My 7th Story Created: Dimension Corruption

Just noticed that too, it was near the beginning part.

 

Omg! Lol xD I just realised I saw that mistake too. Lol, I'm so sorry. All well, we all make mistakes. I'll edit it now. Thanks for letting me know! :D

 

Lol I thought something was fishy when I read it.
Btw, when will the story be finished? 0.0

 

It would probably be finished in about 2 or 3 chapters including the final chapter. If your wondering what day it will finish then probably at the beginning of October.

Anyway thanks for the heaps of comments! All these comments always make me smile c:

Starring:
@LouiseXminerX
@Konohito
@Sven007
@Xenohs
@TwageTomato
@TheUndeadBrave
@KateVampire
@Gooby
Enjoy ^-^

Chapter 24 - The Break Of Everything
After running, dragging our legs to the limit, our legs felt like pieces of noodles.
I started to feel weary as my eyelids started to feel heavy and my vision was getting blurry.
"I get that this is serious Xenoh, but come on, THIS long? Our legs could like snap in half right now." Kono whined.
"Arrg... fine." Xenoh sighed
We finally dropped on our legs and laid down.
Kate on Sandy's back was still sleeping, but she may wake up soon and start chew on us like we're her toys.
"My sleep power hasn't regenerated yet. We seriously need to move NOW!" Twage shouted.
"Well someone is carrying us then." Agent S complained.
"Guys, get down!" Kono said.
We got down on our stomachs following Kono's commands.
"Some robot demons are here. Lay down and pretend your dead." Kono commanded.
He got on his belly too and laid there.
Kono was right. Some robot demons did come and come closer to us.
They stared at us with curiousness. They tilt their head as they poked me on the back.
"Targets confirmed dead. Move out." The robot demon said in a robotic voice.
They then walked away, but Xenoh got up immediately.
"Follow them. They may lead to where Gooby and Silent is." Xenoh said.

We got on our feet and followed them very quietly, making our steps as silent as a spider.
Xenoh put his hand out, signalling us to stop.
"Gooby's fortress... except bigger. How much fortresses can this girl HOLD?" Xenoh screamed.
We hushed him all at once before a robot demon could see us.
We waited until all the robot demons could go inside, until someone started shouting.
"GIVE ME BLOOD! GIMMIE YOUR FLESH!"
We turned around with fright, and Kate, screaming and shaking on Sandy's back roared.
Sandy grabbed her arm and threw her to the ground and stomped his paw on his stomach.
He barked three times, looking like he is commanding us to do something.
"He said he'll take care of Kate. You guys go." Twage explained.
"But we can't leave him behind!" I shouted.
"But what about Kate?" Undead said, staring at me with his kawaii eyes.
Kate, Kate, Kate, Kate. That's all I hear from this guy. But his role has a purpose... a purpose that is too much.

"If you care about her... then stay here." I demanded.
I walked off into the fortress.
Everyone followed me, except for Undead, Sandy and Kate.
"I will save Kate." I whispered.
I didn't know if Undead could hear me, but it wasn't worth it. I will save Kate. I am the hero, not the demon.
We walked straight into the fortress and no robot demons were found, until we heard a voice coming from a room.
I leaned against the wall, hearing most of the words.
"You must find Kate. I do not care if Louise gets in the way. I want her BACK!" Someone said, sounding like they were punching a table.
The words were serious. As hard as a rock. But a tiny tone in it's voice had evidence... this person loves Kate.
I was so eager to find out who this person was, so I jumped in and saw it... Gooby.
"You love her?" I gasped.
"What? I did not say anything about that." Gooby shouted.
The tone was in her voice again. The evidence... the love.
"You do love her. But you didn't before. You changed her into a demon like all these robot demons so you can love her as equally as these. She's crazy now, she is not a human, she is NOT YOUR DAUGHTER!" I screamed.
It was silent... everyone froze. My words were brave and caught her. Busted.

