[New] 6th Story: The Return Of Memories

But do you even know if your that person? :o You could be someone else...
Anyway, hello everyone ^-^ I'm so glad all of you love this stories and of course my stories in the past.
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
New Character:
@Arelane

Chapter 5 - The Enemy?
I looked up, and someone was standing there with a furious face. It came closer, but then as I saw nice and clear, it was NinjaMan. "GUARDS! Didn't I tell you this girl is our friend?" NinjaMan shouted. "But what about the other girl?" One of the guards exclaimed. NinjaMan looked at Ninjafoya while shivering. "She's my friend! She's helping me, now can you please tell the guards to lay off?" I told NinjaMan. He nodded and the guards went outside. "Sorry for the false alarm, anyway welcome back." NinjaMan smiled. "Who?" Ninjafoya wondered. Then, Kono came up to Ninjafoya. "We're helping Louise, she's been kidnapped and something has been stolen from her." Kono explained. "Wait, someone said YOU stole my memories." I shouted. "Us?" NinjaMan seemed shocked. "Who told you that?" Kono shouted. "Some girl..." I wondered. "Louise, shape up, you need fresh air. Your out of your mind." Kono pushed us outside while the iron doors behind us shut tight. "Are you sure their helping you?" Ninjafoya asked. "I... sometimes I don't even know any more..." I sighed.
It was starting to rain and thunder was roaring. We hid inside a shop with no one inside. Some tears started to roll down my face. "We'll find Sven, don't worry." Ninjafoya put her hand on my back. I tried to smile, but the image of Sven was dominating my mind. I looked behind me, and all I saw was fitting rooms with curtains in front of them. I sighed and just stared out the window where rain drops poured down onto the window. Then, someone grabbed me and shoved me into the fitting room without Ninjafoya knowing.
It placed super sticky tape on my mouth, so I couldn't scream for help. I was shaking and horrified. I tried to shout who he was, but all I did was mumble. He placed his finger on the tape. "Shhh..." He smiled. My hands were also tide together, so I couldn't escape. "Child... your memories..." He smiled. I was confused. "They are quite... stunning." He smiled again. I heard Ninjafoya scream in the background, calling for my name, then I heard the doors open, and she must have ran away. I tried to wiggle like a caterpillar out of the fitting room, but he grabbed me, shoved me against the wall and placed a rope against my body. It was so tight, I could even feel the rope grab my stomach. I couldn't breathe. "Let me say something... You ain't escaping, because I, Arelane, will take your memories, and become the greatest scientist in the world." He laughed. "Well, since this shop is abandoned, I'll just let you hang, and don't forget, you haven't eaten for quite a while as well." He sneaked out of the fitting room, and went out of the door.
I was screaming, but the tape was too tight. The rope was strangling me, and I could do nothing. Hours past, and my stomach was screaming. I've been trying to escape, but it was no use. My legs felt weak, and my arms felt like a piece of tissue, and my eyes were hardly opening. I tried to keep my eyes open, but the view started to get boring, just the wall I was staring at. My eyes suddenly shut like a rock, and I was too tired to make them go up again, so as minutes past, I was asleep, so time could go by quickly, and even death could hurry up and finish me.
To Be Continued...
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Torture scenes!!! :O
Nice chapter. (Im dr.Trager pirate version :3)

 

I actually got NOTICED while I was playing on the server cause of my stories. Wow... I'm famous
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
New Character:
@TheUndeadBrave
Enjoy ^-^

