[New] 6th Story: The Return Of Memories

Ooh I love dragons that screw with time :D

 

Thanks for requesting to be in the story! You'll probably be added in about 1 or 2 chapters. Also, after you've read this chapter, I might need you to remind me to add you in the story just incase I forget :p

Anyway, hello, if your a fan of the Dragon Of Time (My 3rd story) Well I'm sure your as happy as larry as the Dragon Of Time is in the story!
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
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Chapter 22 - The Memories Of The Soulless
Hours past, and our legs felt like they were going to collapse. "John, I know this case is serious, but maybe we could have got maybe a car of something?" Ninjafoya whined. "But Lost City is destroyed and all the cars in Evil City has been destroyed as well, and even if there were, by the time we get back Time might have probably been gone!" Silent shouted. "Easy for you to say..." Kono sighed. "We're almost there guys, just a couple of steps and..." Time froze again, for a hour, and when we were free, we thought that was the end. "Okay, just cause your legs are screaming just doesn't mean we should give up! March soldiers, or the end will corrupt your dirty minded SOULS!" Ninjaman shouted at the top of his lungs. We all sighed and kept walking. The sun was heating us to the ground, and I just felt like we were stuck in a infinite oven. Katy kept squirting herself with water, but the water just steamed on her face, making her scream. "Even if I spawn icy cold water, it will just boil on my face once I put a little sip of it!" Katy screamed. John tried to spawn some metal knights that could carry him and walk for him, but the metal melted to the ground. Not even the lions of wolves could handle it and they burned to death. The other powers all just wouldn't help, and Cally's wings were too hot to even move, so we had to walk until time could freeze again.
Meanwhile, the plane landed. Radii and Arelane hopped of the plane into a huge metal fortress, with 1000s of guards guarding it. "Any intruders this morning?" Arelane questioned. "No sir! Only intruder was a butterfly, but we couldn't catch it..." A guard sighed. "It's just a damn butterfly! How is that a intruder?" Arelane shouted. Then a soldier came running out looking scared are quite sick. "I'm alergic to butterflies... and there's on inside right now!" He shouted. "Everyone, kill that butterfly! CHARGE!" The guards shouted and went inside the fortress, screaming and shouting. "Are these really the best guards you can find?" Radii sighed. "Patient Radii, now let's go to the room I've been working on for years." Arelane explained.
They walked into a room that looked brand new, and in the middle was a machine with a screen on it. "This machine can make Louise's memories as terrible and crazy as possible. So let's try it." Arelane giggled. He pressed a button on the machine, and waited until the button's signal could reach me.
Suddenly, something was pulling me backwards, and my brain felt weird. "Louise?" Ninjaman wondered. "Yo Louise, you okay mate?" Kazuke wondered. "I'm fine, just..." Then I fell backwards, on the back of my head, and seemed to be unconscious while everyone was screaming and panicking, thinking I was dead.
"SIGNAL REACHED. MEMORIES HAS NOW BEEN INSTALLED." The machine responded. "Excellent. Now, let's make her memories so terrible and awful, she'll probably vomit and she won't make it." Arelane laughed. "Yeah... he he..." Radii wondered. "You arn't worried of Louise, are you?" Arelane sneered. "No, I just um... I just could image how terrible the memories were. In fact, my imagination was so terrible, I could have vomited... heh heh." Radii tried to make the best smile. "That's the brain I want! Now, let's go and muddle her friends up and the view, then she'll probably be so drunk, she'll probably think she's dead." Arelane laughed. He muddled with some buttons, levers and switches, and the screen on the machine was going nuts.
Arelane pushed the final button and waited until the signal could reach me. "SIGNAL REACHED. TARGET NOW IS WAKING UP." The machine responded. "Oh, I am going to love her reaction to this!" Arelane laughed so loud his mouth was so large. So large, that a butterfly went inside of it and he started choking. Radii panicked. A guard was running then tripped and fell on Arelane, making him cough out the butterfly and it flew away out of the fortress.
I woke up, and in my view, there were pizza's with hats made of poop with legs made out of cheese, and the sun that was in front of my eyes was made out of an apple. "Umm..." I wondered. They started saying things, but it sounded like this: "He Boo Twell Na... See boo quill too" I just kept repeating "What?" But they just kept saying stuff that sounded like the cavemen 1000s of years ago. I stood up, and the grass looked like trousers, and the grass were like French fires springing out of the ground. A pizza shook me, and I was just confused. "Where's my friends you evil pizza monsters!" I shouted. The pizza's kept screaming, and I ran away.
"BWAHAHA! Look at her, running like a chicken! Just... Bwe he he... HE HE HE HE!!!" Arelane was rolling on the ground, bursting out laughing when he looked at the screen of me going nuts. Radii stared at the screen, looking worried.
To Be Continued...
I know, this chapter was weird, but hey, it sorta is funny and weird at the same time.
Besides, there's no harm on an author having some fun, right?
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Dammit now I'm hungry