A drop... a drop of tear. It rolled down her face.
As soon as the tear touched the ground, her face looked up.
"And your the one..." She whispered.
We heard loud stomps, shaking the area.
Then the ceiling lifted, and giant claws grabbed it, ripping it off the building.
"...The one who DIES!" She screamed as Satan threw the ceiling at a wall.
The robot demons held their hands in front of me, charging a laser.
My friends grabbed me out of the room before the laser could hit me.
"You made her snap Louise. You've broken her heart. And now she's heart to break your body. Run Louise, GO!" Xenoh shouted.
The ceilings ripped and walls collapsed. Satan was stomping on the building, crushing all the helpless objects in them.
We were running, running through the hall way.
We reached the exit just before the ceiling could crush us.

I just saw Sandy, still holding his paw on Kate while Undead was panicking.
"TWAGE! Put her to sleep, NOW!" Undead screamed.
He put a sleep spell on Kate, finally making her sleep.
"We couldn't leave before you could come. If Sandy let go on Kate, she could've eaten us. Now go! Quick!" Undead screamed.
Kono put Kate on Sandy's back and ran for our lives.
Heart racing, legs weak and heavy. Faces sweaty while a giant chased us. This was a nightmare...
"LIVES ARE ENDING. FEAR TAKING OVER THE WEAK. AND HERO'S BEING ENDED BY THE GREATER!" Satan screamed.
All of us could faint. So much fear inside of us. His words are working.
"FEAR IS HERE!" He screamed.
As soon as his words ended, we just stopped.
Our legs were shaking, hearts racing and arms stiff.
We were afraid. Like what Satan wants us to feel like.
The loud words and stomps woke Kate up.
"Wait... I remember!" Twage gasped.
He put a spell on Kate, and made her look... normal.
"I remember I had this spell. Heh heh... and RUN!" Twage shouted.
We all ran as Kate fell of Sandy's back without him noticing.
We kept running until Undead screamed.
"Where's Kate?" He gasped.

We looked behind us, and she looked up, afraid.
"What... what is happening..." She gasped.
"KATE! RUN!" Undead screamed.
Kate was on the ground on her butt. The foot of Satan was falling on her.
We stared in shock... time slowed down as her final visions of her faded.

"NOOOOOOOOO!"
The dust covered our eyes from the great stomp.
We coughed and wheezed, waving our arms as dust exploded in our faces.
The smoke cleared... we saw the foot on the ground... with Kate beside it.
"Impossible!" Agent S screamed.
"Wait... what's under the foot then?" Kono said.
Satan's foot slowly raised... someone was under there.
Gears and gadgets fell a part. And the face of Gooby fell off.
Wait... gears, gadgets and metal in a body?
"She... she was a robot?" Undead gasped.
Satan looked quite shock. In fact, everyone was.
"How dare you try to make fear ESCAPE from ME?" Satan screamed.
He then kept stomping on the gears and metal.
"HOW DARE YOU! HOW DARE YOU!" He kept repeating.
Soon the metal and gears were broken into crumbs. Gooby was gone.
"But... but... our marriage... I married a robot but... how was Kate born?" Undead gasped.
We all realised... she is a robot too.
Kate looked at her hands in shock and gasped.
"Who... who am I?" She whispered.
To Be Continued...
Damn, the twists bro.
Remember to leave your comments, likes, suggestions or even any mistakes you've caught too in this chapter since sometimes I do make mistakes in these chapters... heh heh.
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where's me

 

The story is about to end in a couple of chapters, and squeezing someone in is very difficult for me. However, you can be the first character to be added in the next story. c:

 

Are you accepting requests for appearances in your next story yet?

 

If it can, can me make return in next story... (Ofcourse something happens to me as I'm an agent...)

 

Okay guys xD You're all in.
Here's the order of who's coming in first:

Abcdhax
TwageTomato
Sven007
Xenohs

Anyone who requests to be in the story now will appear after Xenoh has appeared in the story. c:

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@LouiseXminerX
@Konohito
@Sven007
@Xenohs
@TwageTomato
@TheUndeadBrave
@KateVampire
@Gooby
@SilentSwifter
Enjoy ^-^