Chapter 6 - The Truth
I woke up immediately after a huge thunder roared. My stomach was tying up in knots, and I was still hanging. I knew maybe even in minutes I'll starve to death, until I heard the doors open. I kept quiet, and the curtains next to me openned, and it was Ninjaman and Kono, with shocked faces. "GOODNESS! Louise, what happened?" Kono screamed. They got a knife and cut the ropes and sticky tape, and I fell to the ground. They helped me got up, and brought me to their base. They gave me some steak, which finally made me feel better. "Louise, who did that to you?" Ninjaman asked. "Someone named... Arelane." I responded. They frowned. "I've heard rumors about him, how he only cares about himself and tries to make the world a better place, but it just creates chaos, do you know what he's going to do next?" Ninjaman questioned. "I heard he said something about... my memories." I thought. Then, their faces changed instantly.
"That must be... that must be what he took away from you, your memories!" Kono realised. "Also, we're sorry for our attitude before, just thought Arelane has done something to you..." Ninjaman sighed. "But... some girl did say you took her memories away, is this... true?" I wondered. "We've never taken any memories, we're trying to protect you." Kono frowned.
A thought entered my mind, and it felt empty, just something was missing... then my mind almost exploded. "WHERE NINJAFOYA?" I screamed. They were confused. "We're... not quite sure..." Ninjaman sighed. I breathed heavily. "I need to know... I NEED TO KNOW!" I grabbed Ninjaman and started shaking him, but Kono then slapped me, which made me let go. "Snap out of it god dammit! We don't know!" Kono shouted. I started to cry, silently. "What else is going to be taken away from me..." I sighed.
I knew I couldn't just sit here while Ninjafoya could be in danger, or maybe even Sven... I ran off, leaving Kono and Ninjaman behind, while they tried to tell me to not go out, but I ignored them. The rain started to drop faster, and the thunder roared more, I just ran, I don't know where but I kept running, as far away from Ninjaman and Kono.
I slipped and fell, and my face crashed onto the floor. I kept crying, I just don't know what to do. Then, a shadow floated on me, and I looked up, and someone was there... familiar. "Louise, come." He smiled. "Who are you..." I coughed. "Come..." He said. I just got up and followed him, and we went down in the sewers. Rats crawled away from us and slime were hanging from the walls. Then I saw a old door, and it openned. We entered, and I saw Ninjafoya, just sitting in a seat, and her face rapidly changed. "LOUISE!!!" She cried. She ran up to me and hugged me. "I thought I'd never see you again." She smiled. The doors shut, and I walked backwards slowly as the stranger went closer to me. "You might not be familiar, but it's me..." He said. His finger touched my forehead, then I saw a flashback: The guy... who was with me... we fighted the Gods, we protected Lost City, we saved the universe before freezing, he helped me when I had powers, and when we were on the planets...
I finally saw the view again, and I remembered: It was Undead. "Louise, I know whats happening, what me to tell you." He said. I nodded. "Louise... all the memories when you defeated the 8 gods of hell, when you saved Lost Town, when you saved the universe before it froze, when you had powers and when you saved the planets... those memories... are coming back to life." He explained. "Wha-What?" I was shocked.
To Be Continued...
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Yay! No torture scenes!!
(Be happy :3)
Nice chapter btw

 

Hello everyone, Louise here, and I need HEAPS more people to be in the story, why? Because I need people to be the 8 Gods Of Hell, some people to appear when War 3.0 appears, and so on. So apparently though I need about 30 more people to be in the story, and yes that's alot.
@Kazuke
@Cally8484
@Suthos
Your going to be the next 8 gods of hell, but I need you all to aether edit your reply and say what power you want (Examples: Be the god of music, fire, water, etc. whatever you want) or just post a new reply. If you don't reply in a couple of chapters or edit your replies, I'll have to make a power for you, so if you want a really cool power you want to have, just edit your reply or make a new reply.
Important:
The next 5 people who want to be in the story, please include what power you want, otherwise I'll just make a power up for you.
Now since the explaining is done, here's the characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
Enjoy ^-^