 

Ikr xD
Can't wait to see how I'm added in this.

 

The story is doing great but there's one thing. Of course, I have some constructive criticism. I'd love to have breaks in text. It's confusing when someone is speaking, and the characters seem to have their speech in the same line. But, as I said, the story is nice, and keep up the good work.

 

THIS IS AWESOME!! :D

 

YOU COPIED MY SENSE OF HUMOR!!! LOL
NICE LOUISE!

 

Alright, I'll accept your request and thanks for the tip ^-^

This story is brought to you by 'Poop'. The best restaurant in the world where 'People order our poop'. Have a nice day :3
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Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
New Character:
@TwageTomato
Enjoy! :D

Chapter 23 - The Magic Of Hope
This was just going nuts. Everyone was saying a secret language, everything made out of cheese, trousers, pizza's, and other stuff that is just beyond strange. This might be a dream or flashback or a flashback of... the future? Argg, someone has to help me. I walked slowly, but the strange pizza's kept following me, screaming behind my head. "BOOGIE SEW TOO LA BAA!" One of the pizza's screamed. I sighed. They kept screaming and screaming, and that's when I ran away. I ran as fast as I could away from them, but they were always one step ahead of me. "LEAVE ME ALONE!" I cried. "Boo na twee ne." A pizza whispered in my ear. It's breath smelt like pepper mixed with seaweed, so I pushed the pizza away and kept running.
Arelane fainted due to laughing too much. Radii stared at the machine and realised I was going nuts. She pushed a button and pulled a lever down, and the screen showed a hut. "Louise... hang in-" "Okay Radii... hoof. That was a good laugh heh heh. Now, who pushed my button and lever?" Arelane wondered. He pushed the button again and pushed the lever up, making the hut disappear. "Must be the butterfly..." Arelane sneered. Radii just looked down.
I noticed something for a second in the distance, like a hut. I looked closer, but it was already gone. The sky was rainbow with clouds made of popcorn. I ran to the position where the hut spawned. I smashed into something in front of me, making my head get face palmed. I fell to the ground while some pizza's were staring at me when I was on the ground. "Tee hoo na na?" A pizza wondered. "Grrr...." I sneered. I wondered what this invisible wall was... certainly not a hut. So I tried my best to walkaround the invisible wall, but I kept smashing into it when finally I didn't smash into something the 6th time and I went through without anything in front of me smashing in my face. The pizza grew hands that were made of brocoli and turned my around and pointed at the air. "SEE LOO TOOL GA!" It shouted. "... Eh?" I wondered. I just walked forward and ignored them.
When Radii saw the screen, she quickly smashed a button with her fist, making the hut appear again. "It was you! Why you little..." Arelane was about to grab Radii, until a guard went in front of her, interrupting Arelane's grubby hands touching Radii. "Sir! *puff*... sir! The butterfly is... *breathe* has been captured!" The guard laughed. "Is that REALLY important?" Arelane shouted. "Yes! Come look!" The guard pointed. Arelane sighed and follow the guard. Before Radii could touch any more buttons, Arelane called out and called "Guard number 21, you watch what Radii is doing with my machine..." "Yes sir!" A guard responded, and he stood next to Radii, watching every breath she took and everytime she coughed. She stared at the screen, staring at me, seeing the hut.
"The hut!" I cheered. I went up to the door and knocked on it, and when the door openned, a piece of lettuce was there with a little wizard hat made of paper was there. "Tee wee Loo loo... Cam de one!" It called. I didn't understand it, so I went inside anyway while the pizza's followed me. "Boo na tee wa... cool la ne wa... EEEEEE!" The lettuce said, and my eyes were covered in white and yellow. 5 minutes later, I opened my eyes, and there were no pizza's or lettuce... just me and my friends and a wizard in front of me. "Can you FINALLY hear us god dammit Louise?" Cally growled. "Wow.. I had a weird dream. I saw pizza's a lettuce and..." The wizard interrupted and howled out "Louise, it seem's someone messed with your memories and made you see pizza's and lettuce and many things..." It said. "Memories? You mean it was... real?" I wondered. "Yes..." It sighed. "I have a deep feeling that it's Arelane and Radii." Undead wondered. "I used a spell to fix your memories up." It said. "Could we have a introduction please?" Ninjaman asked kindly. "Of course. I'm Twage, and I'm here to help you." Twage smiled.
To Be Continued...
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Butterflies... Gawd damn. And Radii, WHYYYYYYY?!!!
(Nice Chapter)

