an IJAH Story: A kings arrival is never silent

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  1. animelover999

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    Can I join the party?
     
  2. John_0696

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    Hey guys, sorry i havent been able to work on my story, Ever since i got my wisdom teeth pulled, I wasnt able to do much writing and planning out how the next part of the story will be, but now that im somewhat healed, ill try and get the ball rolling again. (That is, if school goes easy on me this week) Stay tuned everyone, Next chapter will be up soon!
     
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    School, dont hurt John, okay?

    Thanks for the update john :)
     
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    I know John :P
     
  5. John_0696

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    woot, a new chapter. Now that i have recollected my thoughts and watched the movie yet again, i have been able to work on the story. Life has been super busy as i also brought back mod mayhem and got some new games xD so ill try my best to get both projects up and running. Enjoy! c:

    Starring:
    @StarlightFox
    @05ocram05
    @Loling
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Radii


    Chapter 13: Operation takedown Phase 2 part 2


    It was a brisk cloudy night, and Daoracks forces were moving on a Special transport carrying the Biome buster warhead. Star was standing next to Marco and Radii as they pulled out a large mechanical device. “So this is the thing were going to use to set this bomb off?” marco asked, “Yep. It’s a manual timer that’s protected from those monsters EMP attacks. Instead of a remote detonator, this one uses a mechanical clock.” Radii continued. “This thing is seriously going to do some damage to those monsters.” They chuckled for a bit when they suddenly heard what sounded like a distant explosion, the transport stopped and everyone then began to wonder what was going on, “Hey, why’d the Transport stop?” Star said, marco then pulled out his walkie-talkie. “Marco to Loling, are we clear to move, over.” the feedback that they received sounded like people screaming and Crossbows going off. Marco then repeated “marco to loling, are we cleared to move, over!” The feedback was nothing but static. Marco then silently signaled the others to check out whats going on.

    Star, Radii, Louise and Marco then slowly walked through the tunnel in the mountain. As soon as they went through the ending, they came across a suspension bridge about 200 feet in the air. “You and louise make your way to the bottom of this hill and watch for whatever is coming, me and marco will take the Bridge, move out.” Star commanded, Louise and Radii went down the parth near the bridge and walked across the soil at the bottom of the mountain. Marco pulled out his comms device, “Marco to Train operator you are cleared to move over.” The players back at the transport then began to move again, the transport then began to slowly move through the tunnel. Radii and Louise walked through the thick ground fog, when Radii suddenly saw a faint glowing light in the distance, but then she noticed it was coming straight towards them. “Get down!!” Louise shouted, they both fell to the ground as Remains of a Tank came crashing into the shoreline. Radii slowly got up and noticed all the floating Military equipment and debris was floating in the massive river. “Oh god..” Radii muttered under her breath, Star pulled out her earpiece,” What was that Radii? Can you repeat that over.” Radii’s voice came in but it was mostly static as she didn’t get a good signal. “Radii! Are you there!? Over!” Star repeated, when Suddenly a Loud Cracking noise was heard behind them, They saw a Massive claw Raise up out of the fog.


    “Get down!” star said, they both layed flat on the train tracks as if they were playing dead, the Female MUTO slowly ambled its way across the mountains, Star looked at the monster in horror, as she has never seen something so Big before. The Female MUTO then stopped and looked underneath the train tracks. It let out a low pitched creaking sound as it slowly moved its head. It then Noticed Star’s light orange earpiece, it was making static noise as the MUTO had invisible electromagnetic energy resonating from it. “oh god, it notices us.. it notices us-“ Star whispered, but was Interrupted by the MUTO’S loud Creaking voice.” It slowly rose up emitting a low pitched blaring noise. It then raised her head and slowly looked at the 2 Players frozen in fear. As it was just about to close in on them, it heard the Horn of the transport, It let out a cry, and slowly ambled its way towards it. Star and Marco then noticed something was Different about this Monster, on the Bottom part of her Abdomen, was a Large bulging Sac full of miniature eggs. They gazed in awe as the Monster disappeared in the fog. A couple seconds later, they heard what sounded like Screaming and crashing. Star automatically knew what it was. That’s when they saw the transport on fire, speeding towards the 2 players. “RUN!” Star yelled as they took off across the train tracks, Star was faster as she was a Scout, but marco couldn’t keep up. “Star! Wait-AAAAAAAGH!!” Marco screamed as the Female MUTO slammed its claw on the tracks, Killing Marco and causing star to fall off the tracks, she Fell towards the river and splashed into the water. She came up trying to tread water, but Pieces of the bridge were still falling towards the ground. She gazed at the Female MUTO as it let out a shrill creaking sound. She then grabbed one of the Biome buster bombs with her Mouth and gulped it down. Star’s vision began to fade and she passed out…

