an IJAH Story: A kings arrival is never silent

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  1. LivingMiner

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    Love it! Keep them common`
     
  2. gibbson3

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    Lol this was a great story. :P
     
  3. Pancho

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    This is brilliant John. I'd love to be in it though c: .[​IMG]
     
  4. John_0696

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    Update: Since college is starting, ive been working on getting things ready for whe ni start and i havent got time to work on the story. But ill try and get the visual drawings up so you can get an idea of what's going on in the story. but on the other hand, i have been Thinking of drawing up a musical comic which is a lot like the Real movie's opening. but set to a C418 style piano rendition of the Godzilla theme to fit the Minecraft aesthetic of the story. but its been kind of hard to find a song that would do good, so i picked a few.

    Number one, this one i might use.


    Or number 2: this rendition


    which do you guys think? im asking you this because i'd thought i would like ot have you guys pick the one you would like to hear. :) thanks!
     
  5. John_0696

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    UPDATE: This story is not dead, its because college is making me really busy, and i have other things that i got to work on, including the Sequel to this story. Stay tuned for more updates in time :) thanks for being patient.

    -John
     
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  6. BrakeCrake

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    Wow really nice story. Maybe the best I've read on english idk...
    But I've read every thing and I like the pictures!
    Also, take as much time you need :) I'm not like Kyle ...
    Also I'm just asking (you don't need to say yes) to come into the story.
    If its Chapter 18 or 19, I can wait :)
    Have a nice day and good luck in these College days!

    -BCA
     
  7. blok

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    This thread was created on december 27, 2014. The story lives on!
     
  8. John_0696

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    Hey guys! It's me again, you know what that means, A new chapter! As some of you already know, i've been busy with college and life responsibilites. and i haven't really had much motivation to get the comics and stories done, because i've been tired and everything. But i still had completing the story on my agenda. So without further ado, Let's get into some Kaiju action!

    Enjoy!


    Starring:
    @StarlightFox
    @TheMint

    Chapter 17: Enter the nest


    In the sky, about 30,000 feet in the air, a lone Cargo jet flew across the cloudy skies, the sun was barely setting in the distance. on the inside players sat down lined up across the empty hangar bay, Anra led the entire team in a prayer as they near the jump zone. “Oh great notch up above, we need you now, more than ever, we ask that you protect our families, our brethren, and our fellow soldiers in this mission. We thank you for all that you have given us, and we thank you for protecting the lives of our people. Thank you, Amen. Star pulled out a small photo of her and her friends, she put the photo close to her, and put it away. An Alarm buzzed signaling that the plane is over the drop zone, everybody loaded up. Following Commander Daorack, they all lined up in a synchronized fashion. The bay doors on the back of the plane opened, and the strong winds hit all of their faces.


    Star looked out of the plane almost fainting seeing how high they were in the air, but she stayed strong as she knows that she’s doing this to save her friends. The Alarm buzzed again, and all of the soldiers ran and jumped off the back of the plane. Lightning flashed across the sky as they fell towards the earth, They fell for what seemed like hours, until they began to see the capital city, Buildings were crumbling and fires were blazing across the city, star looked around at her fellow comrades as they plummeted towards the ground. She then looked down and saw the 2 Kaiju fighting each other, Godzilla was trying to get the MUTO’s arm with its jaws, but it clawed itself out of his grasp and flew away, Godzilla then roared and pursued after the male MUTO. Star then pulled the cord to her parachute and it opened within a few seconds. She went floating towards the ground as the Male MUTO swooped in behind her, She safely made it to the ground and unhooked the parachute from her body armor. She then grabbed her crossbow and headed into the city. The soldiers met up and daorack explained the plan. “alright soldiers, here’s the plan. We have less than 3 hours to get this biome buster out to the harbor and away from the city, I have a GPS that tracks where this bomb is at. Let’s Move out.” The soldiers advanced into the fog that was covering the streets, Cars were scattered around like toys and buildings were merely reduced to rubble.