Chapter 25 - The Truth And Prepare
Out of the shadows, a figure stood next to the big foot on Satan's.
"I created Gooby." It said.
"W-who are you?" Agent S shivered.
The figure came closer.
"Silent. Gooby was not a human, she was a fake." Silent giggled.
Kate was about to cry and create a flood, and all of our mouths were wide open like we're trying to fit a basket ball in them.
"But... but..." I gasped.
"I controlled Gooby. Sometimes she controlled herself. She saved Kate, I didn't. I tried to make Gooby to turn Kate into a demon. It's all a lie. Her purpose is gone." He explained.
"Did you make Kate then?" Undead gasped.
He nodded and smiled.
"Are you serious? I'm a robot... I don't wanna be a robot... I want my mummy back!" Kate cried.
"I, Silent. The greatest villain of them all, will make earth home for Satan and all demons, turning the other side of earth into hell and turn all humans to demons or even kill them all. There's nothing you can do Louise. The world is ending. You can't stop it. Like a sun set, you can't stop it no matter what." Silent laughed.
Sandy growled with such rage and charged straight into Silent.
Silent just punched Sandy right in the gut, making him spit on Silent's face.
I grabbed Sandy before he could gain more harm.
"You're a monster! Turning children in horrible creatures, making home like another planet. You're a total maniac Silent! No wonder we hate you." Kono shouted.
Silent looked at Satan, and Satan spawned his golden axe.
"Repeat that one more time..." Silent giggled.
Satan marched right in front of us.
"Scram." Silent whispered.

As soon as that word came out of his mouth, Satan roared and tried to slice us with his golden axe.
We ran as fast as we could as I held Sandy tight.
He was coughing and sweating. Could that small punch harm his stomach and other organs?
Satan ran behind us, not stopping like a giant.
The many stomps shook the area, making rocks from above drop onto our heads.
He kept screaming and roaring.
That's when Undead stopped. He puffed and wheezed.
"UNDEAD! QUICK!" Kate screamed.
But he wasn't a fast runner and didn't have much energy.
The foot on Satan was about to stomp on him.
"YOU MONSTER!" I screamed.
The demon wings were back and red eyes grew.
A fire ball appeared in my hand and burned his foot.
He raised his foot as it burned in flames.
This was enough time for Undead to escape.
He jogged towards us and tried to run, but our legs we're already worn out.
Satan gained his energy back and ran towards us again.
I came back to normal and ran with my friends.
But we weren't quick enough, so Satan grabbed us all if his filthy, rotten hands.

He then went on his knee's and was about to dump us in a lava pool.
Just then, something made him scream and made him drop us.
Luckily, we landed right next to the lava pool. Just a metre next to it.
We saw someone hurting it's foot with... a golden axe?
"How many golden axes ARE THERE?" Twage shouted.
The figure seemed to have chopped up his toe, and Satan fell back and fell on his back.
"RUN!" It screamed.
We followed it's orders and ran as Satan was distracted.
After minutes of running, our lungs felt like they could break off.
I looked behind me, and the figure looked familiar.
"Kate. You might recognise me." It said.
When Kate finally caught her breath, she looked behind her and saw the figure.
Undead also recognised it. In fact, we all did.

"Impossible. You can't be Gooby." Xenoh complained.
"You're just a disguise, aren't you." Kono hissed.
"What? No! I'm the real Gooby. I swear." She gasped.
Xenoh, Kono, Agent S, Twage and Undead kept complaining, but Kate and I stood there...
"Guys, back it off! Can't you see she saved our lives?" Kate shouted.
She stood next to Gooby.
"Wait... I think this all makes sense." Xenoh gasped.
"Silent created a robot like you Gooby to distract us. While the real Gooby is here. But wait... Undead, which Gooby did you marry?" Xenoh questioned.
"I... I'm not sure... if I married you, why did I break up with you? If I married the fake Gooby, how did it give birth to Kate? Or is this just all a lie!" Undead gasped.
Everyone came up with their theories, until I realised something...
"Guys, I think he married the real Gooby, but he thought both Gooby's were the same one." I explained on top of all their voices.
They all stood there and thought... it did make sense.
"He broke up with the fake Gooby while the other Gooby gave birth to Kate. However, he probably married the fake Gooby while the real Gooby thought him and her we're already married. That's my theory..." I explained.

