[New] 6th Story: The Return Of Memories

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  1. pandaness123

    pandaness123 Minecraft Rulz

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    Congrats! Maybe i could be a character?
     
  2. TwageTomato

    TwageTomato Former Mod Donator

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    Good grief that was a lengthy chapter ._.
    Nevertheless, well done Louise ^-^
     
  3. IAMINACTIVEBYE

    IAMINACTIVEBYE Donator

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    I'll need you @Xenohs to be in the story, but I'm not sure if I need you @pandaness123
    In the future, I might need you panda but it may take a while. Please accept my apologizes.
    Xenohs, you'll be in the story soon, but not next chapter. It may take about 5 chapters. I thank your patience but I apologize for the long wait.
     
  4. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    Tic-tac-toe! Connor! Get out of your hidin' spot! Guys, they might hear something that they shouldn't, so don't fail to kill them!

    Lel. Nice chap, but when I am Called CaptainJack, maybe separate the two words to Captain Jack? Just a suggestion. Nice chapter. :)
     
  5. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    I was thinking the same thing :p Alright, suggestion accepted. CaptainJack has now evolved into Captain Jack! Yay!
    Anyway, once again thanks for the feedback, and just to let you all know, I have enough characters, so please don't ask to be in the story unless I say so.
    Btw... what happened to all the likes? o.o
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @Konohito
    @nala
    @Ninjafoya
    @CaptainJackValdy
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Cally8484
    @Kazuke
    @Suthos
    @Katy9078
    @John_0696
    @MappyTurtle
    @Dugee
    @Radii
    @NINJANAYLIN123
    @CreeperInHD
    @TwageTomato
    @ConnorFTW
    Enjoy :D
    Chapter 28 - Returning Gods
    The machine sparked and shivered, activating what it was operated to do.
    "It's working... it's working!" Captain Jack laughed out of his mind.
    The machine then became quieter, and finally responded saying "TARGETS FOUND. TRANSPORTING THEM TO HELL NOW."
    "Wonderful. Now the Gods will see that leaving me was a big mistake." Captain Jack smiled.

    Dugee, Sutho and Cally then fell, with a dominating pain in there mind.
    "Woah! Kono, what's happening to them?" I cried.
    "I don't know!" Kono screamed.
    "They might just have a headache." Ninjanaylin smiled.
    "WAY more then a headache! Look at them!" Kono pointed.
    They were shivering and screaming, and they kept holding there head tight wondering if this ends.

    Mappy, John, Katy and Kazuke were also impacted as well.
    "Something is hurting them..." Creeper stated.
    "OF COURSE something is hurting them!" Ninjaman shouted.
    Then, Mappy, John, Katy and Kazuke's legs were fanishing, then their body, then their arms, then finally their heads, and they vanished.
    "WHAT THE..." Ninjaman gasped.
    "Could this be the work of the wicked Captain Jack?" Ninjafoya said.
    "I have a feeling that it might be..." Ninjaman sighed.

    Dugee, Sutho and Cally stopped shivering.
    "Your minds and bodies... something happened to them." Undead realised.
    "Arg... what happened?" Sutho groaned.
    "I don't know... do you know what attacked us?" Dugee questioned.
    We shook our heads.
    Then suddenly, four bodies were spawning next to us.
    We were horrified who it was, but once it's faces spawned, it was Mappy, John, Katy and Kazuke.
    "All the seven god's of here... what's happening?" Kono wondered.

    A creature spotted Ninjafoya, Ninjaman and Creeper, and got ready to use a laser to shoot them.
    But another creature went in front of it, stopping and it spawned a portal.
    "Not those stupid things again!" Creeper shouted.
    Ninjaman and Creeper tried to run, but the wind and force pushed them in the portal.
    Ninjafoya was hanging onto the wall.
    "MUMMYYYYYY!" Ninjafoya screamed as her hands slipped and entered the portal.