    They then came across a large drop in the roads, almost like the entire street was crushed. They took cover behind some debris and readied their weapons. Star then was alerted by Anra to get a visual she looked up through an opening and heard a loud creaking noise, it was when a large claw came out from the fog and slammed onto the pavement. There stood the Female MUTO in what looked like a squatting position, She roared in pain as she began laying her eggs into the nest. Commander daorack was frantic about getting this mission done, as the bomb is live and has a small amount of time until it goes off in the middle of the city, and what they are going to do to get in there. Just then, a loud crashing sound was heard behind them, in the foggy distance, a Long tail swung through the air at a ridiculous amount of speed. Lightning flashed in the sky behind the awe inspiring silhouette of Godzilla. Standing about 350 feet tall he was an sight to behold. He slowly ambled towards the street that the soldiers were at. All of them looked at him in fear on what he was going to do next. He took a deep breath, and Roared so loud, that some of the soldiers covered their ears.


    *SKKREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNCCGGHHHH*

    Behind them, the female muto looked up, it then got into a defensive stance and roared back, she then charged at Godzilla trampling buildings in her path. Star looked up at the 2 Kaiju about to fight, they both Slammed into each other as Godzilla bit into her shoulder. The soldiers then had the time to get off the street and advance towards the nest.

    to be continued in the next chapter!
     
  9. Contemptible

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    Well written, John. Add me in one c;
     
  10. Emeritus_IV

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    I think this is one of the best chapters of this story :D
     
  11. John_0696

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    Okay, we are seriously getting into the good stuff in this chapter, this one was the most fun to write as this is where the big Kaiju battle takes place. I hope all of you guys enjoy this chapter, as i did as well. c:

    Its only a few months until the 1 year anniversary of the posting of this thread, so im going to try my best to get the last few parts done. I hope all of you guys enjoy this part of the story c:

    Starring:
    @StarlightFox
    @TheMint


    Chapter 18: Turning the tide


    Commander Daorack and the other soldiers moved towards the large hole as the 2 Kaiju battled in the streets of the IJAH capital, they looked down as they saw buildings and parts of the road crushed like they were nothing. “ Anra, give me the location of the bomb.” Daorack ordered. Anra pulled out a small GPS device, and turned it on. After a few seconds, he got a blip on the system. “Its down in there.” He said, pointing at a part of the wreckage. The groups of soldiers moved in, breaking through different layers of debris, after breaking through doors and going through destroyed buildings, they finally got through to where the Biome buster bomb was located. Star came in and looked around, She was in shock at what was there, Egg sacs. Hundreds of them lining the walls stretched on Think viscous vines. She shined her flashlights at them, looking at all the MUTO embryos floating on the inside. She Feared that if these things hatch, they would kill humankind. She then snapped back at the soldiers who were drastically fighting to get the bomb out of the missile. They only had an hour and a half before the bomb goes off. Commander Daorack ordered the men to escort the bomb out to the IJAH harbor and send it off on a boat out to the ocean. they complied and moved out carrying the bomb. All the soldiers scattered out of the MUTO nest following the Commander.

    Back out on the streets, Godzilla and the Female MUTO were still fighting, The female MUTO was being pushed by Godzilla with ease through the many buildings. She dug her claws into 2 buildings next to each other to stop Godzilla from pushing her further. She couldn’t hold on much longer and she was pushed to the ground. The Players on the buildings watched as Godzilla steppd on the Female MUTO and prevented her from getting back up, as Godzilla was about to finish her off, the Male MUTO Swooped in and grabbed Godzilla by the neck and pulled him away from his mate. Godzilla Struggled to get the Male MUTO off of him, as that happened, The female MUTO charged at Godzilla with full speed, knocking him into a building. Godzilla got back up and roared at them, not knowing that the Male MUTO jumped back down on him, He turned and tried to bite his arm, But the Female MUTO jumped up and slashed at Godzilla’s neck, causing him Great pain.