"But hey, that's just a theory! A ga-" Kono slapped Twage before he could joke.
"It makes sense..." Xenoh gasped.
Kate then hugged Gooby with relief.
"That mean's Kate isn't a robot then." Undead said.
A family has been reunited and solved. What a relief.
Sandy in my arms then finally woke up and looked healed already.
He then barked with freak.
"He said how did Gooby get a golden axe." Twage explained.
We then looked at Gooby, who was still holding the axe.
Sandy looked like he knew and looked quite disappointed.
"Sandy will show you..." Gooby sighed.

So we followed Sandy and walked.
We finally reached a clear area with nothing but dust.
He then pressed a small rock on the floor.
In front of us, the floor opened.
There was then a giant hole, leading to somewhere.
Sandy went inside, so we followed him.
Then, at the end of the room was sharp and shiny tools...
Golden swords, axes, bows and more...
"This is where I got it." Gooby explained.
"I'm sorry Sandy. I didn't know this was yours." Gooby apologised.
Sandy seemed cool and just nodded with a smile.
Sandy then did a small bark with joy.
"He said take what you need." Twage explained.

I grabbed a golden sword, while the others got what they wanted.
Sandy then barked three times.
"He said he'll only use this once it's time..." Twage said.
"Time for what?" I questioned.
"To end Hell..." Twage smiled.
We all realised what he mean't and we all smiled.
Tomorrow will be a show down. We will end Hell and Satan and make earth home again and make Hell disappear and be forgotten.
"Let's do this..." Gooby laughed.
To Be Continued...
Yes, the final chapter is coming in about 4 days. It's almost the end guys. Get ready.
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And if you want to be added in the next story, just feel free to tell me below.
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So the new story is a sequel to this one?

 

Going to be completely new. I will still be in it, but it will probably have nothing to do with this story or have any links to this. I will accept any requests to be in the next story though :)

 

How did you know I watched MatPat?

 

Waiting... Waiting...

 

Wait no more my fellow citizen. As it is the day that the darkness will either rise or fall. The day and time you've been waiting for has come and may disappoint you or bring you light.

Starring:
@LouiseXminerX
@Kryokin (Kono)
@Sven007
@Xenohs
@TwageTomato
@TheUndeadBrave
@KateVampire
@Gooby
@SilentSwifter
Please enjoy the final chapter of this story. This chapter will be longer then usual.

The Final Chapter - The Eternal Darkness
The time that all of humanity has been waiting for has come.
Demons screamed and shouted in the distance. They know what is happening.
"I'm scared..." Agent S shivered, hugging Kono.
"No need to fear Agent S, this battle will end the darkness of Satan and hell and create earth just like it's past and make the eternal hell end." Xenoh said in a great and proud voice.
He was right. Look at us, we have golden armour, weapons and more to help us.
"I think we're ready." Gooby said.
Sandy barked with excitement.
All of the gear in the room has been taken. All of us were equally geared up.
I had a gold sword, Sandy has a gold axe, Kono had a golden bow with arrows, Agent S had a shield, Twage had golden armour, Xenoh had a golden dagger, Undead had a golden mace, Gooby had a golden spear and Kate had... wait.
"Kate is the only one without gear... Gooby and Undead, you protect her." I demanded.
They nodded.

We exited the tunnel and heard loud stomps in the distance.
All of us got our weapons and gear out and slowly walked forward.
In the shadows of the distance, a giant figure, slowly marched towards us.
It came closer and closer... until it was just a metre away from us.
On the shoulder of the giant, we saw Silent.
He jumped down and landed on his knees.
"Well, well, well. What do we have here." He said, picking his nose.
"Silent, retreat now. Our gear is much stronger then your giant. Leave and make hell disappear now before we make you our slave!" Twage shouted.
Silent just smiled and burst out laughing.
"You sound like a 5 year old wizard Harry." Silent laughed.
"A what?" Twage hissed.
"You're a wizard Harry!" Silent joked.
"If it's a battle you want, it's a battle you want..." Gooby hissed.
She charged straight at Silent, but Satan just punched her before she could reach Silent.
Gooby flew backwards, straight into a wall.
"Undead and Kate, protect her!" Kono commanded.
Undead and Kate ran towards Gooby.
"And don't think that's all we have..." Silent smiled.
Satan raised his hands, making something appear out of the grounds...
Demons. Heaps of demons. Almost 100s of them raised from the ground.