 

Ooh I love magic xD

Thx Louise, and great chapter as always

 

Keep bringing the awesome chapters/stories Louise!

 

I'm so sorry for not making a chapter in a couple of days. Due to being inactive is because of Easter, football and if you didn't know, camp is starting tomorrow, so I've been busy packing, practising and organising so I can make this camp the best one yet. So I won't make another chapter for about 3 or 4 days, so please be patient and I hope you all wish me a good time!
I also love the positive and awesome comments that make me smile everyday! Thanks guys :)
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
@TwageTomato
And yes, how I write chapters will now operate differently. So now they'll be more breaks and hopefully this shall be easier to read. If you like the new way to read my story, don't thank me, but thank @BossClaire for the suggestion. I'm sorry if you don't like how the chapters are showing though... but I hope all of you will get used to it :D
Enjoy! :D
Chapter 24 - The Journey To The Maze
Something was questioning my mind, something pushing me to say something.
"Are you positive that we can trust you?" I questioned.
"What are you saying?" Ninjaman shouted.
"I just don't want him to turn his back on us... like Radii." I sighed.
Ninjafoya then frowned, wondering the same thing.
"Never fear travellers, I've been living here for many years and curing many spells and sicknesses, of course you can trust me." Twage beamed.
"We'll just have to see." Silent insisted.
Suddenly, time froze for 10 minutes.
As time continued, I could tell our group was starting to get stubborn.
"The dragon... it's remaining in pain." Twage exclaimed.
"Dragon you say? Perhaps an explanation can guide us to this dragon." Kono requested.
"If it helps, I accept. Millions of years ago, the god's gifted the universe a dragon, protecting and controlling time. It was it's job to make time right. If anything disturbs it, it will freeze time time to time once disturbed. However, the dragon hasn't been disturbed for millions of years, but the theories were true, that one day the dragon will freeze time due to pain and rage, and it looks like that one day is today." Twage explained.
"We have to help it!" Katy requested.
"But where?" Kazuke wondered.
"I think I remember... possibly in space." I stated.
"Excellent! Twage, is there a possible way to get to the dragon so we can free it from it's rage and pain?" Undead questioned for a smile.
"Perhaps a rocket ship and tanks up to 5 kilometre's high and kilometres wide filled with petrol can help a rocket as big as a building to fly across to where the dragon is." Twage smiled.
"But... there's a risk." Twage's smile suddenly lowered to a frown.
"What's the risk wizard?" Sutho asked.
"You'll have to go deep underground, to find a maze and mossy stone covering the walls. Beware of creatures that can trap you into hell though. If you get to the end of the maze successfully, you'll find a map and a compass, that should show you where the dragon should lay." Twage explained.
"Well, let's get digging!" Mappy cheered.
"Exactly what do we dig with?" John wondered.
We all just knew John's power could be in use, and perhaps the other Gods'.
"John, you'll have to spawn a giant metal drill so you can dig as far as we can get while we use our powers to support you as well." Dugee planned.
"Excellent. Now then Gods' and travellers, I wish you luck to your journey to the maze and Dragon. Farewell." Twage smiled.
Everyone waved and headed outside, while I stayed and stared at Twage.
"Why do you come?" I questioned.
"I have to stay here and keep track of this Arelane, I could sense he might mess with your memories soon..." Twage stared through the window.
"Can't you keep track of his plans while your with us?" I stated.
"I can't bring all my potions with me, I'll need them to spawn an orb to see what Arelane is planning on." Twage explained.
"But-" Then Ninjafoya grabbed my hand, dragging me out of the hut.
Twage waved as soon as the door slammed shut, and John got ready to spin his drill into the ground.
The drill spun and entered the ground, spreading dust and dirt in our faces. We hopped into the small hole and he kept drilling while the God's also sprinkled some powers to the ground.
I realised Sven wasn't on my shoulder, and I saw his hand dangle at the top of the hole.
"We forgot Sven!" I cried.
"We can't make his body get damaged." Undead explained.
"So what!" I cried.
"But maybe Twage or the dragon could heal him. We don't have a choice!" Katy screamed.
I just kept staring at Sven's hand as the hole got deeper, and my vision started to get darker as night was coming.

