Hope at worlds end (IJAH Fanfiction)

Good Job! You guys really are talented at writing @John_0696 @Heatdude Da Waffle

 

nevermind (Tck Tck) deleting

 

back on topic, ill be posting the next part probably this friday :) Keep in touch with this thread for updates!

 

chapter 8! This one took some time to make, i hope you guys enjoy this. i work on this as hard as i can just to make it sound good.


Devin listened closely as Lila told her plan to stop the rioters, it sounded good but caity was suspicious when Lila said that they could carry out a secret attack on them by hiding in the place that the rioters would go for the most, but she followed through anyways. "and when they come, you all shall Jump out ready to stop them!, anyone with me?" lila said cheerfully," Devin got up and grabbed his sword. "Lets do this... Caity tell the others this mission is a go." caity nodded and then sent a morse code signal to Ocram to inform dwg to meet up near capital in 3 hours. meanwhile groups of rioters were all storming through the streets terrorizing players and destroying buildings, Faction criminals were using illegal creeper eggs to detonate on big businesses near the capital. it was devastating to a lot of people. 3 hours later all the Moderators met up near the capital building, which was a large Congress like building with jerry statue and harrys statue on each sides. Dwg, Ocram, Mira, Daorack and magical all met up with Caity, Lila and Devin. "Alright! were all here! we need to Set up Turrets on every corner of this capital! we need archers and Swordsmen gaurding the gates and most importantly-" Lila then Interrupted DWG and stated "No dwg, this is my plan. I shall command this mission!" DWG got angered with lila knowing that a helper must never talk back to a moderator, "Your not the one who commands the moderators! I AM! you are to listen to me-" Lila then said back arrogantly "i know what im doing... now lets move!" the others then followed Lila into the gate. Dwg sighed and ran to catch up with them. "Somethings not right with lila... i got a bad feeling shes not on our side..." dwg thought to himself as he ran up the stairs towards the doorway.

 

Part 2 of chapter 8 :D Enjoy! im sorry it took so long, The forums had a glitch, Anyways enjoy the next part!

The teens finally got out of the hospital after killing many gaurds along the way, "Finally! were out of there, now we gotta get to the capital district!" Jerry said while catching his breath, "How!? the capital is 15 miles away! according to calculations, the Rioters will get there in approximately 30 minutes!" Demon said checking the news on his mobile phone, Perc then pointed towards a building that had a large platform on the with the words "Win these cars!" on the front, the first car was a Maserati, and the 2nd was a Black and Red Bugatti Veyron super sport. "we can use those over there, Lets move!" perc said as he and the others followed him. John and Demon took the Veyron while the others took the 4 door Maserati And saul flew on his own. as John started the car demon then turned towards him Suprised as he started the car, "oh no... your not gonna do this are you? we'll get in trouble! do you realize how much trouble we will be in if we crash these!?" John revved the engine and said dude, we saved the kingdom twice, do you think that they would care? Plus if we just wait we will be too late, these cars can get us there in no time!" Both cars drove off the platform and sped off down the street with saul Following behind,

players were running away from the entrance to the capital city, but they were still far from the place they needed to be, "I think you take a left! no i mean right! No the other right!" Demon said confused, John looked at him annoyed and Angrily said "Make up your freakin mind! your worse than google maps giving directions!" they then turned onto a large bridge that ran over the Capital aqueduct that Led water out to farmers and players, as they were driving, Hubble looked outside the car window and noticed something abnormal, the water inside the aqueduct was boiling and steaming, Hubble was confused with this at first until he felt a Slight shaking underneath the car, then he realized that the water was beginning to eat away the support beams underneath the bridge, "Umm guys, I got a baad feeling that this bridge is gonna give way at any moment" hubble said frightened, Willy looked at him with disbelief and said "Hubble, this bridge has been around longer than you have, its going nowhere-" just then the cables in the sides began to Snap, and the cars began to slide closer to the side of the bridge, the teens dodged Falling support cables and Abandoned vehicles. The bridge then began to collapse, one part of it falls off and plummits towards the boiling water carrying cars and people, leaving a Large gap in the bridge, john saw what was happening in front of him, his face turned from shock to confidence as he pushed harder on the gas, "demon then began to panic as he knew exactly what john was going to do, "Are you crazy!?! your gonna get us all killed!" John then accelerated towards the End of the bridge, "Trust me demon, i know what im doing!" The Car then sped off the edge and sped off the edge of the broken bridge, The cars Flew across the air gaining speed as the bridge began to collapse...

