grandpa Iroh)
@TheAverageJo (Jo)
@The_Demonstar01 (Demon)

Note this is shorter because I am still trying to figure something out. Chapter one is still not done yet. Not even close.

Shadow, Leila and Sera were still heading forward, not worrying about their hideout at all, despite the earlier discovery of it. They spotted a forest near them, and went towards it immediately, as it had remains of recent trespassing. Inside the forest, the humidity was killing Shadow; he couldn't handle the heat and stopped. He told Sera and Leila to move on ahead while he caught his breath. They nodded and continued, as Shadow slowly went into a shady area. He noticed a seemingly abandoned residence of which he found appealing. He started to tread towards it, due to the swamp/humid like environment. When he made a slight sound, immediately, an alarm went off, alerting someone. A shady figure bashed the door of the house open and held a Remington shotgun. Immediately, he held it up and aimed at Shadow and said, "Who are you and get off my lawn!" Shadow took the scythe off his back and immediately assumed a battle stance. Shadow replied in a calm voice while looking down at the ground, "That is none of your business. I do not know who you are; you do not know who I am. It shall stay that way." With that, he said, "My name is GRANDPA IROH. YOU HEAR THAT? GRANDPA IROH. I am the world's GREATEST technologist and NO ONE will EVER surpass me!" Not long after that, he shot a bullet from the shotgun, and he hit something behind Shadow. Shadow heard something rattle, as 3,000 pounds worth of sandbags were dropped on him. Shadow had the scythe pop the sandbags that were made in an attempt to crush intruders, so that he could remain alive. After the 3,000 pounds finished dropping on Shadow, Grandpa Iroh pressed a button that spilled alcohol onto the sandbags, before he brought out a lighter. He turned the lighter on and threw it at the area of which Shadow was trapped; he knew the forest was going to burn down due to fire spread, so he pressed another button that summoned a helicopter. When the fire started to spread, it reached to the area Shadow was in, while Grandpa Iroh demanded answers before he left off, Shadow, of course, denied and said to go ahead and try to kill him, it wouldn’t work. Grandpa Iroh just looked at Shadow’s emotionless face, showing no fear or worry whatsoever, before he flew out of the forest.


Shadow knew he could pass through solid objects, therefore, he did. He jumped out of the piles of sandbags, right before the fire has touched the alcohol covered sandbags. What Shadow didn’t realize however, was that there was someone else hiding in the area, except the seeming presence was more of a fearful presence rather than a dangerous one. With that, the fire started to spread further and further before it reached the area of which the presence was. A scream of help was heard, when Shadow looked at a kid who ran away from the fire. Shadow stared in the direction the kid fled, with his scythe on his hand. He started to run after the kid, until the kid tripped and fell down. Shadow kept him pinned down, and the kid started to try to fight his way out. He kicked Shadow in the gut and staggered to get up. Shadow simply asked the boy’s name, the boy started saying in a loud disruptive voice, “I DON’T KNOW YOU! WHY SHOULD I TELL YOU WHO I AM!” “You do not understand, I am trying to help. You don’t seem to be in the state of corruption, so you are not a threat to me.” Shadow replied calmly. The boy just looked at Shadow, and he breathed before saying, “My name is Jo, but please do not hurt me…” Shadow looked at him in confusion, “What makes you think I will hurt you?” Jo pointed at Shadow’s scythe. “Oh, that, don’t worry about it, I only use that to take peo---“He was immediately cut off when Grandpa Iroh came up in his helicopter and said, “GET YOUR HANDS OFF OF HIM! THAT BOY HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU, SO LET HIM GO OR FACE DEATH IMMEDIATELY.” Jo just saw him, and immediately ran up to Grandpa Iroh and hugged him before getting onto the helicopter. “Don’t tell me you are corrupt as well Iroh.” Shadow said. “THAT’S GRANDPA IROH TO YOU SON. どこの子供たちが持っていた尊敬されていますか？” Grandpa Iroh took something out and shot something into the air, nothing happened at first, until acid started pouring down. Shadow was burning, but he didn’t show any signs of pain, instead, he jumped up trees and impaled his scythe into the steel of the acid resistant helicopter.

*Meanwhile, in the other side of the forest.*

“Where is Shadow? He was supposed to be here long ago…” Sera said. “He’s fine, remember, he can’t die, he is probably just taking a longer break than we expected.” Leila stated. A rustle was heard; Sera and Leila stopped immediately without making sound of any kind, they held their breath, while a boy came up and held two swords, one on each shoulder. He took the one off his left shoulder and pointed it in the direction where Sera and Leila were, and said, “Show yourselves, and mercy will be at hand.” Sera and Leila knew they were spotted; they came out but with their knives in their pocket. The boy said, “Drop your knives, or your throats will be slit.” Sera and Leila took their knives out and dropped it to the ground. The boy put his sword down and said, “Who are you?” “I am Sera, and this is one of my friends Leila.” Sera replied. Leila nodded in order to prove that they were friends. The boy replied, “My name is Demon. You don’t seem to be like the others I have come across recently. Douchebags they were, attacking me for no reason and saying that I need to shed more blood and stuff like that.” Sera and Leila looked at each other, Leila asked, “Were they traveling in groups?” “Yes, large groups too. What? Are you their little model or something?” Leila just looked at Demon, embarrassed, shocked, and upset at the same time. “I don’t. I am not corrupt like them! I mean, unless you are going to just mock me like you are now, continue, I dare you.” Leila said in a more aggressive tone. Leila then picked up her knife and signaled Sera to pick up her knife as well. “We are going to fight him, this boy, or Demon as he calls himself, needs to learn to not be as rude as he is now.” Sera nodded in agreement, picked up her knife, and came near Leila before Demon stated, “You are making a fatal mistake.”

 

Ooo ooo oo o. Omg.

 

I liked it :3

 

You like it already? The first chapter (This chapter) is nowhere near done.

 

It has a way of drawing you in and givess you suspense
I like it so far
keep up the good work

 

It doesn't matter, its well written... and the cliffhanger.

 

"I DON'T KNOW YOU! WHY SHOULD I TELL YOU WHO I AM?"

Lel, me IRL

Woah. I did not expect me to be related to Grandpah Iroh :0

 

I take your personalities and implement them in my story. That is why I made the thread in off-topic at the first place. Also:

Spoiler: Spoiler of the story.

You are not related to Grandpa Iroh, there will be something that explains this later on.

 

Ah, my epic entrance. Btw, I requested a use of Pyro's flare gun, The Scorch Shot. What chapter will this come in?

 

That will come in time... Just wait...

 

Ooh! I'm exited! ;D