Meanwhile, Radii smiled at the screen as she saw me and my friends get deeper.
"What are you smiling out pickle head?" Soldier number 21 outraged.
"Just enjoying uhh... Louise going crazy cause of the memories... heh heh." Radii coughed.
Soldier number 21 looked at the screen, confused as the screen wasn't as crazy as before.
"What did you touch missy?" Soldier number 21 sneered.
"Uhh... technical difficulties maybe?" Radii smiled.
"I'll call Arelane to fix the machine." Soldier number 21 left the room, and Radii let out a deep sigh.
To Be Continued...
I hope none of you dislikes this new format.
I know, I might not have used this format incorrectly due to some mistakes, but I'll try and get used to it as well :)
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Soldier 21, LUMMEHNAWTHY CUNTFIRMED
Nice chapter. :)

 

Well done as always, Louise!
Keep it up with your amazing work :D

 

{Easter egg spoiler alert (idk) }
I was wondering if someone was going to spot that xD
I'm back! I had a really awesome time at camp, all though I missed everyone and I was worried no one liked the new format... but everything seems to be okay!
And I love the feedback and likes, keep it up everyone :D
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
@TwageTomato
Enjoy :D
Chapter 25 - The Maze Of Hell
The hole kept going deeper, and it's been quite a while since we first started to first dig.
John was getting tired using his powers and the Gods' as well.
Ninjaman noticed everyone's exhausted faces, and cheered us up with the following news.
"Alright soldiers, perhaps its a perfect time to rest. Sleep tight!"
We sighed in relief and layed on the ground as well slept, but I noticed someone sobbing in the crowd.
I stood up and watched the still bodies, until one was shaking.
That's when I noticed it was Silent who was sobbing.
I tiptoed stepping on the tiniest gaps between everyone, and I finally reached Silent, covering his eyes and sobbing.
"Silent, is there something bothering you?" I questioned in a calm voice.
"Lost city... it's gone. Everyone's dead..." Silent sobbed.
"Evil city is built again, Arelane and Radii are probably laughing their butts off. Forget it kid, Lost City is gone. There's no way to revive it." Silent cried louder.
I soon remembered that the gold palace that laid on the cloud in the sky might be destroyed as well, so I could feel Silent's anger.
I placed my hand on his back, hoping that his sorrow will calm down.
"We'll be okay, the Dragon is our only hope." I whispered.
Silent's sobbing was decreasing, a sign that he is finally all right.
I tiptoed through the crowd back to my spot, and slept.