To be continued :D Moar cliffhangers

 

Awesome! :D

 

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I actually have a mobile phone IRL. Make it an Android if possible.

 

Chapter 9!

Sorry for the delay, ive recently got my if disney bought minecraft comic up and running again, And recently ive been getting less and less views, I ask nicely if you guys could spread the word of the story being updated please? thank you and enjoy the next chapter. :)


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DWG, devin, caity and Mira all followed Lila into the capital, as they went through the hallway that led to the central command, DWG started to get suspicious, the command station was on the other side of the capital, and even his Phone lost signal, DWG then stopped while the others followed lila to another part of the building, he then hid and sneaked into a room where Radio signals would be sent out to all the kingdom into tvs, Radios, and even communication towers, dwg then realized that they werent just malfunctioning, Someone was jamming the signal, "Oh god... i knew it was happening! i have to warn the others about this!" he turned around towards the door to Warn the others, But as the door opened, Their stood Bluejeans, "Going somewhere?" DWG was about to pull out his sword until Bluejeans rushed at him and tackled him to the ground, she then pulled out a Water gun like weapon with a Red Tip on the end, Dwg then Punched bluejeans in the chest and sent her flying onto the wall, as she made impact with the steel wall her finger triggered the gun and activated a laser beam and cut through the building, the communication building then began to fall over with DWG and bluejeans inside, Bluejeans managed to punch through a glass window and get out of their while dwg was trapped, the building then Crashed to the ground and Destroyed the communication room with DWG inside of it. he died instantly from being crushed by Large parts of the steel room. Mira then heard the echoing crash through the hallways and looked back, "Guys i think the rioters are already here!!" Lila then stopped in front of a steel door and Punched the code on the wall to open it, "In here guys! this is where they will come!" the moderators then stepped in to find that the room was completely empty, with only concrete walls and a couple crates. Devin looked around in confusion wondering why they are back in here. " umm lila are you sure this is the right place? i thought you were leading us to Jerry and harrys office-" the Door then Slammed shut and locked, devin then Ran to the door and tried to get it open, it wouldnt budge no matter how much force he put into it. "Hey lila! let us out! This is the wrong place!" Lilas eyes then changed to the same as reetus but the pupils were Red instead of purple, "Why would i? youll just interfere with Reeus ultimate plan!" Devin then realized the Whole thing was a setup, "TRAITOR! i knew i should have never trusted you!! DWG was right all along!" devin yelled in anger, Bluejeans then came in with blood stains on her shirt, "You Got the prisoners locked up in there Lila?" she demanded, "Everything is under control!, now lets join reetu in the new reign of Unicron!!" the 2 then ran off, Devin kept banging on the metal door until his hands hurt, "How are we gonna get out of here!?" devin said while in pain, Caity sat down on one of the empty wooden crates, "i dont know, hopefully Dwg can save us...