    Back at the Nest, Star followed close by went to the exit, she then stopped and turned around. She remembered the Dangers the Baby MUTOs could pose to human kind, and what could happen if the female MUTO comes back. She acted fast and pulled out the Stack of TNT that was given to her by Willy, she then placed them all around the Nest. After she was done, she Lit a match and threw it out to the piles of TNT. She scrambled out the door and out into the open.

    Both of the MUTOs Clawed and slashed at Godzilla as he tried to get out of there grasp, The MUTOs fought like a tag team. They both took turn at mauling Godzilla. He fell over as the MUTOs pummeled him, Roaring in pain. On the ground, the soldiers were running fast to get the bomb out onto the harbor as the Kaiju fought in the background. Time was running out, and Godzilla was being overwhelmed.

    Star began climbing out of the nest as fast as her legs could carry her. The MUTOs were about to Deliver the Final blow to Godzilla, When…


    *BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMM*


    The entire Nest Blew up in a gigantic fireball. Debris went flying out in all directions, the Explosion was so loud, the Female MUTO looked back and Cried out and ran back to her nest. The male MUTO halted from mauling Godzilla and followed close behind. The Female MUTO got to its nest to see that all of the Egg sacs were destroyed in the fire. She Cried out in a sense of sadness and loss knowing that her Offspring were dead. Back on the ground, Star was wounded from the blast, and she watched as the female MUTO’s sadness turned to anger as she looked around the nest. She tried to Escape, but in the process, knocked over a piece of debris. The female MUTO looked up to see where the sound was coming from, she then noticed star and closed in on her, Figuring out that it was her who killed her offspring. Star looked in horror at the Giant Kaiju looking straight at her. She thought she was done for, until she noticed something out of the corner of her eye, a light shined into her eyes behind the Female MUTO, The Monster turned and faced towards where the light Source was coming from, A loud droning noise was heard and it was changing in pitch. Godzilla’s Dorsal plates have begun to glow Light blue,



    *Vrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm*



    The Female MUTO slowly backed away, as Godzilla stood up and begun to turn towards her. and within a Second, Godzilla Slowly took a deep breath, and then Spewed out his Atomic radioactive breath.
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    The Soldiers looked up in shock as Godzilla blasted the Female MUTO with his breath. The Female MUTO fell to the ground in pain, this was when star lifted herself off the ground and ran away from the scene.


    To be continued!
     
  12. John_0696

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    Wow, this thread is still alive? :O i know crazy right?

    Welcome to the near end of this story! im going to have the Ending to the story set up soon so be sure to stay tuned for that. I hope you guys enjoy this 2nd to last chapter of my story.

    Starring:
    @StarlightFox
    @TheMint
    @Katy_
    @Spykill3r

    Chapter 19: The End?

    Star scattered away from the fight as fast as she could, but her wounded leg kept her from sprinting, she could only jog in pain as her leg was injured from the blast that destroyed the nest. She searched her pockets for any healing potions, but there were none. Back at the battlegrounds, the Female MUTO fell on the ground in pain from Godzilla’s Atomic breath. As Godzilla was about ti finish her off again, the Male MUTO swooped in and landed on Godzilla’s back trying to force him into the ground, Godzilla swatted him off and snarled at him, he left the Female MUTO and begun his fight with it’s mate. Back on the ground, The soldiers and Commander Daorack quickly got to the docks at the harbor. They went towards a large Fishing boat and set the bomb down. “Okay, Zye take you and Safa and head to the top of the boat and keep a lookout, Anra you’re with me. Get someone to pilot the boat” Back at the city, the female MUTO got up, and looked towards the harbor, sensing the Bomb. It cried out and ran towards the harbor. “Sir! Sir! The female, she’s coming for the bomb!” Zye exclaimed pointing at the MUTO that was running towards them.