As Radii stood there, wondering what to do in order to not make Arelane see the machine, she had an idea.
She hid behind a locker and waited until a soldier would come and open it.
As the locker opened slowly, a soldier shrieked and Radii pulled him into the locker, beating him until he fainted.
She took his armour off, leaving him with a stinky singlet and underpants and she hopped out of the locker and slammed it shut.
She stood in front of the machine, just in time before Arelane could see the screen of the machine.
"Soldier number 17, you seem skinnier then usual..." Arelane sneered.
"Been training all night... sir." Radii smiled.
"I don't care. Move out of the way before Soldier 21 pushes you away anyway." Arelane sighed with anger.
"Everything is fine with the machine sir! No need to check... heh heh." Radii was starting to loose her calmness.
"Then let me see..." Arelane sneered.
Radii was shivering before Arelane could remove the helmet, until she had an idea... maybe a stupid one.
"Look! Free ice cream!" Radii pointed at a soldier nomming on ice cream.
"ICE CREAAAAM!" Soldier number 21 rushed to the ice cream.
The rest of the soldiers also charged at the ice cream, beating each other up to get the ice cream.
Even Soldier 17 got out of the locker in his underwear, running towards the crowd.
"Wait... that's Soldier 17, who are YOU?" Arelane shouted.
Radii was about to shiver, until she rushed out of the room.
"SOLDIERS, GET HIM!" Arelane screamed.
None of the soldiers responded and kept fighting over the ice cream.
Arelane groaned and chased at Radii.
Radii went out of the gate, and pulled the lever, making the door slowly shut.
Arelane was just about to get through, until Radii punched him to the ground.
The door's shut, making it impossible to escape unless Soldier number 8 would respond and unlock the gate using his key.

I woke up, and as I looked around, everyone was still in a slumber.
I noticed that John's drill hasn't despawned yet, so I grabbed it and started digging, making everyone wake up as they heard the sound of the drill.
"Louise, what are you doing?" Sutho demanded.
"Digging? What does it look like." I sneered.
Suddenly, we all fell down the hole, into some kind of maze.
"The maze... it's here." Undead pointed.
We all stared at where he was pointing, and we saw the walls, mossy walls and doors, looking like the maze, leading to the map and compass.
To Be Continued...
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Well. Quite a bit of plot development in that chapter ._.
Splendid job, Louise. Keep it up!

 

Great work i want to be in the next one!

 

Accepted your request, you'll appear in the story shortly, possibly in 2 or 3 more chapters.

Guys, I realised that maybe adding everyone might not really improve my story. I'm just too soft. I add everyone who requests just because I'm kind, but I really need to be strong.
What I'm saying is: Please think twice before you request to be in the story.
If I say "I need one more character to be in the story" then sure, you can request to be in the story, but please don't request to be in the story AFTER someone has requested. Just simply wait until I ask for someone to be in he story again. However, sometimes I might forget to ask for more characters, so if I haven't asked for someone to be in the story for a while (like 5 or more chapters) just ask, but don't beg to be in the story. So here's an example of a simple request: "Nice story Louise! You haven't really added much people in for a couple of chapters... so I'm wondering if maybe you need me somewhere. I don't mind if you decline, but I'm just wondering. Thanks!" This is quite a good example, so maybe use this format to request ONLY if I haven't asked anyone to be in the story for around 5 or more chapters.
Hopefully this will make my story and any more stories in the future less crazy. Thanks :)
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane (I'll start calling you @CaptainJackVal in the story unless you want to keep it as Arelane)
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
@TwageTomato
Enjoy :D
Chapter 26 - The Discovery Of Hell