    Hey guys, just an update, Sorry i wasnt able to get the next part done yet, Since school is almost over, I have been really busy getting ready for my graduation. I have to keep my grades up, The next part may not be out until a couple weeks later. Thanks all of you for being patient! :)

    -John
     
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    not bad, great story!
     
  7. John_0696

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    here is a Visual drawing of what happened in the last chapter :) enjoy!

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    Just a little update, Im going to be uploading the next part very soon, so stay tuned! Ive really been busy with finals and graduation, but ill be sure to put out the next chapter soon.

    thanks!

    -John

    Hey guys, Just an update, due to finals and graduation coming up, i might not have the next part up until this weekend, so keep in touch with this thread for further updates :)

    -John
     
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  8. John_0696

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    Hooray, a new part of the story! sorry for not being very active lately, a LOT has been happening recently like Adult responsibilities and graduation stuff. So I thought i'd make it up for all of you by working on the new part of the story today. c: I hope you all enjoy, and i can assure you that were almost done with the story, we just have to get through the good part... coming soon.

    Enjoy!

    Starring:
    @StarlightFox
    @Saul1337
    @TheMint
    @_Magical
    @XenonHD
    @DMachine487
    @ItsJerry
    @ItsHarry
    @~Wolf
    @xMisfitCow
    @YFIOTR
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    Chapter 14: Operation Takedown Phase 2 part 3


    The wind blew across the murky and damp river, Jet pieces and remains of tanks were scattered across the landscape, there sat a lone Wolf looking off into the distance, it then turned around and ran away, near the pile of rubble lied Star, unconscious and covered in dirt, she looked badly damaged from the MUTO encounter even though she made it out alive. She then slowly woke up to the sound of a Helicopter flying into the shoreline, out stepped TheMint, Brittney and a few other soldiers. They searched through the debris for survivors, Instead what they found was one of the Biome buster bombs laying intact on the shore. As they began to lift the bomb off the ground, Brittney spotted star limping towards them. “Oh my god Star is that you!? Anra, Get the medic!” Meanwhile, back in the Capital, Jerry and Harry were being escorted by a group of high ranking officials along with commander daorack. “Alright, ive just notified all the residents to evacuate the city and take shelter underground, our other top priority is escort you two to safety away from any harm. I’ve got a private limo waiting for you outside the building.” Daorack turned towards another person who had red hair, a dark grey sash and a cape. “Dmachine, I am putting you in charge of driving Jerry and harry out of the capital. They need to be escorted to the private bunker, 10 miles out. Got that?” Dmachine replied “I won’t fail you sir.” Daorack patted Dmachine on the back and then sent him on his way along with Jerry and harry. Meanwhile, at a nearby base, star got on the phone and dialed wolfy. On the other end, he answered “Hello?” Star then replied” Hey babe, it’s me. I was just calling to make sure you were alright.” Wolfy almost teared up. “of course im fine, im just worried because of all the things that is going on. I thought I would never see you again.” John then came up to wolfy “Hey is that star? if so tell her I said I wish her the best of luck and to stay safe.” Star replied again. “thank you john, you too.” Star then heard Xenon’s voice from the other room. “Alright Staff meeting everyone meet in main office!” Star then said to wolfy “Honey, get you, John, roc and sera to safety, that’s all I ask of you. I’ll be fine. Well meet once again.” wolfy was in tears but he understood. ”We will baby, we will..” they both then hung up.