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The 2 cars sped off the broken edge of the bridge, everyones hearts were pounding as they flew over the dropoff to the Boiling water, *Bang* the first car made it across barely with the back tires sticking off the Edge of the other side of the bridge, the maserati made it as well, but then started to fail, the brakes began to malfunction, Aand the car began to go in reverse, "EVERYONE OUT OF THE CAR!!" willy screamed as he swung open the car door and ran out, the others managed to get out, all except for hubble, Hubbles seat belt wouldnt eject, and their he was pounding on the car door screaming, perc then ran towards the car and tried to open hubbles door,but as he got close to it, the car finally tipped over and fell i not the boiling water below, with Hubble in it... Demon was witnessing the whole thing, he realized that his best friend has died, it reminded him so much of the corruption incident, and began to tear up, both claire and hubble were dead, all cause of reetu... Demon then opened his eyes and got a look of anger on his face, "I shall avenge you hubble..." the staff and teens were stranded on a broken bridge, they didnt have time to mourn hubble death as more cables were beginning to break, "Everybody run! and dont stop until you get to the end!" Perc yelled the teens began to Run as behind them the bridge collapsed, cars and other vehicles began to roll off and fall behind them as well, 3 minutes later, the whoel bridge fell into the water from the support beams giving away. the teens stood and caught their breath thanking Notch that they were lucky to be alive, Demon then looked at his Android phone to find out the Rioters Were only 20 minutes away from the capital, and they still had a few miles to go, "great! Now how are we going to get there!? we have no car!!!" jerry said in rage knowing that in a few short minutes, the kingdom will be no more, perc then stood up and snapped his fingers."Wait! i think i got an idea, and i know just the guy to pull it off..."


to be continued! :D

 

@_HUBBLE_ Nooo!

 

Boiling water feels nice

 

Chapter 10! sorry for the delay, i have just came up with a new comic series, and i have a ton of ideas for it. anyways Enjoy the next part as usual!

Starring: @XenonHD @MappyTurtle @ItsStartheFox



Starlight and Mappy Were frightened at the sight of what was happening around them, Pigs were dying Crops and livestock were beginning to die, And even worse, Extremely dark storm clouds were beginning to roll in, lightning flashed in every direction from them, but instead of lightning being its usual bright color, Instead was a pure blood red color. the winds began to pick up, Horses panicked and ran around in the stables kicking at the air. Mappy was about to Burst into tears fearing that she was going to die, "Oh please Notch please, I wanna liive!!" mappy said crying, Starlight slapped her and grabbed her shirt, "Get a hold of yourself mappy! If we keep standing here we ARE gonna die! We need to move!!!" Mappy nodded and they both Ran out the front door to sauls house, the 2 Scout girls then ran down the main walkway of the bambi faction, the wind picked up even more, to about 40 mph winds, And the storm wasnt even over them yet. Just then, a loud booming noise came from near the faction, the Extreme hills biome nearby was smoking, and lava was pouring out of it, "Mappy! look!!!"

Star shouted as she pointed towards the sky, Large Fireballs were flying towards the ground coming from the mountains and Slamming into Houses and other parts of bambi, the 2 girls Sprinted towards the Emergency shelter and opened the steel door on the front, they both ran in closing and locking the door behind them, Inside the shelter was a few furnaces, a couple chests, Food supply and 15 beds all lined up in a row. And a battery powered TV and radio, "Okay, were safe.. Do you know whats even happening!? its like Armageddon out there!" mappy said as she Caught her breath From running, "i dont know either, But for now we will stay here until this whole Thing blows over." star said as she turned on the radio, as she was about to switch the station to a music channel, a news broadcast played over the radio,


"It is Absolute Madness out there everyone! Natural disasters are popping up everywhere across the kingdom, and even worse parts of the minecraftia as well! the aqueduct located in the capital reached boiling point for some unknown reason, Thousands of players and donators have been reported dead after WhatTheHai bridge collapsed from Acid erosion cause by the boiling waters, People are advised to get into shelters or evacuate to a safety camp located in the outskirts of the kingdom! we will continue bringing updates of this Catastrophic events For as long as we can, This is the Daily fart signing off-*BZZT* ....Star sat down on one of the beds and put her hands on her lap worried about her friends safety, I sure hope the others are okay.." Star said, Mappy sat down next to her and patted her on the back, "Dont worry star, I am sure that they are alive and well."