Chapter 7 - The Memories Of Life
My heart was pumping, and I was sweating, and my brain was just declining the fact about this. "No! This can't be true." I cried. "I'm afraid it is..." He sighed. I heard people screaming, and we ran out of the sewers, and the clouds from above was screaming and lightning was also roaring. We ran to the side walk to get a better view, and colours were exploding in the sky and everyone was panicking. "Is that one of my memories?" I wondered. "Perhaps." Undead said. "Louise, can you remember what that could be?" Ninjafoya asked. "I... I can't remember..." I sighed. "Arelane must have taken your memories out so you can't remember them." Someone said behind us, and it was Ninjaman and Kono. "Come on, let's get out of here before this gets out of control." Kono suggested. We nodded and headed to the parking lot, where only one car remained. Ninjaman got a remote and pushed a button, and wings appeared at the side of the car and started hovering. We hopped in and soared through the sky.
We went above the clouds, and 8 people were their, blasting their powers past the clouds. As soon as they spotted us, they disappeared. "Who... who were they?" I asked. "It must be some people from your memories..." Kono wondered. "incorrect." Undead said. "What?" Ninjaman questioned. "Louise, there's too many different people in your memories, so you couldn't remember all of them, and since you couldn't remember them before your memories were taken away, the people that are from your memories that's alive right now are random." Undead explained. "But... but what about Arelane?" I wondered. "He's probably the guy behind all this." Undead sighed.
Ninjafoya noticed something in the distance. "What's that golden palace over there?" Ninjafoya pointed, and a golden palace was sitting on a cloud. The car-plane then zoomed to the palace in minutes, and then landed. As we got off, people with wings on their back pointed spears at us. "Who dare's lands on the Palace Of Gold without the king's permission!" One angel said. "Listen, there are people destroying the city, and we didn't have a choice." I explained. "Silence!" The spears came closer to us. Then, the angels behind us walked forward, so we did as well.
They leaded us to a guy, sitting on a golden throne, with a long hairy beard. "King Angel, these strangers has landed on the palace of gold." The angel explained. "What?" The king said. "No no no! You don't understand!" Kono cried. "SILENCE!" The king shouted. I heard another explosion from behind. The angels seemed confused. "... Is that why you came here?" The king asked. We nodded. The angels put their spears down. "Could we perhaps stay here before the explosions calm down?" Ninjaman requested. The king sighed. "I'm afraid so. Angels, lead them to the cabins." The king demanded. The angels nodded and showed us to a little house. We went inside and the doors closed imminently. It was quite stinky in here, all there were was about 10 beds. "I swear, it wasn't me." Ninjafoya sighed. "Well, better then nothing." Undead laughed.
I heard a scream from outside, and I stared through the window. "King! King! The explosions... *puff* are from the... *breathe..." "Well! What is it?" "The... 8 Gods Of Hell..." The angel screamed.
To Be Continued...
Hope you enjoyed this chapter, and if you liked my story 'The 8 Gods Of Hell' Well now you get to ready that story again in this story, accept quite different and a bit shorter.
Remember to leave your feedback below (please) and also a like
And remember, if you want to be in the story, remember to say what power you want as well because you'll be one of the Gods Of Hell.
If no one wants to be in the 8 Gods Of Hell, I'll probably just have to end the story (sadly) or choose enough random people from the forums if they want to.
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I'm so so so so sorry for double posting, and I'd hate to triple post.
Guys, please remember to comment below, otherwise I may have trouble finishing the story since I hate triple posting, so if you want me to continue the story, please remember to comment!
Character:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
Enjoy :D

Chapter 8 - The Gods Of Hell
"Impossible!" The king shouted. I went outside, while the others didn't notice, and I saw in the distance 8 people, showing off their powers. "The 8 Gods Of Hell?" I wondered. Suddenly, I saw a flashback of me, fighting the 8 Gods Of Hell...
"Louise? What are you doing!" The flashback disappeared, and I was viewing the real world. Ninjafoya ran up in front of me. "Are you okay?" Ninjafoya asked. "I saw.... a flashback... those Gods... I saw them before." I sighed. "Your memories might return as well." Undead explain. Suddenly, one of the God's in the distance shot a lightning bolt at us, but we dodged it at the last second. "Angels! Warn the others! Intruder alert!" The king shouted. The sirens screamed, and the angels panicked. All of the angels went in their homes, locking the doors. However, some angels went in our cabin, also locking the door. "HEY!" Kono shouted. "It's too late." Ninjaman grabbed Kono before she could run off.
Ninjafoya grabbed my hand and ran back to the car and everyone got in. "We must escape, come on!" Ninjafoya screamed. I stopped, and stared at the Gods. "Louise, get in!" Ninjaman shouted. "No... the flashback means something..." I shouted. I ran while Ninjafoya's hand slipped, and I ran, onto the clouds, straight to the gods. "LOUISE!" Kono shouted, but I ignored them. They got their car activating and tried to follow me, but I kept running, even though each time I have hardly any time to breathe.
I finally reached the Gods, and they laughed. The car was behind me, but one of the God's zapped some sort of power at it, and it fel through the clouds. "NO!" I screamed. They laughed. Then, one of them zapped some power at me, and I fainted, and they grabbed me.
"It's funny... No one seems to like me... there's always this one guy who's just bad for no reason." Arelane laughed, as he stared at the T.V. "She is more then you think." Someone said behind him, all tied up to the chair. "Oh give me a break, she ain't nothing, her memories are gone, she'll die, then, I can the greatest scientist of all... but I've got a better reason why I'm always that evil." He smiled. "Exactly what is that reason?" The stranger said. "I saw Louise, defeat the God's, save Lost City, save the planet before freezing, having powers and saving the planets, I was there... I tried to stop her while she was on the planets, but she's nothing like the others. I've been jealous of her ever since, winning all the time, just like every character in the movies, and let me tell you something... I tried to save everything! I tried to defeat the Gods before she did, I tried to save the city before she did, and everything else! But the others laughed... laughed like I was nothing, I tried to help them, but what did they do? DECLINE MY REQUEST!" Arelane shouted. "Who else wouldn't laugh? Your just a guy with a moustache." The stranger laughed. "I'm more then that... I'll be just like Louise, and make her the opposite." Arelane giggled. "I know her, she can do anything!" The stranger shouted. Arelane got a knife and held it near the strangers neck. "She an do anything eh? Well looks like she can go to her grave then." Arelane laughed with a evil smile.
To Be Continued...
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This is a fricken good story!