    Daorack was in the room with several others. “Alright.. since one of the bombs was eaten by the MUTO, we only have one warhead left. We need to use this thing as wisely as possible. We already have a plan B in effect, and that is to put the bomb on a boat and detonate it 20 miles offshore.” Louise then stepped in. ”but sir, what about the nest they make, Aren’t the MUTO’S mates?” Daorack then pondered. ”Yes, the nest, I think I have a plan for that. But it involves us doing something we’ve never attempted before.” Radii then spoke, “And what would that be commander Dao?” He then looked up. “were going to have to break the rules ourselves…” he turned to willy who was standing next to star. “William I want you to get the rest of your forces, and load up with TNT and other types of explosives” Willy then saluted and went out to the comms station. “And the rest of us, including myself will Drop out of the air from 30,000 feet into ground zero. And we carry out the plan from there, Alright everyone report to transport 2-S and suit up.” Everyone understood and walked out, Star was last out of the room, but daorack stopped her. “You sure you want to go along on this mission? I know you have friends and loved ones to protect.” Star replied, “I’ll do whatever it takes sir.” Daorack nodded his head and sent star out.


    Meanwhile back in the city, the people of the capital were frantic to know what was going on, many people were evacuating, Players, PvPers, People from all the provinces were leaving the capital. In a part near the hospital, saul and evelyn and a few others were helping people into ambulances and caring for the sick. Some of the IJAH army was there giving relief efforts as well. “Ugh what are we going to do!? We have plenty of sick patients and more are on their way, and we got a national emergency on our hands.” Saul said as he led people onto buses, evelyn then came up to saul. “Honey, I just got a message from Xenon, they said they wanted you to come with them as you are a part of the IJAH crew.” Saul was somewhat annoyed. “Well tell them I really can’t right now as I have to help these people.” Evelyn put her hand on saul’s shoulder,” go saul, I’ll help these people out, your priority right now is to get safely out of the city.” Saul sighed and gave evelyn a hug, “Stay safe babe, its going to be hard to separate from you at a time like this.” Evelyn replied, “I understand.” They kissed and saul made his way towards hai who was waiting for him. A tear slowly ran down Evelyn’s cheek…

    A group of helicopters flew over the capital carrying the bomb towards a large cargo boat. There was a couple of daorack’s forces waiting to board the ship. Back at the Capital building, Xenon watched news broadcasts from “The Daily fart” to see if everything is going smoothly. That was when lieutenant Evan ran in. “Xenon! We just got report that Godzilla is Only 5 miles away from the harbor! It will be by the Diamond bridge in approximately 45 minutes!” Xenon’s eyes widened,” Oh no… this is not good.” Evan asked, “Why not sir?” Xenon turned towards evan. “Jerry and Harry are on that bridge!!”
     
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    The monster fight is finally here ccc:
     
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  13. John_0696

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    Hooray! an new story and new characters! this part of the story was the most fun to make cause were getting into the monster action :) Keep in touch with this thread cause were halfway to the big finale, Enjoy!

    Starring:
    @DMachine487
    @ItsJerry
    @ItsHarry
    @Saul1337
    @Destination666
    @Nether0
    @ImMattShadows
    @Ninjafoya
    @Slevin
    @Sellz
    @Cheezipoofs
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    Chapter 15: Godzilla incoming!