    The male MUTO was really giving Godzilla a pounding, It swooped in and latched onto his back yet again, Godzilla growled and clawed at the air as the MUTO bit him, before it could react, Godzilla Grabbed the MUTO’s head with his mouth and shook him around a couple times before flinging him across the city, the Male MUTO quickly gained control of itself and flew into the air, it then Swiftly turned back towards Godzilla. As he watched, he gained an idea. Godzilla then turned around as the male MUTO was closing in, before it was Able to strike Godzilla again, He was Slammed into the side of a Building by Godzilla’s Tail. It Impaled the MUTO by the neck and Abdomen, thus killing it. Godzilla then turned around, he was extremely weak, after being battered and tossed around by the other MUTOs. A loud cracking noise was heard, he looked up to see that the building began to topple, he got caught in the middle of it and came crashing to the ground, Debris and smoke fell through the abandoned streets as the people underneath the shelters were panicking, Evelyn was one of them, she put her hands to her ears just hoping that this madness would end, and that if she would ever see saul again. In the midst of it all, The badly wounded StarlightFox was running through the buildings she then stopped as a loud thump was heard and turned. there, she was face to face with the Monster, Godzilla was barely able to keep himself up, he was exhausted and battered, he then turned his focus on Star and stared at her for a few seconds before disappearing in a cloud of smoke, Star seemed a bit saddened by Godzilla, as he has fought hard and may be nearing his defeat. He knew she had to end this conflict. She then pressed on towards the harbor.. at the harbor, Commander Daorack and the other soldiers were firing a relentless amount of arrows at the Female MUTO as it closed in for the bomb. Star ran into the docks and watched in horror as the female MUTO simply swatted different soldiers off of boats and killing them like flies. It was then a TNT block was launched at her head, it Exploded but didn’t wound her. she looked at where it was coming from and stomped her way towards where Commander Daorack, anra and the others were at.

    Star pressed on towards the boat carrying the bomb, as the Female MUTO shifted it’s attention towards commander Daorack and them, “FIRE AT HER AND DON’T STOP MEN!!” he shouted as they sprayed arrows at her. the female MUTO only became more annoyed as she then lunged at them, Eating most of the Soldiers whole including Anra, Katy and Spy. Commander daorack barely made it out And ordered the soldiers to continue firing at the MUTO. Star got on the boat and saw that the Bomb had only less than 15 minutes before it was going to be detonated. She raced against the clock to get the boat turned on while the Female MUTO kept slaughtering foot soldiers. She turned on the GPS system on the boat and got the engine starting. She then took a long shovel and pressed on the dock as hard as she could to get the boat out onto the water. The boat was now in its way out the the ocean. Star collapsed onto the floor from exhaustion, but she didn’t have long until the boat shut off on its own. She turned, and she was petrified to see that the female MUTO had caught up to her. it slowly leaned in towards star, The MUTO was furious knowing that she was the one who killed its offspring, and that she was going to end her the same way she did with the soldiers. Star knew she wasn’t going to go down, so she brought out her last line of defense, a small Scattergun. But it looked like it was going to be ineffective against this giant monster. It seems that all is lost for her and the Monster was ready to kill…

    To be continued? :o
     
  13. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    The bumps are warnable... Unless you're a staff member :3
    Ok jk, good job man.
     
  14. John_0696

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    Well, this is My last Post here, I know its a REALLY old thread, but i thought it would be best to End this story. Because i have a Sequel In the works :) You might have been noticing all the Drawings of the Different godzilla monsters being posted on the Forums, but thats only the teasers on whats to come.

    Anyways, Enjoy the Last part of the Story!


    Chapter 20: Or only the Beginning?

    Starring:
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    John_0696 (Moi)
    @LouiseXminerX
    @KrisKrikken
    @Caity
    @WolfyTheFur (even though he doesnt come here anymore)
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    The MUTO was ready to finish off what remained of the soldiers, which was Star, the MUTO then began to twitch and grunt in place. Star was confused, but her eyes widened as she saw what was causing the monster to act this way, Godzilla had bitten the MUTO right in the neck, and began to pull it back towards him. The female MUTO clawed and swatted in the air as Godzilla grabbed her by the mouth and began to force it open, Before the MUTO could break free of Godzilla’s grasp, He delivered his Final move, Firing his Atomic breath right down the Female MUTO’s throat. The heat from the Atomic breath melted the MUTO’s throat and caused it to explode, severing the head from the Body.