I like how I've gone from being one of your enemies to being one of your friends in every story.

 

REVENGE IS GOING TO BE TAKEN CUZ I GOT A KNIFE XDDD
Good Story, but next time (If u want) I Can help you With Villains cuz Sometimes they are like revenging for...Nonsense? No offence, I just wanna help, Story is Good Anyways.

 

Do I make a comeback


Power: able to fly

Awesome story so far

 

Can you add me please? I love the story!

 

If you want, but remember to say the story was made by me, not you, so just remember to type/write 'Story Made By LouiseXminerX' or something like that

Could you tell me what power you want? Examples: Fire, Water, Ice, Music, etc. Anything you want I guess ^-^

Expanded why your the villain and why you want revenge in this chapter ;)
Anyway, hello everyone! Chapter 9 is in the house! (Don't tell me what house ._. )
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
New Character:
@Cally8484
Remember @Kazuke and @Suthos to eather comment below what power you have or edit your comment. I'm gonna give you 1 more day (maybe 2) for you to choose your power, otherwise I'll choose the powers for you.
And if anyone else wants to be in the story, please remember to say what power you want, at the moment I need about 4 more people, otherwise I'll just choose random people from the forums to join the story.
Anyway, enjoy :D

Chapter 9 - Soaring To Graves
Nothing but greyness covered my eyes. I moved my arms to push me up, and I finally saw something else, instead some iron bars were in front of me. I stood up immediately, and I realised I was in jail. Then, I heard laughter. "Oh hoo hoo hoo hoo, yes... the plan is just... soaring through the sky." Then, Arelane stood in front of me, smoking a cigerrate. "Louise... I just so you know... love it when your all like 'I'm gonna save the world!' and look at you, all stuck in jail." He chuckled. He flicked his cigarette at the wall. "Why do you hate me so much!" I shouted. "Because ho ho ho, you stole EVERYTHING from me." He shouted at my face. "I didn't even steal a single crumb of food from you." I sighed. "You took my one way trip to freedom." He sighed. "Don't you see Louise? I created all this chaos! The wars, the Gods, The Dragon, The powers and planets, to show everyone I really am a great scientist! Everyone hated me because they thought my inventions were terrible, worthless and just plain. I wanted to show everyone I was something, so I created the Gods and everything, and I knew I could save the world and everyone would like me, until YOU came and took the fame and look at you, all... popular. You WEREN'T suppost to god damn save the world! I was about to! So thats why I tried to take revenge back on the planets, but of course YOU saved the world again. So I want to change all that. I want you to not exist, so I can have my freedom again, and so the hate will turn the opposite. Louise, you ain't anything." Arelane smiled. "You couldn't have saved the world anyway!" I shouted. "SILENCE!" He screamed, and he got his dagger out. "He he... you have 5 minutes to live... just kidding! It's 0." He laughed.
Guards got guns and stood there, ready to shoot, until a car crashed behind them. "What?" Arelane coughed. I saw Ninjafoya, Undead and Ninjaman get out of the car with swords. "GET THEM! DON'T LET THEM GET LOUISE!" Arelane shouted. The bullets deflected off the swords and entered the guards bodies, leaving dead bodies scatter around the area. Undead ripped the lock on the door in half and the door swinged opened, and I got out. "Don't let her escape!" Arelane shouted. Ninjaman were behind us as we ran, and his swords were no match for their guns, and we got of the jail.
I almost fell, until Ninjafoya grabbed me, and it turns out we were on a cloud. The guards rushed out of the jail, pointing their guns at us. Ninjafoya grabbed my hand, and she jumped, and I fell as well. Then, we landed safely on a little plane, with Kono riding it. "Kono, ride to that cloud!" Ninjaman pointed. The plane steered to the left and headed to an empty cloud while the bullets just missed us.
We were too far away from the jail for the bullets to reach us, so we landed. "Nice swords." I smiled. "Kono designed them." Ninjaman explained. "And the plane?" I wondered. "Undead found it." Ninjafoya smiled. "Well... now what!" Ninjafoya laughed. Then, a huge stomp rumbled the cloud, and I almost fell over. I looked up, and someone was there, with huge, demon wings stood there. "I know how Arelane feels... and you'll feel just the same!" He said. "Who-who are you?" I wondered. "It's Cally, the Sky God." Undead explained. Cally giggled. "Prepare for battle ya twits!" He shouted.
His demon wings widened, and started flapping, and a great wind forced us to fall off the cloud. The plane fell off, and we tried to run, but the force was too strong for us, so we almost fell, but just hanged on to the fluff of the cloud. The wind stopped, and Cally walked to us, getting his sword out, but Undead threw his sword at one of his wings, and he fell backwards, onto the cloud unconscious.
We got onto the cloud, and cheered. "Now let's get out of here!" Ninjaman laughed.
Then, Cally's eyes opened, and they were dominated with red and blood.
To Be Continued...
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Nice work as always Louise!

