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Chapter 50 - The Search For The Light
I knelled on my knees, punching the ground.
"Powers regenerated. Not the kind of news for now... eh." Connor sighed.
"Wait, Connor. Spawn a creature that can bring anything from the dead!" Undead commanded.
"Hmm... Hopefully this works." Connor said.
Connor pointed in the air, and a little glowing light was shining.
The light calmed down, and a little rainbow fairy was there, sitting on a tiny moon.
(Just got this pic from the internet...)
"Heal Nala fairy of life!" Connor demanded.
The fairy nodded, and pointed at Nala, and spiralling lights were sprialling around her.
The lights then entered her chest, and when the light disappeared, she woke up.
"Thank you..." Connor smiled.
The fairy nodded and it despawned.
"Who... who are you? Where's Sven?" Nala gasped.
"We're friends of Sven. We're trying to look for him and his friends." I explained.
"Wait... I remember. He... was heading to another planet. A planet filled with sand. I just remembered even though I never saw this..." Nala explained.
"Now how do we get there. We can't spawn another creature since Connor just spawned one. Now what?" Cally wondered.
"Hmm... wait, we'll have to make Xenoh tell the Dragon to transport us to the planet. We can't wait till morning cause of Connor's powers because Louise and Nala won't breathe in space." John explained.
"But where is Xenoh?" I wondered.

"Hi guys. I just realised Captain Jack is here! Heh heh... no need for any transporting crap." Someone said behind us.
We turned around, and we saw Xenoh there smiling.
"Umm who ever you are, This Jack guy is actually on another planet, could you teleport us there please?" Nala asked in a calm voice.
"No. Captain Jack is here sunshine. Hush." Xenoh said.
"But... Sven... he's there. Please!" Nala cried.
"Listen cupcake, you better shut your lips and listen to me." Xenoh shouted.
"But..." Nala was about to burst.
"Hey, quit it! We're just asking you to teleport us to a planet! Whats your deal?" Mappy shouted.
"Why don't you shut your snappy mouth and leave me!" He shouted.
"And you better feed your little baby here before she creates a flood!" Xenoh shouted more.
But then, Nala changed.
Her eyes turned red, she grew red wings that was half eaten and grew huge teeth.
"Listen little boy, teleport us now or I'll play with you like a toy. Do it now or you'll regret, I'll make you cry and die while upset." Nala giggled.
"Umm... fine! Jeez, fine! I'm sorry." Xenoh cried.
He teleported himself somewhere, then came back 5 minutes later.
"Okay okay, fine. Teleporting you... now!" Xenoh commanded.
Then when he clicked his fingers, we were all transported to a huge desert.
"Ummm... Nala?" I gasped.
She then turned normal.
"What... what happened?" Nala wondered.
"They have done something to her. I know." Undead explained.

"They must've given her a power to make her turn into a demon everytime she becomes angry." Undead said.
"I don't want to be a demon!" Nala cried.
Katy tried to spawn some water to make her cool herself down, but the water just evaporated.
"Umm... we may have to find water by our selves, heh heh." Katy sighed.
"Too tired to fly... arg." Cally sighed while sweating.
"We'll... have to work..." I coughed.

As we walked for hours as the sun cooked us to the ground, we all fell down into the burning sand.
My skin felt like lava, and so did the rest of us.
We then were unconscious due to the heat being too much.
To Be Continued...
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Chapter 51 - The Abrupt End
And then they all died from heatstroke, Jack killed Sven and all of that gang, and everyone else lived happily ever after until the dragon of time decided to destroy the universe by ending time.

Told ya it was ending soon.

 

I saw that too

Dang

 

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Chapter 51 - Lost And Found
Death. Death. Death.
It kept repeating in my head.
Death. Death. Death.
Am I... dead?
...
*sss*

I gasped as soon as I heard it.
I was cold, and I noticed some water on me.
I noticed the other gods has also woken up and also had water on them.
"As soon as it turned to night, I was able to spawn cold water before you could all burn to death." Katy explained.
I looked around. Just sand and cactuses was in my sight. Same texture, same view.