    Godzilla had won, the Female MUTO’s decapitated corpse fell into the murky waters below. Godzilla then Roared victoriously and dropped the head into the water. It was over, Star has in shock at what just happened. Godzilla had unintentionally saved her from the MUTO. As the boat began to drift out into the ocean, she looked back to see Godzilla slowly trudging onto shore, before collapsing to the ground.


    Star thought that she might never see her beloved town again, nor her friends. She knew that she was going to die. She slowly closed her eyes, and lay still. That was when she began to notice something, a bright light in the sky. At first she thought she was going to the great beyond, before a Shadow came over her. It was Louise in her remaining gear, and she began to tie up star onto a gurney, she then gave the thumbs up to lift both of them off of the boat. She was then placed in a seat onboard a Helicopter, she could barely make out what was going on as if she were in a trance. The last thing she saw, was an extremely bright flash in the distance, the Bomb had gone off, and it decimated the part of the ocean. she then blacked out…



    The next day, the glaring sun was obscured by the thick clouds of smoke coming from the remains of many buildings. Rescue teams were everywhere looking through the rubble to see if there was any survivors. While in the distance, Godzilla lay on the wreckage, seemingly dead. In the midst of the crowds of people came Kris and Caity. They stood amongst the wreckage scanning the city. Kris then focused his attention on Godzilla, it was his first time getting this close to the monster. People kept searching through the wreckage, until a Loud noise startled them, they all looked at Godzilla and couldn’t believe their eyes, He was waking up. In the Distance Kris watched as Godzilla slowly opened his eyes. Meanwhile, in a large Combat coliseum, several people sat on their beds injured, mostly survivors of the Monster’s fight, Star was one of them. She sat on her bed while holding an arm crutch, her leg had a cast on it and she was in any state to be walking. She needed time to heal. she turned her head and saw a somewhat happy sight, it was a group of family and friends, they all were reunited and they all hugged each other whilst crying tears of joy. Star felt she could feel the same thing they were feeling, it was then she heard something out of the crowd, a familiar voice calling out to her. She turned her head and saw something moving through the crowd of soldiers and rescue teams, she couldn’t believe who it was, it was John and Wolfy, She tried to spring up but she couldn’t really, John ran towards her and hugged her. “Star you’re alive I can’t believe it!” star was happy she got to see her friend, “Thanks John, that means a lot. Im happy you’re okay too.” John then replied “I seriously thought you were Toast during that big monster fight, which was awesome to say nonetheless.” Star chuckled a bit, “Yeah, yeah it was awesome. A bit Terrifying but awesome…” She then looked up to see Wolfy, she then slowly walked towards each other, and they hugged. “Star, thank the Almighty notch you’re okay.” Star couldn’t have been more happier. “Thank Notch you’re okay too..” they both hugged each other and Star felt happy. It was when John interrupted them. “Um sorry to break up the love right now, but look at the TV screen.”


    John pointed up at a Large screen inside the coliseum. People began turning their Attention to the Screen as well, Just then, The Crowd began to burst into Applause, Cheering and whistling. On the Screen was Godzilla, He had woken up, and was making his way towards the harbor, The News station known as “The Daily Fart” Displayed a headline saying. “The King of the Monsters, a Savior of our Province?” Everyone on the streets Stared at the Colossal Saurian titan ambling through the city. Caity put her hands over her mouth and Kris slightly smiled. Godzilla then Let out a Triumphant roar.



    “SKREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOONCH”

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    Godzilla then stepped into the waters, and slowly lowered himself into a swimming position; People gathered on the Harbor Pier to watch as Godzilla Slowly but surely made his way out to the Ocean while seagulls flew all around him. Godzilla returned back to the Ocean depths where he will rest until hes needed again, for The Balance of Nature has been restored.

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  15. KrisKrikken

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    I feel good being a part of this story <3