 

Dammit I'm mean xD


Well I'm a God so at least I never die.... right?



That chapter was epic

 

Me=Creator Of Everything
You=Destroy everything I Made.

Now It Makes Sense Why i Wanna Revenge :) (In short, Good Story)

 

Hello everyone, just a quick update that there's going to be a new chapter tomorrow, and just letting you know that I actually need 1 more character to be in the story, I'll however say in further chapters when I need more characters, but at the moment just one.
and PLEASE remember what power you want.
So yeah, if you dreamed to be in my story, let me know now below and also what power you want because your going to be one of the 8 Gods Of Hell.
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l love me new pic...
Oh hello xD welcome to Chapter 10 *yay*
And oh my, I double posted ;-; I'm terribly sorry.
PLEASE remember to comment below because I'd HATE to triple post.
Here's the characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
New Characters:
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@RichieOrCraziiR
And yes, I am aware that half of the new characters didn't tell me in time what power they want, so if you forgotten to tell me what power you want, I already gave youa power anyway (Hopefully you won't hate it...)
Anyway, enjoy! :D

Chapter 10 - The Gods
Cally stood up slowly, and his left wing healed, and huge claws spiked out of the wings

The spikes were long and sharp, making the wings even more dangerous. "Play time is over..." Cally laughed. His wings swinged left and right, while centre metres away from our faces. We ran in different directions. Then, the smallest and sharpest spike on his wing stabbed me in the shoulder, and the pain started to dominate. Ninjafoya held me and shuffled back, and Cally flapped his wings, making the wind push against us. The swords from Ninjaman and Ninjafoya's pockets flew off the cloud, meaning we had no weapons.
The clouds in the sky started to grow, and turned grey, and rain patted on the cloud then the thunder started to roll in. Cally kept flapping his wings, and we were at the edge of the cloud, then suddenly it stopped, but we were really close to falling. Then, his right wing pointed at all of us. "Death is HERE!" Then he charged at us, and just before the spikes could stab us, lightning shot down from above, on Cally.
He shattered and his wings burned to ashes, and he fell down, pretty much dead. "Yay!" Ninjafoya cheered. But her cheering was inturrupted, when Cally woke up again, but seemed.. less evil. his wings grew back, but his eyes were normal. "Wheres... Where's that dirty Arelane!" He shouted. Then he noticed us. "Who are you?" He wondered. "Umm... you almost killed us?" Kono sighed. "What? I don't even know you!" He wondered. "Last thing I remembered was Arelane, putting me in a tube, then I fell asleep then... wait, where did THESE wings come from?" He screamed. "Looks like Arelane took your memories." Undead explained. "Thats... that's why I can't remember anything. I'm uh... sorry for any trouble I made." He sighed.
Then, Cally immeditily turned around, showing his back at us. "Is there something wrong?" Kono asked. "Arelane... he's here." He said. I looked up, and 7 people came crushing down on the cloud, and Arelane as well. "Well... if it isn't Pooez and the stupid friends. I must say that was a spectaula show." Arelane laughed. "Arelane... what have you done to me!" Cally shouted. "Oh, looks like you just realised. Boo hoo. Now, meet the OTHER 7 Gods." Arelane laughed. "Wait... I know these guys... they used to be... YOU TURNED THEM INTO GODS AS WELL?" Cally shouted. He almost stabbed Arelane with his spiked wing, but someone went in front of him, holding flame in it's hand. "You see, now their not your friends anymore, now their Gods. I'll show you their powers to see if you have anything against them. Kazuke, the fire God. Sutho, the wolf God. Richie, the lion God. Katy, the water God. Mappy, the Space God, John, the metal god and Soul, the shadow God." Arelane explained. "What... what have you done to them..." Cally cried. Mappy hopped in front of Cally. "Us? We're the awesomeness God's ever! Join us!" Mappy smiled. "No. I know you Mappy, you aren't like this." Cally said. "I am like this. Join us brother." Mappy cheered. "NO!" Cally shouted. "You dare to decline the request of GODS?" John shouted. "They must be killed! We must BURN THEM!" Kazuke laughed. "Or drown them!" Katy giggled. "Or eat them." Riche and Sutho said together. "Why don't we just... kill them." Soul laughed.
To Be Continued...
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Wee... Gods will protect me :D