As we walked, we were thinking of a plan together once we find my friends, or even CaptainJack too.
"Nala, if Agent S makes you angry, do whatever it takes to hurt him, got it?" Cally explained.
"But... I don't like hurting people." Nala sighed.
"But he almost killed us!" Connor exclaimed.
"But..." She wondered.
"Just do it for us, okay?" Mappy smiled.
"Oke. Just for you." Nala smiled.
We kept walking in the cool night, wandering and looking for anything.
"Maybe... they aren't here." I wondered.
"N-no! They have to be here! I thought I saw them..." Nala explained.
"Ahem. 'Thought'. You thought they came here. But they didn't. Ahem ahem." Sutho coughed.
"Guys... I sense another life form like us coming closer." Undead said.
"Finally! Jeez I thought my legs would break again." Dugee said.
"Looking at DNA... Hmm..." Undead said.
"They are coming closer..." Undead explained.
Before he could say more, lightning almost hit my toes.
I looked up, and it was my friends.

"You know the plan, GO!" John shouted.
We nodded and split up.
John made a metal dome around my friends, but the dome was about to break in seconds.
Then Kazuke made the dome go on fire, but it was still about to break.
When the dome broke, Sutho and Dugee spawned lions and wolves, about to chomp on my friends.
But one of them shot some kind of ice beam at them, making them freeze to death as they were stored in giant ice cubes.
Katy tried to drown them by creating a giant wave over them, but one of them slashed the wave in half, making it evaporate in half.
Mappy then tried to fire a super nova laser at them, but they dodged it by a millimetre.

Then Connor raised his hands up, making dust and sand blow everywhere.
It created a tornado, but nothing was getting sucked in.
When the tornado was gone, a giant lady with arrows and a bow stood there.
"Artemis the goddess, shoot them with your mighty bow!" Connor demanded.
She nodded and shot extremely fast light arrows at them, but they were dodging them.
They were too fast, and then one of them shot their arrow at them, and she was getting damaged.
"Don't give up Artemis! Show them your arrows of light!" Connor shouted.
She got up and shot more arrows.
That's when she finally shot one of them
She shot Ninjafoya and made her fall into the ground as the arrow was stabbed right into her stomach.
"Arrgg..." She groaned.
I felt guilty and worried, and I ran to Ninjafoya.
She was screaming, and I noticed something... she was dying.
I tried to grab the arrow, but it was stuck into her.
I pushed and tried, but nothing happened.
I gave it one more push, and the arrow escaped and landed into the ground again, away from Ninjafoya.
I smiled at Ninjafoya, but then she punched me into a ground and she flew into the sky again, using her powers against Artemis.
"What was THAT for?" Connor shouted.
"But..." I wondered.
Then Ninjafoya shot something at Artemis, so strong, it destroyed her.
"NOOO!" Connor screamed.
She fell onto the ground, and disappeared.

Then a god played some music... magical music.
We were getting sleepy. Mappy was already on the ground sucking her thumb.
We fell down, and my face landed right in the sand.
We slept, but I didn't know how long, as it would be easy for someone to kill us right now.
To Be Continued...
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Chapter 52 - The Room Of Darkness
As I finally woke up, I coughed, blowing sand out of my mouth.
I seemed to be in a seat with my arms and legs strapped.
"A... again?" I wondered.
But then I noticed the Gods, also strapped against their seats, including Nala.
It was dark, and we were wiggling, trying to break free, but the straps were like iron.
Then, the door opened. It was Captain Jack.
He was holding a jar of dirt and was drinking some beer.
"You thought you could take my jar of dirt this time old sport..." Captain Jack smiled.
"Oh yeah, and tried to steal this little pumpkin here from me as well." Captain Jack said as he looked at Nala.
"Stop staring at me like that!" Nala shivered.
"Now Nala, don't be scared. I won't kill you... but the hero will." Captain Jack giggled.
He pointed his pistol at me, as I was about to faint.
"Stop it!" Nala cried.
"Nala come on, quit your crying! I'M the good guy here! I wanted to show this world how awesome I was. But she destroyed me... like a pebble. I'll show her how much of a hero I could be!" Captain Jack shouted.
"Don't..." Nala sniffed.
Then, the straps came off.
"What?" Captain Jack wondered.

Her skin was then covered in blood, her eyes were empty with red, her nails grew into giant claws and even grew half eaten, damaged demon wings.
"Captain Jack, you fell in my trap. I'll kill you, it would hurt. Then I'll steal your jar of dirt." Nala giggled.
She grabbed Captain Jack by the chin, and before she could chop his head off, he pointed his pistol at me.
"Nala... put me down now. Or... your friend will fall to the ground with PITY!" Captain Jack shouted.
Nala looked at me, with sadness, then she turned normal, back in her seat.
"Good girl... now then." Captain Jack giggled.
He pointed the pistol at me again.
"You cheater!" I shouted.
"Louise, get out of your seat now!" John shouted.
"I can't! Arrgg." I cried.
Then, the door silently opened, someone came behind Captain Jack, then punched him to the ground.
"What the?" He cried.
Our arms and legs were free due to something breaking it apart.
We ran out of the door, but Nala was grabbed by the leg.
"Nala, I did whatever it took to protect you. Don't turn your back away from ME!" Captain Jack cried.
"Help!" She cried.
Before I could grab Nala, the doors shut, locked.
Mappy used a hyper laser at the door, blasting it free, but when we entered the room again, it was empty.
"We're too late!" Undead shouted.

