Good video.. However.. The texture pack , just.. sucks.. At the Pokemon part, The scenery is just looks like a dull video. Most of the pokemon series is like bright. In the part you made, is just.. dull. Creative plot right? You can just.. *Huff* ask one of us to give you a place to record because some us have a server. If you can't, alright. Sorry if this one offends you. The words in the machinima is small text, some people can't read. The SAO part, I see Kirito burning earlier. But didn't die, and second time he burned. He died, much more of a fail? Or just part of the video? A bit more Body acting shall do the trick. And.. the fail montage.. Umm... Okay? Meh, I am always be constructive critism when it comes to Minecraft videos.