 

Oh hey louise! amazing chapters, really interesting!
I would love to be a character the story, if not it is completely fine, sorry for asking :)

 

The master author is back with another amazing chapter :P
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos @
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@RichieOrCraziiR
Enjoy :D

Chapter 11 - The War Never Ends
John raised his hands up, and iron claws hovered around him. Kazuke's hand surrounded with flames. Katy spawned waves of water behind her back. Mappy got ready to charge space lasers. Sutho called the wolves and the wolves got ready to fight. Richie roared and the lions spawned next to him, and Soul spawned shadows of claws on the cloud's fluffy ground. The lightning started to roar and gallons of rain patted on the cloud. "KILL THEM!" Arelane shouted. I didn't know what to do. I couldn't fight because my shoulder was still suffering from pain, then just before some metal claws could enter me, Cally flapped his wings and the metal slowly slowed down and then went backwards, straight at John, but Katy pushed a wave in front of John making the metal inside the wave got straight back at us and the waves also were going straight at us. Cally got his wing in front of him, then as soon as the water touched the wing, he flapped it to the left, making the water and metal fall off the cloud.
The lions and wolves ran towards us, roaring and howling. Kono punched some lions and when they were unconscious, they de spawned. Ninjaman kicked some wolves and when they howled in pain, Sutho de spawned them. Kazuke blew flames at us, but Cally then flapped his wings again, making the fire disappear. Then, Mappy charged up a super hyper space laser, and it blasted straight at us.

Colours spiraled around the red,hot laser, and we ducked, just missing us by 2 centre metres over our head. Then, the shadows on the cloud grabbed Ninjafoya and Undead. Ninjaman tried to kick the shadow, but it was just stuck on the ground. The shadows hanged Ninjafoya and Undead at the edge of the cloud, ready to let go. But then the claws on Cally's wing stabbed the shadow on the cloud, making the shadow go back to Soul and just before Ninjafoya and Undead could fall, Cally spread his wing out, making Undead and Ninjafoya land on his wing and they were brought to the cloud. But then, Kazuke charged a mega fire wing, and there was no way to escape it. I got nervous. Then Katy made water darts on top of the fire ring, and it darted straight at us. We knew this was the end. "SO LONG 'HERO'!" Arelane laughed. But Cally went in front of us, and just before the water darts could hit us, he flapped his wings, making the water go straight at the fire ring, killing the fire to the ground. John slapped Katy, making her cry. Then Arelane started clapping. "Bravo. Bravo." He giggled. "That was just a test to see your real strenght. However, its too weak to defeat the real Gods once they are fully powered." Arelane laughed. "Where-Where are you going?" I asked. "The Lost Town." Mappy laughed super loud, probably laughing on the ground as well. "Lost town..." I wondered inm y head. The name rung a bell, then I saw a flashback:
Back when the lost town was in danger due to the evil town, trying to destroy it. I finally woke up, while Ninjafoya was shaking me, and the God's were gone accept for Cally. "I don't know who Soul is. That's really weird..." Cally wondered. "Isn't he your friend?" Ninjaman asked. "It must be someone else. He is quite stronger then the other Gods." Undead explained. "Something is about him. Now, do you know where the lost city is Louise?" Kono asked. "Hmm... I remember going east from the city, but... we must be right above it." I realised. We went to the edge of the cloud and looked down, and a lost city sure was standing there.
To Be Continued...
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Good chapter BTW