I turned around, and it was Agent S, standing there.
Before we could say more, he went in the room, got something, then got it.
He was normal sized now.
"I got the thing he used to make me tiny, now I'm normal. Anyway, I'll explain everything, but now we'll have to escape, he may come out." Agent S said.
As Cally grabbed me and flew through the air, the other gods were riding on wolves and lions.
"Listen... I used to work for Captain Jack. But then he became evil, so I left him. I thought you were working for him, so I stole your friends from Captain Jack and made them... gods. I tried to use them to kill you... I'm sorry. But then, I realised you weren't evil once Captain Jack stole your friends today. I don't know where they are now... sadly." Agent S sighed.
"Also... we need to get to the Dragon Of Time. I discovered something." Agent S explained.
"What is it?" I asked.
"Xenohs... he's working for..." Agent S stopped.
"Spit it out! Come on." Katy shouted.
"For Captain Jack." Agent S sighed.
The wolves stopped, and so did the lions. Cally dropped me to the ground.
I stood up, and everyone else did.
Our mouths were wide open, with shock and betrayal.
To Be Continued...
Idk @CaptainJackValdy , your remind me of Handsome Jack from Borderlands 2. I mean seriously you act like him so much. Plus your personality is like his... oh boy.
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Oh no...
You mean I'm trying to kill THIS thing?

... My Little Pony is more evil then I thought...
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Chapter 53 - Foe To Friend Or Friend To Foe
"No kidding!" Mappy cried out.
Agent S nodded gently.
"I already knew all along with his suspicious smiles and lies..." I crunched up my fist.
"We... we must warn the Dragon otherwise-"
Connor was turned into a block of ice before he could finish.
"CONNOR! Kazuke, use your fire to melt the ice around him and make him warm. Everyone, CHARGED!!!" John shouted.
Everyone ran after my friends, who appeared.
Before I could run, Undead grabbed my arm.
"What are you doing, let's go!" I commanded.
"You can't kill them... otherwise you'll never see them again. I know a way to turn them back to normal." Undead said.
"Well... how?" I asked.
Suddenly, a lightning was about to hit us, before Sutho spawned a lion in front of us, protecting us, then died.
"What are you doing? Get out there and kill these guys!" Sutho shouted.
"We can't kill them!" I cried.
"We have to! What are you, insane?" Dugee shouted.
When Connor was finally free and warm as he sat by a little fire, he looked at me.
"Connor... you know what to do." Undead smiled.
Connor nodded, then raised his hands at a pond nearby, surrounded with trees.
Then when the moon shined right in the sky in the right direction, something came out of the water.
"Unicorn! Fix Twage before darkness covers our lives!" Connor shouted.
Then, the unicorn neighed with might and pride.
No... I didn't draw this x3
It aimed its horn at Twage, who was shooting bolts of lightning at us.
Then, the horn sparkled and shot a beam at him, making him fall to the ground, unconsious.
Then the unicorn's front legs hit the water again, then Twage woke up.
The unicorn then disappeared, but Connor gasped.

"I thought it was supposed to heal all her other friends!" Undead shouted.
"I... I don't maybe. Maybe it can only do it once." Connor sighed.
"Well spawn it again and make it heal another person! Quick before Sven beats me to death!" Mappy coughed as Sven kept punching her.
"I can't... I can only spawned one creature at a time. I just realised that." Connor sighed.
"What about if you-" Before Katy could say more, Ninjaman punched her to the ground, making her spit blood onto the floor.
"Someone save her!" I cried.

But Ninjaman got a gun out, and just before he could shoot it, something shot it out of his hands, and something shot him as well.
An electrical beam shot him.
I looked where the beam started, and it was from Twage's hands.
Then when the beam settled... Ninjaman was back to normal.
"Arg... what happened." Ninjaman groaned.
Just then Konohito almost stabbed him with her spear, but Ninjaman jumped at the right time.
"Kono! What the-"
"She evil! Make her hold still!" Twage interrupted what Ninjaman could say.
Ninjaman grabbed Kono in front of him, then Twage shot another beam at her, then she returned to normal.
"Kono! Grab Sven in front of you and make him hold still!" Ninjaman shouted.
"Why would I-"
"JUST DO IT SOLDIER!" Ninjaman pushed Kono, making her quickly grab Sven.