"I'm scared!" Cried Ninjafoya.
"Oh come on, sure this place isn't that scar-" Cally then suddenly noticed these floating creatures, with a black rope covering half of there face float by.
"Nevermind..." Cally shivered.
"Oh come on Soldiers, the world is depending on us. Let's split. Louise, Kono, Undead, Cally, Sutho, Dugee and Ninjanaylin will go left. Ninjafoya, Kazuke, John, Mappy, Creeper, Katy and I will get right. Let's move!" Ninjaman demanded.
We nodded and marched to where we're demanded to go.
Kono was in front of our group, deciding which way to go.
Kono gasped and pushed us to the wall and we heard something float away.
"Those creatures must be what Twage was trying to explain..." Kono stated.​

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Ninjaman was just marching helplessly through any tunnel that was closest to his.
"We've like marched into 6 dead ends. You have to think wiser dude!" Mappy shouted.
"This is the perfect way! I just know it is. Now keep marching those knee's gentlemen!" Ninjaman beamed.
"Don't forget the two ladies in this group as well..." Katy sighed.
John pulled Ninjaman arm to the left behind a wall as one of the creatures walked past.
"You've got to be more careful! I'm sure those creatures are trouble if they spot us..." Kazuke shouted.
"I'm scared! Those things look scary!" Ninjafoya cried once more.
"Now Ninjafoya, this place isn't that-" Dugee was inturrupted when a small sorrow was heard down the hall.
"Someone... crying?" John wondered.
"It might be Louise and the gang! CHARGE!!!" Creeper shouted.
Creeper ran down the hall while the others chased after him.
Then as they turned a corner, they bumped into a creature, that was crying.
It's last tear dropped onto the floor, and screamed in anger.

Kono heard her phone ringing.
"Keep that phone down! It might alert a creature!" Dugee shouted.
"Guys, shoosh. Hello?" Kono calledi n the phone.
"HELP! A CREATURE IS GOING TO-" The phone cut out.
"Who is this? Hello? Answer me!" Kono screamed.
The phone remained silent. She placed her phone down her pocket.
"Who was that?" Ninjanaylin asked.
"It sounded like... NINJAMAN! He's is trouble! Let's go!" Kono screamed.
She turned left and charged into a tunnel.
"Wait! You don't know where they are!" Undead coughed.
"I don't care! We'll find Ninjaman and the others now!" Kono cried.
Suddenly, we were too tired and out of breathe to run any more.
We weren't really paying out attention as we walked past a opening, with a creature, seeing us.
It screamed and opened up a portal, sucking us in. All my friends were sucked in, and I was holding onto the wall.
My hand slipped, and I fell into the portal, and I kept falling down the portal, seeing nothing but blackness.

"That was close!" Ninjaman laughed.
"We should call Kono and the gang that we're okay." Creeper said.
"Hopefully they didn't think this was a April Fool's joke!" Mappy laughed.
Ninjaman called Kono's phone, but she didn't pick up the phone.
"Your call was not answered. Please leave a message after the beep. BEEP!" The phone responded.
"Hey Kono, this is Ninjaman. Our gang was fine. The creature fainted after Mappy zapped a laser at is. So no worries, a bit strange that you didn't answer the phone though... all well! We'll meet up soon, keep searching! Byeeeee!" Ninjaman cheered.
"Quite strange why Kono didn't pick up her phone..." Kazuke wondered.
"Maybe one of the creatures... caught them!" Ninjafoya screamed.
"Shhhhh!" John hissed.
"Nah, they must be fine. Let's keep searching." Katy smiled.