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Perc whipped out his phone and dialed a number, on the other end, A teenage boy wearing a white coat and a blue Shirt with brown hair picked up the phone and answered, "Hello this is Xenon, may i ask whos calling?" perc then Put his phone on speaker, "hey xenon, its perc. were stranded near Whatthehai bridge and we need a way to get to the Capital faster, you think you got anything that can help us?" Xenon then opened a door to a room filled with All sorts of technological devices, "i think i can hook you guys up, Ill be right over!" xenon pulled out the teleporter that john created back in the corruption incident, and set it up on the floor, then he took a 2nd one and carried it out to his Truck, "alright, im on my way guys. for now stay put." perc then stopped him and then said ""Dude rioters are gonna be at the capital in 15 minutes, You best start hurrying" he then hung up and told the others "Alright Xenons on his way with something that can get us to to the capital in no time, but for now, check your loadout and be prepared for when we go." Meanwhile xenon strapped down the teleporter And then got in and started his truck. e then backed out and floored it towards the bridge exit, he lived on the border of the capital, and the bridge was not too far away from him...

William turned towards the nearby hills and saw a bunch of shadowed figures standing on the horizon. they looked like the other moderators, but one thing made them entirely different, they were made out of the same stuff the Gaurds at the hospital were made of. Following them were a bunch of the same Insect creature that Took claires life, "um guys... Forget waiting, we got a lot of things that want to kill us over there.." the others looked over towards them. They were about to pull out their swords until jerry stopped them. "please, ill handle this... Jerry then Started glowing, his hands started resonating with white energy, he thought to himself, "I was told to never use this power, but Desperate times calls for desperate measures..."

to be continued! :D

 

Amazing, this is the best story I've seen in a very long time :)

 

I still don't understand why you haven't taken my advice...

 

Where i didnt see you reply here before?

 

Chapter 11: The capital


This one i have worked extremely hard on, and its gonna be near the ending of the comic, i still have a LOT to go. im currently looking at new ideas and reading others stories for inspiration. Im gonna introduce a few new forum members here, Cause i feel that the story is getting stale. anyways, ill shut up and you enjoy! :D



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The JH department of arms patrolled the border into the Capital, Machine gun turrets lined across the gates. soldiers started ordering citizens to get into their homes and issued a Shelter in place until all clear was given, Watchtowers were occupied to the max with soldiers, in one of the Towers, Commander Yomc stood there analyzing the radar to see if it detected large groups of enemies, nothing yet. a Teen in a blue coat and black hair came up, he had a paper of the server logs in his hands, "Commander, i think you need to look at this..." Mheljean then handed the paper to Yomc, he looked at the paper for a minute then turned to puzzled look, "what the hell? this never happens in a server.." mhel then looked at the logs, "Whats is? the only thing that seems out of place is that it didnt detect the Supposed rioters coming near the border, Plus, the Staff have gone missing." Yomc then pointed to a lone scripture on the log report, "No, this right here... Who or what the hell is Entity_Unicron?" Mhel then double checked, to see if what he was seeing was genuine or he was seeing things, "Wait, that wasnt on the logs when i saw them. this has to be a mistake!" yomc looked back at mhel before sitting back down to keep track of the radar. "No way, the Logs dont lie like that, Unless someone was tampering with them. you didnt happen to mess with them did you?" Mhel then shook his hands putting his hands up. "no way sir! I never mess with these things!" Yomc looked back and took a drink of his coffee, "Better not have. or else youll be answering to jerry about that." Mhel knew Yomc wasnt joking, as he knew punishments are not good when it comes to something this severe taking place in the kingdom, mhel then walked out of the room and down the hall, All fo a sudden Bluejeans Reached behind Mhel and Grabbed him by the coat, "Trying to foil our plan? Well its not gonna happen pal!" Mhel was shocked to see who it was, "Wh-what happened to your eyes!?" but before he could try to get out of blues Grasp, She escorted him to a large steel door...




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Comments? This is one short part of the story, but it really reveals a lot of whats going on. ill need some help writing the last part, so ill PM you guys if you would like to. :)

 

You have the best cliffhangers.

 

This is amazing!

 

i know right :D