We were quite speechless as we were surrounded by many demons.
"CHARGE!" Xenoh shouted.
Kono, Agent S, Xenoh, Twage and I charged at the demons.
They were all weak as we slashed them all with our weapons.
Before I could hit one, I saw Satan, about to slice me with his golden axe.
I held my golden sword above me, and the golden axe and sword had equal strength.
I then rolled out of the way before my legs could be chopped off.
Most of the demons were gone. We didn't bother with them and then targeted on Satan.
I managed the slice of Satan's toe, making him scream.
But in seconds, the toe just regenerated and it was back to normal.
"His skin can regenerate, now what?" I screamed.
My friends just shrugged.
We just kept trying to chop of the skin of Satan, but no matter how big and strong the damage was, his skin would always be one hop ahead.
Satan then got his fist, and punched Agent S, making him fly right into the wall Gooby fell in too.
And then in seconds, everyone has been punched, except for me and Sandy.
"Are you hungry?" Silent laughed as he sat on Satan's shoulder.
I looked at my stomach.
"You haven't eaten for days... look at Sandy who is full of meat with mythical flavours." Silent hissed.
My stomach was screaming, screaming for the pain to stop...
Sandy looked afraid and tried to run away, but he pushed his butt against Satan's foot.
I came closer, licking my lips.
"Louise! Don't do it! He's you're friend!" Undead screamed.
Before he could scream more, he was too busy fighting more demons as I looked behind me.

I was right in front of Sandy.
I got my hand out and grabbed his skin, about to rip it off.
But instead, I pushed him out of the way, got my golden sword and created a hole in Satan's foot.
I saw the meat inside, and... I ate most of it.
It tasted weird, almost rotten but eh, better then nothing.
But I made a huge mistake.
Not only did his foot heal, but I realised the meat made me weak. Sure I wasn't hungry anymore, but my skin started to get more pale...
"HA HA HA HA! YOU FOOL!" Satan screamed.
Then I saw some kind of blue smoke, shot at Satan's chest.
Twage has woken up and tried to defeat Satan, all by himself.
Twage then shot a light blue spell, and tried to shoot at at Satan's face, but he covered it with his golden axe and deflected it, right at me.
The spell hit me, I took a few steps backwards.
"AWWW SNAP! LOUISE, I'M SO SORRY!" Twage screamed.
My vision became blurry and my eye lids we're heavy.
I laid on my back and my vision closed.

What spell did he put on me... a death spell? A poisonousness one? Who knows what kind of spells he has.
"Louise! Wake up!" Someone said.
It sounded like Kono.
I finally opened my eyes, and realised all my friends we're here.
"Satan is almost dead! Look!" Agent S cheered.
Satan looked beaten up with many bruises on him.
I got on my feet and we all looked at Satan.
But then, all my friends got... some staffs?
They then shot some magic at Satan, and all the bruises and bumps on him was... healed?
"HA HA! YES MY SLAVES!" Satan laughed.
"Guys? Uhm, why'd you do that? He's the enemy!" I shouted.
They all slowly turned towards me with their eyes closed...
All of them opened at once. The eyes were red.
"What's going on? Why are you looking at me like that?" I questioned.
"Can't you see? They were my spies to find out your weaknesses and tell me where you are and stuff. There aren't your friends, they are MY friends!" Satan cheered.
I gasped with my mouth wide open.
"KILL HER!" Silent demanded.
They slowly walked towards me with their hands in front of them.
I took a couple of steps backward, but I tripped on a rock and landed on my back.

They then ripped my skin opened, and I saw the blood flow down my skin and all the muscle inside of my arms.
They got their golden staffs at me, and charged up some kind of laser...
As soon as the laser hit me, blackness.
Voices echoed around me while my head kept ringing.
"Don't you die on me dammit!" Someone said.