    Then suddenly, Ninjaman, Ninjafoya and Creeper came out of a portal behind me, falling on top of my head.
    "Everyone is here... but how?" Kono wondered.
    "Unknown answer. Well we've got to find glow stone now." Undead said.
    "What do you need glow stone for?" John questioned.
    "For Connor." Kono explained.
    "Who's Copper?" Ninjafoya wondered as she finally got off me.
    "I think it's pronounced, Connor." Ninjaman corrected.
    "Copper, Cooler, what ever. Who is he?" Ninjafoya asked.
    As Kono explained about him and how he knows about Captain Jack, Ninjaman frowned.
    "I don't know why, but somewhere I heard he was a trouble maker..." Ninjaman sighed.
    "What? How are you sure?" I wondered.
    "He might be worker for-" "Finally! Found you all! Who's your friends, heh heh." Connor stepped right in front of Ninjaman stopping his explanation.
    "Is this Connor?" Mappy asked.
    I nodded.
    "Turns out my powers didn't need glow stone anyway... heh heh. Now then, let's return you back at the start of the maze." Connor beamed.
    Suddenly, time froze and this time, for one hour.
    As we unfroze, I realised I was hungry.
    "Hmm... food food food... a ha! Come here ya squirt!" Connor grabbed a dead baby demon on the ground, and turned his back away from us.
    We fiddled with the body, and I didn't want to tell you what he did since it was disgusting.
    He finally turned around with some meat, a bit rotten though.
    "Well, chow down unless you want your stomach to die." Connor smiled.
    I slowly grabbed the meat and just looked at it.
    "Better then nothing, heh heh." Connor scratched his head.
    I nibbled on it bit by bit, and as I finished, I felt quite weak...
    "Connor, that was not safe to eat you idiot." Katy shouted.
    "All well. Better then nothing. Anyway, this way!" Connor pointed.

    As we went to a wall of flesh, he opened a portal and Kazuke tried to hop in the portal, but he was transported back to the front of the portal.
    "Hey, did you do something to the portal?" Kazuke shouted.
    "Not at all..." Connor stated.
    "Dugee, you try." Sutho said.
    Dugee also tried to hop in the portal, but he spawned right back to the front of the portal.
    "Maybe when you were all in pain, something happened to you..." Ninjafoya wondered.
    "And maybe that's the reason why they got transported here: to get trapped!" Ninjaman realised.
    We started to panic and bit and people whispered to each other while scared.
    "Don't worry, I'll protect them. You guys go." Connor pointed.
    Ninjaman, Undead, Ninjafoya and Kono hopped it while I looked back at the Gods.
    "We'll be fine, just go!" Katy screamed.
    I nodded and hopped in the portal.
    To Be Continued...
    I know, I realised this chapter was huge :o But all well, sometimes the bigger the better unless you disagree...
    Hope you enjoyed this chapter!
    And please leave a like, other wise I feel like the story isn't good enough.
    If the story IS not good enough, please then leave suggestion below and how to improve the story alot more.
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
  6. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    What happened? They are not in hell? O_O
    Nice chapter
     
  7. Strikyn

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    these are actually pretty good stories
    may i be in one if you mind? :x
     
  8. TheUndeadBrave

    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    This story is really good Louise!
     
  9. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Are you confused where everyone is now? Here's an explanation:
    Me, Undead, Ninjaman, Ninjafoya, Kono, Ninjanaylin and Creeper are now going back to the start of the maze
    The 7 Gods are in hell with Connor
    Twage is still in his hut.
    You are still in your fortress
    And 2 characters are missing... Might need to read this chapter to find out who the 2 characters are.
    I really wish I could add you, but so many people want to be in the story, that I'm not sure how you could fit in the story.
    I know this is upsetting news, but there's probably not possible to add you in the story due to so many people requesting to be in the story. Otherwise if I did add you, you'll probably only say two lines and be forgotten. If you REALLY want to be in the story, just let me know below how you could fit in the story. I hope you accept my apology...