As my vision finally changed, the scene was not pretty: Lava and fire scattered around the area, demons flew through the sky, bones were stuck in the red dust and everything just looked like one place you'd not want to go: Hell.
To Be Continued...
Hope you enjoyed this awesome chapter!
Remember, I do not need any more characters in the story yet. So anyone who requests to be in the story will probably be ignored.
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Guess what guys?
WE REACHED 100 REPLIES!
And now, this will be my most replied story now while my runner up story still remains as War 3.0
Seriously, I never thought we'd make it this far, and I just want to thank everyone who has requested to be in the story, my friends and of course the people who comment on this story. Thank you all so much.
And maybe... we might reach 200 replies. Maybe... just maybe...
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@CaptainJackValdy
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
@TwageTomato
New Character:
@ConnorFTW
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Chapter 27 - The Plan Of Evil
"Could this be..." I gasped.
The rest of the group finally woke up, and were in shock as well.
"That dirty little damn creature!" Kono shouted.
"Wait... Dugee, Sutho and Cally, is this where you were born?" Undead questioned.
"What do you mean?" Sutho said.
"You are the 8 Gods of HELL, right? Is this where you were created by the wicked Arelane?"
"I... I think I remember." Dugee sighed.
"This could be where we were spawned. He could have gained the energy source from this area and inserted it into us to make us powerful. I guess that's why we were named 'The 8 Gods Of Hell'." Cally explained.
"I'm just confused, who were those creatures that transport people to hell." Ninjanaylin wondered.
"Workers of the wicked CaptainJackValdy." Someone said in the distance.
The thing came closer and took off it's hood, and it appeared to be a guy, with a scar on his eye making his right eye blind.
"Who... who are you?" Undead questioned.
"I'm Connor, and yes, I know this enemy of yours too." Connor sighed.
"Wait wait, who's this 'CaptainJackValdy?' " I questioned.
"Yesturday... Arelane killed my family and friends and scratched my right eye. Before he could kill me, I escaped, and as I ran in the distance, I heard one of his guards say 'Since Arelane is fully outraging, it's known that once he's fully evil, he'll be known as CaptainJackValdy, or for short: CaptainJack." Connor explained.
"How'd you end up here?" Kono questioned.
"Umm... Can't explain. Now, I need to tell you what CaptainJack is up to, this way." Connor pointed.
We followed him, avoiding the lava and demons scattering around hell.
We entered a small cave with a huge cloth at the entrance, covering the front.
He pushed the cloth away, so we can entered and once we were settled, he closed the cloth.
"Now... I need to tell you what CaptainJack is up to." Connor took a deep breath.
"Before my family was killed, we were hiding behind a wall, listenning to CaptainJack's plans. This was what we heard: 'I know the God's betrayed me, but I created them in hell... so it's time to make them stay in hell. I'll destroy my machine and make a new one, making the God's trapped in hell forever unless this machine is destroyed. Then I shall make that person behind the wall ki-' That's I knew we were busted as CaptainJack knew we were behind the wall the whole time, and his guards killed my family, and I then escaped."
"I wish your family to rest in peace in heaven. Now, is there a way to make only us to escape?" Kono said.
"I can make you a portal back to the maze you first started in, but first, I'll need some glow stone to regenerate my powers again." Connor explained.
"Well let's move guys, time to find glow stone!" Dugee cheered.
We nodded and left the cave, when suddenly Connor opened a portal anyway and went inside, leaving the cave empty.

"We haven't found Louise and her group yet... where could they be?" John wondered.
"Probably in the bathroom!" Mappy laughed on the ground.
"Huuush! The enemies may hear you..." Ninjaman hissed.
"I'm sorry..." Mappy sniffed.
"Gentlemen! I have a plan!" Ninjaman cheered.
"Shhhh!" Kazuke hissed.
"Ok guys, since we do think one of the creatures captured them, we should get information out of them! Then we'll find out where they are." Ninjaman cheered.
"Then we can see Louise again! Yay!" Ninjafoya cheered.
"Then it's settled. Let's find a creature and get information out of it." Creeper said.
They nodded and searched around the maze.

Back at the fortress, CaptainJack pulled the lever on his new machine.
"Uhh, what does this do now?" Soldier 21 questioned.
"It will return them..." CaptainJack giggled.
"Who?" Soldier 21 dribbled.
"You'll see..." CaptainJack giggled once more.
To Be Continued...
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