Wait... I have a world to save. My friends need me.
I finally woke up and saw the terrified faces of my friends.
"Thank goodness, Twage hit you with a sleep spell my accident. Thank goodness you didn't sleep forever." Kono smiled.
I pushed them out of the way.
"You guys betrayed me!" I screamed.
They didn't listen and looked at Satan.
"No time for complaining. Get on your feet soldier." Xenoh said.
I stood up and saw Satan.
"Are you okay by the way?" Undead gasped.
"Wait, what are you doing here? You're supposed to protect Gooby and Kate!" Twage shouted.

I looked behind me, and Satan marched towards Kate, who was trying to protect Gooby.
"Go away!" She screamed.
We all tried to run towards her, but Satan grabbed her.
Satan smiled at her as she shivered in fear.
He then threw her straight to the ground as her head was buried in the red sand.
He then stomped on her, 10 times.
We saw the body... she was dead.
Undead screamed, waking Gooby up.
"Where's Kate? OH MEH GOD!" Gooby screamed as she saw the broken body parts of Kate.
"She... she was a robot?" She gasped.
We were confused and looked at the body again.
"Gears... and metal... SHE WAS A ROBOT!" Agent S realised.
"You can't be serious!" Kono gasped.
"The real Kate is here by the way." Someone said.
Next to Satan, we saw Silent, with a girl in his arms.
"H-help!" She said as she was choking.
"Is that the REAL Kate?" Undead gasped.

"Yep, but she is now gone!" Silent laughed.
Silent pushed her as she stood there.
She looked up.
"HE-"
Her body was cut in half due to Satan using the golden axe.
Her flesh and blood was all over the floor.
Kono fainted due to not believing what he is seeing, Xenoh was invisible, and I was full of rage.
"Do not... kill my FRIENDS!" I screamed.
I started to grow large and my demon wings appeared again.
I realised Kono was making me big.
I was as tall as Satan now, and a fire ball appeared in my hand.
"You will suffer like the demons." I hissed.
I threw heaps of fire balls at him, but they did no effect.
"Ha ha! You see? I'm invincible!" He laughed.
Xenoh then went behind Silent and grabbed him and he become visible.
Kono shot some arrows at him, making him gasp.
Everyone else used their weapons on him, and he was almost dead.
Xenoh threw him in a lava pool next to him, making him burn.
"That's what you get..." Xenoh hissed.

Satan then grabbed my head and pushed it in the lava pool, trying to make me burn.
But I... I can't get hurt by lava. This form can't get hurt by lava.
I cheered, but I realised lava went in my mouth. I might drown though.
I held my mouth, tight but my nose kept sucking up the lava.
Luckily, Satan screamed due to someone hurting it and let go of my head.
I gasped as I finally raised my head.
Sandy was stabbing his gold axe in his eye.
He flew back to the ground, but his eye regenerated.
Suddenly, more demons appeared from the ground.
They grabbed all of my friends and the demons also stole their gear and weapons, so they couldn't cut their arms or anything.

Satan punched me right in the gut, then kicked me too, which sent me flying in a giant wall.
I thought my arm and back was broken, because I couldn't move.
Satan got his axe out.
"WELCOME TO HELL!" He screamed.
He swung his axe right at my friends...
I scrunched up my fist.
My hands went in front of me, fire was starting to form.
Before the axe could touch them, a giant laser came right out of my hands.
It shot Satan, right in the head.
He dropped his axe.
He screamed in pain.
The demons died, the ceiling starting to crumble.
He then appeared as a black smoke.
It then shivered and flew straight inside of me. Huge pain hit me.

Then, I was normal sized. The black smoke didn't do anything to me...
Suddenly, someone came out of the lava pool.
Silent looked so mutant, like a demon.
He had a gold sword, and charged straight at Sandy.
Then, my mind became dark.
I ran straight towards Silent, and jumped on him.
I hissed and and started to punch him and bite his skin.
Then, he was dead.
"The black smoke has made you a bit... devilish." Xenoh gasped.
Then we heard the ceiling rumble.
Kono was still unconscious, so he made Sandy a giant.
We hopped on him and he flew through the area.
A giant hole appeared, just in time and we flew straight in it.