    Anyway, Thanks for the feedback and likes.
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @Konohito
    @nala
    @Ninjafoya
    @CaptainJackValdy
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Cally8484
    @Kazuke
    @Suthos
    @Katy9078
    @John_0696
    @MappyTurtle
    @Dugee
    @Radii
    @NINJANAYLIN123
    @CreeperInHD
    @TwageTomato
    @ConnorFTW
    Enjoy :D
    Chapter 29 - The Find Of End
    As my vision was clear, we landed safely back at the start of the maze.
    Then, Creeper and Ninjanaylin also spawned behind us.
    "We're all here..." Kono smiled.
    "Accept for the Gods." Ninjaman sighed.
    "Someone is missing..." Undead wondered.
    "What?" I gasped.
    "Oh no, he's missing." Undead gasped.
    "Who? Tell us!" Ninjanaylin shouted.
    "Silent..." Undead sighed.
    "We are silent, well tell us!" Creeper shouted.
    "No... Silent, the king who rules Lost City is not here." Undead explained.
    "Maybe... he's back at Lost City?" I wondered.
    "Enough chatting. I know someone isn't in our group, but come on, time is running out!" Ninjaman screamed.
    We sighed and marched with Ninjaman taking lefts and rights.
    Ninjaman stopped and we all bumped into him.
    "Behind the wall!" Ninjaman pushed us behind a wall before a creature could see us.
    "Good call. Let's go." Kono said.
    We kept bumping into dead ends and Ninjafoya almost got lost until I found her.
    As we were getting exhausted, Undead noticed something.
    "Down there, it must be the compass and map!" Undead cheered.
    No creatures couldn't be seen, so we charged at the compass and map, but a creature stood in our way.
    "These creature's don't quite don't they..." Creeper sighed.
    The creature charged up a beam.
    Our weapons were missing, probably left them in hell.
    The creature put his hands together, and fired a electric beam at us... until something came in front of us.
    It created a portal, sucking the beam in, then it disappeared.

    The thing took it's hood off, and it was Twage.
    "I sensed you were in trouble. Don't worry, your safe." Twage smiled and he turned his head.
    "Grrr..." The creature sneered.
    The creature got a knife out and charged at Twage, but he just stepped aside, making it smash into the wall.
    Then, the creature fell down, and the hood came off.
    The face seemed familiar, but no one could recognise who it was.
    "I have a feeling that we bumped into this creature before..." Ninjanaylin said.
    "Guys, we've got an emergency. I'll teleport you back to my hut". Twage said.
    "Ninjaman, grab the compass and map. Creeper and Ninjanaylin, get the body." Twage demanded.
    They nodded and grabbed what they needed.
    Twage clasped his hands together, making a spiralling orb in front of him.
    Before the orb grew bigger, I saw a shadow in the corner.
    The orb grew bigger, and sucked us in, and we spawned, right in front of his hut.

    I didn't know what the shadow was, but I didn't worry about it and we entered the hut.
    We layed the body of the creature on a table with glowing lights on it.
    I noticed another table next to it, holding Sven, possibly protecting him and healing the cuts and damages on him, but I guess it wasn't possible for the table to make him alive, so I sighed.
    "Magic of honour, reveal this thing. Show us it's face, come on magic SING!" Twage howled.
    Magic swirled around the body, and shined a bright light, making us blind.
    As soon as the magic finished, we could see again, and a mask was off the face.
    "It's..." I gasped.
    "Looks like this creature... is a guy named Connor." Twage explained.
    To Be Continued...
    Hope you enjoyed this chapter!
    And there might be some mistakes, so please ignore them unless there big.
    If you encounter any big mistakes, just reply below and I'll fix it immediately.
    Remember to leave a like and also some feedback and suggestions :)
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
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    TwageTomato Former Mod Donator

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    Great chapter Louise! Was kinda wondering how you'd throw me back in
     