    The torrential rain was coming down as cars and players on horseback moved across the great fart bridge. It stretched across for 2 miles connecting a separate island with the mainland. In the large traffic jam, The Limo carrying the IJAH crew came to a complete stop. A traffic officer was escorting buses full of young players, “Please can you let us through!?” dmachine hollered at the traffic officer, he replied, “Sorry, women and children first!” Dmachine was agitated, “I have the freakin owners on this limo let me through please-“ That was when dmachine was interrupted by a loud low pitched blaring noise, everyone fell silent to where all you can hear was the raindrops on the windows. “What was that?” jerry said in a slightly quiet voice. Harry replied “Im not sure, let me check..” harry slowly looked out the window towards the open sea where ships and boats were waiting. Just then, a Seagull Smacked into the limo’s window Scaring harry half to death, People watched as flocks of seagulls flew away in fright, signaling that something was coming. Meanwhile on a ship, Daorack’s forces began noticing something off in the foggy distance. “Hey guys look, Over there!” Safa shouted, Slevin and Sellz looked off into the distance, out of the fog came large jagged spikes moving slowly through the waves, Godzilla was moving fast towards the shoreline, Slevin then shouted “EVERYONE! BRACE YOURSELVES!!”


    Godzilla then came to a stop in front of the ships. All of the guns on the battleships slowly turned towards Godzilla as he sat there motionless in the water, Slevin and sellz gazed in awe as Godzilla slowly lifted his tail up into the air and proceeded to move through the blockade of ships, he went through them like they were nothing. The battleships then began to fire there TNT cannons at him. Some missed and some didn’t, Dmachine then went into panic mode and hit the gas pedal, he honked at people to get out of the way as he drove through the crowds of people and cars. One of the TNT hit a part of the bridge, sending cables falling onto the road. One landed right in front of the limo, causing it to come to a complete stop. Daorack’s forces ran across the road, one of the soldiers pulled out there walkie talkies, “Wait don’t fire theres still people on the bridge- AAAH!” The TNT was just about to hit the soldiers, until Godzilla slowly rose up into the people’s view, Jerry, Harry and Saul were in awe as Godzilla stood there, “OPEN FIRE!!” One of the soldiers shouted, Godzilla then Roared and growled in pain as the military fired upon him, Blocks of TNT rained on him as he kept swatting at the air in pain, Dmachine then hit the gas again and honked at the soldiers to get out of the way. Jerry and harry were terrified of him, Just then a TNT block hit Godzilla in the gills causing him to roar in pain and smash straight through the bridge, luckily the limo was safe as dmachine kept driving running over signs saying “Do not cross”
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    Godzilla then roared once again and ambled his way through the waters. On a small patrol boat sat Riley, Cheezi, Dest and Nether, they had the biome buster bomb on board and they were getting ready to arm it. Dest and nether took 2 keys and put them in separate slots. “Alright, on my go Dest!” dest nodded. “3! 2! 1! NOW!!” They both turned there keys simultaneously and the bomb clicked and whirred, the manual timer began ticking, set to detonate 10 hours from now. Dest then said. “Alright, now let’s get this thing out there and give those things a taste of human technology-“ That was when a loud creaking noise was heard, an EMP shockwave rippled through the skies frying all the electricity in the distance. “Nether! The boat went offline!” he said, in the capital, people’s cars and electronics went down, Evelyn was sitting Inside of an ambulance helping a person in critical condition. That was when the machine keeping the person alive went out. scared out of her mind, Evelyn got out of the ambulance into the pouring rain to check and see what’s going on. “She then saw what looked like Shadow_folf strapped to a parachute descending from the sky, just then Evelyn heard a loud crashing noise, it was one of the /fly jetpacks that went haywire from the EMP burst.