When Sven was healed, Ninjafoya was left.
However, she ran to Kazuke, about to stab him with her sword.
We were all too far away, and Ninjafoya was too fast.
Kazuke couldn't spawn fire since it was too cold in the night.
Before Ninjafoya could stab him, Nala grabbed her and fell to the ground.
"Don't hurt my friends, or you will end. Now hold still, or I will kill." Nala giggled.
As Nala held Ninjafoya in front of her, Twage shot a beam at Ninjafoya, making her heal.

When everyone caught their breath, I hug all my friends, so reliefed their alive and normal.
"What happened! Why did we try to kill you?" Ninjaman wondered.
"Cause she's stupid! That's why." Sven stuck his tounge out.
"Hmm... I think he's still as annoying as before sadly." Twage sighed.
"I'm not sure... I think Agent S did something to you." I explained.
"Who?" Ninjafoya wondered.
"Nevermind." I giggled.

But then, Cally grabbed me out of the way and flew.
When we landed, I realised I almost got squashed by a giant foot.
I looked up. It was a T Rex.
Not any T Rex. The T Rex who's known as Captain Jack.
However I noticed something in Captain Jack's huge hands... it was Agent S.
"There's where he was!" I gasped.
To Be Continued...
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Love it

 

Applejack! I don't love her as much as Pinkie Pie though.... I mean, I'm not a brony. What are you talking about?
Good job Louise! Thanks to you, I finally figured everything out!

 

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Chapter 54 - Changes
"Guys! Arrggg... Help!" Agent S called.
"We need to help him!" Nala cried.
"But he made us turn into Gods! Let Captain Jack take him." Ninjaman shouted.
"But you don't under-" My friends already were walking, leaving me.
"Stop! Please.... I didn't know arrgg!" Agent S screamed more.
My friends still ignored him, while Undead, the Gods and Connor was still standing near me.
"We'll have to kill Captain Jack and free Agent S. Go!" John commanded.
We nodded, while I stared at my friends, while Sven kept looking at me.
He looked worried... I thought he didn't care about me.
Cally grabbed me just before Captain Jack could stomp on me.
"Pay attention and head back in the game!" Cally shouted.
I looked at Agent S. He was getting hurt. Due to the cold water being sprayed by Katy, he was getting cold too.
He was also getting burned by the fire being blown by Kazuke, and some other Gods weren't being careful and was also harming Agent S.
"Guys... Stop." He cried.
"We've almost got him!" Connor cheered.
"Guys! Your hurting-" But then Captain Jack grabbed me, and was about to put me in his mouth.
Sutho however then spawned some wolves inside Captain Jack's mouth, biting his teeth and tongue, making him chomp his mouth together before I could enter it, then he let go off me.
I fell on a lion spawned by Dugee.
"Louise, if you can't fight, then stay out of this!" Dugee shouted.
The lion then ran away, away from the battle field, even though I wanted it to stop.

I watched Agent S, still getting harmed. Without my powers, there isn't a way to tell the Gods to stop.
I punched the lion in the head, making it yelp and stop. I pointed my finger at Captain Jack, then followed my command.
When I finally arrived back at the fight scene, everyone wouldn't pay attention to me as I shouted.
"Guys! Your hurting Agent S!" I screamed. No answer or anything paying attention.
"Everyone... YOU'VE GOT TO LISTEN TO ME!" I cried on top of my lungs.
All the Gods and everyone stopped and looked at me.
But I should have said something because they all then got grabbed my Captain Jack.
"This... is why we don't... listen to YOU!" Mappy cried.
"Well you've got to! Lion, go!" I pointed at Captain Jack's foot.
It ran to the foot and bit on it, but Captain Jack just kicked it away, making it despawn.
The Gods was just about to enter Captain Jack's mouth, until something sprayed his face, making him drop all of them.
Everyone landed safely since Cally grabbed most of them or some of them using their powers to help them.
I looked where the spray was coming from, and it was Twage, and the rest of my friends.
"Guys! Your back!" I cheered.
"And we ain't leaving! Guys, go!" Kono cheered.
Twage sprayed Captain Jack's face, Ninjafoya was tickling Captain Jack's foot with a feather, making him not balanced, Kono and Ninjaman got guns and was trying to shoot Captain Jack's chest, while Sven did nothing, since that's what he acts like.
Captain Jack slipped, then face planted himself to the ground, then he started shrinking, back to his normal self.