  11. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    Twage, we could be great allies ;=;
    Nice job
     
  12. IAMINACTIVEBYE

    IAMINACTIVEBYE Donator

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    This story is brought to you by 'hell' . The greatest place on earth and is not evil. Free hot tubs as well.
    Idk I didn't know what to say :P
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @Konohito
    @nala
    @Ninjafoya
    @CaptainJackValdy
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Cally8484
    @Kazuke
    @Suthos
    @Katy9078
    @John_0696
    @MappyTurtle
    @Dugee
    @Radii
    @NINJANAYLIN123
    @CreeperInHD
    @TwageTomato
    @ConnorFTW
    Enjoy :D
    Chapter 30 - The Sacrifice For Hope
    Connor woke up and noticed all of the mad and shocked faces on us.
    "Ok you got me... I know, I was the creature that transported you to hell." Connor sighed
    "But why did you do that... we could have died in hell!" Ninjaman shouted.
    "But you didn't! I protected you!" Connor shouted.
    Kono grabbed Ninjaman before he could shout me.
    "Connor... can you tell us why your a creature." I questioned.
    "Fine... here's the real story:
    When my family was killed by Captain Jack, he scratched my right eye, making it blind. Before he could kill me, I pleaded to help him in anything, and he said to go to the maze and teleport you and your friends to hell and kill you. I was only pretending to save myself, and I only teleported you to hell to protect you." Connor explained.
    "Protect us from what?" Undead questioned.
    "Radii..." Connor said.
    I gasped, realising if Radii was here.
    "She was about to kill you all and I had to protect you, so I teleported you to hell to make you all escape. And I only tried to kill you when you were going for the compass and map because Radii was there, and she saw my face so she could tell Captain Jack I'm protecting you and I'll be dead. And I only tried to kill Twage because I thought he was evil... but I guess I was wrong." Connor sighed.
    "That explains it..." Twage rubbed his chin.
    "I'll take care of Connor and Sven, and I found a way to make Sven alive again!" Twage gleed.
    "HOLY POOP, YA SERIOUS?" I screamed with delight.
    "Yes... but there's a risk." Twage said.
    "Guys, where's Silent?" Ninjafoya cried.

    "He might be at lost city!" Ninjanaylin realised.

    We rushed out of the hut, heading straight towards Lost City, and we saw him, staring at a empty zone.
    "Silent... *breathe* why are you staring in the distance..." Creeper asked.
    "Lost City was here..." Silent said.
    I then noticed the tall black towers behind this zone of Evil City, polished and cheering in victory.
    "It's my duty to resurrect it, even if it means its time..." Silent said.
    "Time?" I asked.
    He raised him arms up to shoulder height, and some glowing orbs were around him.
    "Shall my life bring Lost City back to life, shall I protect it, even if Evil arrives!" He echoed.
    The orbs glowed, and it surrounded him, and the orbs took him to the middle of the zone.
    The orbs were expanding and there were more and spreaded across the zone.
    That's when huts and people were born, and cheered as they realised that they were alive.
    Lost City was back, but Silent was gone.
    "He sacrificed himself for his people and city... how... *sniff* beautiful." Ninjafoya sniffed.
    "Rest in peace, soldier. May you guide Lost City as it guides you." Ninjaman smiled.
    "Guys... let's go back to the hut and resurrect Sven." Undead smiled.