Sandy landed. We looked down at the hole. Huge rocks covered it. Hell has been buried to cover it's existence.
Earth was not healed though. The buildings were still collapsed and body's of humans still remained.
"Now what?" Agent S gasped.
"This is our world now..." I said.
"We will make this place home again. We will fix this place up." I explained.
We all smiled in agreement.
"I'm not the hero anymore..." I sighed.
"What do you mean?" Kono questioned.
"I am now the devil." I whispered.

The End
A new story will be created in a week.
Thanks everyone who reads these chapters and also ask to be in the story.
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~LouiseXminerX
Edit: If you are wondering what happened after this since it is quite unclear, in the next story it will start to explain. Yes, there is a link between this story and the next story. The ending of this story was supposed to be unclear, so don't worry if you're wondering if I have forgotten to explain anything. Throughout the next story, the true ending of this story will slowly become revealed​

 

Yeah I just realised he changed his name. I'll change it now thanks, I was wondering why the tag won't work. Thanks :)

 

I feel like doing this... What happenend afterwards...
So let's do this...

Starring:
Everyone who is still alive and was in the last chapter...

Chapter #: Afterwards.

Date: 2-10-2015.
Writer: Agent S. Alias Sven.
Message: Don't trust anyone.

It was one week ago. Satan was defeated, Louise became the devil.
I always wondered where she stores all that power.
So I asked "Louise, where do you store your powers?"
"Well, in my body. But sometimes it gets hard to keep it in..." Louise said.
Kono suddenly screamed. "GUYS, DEMONS DEMONS!!!"
We all looked at the same time to the place where Kono pointed.
But the demon suddenly fell. Xenoh said: "Guys, we should check it out."
So we all went to the demon. But how did it come here? Why did it suddenly fall?

We realised it was a very big demon. 10 meters tall.
But the distance between us and the demon: 3,5 KM.
So we started walking, and I didn't feel that right. "Guys, I'm having the feeling we'rre being followed."
So we all stopped while breathing trhough our noses very quitly... And then Louise saw a shadow.
She used her powers and tried to get the person who's blocking the light. But she sadly failed.
"Guys, we should stay together." I said. I looked around and saw that we're missing someone.
Xenoh is here, Louise is here, I'm here... But... Kono! "Guys, RUN! They got Kono!"
While I started to run towards the demon I heard shots from the back.
I heard Louise and Xenoh in the back. Falling to the ground... And then, I felt something.
My leg. I fell down to the ground and got dizzy. Weird colors came in. Black, blue...
Red... Ohhh, banana's. Pancakes. Soda... My old co-worker. But, she was dead...
While the colors where getting more intense I felt sick and vomited on the ground.
I blacked out...

When I woke up, I was flying through the sky. I was hanging on a drone. Louise, Xenoh and Kono were still asleep.
"Guys, wake up! We got captured!" I looked around, huh. Those are the Rocky Mountains... Or is it?
Turns out that we're flying though the Himalaya... And I saw a flag... The English flag?
Yes it was. Kono woke up. And when he woke up, he fell down... I screamed his name and saw his face...
The claws from Louise and Xenoh also started to open... But before I realised it they we're already halfway trhough their fall...
So am I the next one to die? While I was being shocked I heard a voice from the speakers. "Agent S, you're back in the game!"
That was the voice from my boss... "Louise and the others aren't dead, it we're all actors. But the real others will
wonder where you went. Agent S, your next mission is about to start. Prepare yourself. You get the coordinates
where to meet later." Suddenly the drones blades we're removed and a string fell down next to me. The drone turned
into a parachute. I waited untill I could open it. When the time was right I opened it and softly landed while a small tear rolled
of my face.

The end.

 

Thanks for doing that! I was getting so nervous that people will hate me for a disappointing ending, but you have carried all my worries away c:
The only problem is though is to try and link the next story to the ending you have made. It maybe difficult and may change some of the plots in the next story.
I'll pm you and we can explain this together and try and find a link. Thanks btw :D

 

Hi Louise, Wonderful story by the way. I was just asking if I could please be in the next story

 

Sure thing c:

 

Louise also could I be able to help you with your story?
by giving you ideas for your chapters and stuff