We all cheered, but then Captain Jack was about to shoot me with his pistol, but Sven grabbed his gun and pointed it at him.
"Where's Nala!" Sven shouted.
"You'll never see her and she'll never help you!" Captain Jack shouted.
He pushed a button that was strapped to his arm, making him disappear, but then the Gods were also disappearing, including Connor.
"Louise! Save us!" Connor screamed.
Agent S was about to shoot a laser at them to transport them back, but when he shot the laser, it missed them since they were already gone.
"Louise... I sense Captain Jack and the Gods going to a planet, but I'm not sure how..." Undead wondered, coming out of no where.
"Where were you?" I questioned.
"Nevermind that. Anyway does anyone have ideas?" Undead questioned.
Then, Xenoh appeared behind us.
"So you found out I was working for Captain Jack huh... Well luckily I have the Dragon Of Time by my side!" He laughed.
Then time was starting to get laggy, and we couldn't escape.
To Be Continued...
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Your pic fits that comment like SO well.
You just have to put a box of popcorn in your hand xD

 

*gasp* guns! One of my teachers said to always leave guns till the end. And this is one of the last chapters ;-;
I want to see- err, read- what happens next!

 

I just started reading some of this, and this is amazing :O
I can't wait to finish this, and catch up with everybody else where you guys are at :P

 

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Chapter 55 - The Dragon's Revenge
We were lagging each second, not being able to run or do anything.
Then we saw the Dragon appear behind Xenoh's back, and it roared.
"There's something around it's neck!" Undead pointed.
I noticed a light blue, electrical thing around it's next, zapping its body, making its eyes blue.
"We can't harm it, we must harm the thing around it neck though!" Ninjaman shouted.

It roared in rage and might, ready to control time to Xenoh's liking.
"Slow time!" Xenoh commanded.
Then we stopped lagging, but we could hardly move as my arms moved a millimetre each second.
I saw the Dragon's claws then slash us, making us slowly fall to the ground.
Time resumed, and I was in such pain.
As we got up, Twage was about to shoot the thing around its neck using lightning, but the Dragon stopped time, only making itself and Xenoh move. The dragon then zapped a light blue lightning using it's eyes, destroying the lightning in half.

We were freezing every second, getting punching and scratched by the Dragon as Xenoh laughed.
We were getting destroyed and dying.
"We... can't destroy it Ninjaman." Kono cried.
"We will survive! Don't say that!" Ninjaman coughed.
Then the Dragon stopped time and grabbed Kono, then resumed time.
"KONO!" Ninjaman cried.
"Help me!" She cried out.
"Zap power at the Dragon all ready! Jeeez!" Sven shouted.
"I can't! It might hurt Kono!" Twage complained.
The Dragon opened its mouth, about to chomp Kono's head off.
"NOOOO!" I cried.
Then, something grabbed the thing around its neck, and it snapped, letting Kono go.
Ninjaman caught her, and the Dragon roared as the blue lightning escaped its body.
The thing then landed in front of me, holding the light blue chain.
Then, its wings disappeared and its deep red eyes turned back to normal.
"N... Nala?" I said.
She nodded.
"Agent S helped me escape from Captain Jack." Nala giggled.
We also saw Agent S behind Nala.
"No... no!" Xenoh cried in defeat.
He then grabbed Nala and held a knife near her neck.
"Let go of her... NOW!" Agent S shouted.
"Too late. Captain Jack would finally appreciate my work as I kill your friend and also all of you. Say goodbye to-"
Something then punched him, making him let go of Nala.
"Get away from MY DAUGHTER!" Someone cried.
It was Captain Jack.
Before Xenoh could speak, Captain Jack already shot him with his pistol, making him die.
Agent S was about to shoot Captain Jack with his transport gun, but Captain Jack then headshotted him with his pistol.
"AGENT S!" I cried while Nala was crying.
"Stop it dad! He's my friend!" Nala cried.
"Nala, I'm the GOOD GUY! Their destroying my dream! Say goodbye!" Captain Jack then held his pistol in front of me, but then the Dragon Of Time transported him, far away, but teleported Nala as well by accident.
"Captain Jack... is the father of Nala?" Undead gasped.
To Be Continued...
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Nice Louis.
I've been waiting for this. ;)

 

That twist tho!!