    We ran back to the hut with glee and excitement, and I was the most excited of them all.
    We slammed the door open and crowded around the room and stared at Sven on the table.
    "There's good news and bad news..." Twage sighed.
    "Good news is, we can finally make your friend alive! Bad news is..." Twage stopped.
    "Ninjanaylin and Creeper may have to go too..." Twage said.
    "No, we can't loose more people!" Ninjaman shouted.
    "If you say so..." Twage said.
    "NO!" I cried.
    "Ninjanaylin and Creeper... I know your giants, but help my friend. This is why my journey even started! Make my goal complete... Please... bring him back!" I sorrowed.
    "Louise... we can't..." Kono sighed.
    "We can't loose more people." Kono said.
    I pushed her against the wall with anger.
    "We'll do it." Creeper smiled.
    "But-" Kono coughed.
    "The hero gave us her command, we shall obey it." Ninjanaylin smiled.
    "He- hero?" I wondered.
    "Raise the soul that's deep under dead, bring Ninjanaylin and Creeper in Sven as they said!" Twage shouted.
    Ninjanaylin and Creeper's body became smaller into colourful orbs, entered Sven's heart.
    His heart glowed, then settled, and he opened his eyes.
    To Be Continued...
    I'm sorry that I sorta kicked you out @NINJANAYLIN123 and @CreeperInHD , but I promise that you'll come back!
    Hope you enjoyed this awesome but sad chapter.
    And don't worry, I have not used one character in a while, but he/she will come back.
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
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    And then suddenly I gained the power to raise the dead. Mmk then.
     
  14. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    With the help of Creeper and Ninjanaylin*
     
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  15. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    Sven u alive? Hopefully he won't do s**t to me.
    Nice chap.
     
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    Can I join?
     
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  17. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    This story supports hell. A place to chill and relax with friendly neighbours and free hot tubs. Come to hell now! Neighbours may bite and batteries not included.
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @Konohito
    @nala
    @Ninjafoya
    @CaptainJackValdy
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Cally8484
    @Kazuke
    @Suthos
    @Katy9078
    @John_0696
    @MappyTurtle
    @Dugee
    @Radii
    @NINJANAYLIN123
    @CreeperInHD
    @TwageTomato
    @ConnorFTW
    Enjoy ^-^
    Chapter 31 - Rise Of Sven
    He hopped out of the table, full of distress and anger.
    "WHERE IS SHE?" Sven shouted.
    "What are you talking about?" Undead argued.
    Sven came to me, grabbed my body and shook me as hard as he could.
    "WHERE THE HELL IS SHE!" Sven screamed.
    Kono slapped Sven to the ground.
    "Just tell us who your talking about then we'll help!" Kono screamed.
    "Nala... where is she!" Sven screamed.
    "Nala is not here! Now get your butt together and quit your yapping." Ninjaman shouted.
    Kono recognised the name... that's when she snapped.
    "You saw her? Where! Tell me where!" She screamed.
    "I... I don't know... Captain Jack must have taken her... maybe killed her." Sven sniffed.
    "Umm... Do you even recognise me?" I sneered.
    "Nope." Sven sneezed.
    "What? You've got to remember me. We were best friends!" I panicked.
    "The name Louise doesn't ring a bell. A dead broken bell." Sven sneered.
    "No... no..." I started to sob.
    "Maybe Captain Jack took the memory of Louise out of Sven's memories." Undead thought.
    "We've got to get that memory back!" I screamed.
    Time froze for 2 hours, and when time was back, I realised we didn't have time to get his memory.
    "Louise, just tell him all about you and you'll be best friends in no time." Ninjafoya smiled.
    "Best friends with her? Ewww... no thanks." Sven yawned.
    "May take more time they you may think." I sighed.