    People were terrified and began to run to nearby shelters abandoning their cars. Jetpacks and other flying machines began raining from the sky like toys. Nether looked in shock, as if the whole world was coming to an end. A shrill screeching noise was heard above them, The Male MUTO came swooping down towards the small patrol boat, before any of the people on board could pull out there explosive crossbows, the male MUTO folded its wings back and dove into the water, taking the boat and everyone down with it. People looked in confusion to what was going on. That was when the male MUTO ascended from the water and pulled itself up onto the roads. It dropped the boat on the ground and started clawing at it as people ran for their lives, its pulled the bomb off the brackets holding it down. It then looked towards the main part of the city, Spread its wings and flew away. It flew around until it found a stable building to perch itself on top of. The male MUTO let out a mating call, and in the distance, buildings were crumbling under a thick cloud of smoke. In response it heard the same mating call, except it was deeper. It spread its wings again and flew towards the sound. It flapped its wings to clear the smoke, and there stood the Female MUTO, it was way taller than its mate.
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    they both happily clicked and creaked as they rubbed there heads together. The female MUTO then took the bomb out of the others mouth and held it towards the egg sac in her abdomen. The female MUTO then started destroying the ground in order to create her nest, while the male MUTO Climbed a nearby building and roared, it then spread its wings and flew off, the female MUTO kept destroying the ground creating A cloud of dust and debris that filled the streets nearby..

    to be continued!


    UPDATE: Hey guys, if your wondering, no I haven't stopped working on the story, and yes i plan on continuing the story. A lot has happened to me the past couple months like my shed catching on fire and my College responsibilities kicking in, so ill try my best to get the ball rolling again. :) stay tuned!

    -John
     
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    I loved it. :)
    I look so brave in this one, lol. xD
     
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    ...Who in their right mind would leave me in charge of Jerry and Harry in a car? *wrench steering wheel* EVERYONE IS DEAD, NOW ALL YOU HAVE LEFT IS DEEP REGRET.

    Anyway, good story, but idk about that smoke, it just seems way too grainy to be believable.
     
  16. John_0696

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    Hey guys, its me again, sorry for the inactivity, ive been working on a Lot of other comics including mod mayhem, ill get the next part of the story soon, so stay tuned :)

    -John
     
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    awesome story btw!
    I didn't see it till now ;o
    I didn't get the tag I guess
     
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    Great stories! Keep them common!
     
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    Late respond, didn't get any alert from the tag. xD
    Very nice, I love it. I wonder what'll happen next. c:
     
  20. John_0696

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    oh yes, a new part to the story! sorry if this was a little bit short, but since college is startinbg, i'd thought i would get this part out to you guys, Enjoy!

    Starring:
    @KrisKrikken
    @XenonHD
    @StarlightFox
    @Yomc
    @MisfittedCow

    Chapter 16: Let them Fight

    On an island near the coast of the IJAH harbor, the rain poured down across the military base. In a room stood star, Cingle, Yomc and a few other trusted members of the province as Commander Daorack explained the plan. “Alright, the plane were riding on is going to drop us over ground zero at 80,000 feet in the air, we will drop down into the city, pinpoint the location of the nest, retrieve the bomb and send it out to the ocean. Away from the capital. Anyone got that?” the crew nodded . “ Alright, let’s move!” Daorack continued. They all walked out and got on a transport to carry them to the private airport. Meanwhile Kris, and Xenon stood at an outpost staring off towards the capital. “This alpha predator of yours, kris.. do you really think he has a chance?” xenon asked, Kris stood silent for a few seconds and then spoke. “Humankind has always claimed nature as there’s simply because of there presence, they destroyed the land and thought they had control over nature….i think its about time it should be the other way around.” Kris then fell silent before muttering one more sentence, “…let them fight.”


    Meanwhile in the city, a group of people watched from a neighborhood as they saw the male MUTO coming in from the cloudy skies. It turned and flapped its wings, as it got closer the people then panicked trying to find shelter, the MUTO creaked and swooped into the busy part of the city. It perched itself on top of a building destroying it as it landed, it got into an attack stance and cried out in its loud creaky voice. Misfit and plenty of other players began to scramble towards the shelters, as they then heard the sound of clashing waves. Godzilla then rose up from out of the water and growled at the male MUTO. People absolutely panicked and began running into the shelters underneath the buildings, meanwhile the male MUTO jumped off the top of the skyscraper and swooped in once again towards Godzilla. The male MUTO then began to tear and claw at Godzilla as he tried to grab the MUTO’S head with his jaws. The doors then closed as the people screamed at the horror at the 2 monsters.

    to be continued!

    visuals coming soon as well
     
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