 

Yes Undead... look at him twist.

*ahem* best joke ever.

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Chapter 56 - The Creature Of The Universe
We stared at the two bodies, laying there as blood escaped them.
"What kind of person would DO this?" Ninjaman shouted, while shaking Kono.
"A cruel and twisted one, they say." Undead sighed.
"This is too far for a guy with a jar full of poop! We must kill him and save the universe, am I right?" Ninjafoya cheered.
"Ninjafoya, it isn't as easy as you think. He can turn into a damn T Rex, turn people to Gods, headshot people with a damn pistol, and who knows WHAT ELSE!" I screamed.
The Dragon then roared, startling us.
"Guys... I can understand the Dragon." Undead explained.
"Well what did it say?" Twage said.
"That Louise is stupid! L O L THREE SIKTY NO SCOP" Sven shouted.
"*Ahem* It said 'An alien on a planet may help you on your journey." Undead said.
The Dragon nodded.
"A alien... why can't you help us then?" Kono asked.
The Dragon roared again.
"It said that it's got to control time again at the moment, but it's friend in a far away planet may help. I can teleport you to it's planet, but I'm not sure where on planet it is." Undead replied.
"Do you know how big the planet is?" I questioned.
The Dragon did a small roar then.
"Twice as big as earth." Undead sighed.
"Are you serious? That means its over 9000!!!... Kilometres." Twage said in rage Lol that rhymed x3
"Come on soldiers! We've done what the world can't! We can't walk away, the whole world depends on us to defeat this wicked pirate, save the world, for FREEDOM! Who's with me?" Ninjaman shouted.
No one said anything as Ninjafoya picked her nose, throwing it at Ninjaman's hair.
"*Ahem* I mean... ARE YOU WITH ME?!" Ninjaman said at the top of his voice.
That's when we all cheered, including the Dragon roaring with might and agreeing.

Then the sun went down, and it was night, and suddenly my hair grew longer, my teeth were sharper, and my nails were claws.
Ninjafoya held a mirror in front of me, and I saw a wolf.
"Louise... your a wolf again." Twage realised.
"And she's more ugly then she was before! LOL!" Sven laughed.
"It's possible that Xenoh took your powers, and when he died, the powers returned back to you." Kono explained.
"Alright Dragon, we're ready. OFF TO... WHERE EVER WE'RE GOING!" Ninjaman commanded.
The Dragon then stomped its feet, charging its powers, then the view was disappearing.
We were then falling through an infinite vortex.

We kept going through the vortex as Ninjafoya was screaming.
The vortex finally ended and landed on the ground.
I looked up, and so did everyone else, and the land was like earth, but more... alien like.

Red cotton shelters covered weird, large green plants.
Mysterious plants bloomed over the cyan lakes.
And the mountains were in the distance, waiting to be discovered.

But then I turned into a mermaid strangly, even though I wasn't near any water.
"Guys, why am I a mermaid again?" I questioned.
No answer.
I turned around, and they were choking. There's no air.
Twage however was fine some how. He then formed a magic wind and entered their mouths, and they stopped choking.
"I gave you a oxygen spell, but it may only last for a couple of days. So you better stay close otherwise you may suffocate and... fall." Twage explained.
They nodded, and they started walking beside a lake that was not too far from us, but I had trouble walking as my fish tail was not made to be tested on ground.
So Undead had to hold on to me while exhausted from the extra weight.

Ninjaman stopped, making Kono bump into him.
"Something is over there..." Ninjaman pointed.
"Undead, can you find out who that is?" Kono asked.
Undead concentrated hard.
"It appears to be... a human!" Undead realised.
We gasped in surprise, but Ninjafoya was too excited.
"HEY! OVER HERE! WE'RE HUMANS TOO!" Ninjafoya shouted.
Sven covered her mouth, and the moving figure in the distance turned to us.
"Umm... you sure that's a human?" I questioned.
"Maybe my powers are wrong..." Undead said.
To Be Continued...
I know this is awesome news, but I need a new character! (Yay)
If no one wants to be in the story, then @OdiFTW , I might make you in the story IF though no one asks to be in the story then you want to. But I hope you don't be too heart broken if someone else wants to be in the story, oke? ok.
Leave your comments, likes, cookies, dogs, stuff and suggestions belong and only a couple of chapters left, so get your popcorn and candy ready, because the story is getting closer and closer to the finale.
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I don't want Safa's dirty booger in my hair D:

 

Too bad Ninjaman, cause its gonna stay in there...

jk x3

 

Spittin some bars there?