    "Ah, Louise. I'll guard the Gods for you in hell. Twage, teleport me to hell!" Connor cheered.
    "You were here the whole time?" Ninjaman gasped.
    "Of course I was. I was sleeping until Sven screamed. Now take me to hell wizard!" Connor beamed.
    "As you wish." Twage got his wand and swung it around Connor, and as soon as the glowing light around him surrounded him completely, the light disappeared and he was gone too.
    "Here, he'll call you if any trouble is down in hell." Twage handed me a radio, which can be used to communicate to Connor.
    I nodded and placed it down my pocket.
    "Listen ye pumpkins. After whatever your doing, you better bring me to Nala and bring her back. If you don't..." Sven paused.
    "I'll then tell Captain Jack where you are and kill you!" Sven laughed.
    "You wouldn't dare..." Kono outraged.
    "Calm down, he ain't going to call Captain Jack just yet. Now then, Twage, we've got the compass and map." Ninjaman smiled.
    "Excellent. I'll spawn in a rocket and I'll wish you luck." Twage smiled.
    "What? You ain't coming?" Ninjafoya gasped.
    "Pffff, who needs a stinky wizard anyway." Sven laughed.
    "He brought you back to LIFE!" Ninjaman shouted as he was about to loose his temper.
    "Yeah right. Now bring us that stupid ship of yours." Sven sneered.
    He seemed different. Something happened to him. Did Captain Jack make his memories anger and distressful? This isn't himself. He would be full of glee and happiness right now, but now he's soulless and just a bully.
    I sighed in distress, wondering if Sven would ever change.
    "Now since I'm spawning such a huge object, I'll have to get my potions and books with me to guide me. Stay here." Twage went to the back of his hut, searching for his potions and books.
    "Sven why are you like this?" I argued.
    "Like what?" Sven sneered.
    "This! Your acting so selfish and soulless. Why are you like this!" I screamed.
    "Louise, calm down." Ninjafoya panicked.
    "You think I'm selfish and soulless eh? I'm just being myself and you can't change meh!" Sven turned his back against me.
    I was full of anger, so I raised my hands together, and shot something at him, turning his leg to ice.
    "What the..." I gasped.
    "Wow! Talk about a best friend." Sven outraged.
    "Louise... that power..." Twage gasped as his hands were full of books and potions.

    "Uhhh..." I stared at my hands, and they were turning white and snowflakes started to float around it.
    Everyone was shocked, and that's when I got a flashback: of me having powers.
    To Be Continued...
    Hooray! Getting into some Soulless Powers now! Woopie. Soulless Powers was a great story, so now it's arrived in this story. So get ready toseee the things you loved in Soulless Powers to come back.
    Hope you enjoyed this chapter.
    And I'm sorry, but I do not need anymore characters now. Far too many people are requesting to be in the story, and I don't have enough room in the story to add anyone. I'm so sorry.
    Remember to leave your feedback below and a little joyful like as well :)
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
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  18. TheUndeadBrave

    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    Finally getting into Soulless Powers!
     
  19. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Hmm... May need to spice up the story more I guess
    Characters:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @xX0Sven0Xx
    @Ninjaman
    @Konohito
    @nala
    @Ninjafoya
    @CaptainJackValdy
    @TheUndeadBrave
    @Cally8484
    @Kazuke
    @Suthos
    @Katy9078
    @John_0696
    @MappyTurtle
    @Dugee
    @Radii
    @NINJANAYLIN123
    @CreeperInHD
    @TwageTomato
    @ConnorFTW
    Enjoy ^-^
    Chapter 32 - The Blast Off To Destination
    As the flashback played, it showed me having these awesome powers with my friends, and I soon realised that could be me in a couple of days.
    As my eyes finally opened, I saw Ninjafoya, Kono and Ninjaman trying to break the ice from Sven's leg. But the ice seemed to be super strong.
    Twage dumped his books and potions on the ground and rushed to me, grabbing my hand and staring at it.
    Snowflakes and ice sparkled around my hand, and I'm pretty sure a snowflake went up Twage's nose.
    "Stunning... What power could this lead to us..." Twage wondered.
    Suddenly, the snowflakes and ice started to disappear, and my hand was back to normal.
    "Ehh?" I wondered.
    "Could the Dragon Of Time be behind these powers?" Undead suggested.
    "I know the Dragon has the power to control time, but I never knew it could also have the power of ice." Undead said as he was getting exhausted trying to break the ice with his bare fists.
    Twage rubbed his eyes and was finally calm.
    Twage waddled to his books and potions. He turned a page from one of the books on the ground and smiled.
    "Okay, the rocket will be the biggest object I've transported in years, so bear with me if things go wrong." Twage scratched his head.
    The ice finally disappear from Sven's legs and was furious at me while I smiled casually.
    "Okay, come outside everyone as I transport the rocket." Twage gleed.
    We went outside while we were metres away from Twage.
    From what we could hear, he said "Come rocket! Bring it to us!" We couldn't hear the rest since his voice started to get quieter as he was starting to loose breath.
    Ash e said his finally mumble, he zapped his hands to the ground creating smoke, and out of the ground came the nose of the rocket, then the body, then finally the bottom, and I swear that it might be as tall as Mount Everest.
    "Okay ladies and gentlemen, hop on board!" Twage waved his hands as the doors opened.
    We walked in, waving goodbye to Twage.
    As Sven went on, I stopped before entering the rocket.
    "Is there a problem Louise?" Kono asked as she peeked through the entrance.
    "Why can't you come?" I asked.
    "I've got to check what Arelane is doing. Don't worry, I'll be fine! Now safe journey!" Twage cheered.
    "But-" Before I could ask more, Ninjafoya grabbed my hand and we went in the rocket.
    Kono and Ninjaman went in the pilots seat as we took our seats behind them.
    "Welcome everyone to um... the rocket to the Dragon? We need a better name for this rocket Kono..." Ninjaman sighed in the speakers.
    "Let me handle this... ahem. Welcome aboard everyone to StarDragon, the quickest way to get to any dragon you want." Kono smiled as Ninjaman got jealous.
    "Can you bring us to Spyro then?" Ninjafoya beamed.
    "Ehhmm... Not at the moment. Anyway, this trip would take around five days to get to where we're heading. Now relax, eat whatever you want and enjoy the flight!" Kono beamed.
    "Oh yeah, you can't eat snots though. That includes you Ninjafoya." Kono winked.
    Ninjafoya was about to bite into her snot while I slapped her arm, making it go on Undead's hair. We giggled.
    The rocket started to boost and the engines were turning on..
    "Ten... Nine........ Eight... *snore*" I'm guessing Ninjaman hates counting numbers, so Kono spoke into the speakers instead.
    "Ten! Nine! Eight! Seven! Six! Five! Four! Three! Two! Twenny Wun! BLAST OFF!" Kono cheered.
    The bottom of the ship bursted with flames and energy, pushed the rocket to the clouds.
    We all cheered and high fived each other, realising blast off was a success.
    I stared at the window next to me, and I saw Twage at the bottom of earth smiling. I couldn't see him anymore since we pasted the clouds.

    "This is unacceptable!" Captain Jack punched Soldier twenny wun.
    "But sir... Maybe Radii is killing Louise and the gang right now!" Soldier twenny wun coughed.
    "Kill them right now? Radii betrayed me!" Captain Jack screamed.
    The gates opened, and someone ran in and went up to Captain Jack.
    "You..." Captain Jack sneered.
    "Sir, Louise and the gang are heading to the Dragon Of Time." The person said.
    "Of course you let them, didn't you Radii." Captain Jack argued.
    "And by the way, the God's are stuck in hell. Which means the gang are less powerful." Radii smiled.
    "Excellent... but why did you betray me in the FIRST PLACE!" Captain Jack screamed.
    "Because someone was watching us..." Radii sighed.
    "I had to pretend I was against you otherwise they'll probably kill me." Radii explained.
    "It makes sense to me!" Soldier twenny wun laughed.
    "Quiet! Now... I guess that does make sense..." Captain Jack rubbed his chin.
    "Let's make a welcome back ceremony!" Soldier twenny wun cheered.
    "What? No!" Captain Jack argued.
    All the soldiers picked Radii up and cheered and took her to the middle of the fortress, throwing confetti everywhere and cheering.
    Radii laughed and cheered, while Captain Jack went in a secret room, with a new, polished rocket inside.
    To Be Continued...
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