[9th Story] The Rise Of The Devil

SweetTooth · Apr 10, 2016

Omg This is Amazing.. MOM I FOUND A GREAT STORY!! Srsly thou This is Amazing.

Snakehammer19 · Apr 10, 2016

Good job with the final of the 9th story you biscuit. Can't wait how the next one is like :D

Elfon · Apr 10, 2016

LouiseXminerX said: ↑

Really sorry for not posting in a while. Life is going down hill fast for me due to loosing many friends for unknown reasons, sleeping in a room full of bugs, crying everyday and of course just being depressed. Apologizes for the depressing post, but I just wanted to let you guys know that I'm having a hard time atm.
But anyway enough with the sad stuff, the identity of Demon has been unleashed and will shock you all. Read this whole chapter to uncover the long, forbidden truth.

Characters With Major Roles:
@Elfon (Elisa)
@Kryokin (Kry)
@SandyTheDog (Sandy)
@TheUndeadBrave (Undead)
Characters With Minor Roles:
@TwageTomato (Twage)
@Sven007 (Agent S)
@BlabDaFish (Blab)
@CaptainJackValdy (Captain Jack)
Enjoy ^-^

Chapter 18 - Behind The Shadows
Sandy's Perspective:
I was awoken by screams of worry.
I blinked and stretched, ignoring the panic around me.
"We cannot loose another Light! Arg!"
My eyes flicked opened due to those words.
"Elisa is GONE?" I gasped.
"Oh yeah. Mornin' Sandy! And yeah... Elisa is missing." Twage said.
I looked around for any evidence of where Elisa has gone.
Only green textures stood in my view.
"Was a single person awake last night?" I questioned.
Everyone just shook their heads or looked down.
"Well I did wake up for like a couple of seconds. I heard footsteps, but then I fell right back to sleep." Blab answered.
"So either someone took her away or she ran away herself for an unknown reason." Agent S said.
"Sandy. Sense the air. It's possible to pick up Elisa's smell." Undead suggested.
I understood the command and sniffed the air, trying to sniff every detail of the area we were standing in.
No smell seemed to be like Elisa's. Where could she be?
I sniffed one more time, and noticed some kind of 'sweat' smell...
I followed where the smell was coming from.
I heard a grunt. I jumped right behind a tree, hiding from danger.
I poked my head around the tree to see who's there.
Someone kept stabbing a demon even though it was clearly dead.
Black liquid squirted all over the place.
This was chaotic... is this person crazy?
Then I realised it was Elisa.

She didn't look quite normal. She was holding an axe slashing the demon and also having red, deep eyes.
The demon's limbs were now cut off and so was it's head. Elisa just kept stabbing it's chest.
I really wanted to command her to stop, but I continued to examine the view.
Elisa then knelled on the ground, and her demon form faded away.
She kept gasping while on the ground. She didn't look so good.
I decided to enter the scene.
"Elisa..." I called.
She slowly looked at me, but then resumed looking down.
"Why did you keep slashing the demon." I questioned.
"I... *gasp*... I..."
It was like her lungs weren't working.
"Is it because you wanted to try and control your demon powers?"
Those words didn't come from my mouth...
I turned around. Undead and the rest stood there.
"That's what you were trying to do all night, right?"
Elisa's reaction seemed slow and stiff. Her body expressions seemed to be showing that she didn't want to show the truth.
"Elisa, you cannot control the darkness inside of you... it controls you. You cannot change that unless you end the leader of the darkness, killing the corruption inside of you." Undead explained.
Elisa looked up. She seemed quite interested in that explanation.
"You mean... this demon power... can end if I... end Demon?" She asked.
"Well from the looks of it, yeah." Kry said.
Elisa let out a huge sigh and just sat on the ground.
"Perhaps this is a good time to search for Demon." Agent S pointed out.
"Sandy, do you remember where the fortress was?" Blab asked.
I nodded and prepared to release something inside of me.

Elisa's Perspective:
Sandy spread his legs out and concentrated.
Then, 2 demon wings spat out of his back.
"Woah. I never knew you had wings." Twage gasped.
"Just follow my lead." He said.
She jumped into the sky and flapped his wings.
And in a flash, he glided forward, leaping through the air.
We ran forward, trying to remember where Sandy went.
He was already out of our sight. He probably tried to show off his speed.
"I never knew dogs can go THAT fast!" Twage commented with amazement.
After running for so long, we started to worry that we've lost the direction of Sandy.
"Why did he have to go so fast..." Agent S sighed.
"How are we supposed to know." Kry hissed.
"Perhaps his demon powers are a bit 'too' powerful." Twage commented.
Then in a heart beat, Sandy appeared in front of us.
"Your too slow! Come on, you have legs you know." Sandy joked.
"Too slow? Excuse me but your too fast!" Agent S complained.
"Eh. Not my fault. I already found the fortress but since you were all too slow, I had to come back and find you all." He explained.
His demon wings then entered his back.
"Fine. I'll walk this time, but you better not be slow again." He said seriously.
We followed him towards the fortress that stood tall among the trees.

We hid behind the trees while Kry thought of a plan.
"Okay, I've got a plan about how to defeat all these demons near the gate. I know it may not seem like a lot, but we're not going to risk loosing another member." Kry said.
"Well apparently we already lost another member Kry." Sandy said.
"What do you mean? We're all here! Elisa, Agent S, Twage, Sandy, Blab and I!" Kry shouted.
"I think your forgetting Undead." Sandy sighed.
We looked around. He WAS gone.
"Ahhhhh snap..." Kry grunted.
Suddenly, a horrifying screech echoed from the distance.
I looked around the tree, and noticed Undead, slashing all the demons with... a golden axe?
We waited until he finished killing all the demons, which only took a couple of seconds.
He marched back towards us feeling proud of his accomplishment.
But Kry didn't seem too impressed.
"What's THAT in your hand." Kry said seriously.
Undead looked at the golden axe in his hand.
"This? This is a golden axe." He explained.
"Which is the weapon of anyone who joins the darkness!" Kry shouted.
He got his sword out and held it right next to Undead's neck.
"Is this why your so powerful? Have you joined the darkness?" Kry asked angrily.
Undead seemed quite calm. In fact, he didn't seem quite impressed.
"I found this in the same pit where the light and darkness went missing. This was owned by Louise. I drained all the darkness out of it, so it cannot control me." Undead explained.
Kry still wanted answers.
"Isn't Louise alive? If she is she'd probably have the golden axe with her." Kry said.
"She has a new golden axe." Undead said.
Kry put his sword back in his belt.
"A new golden axe huh? Which means it must be more powerful then her previous one." Kry said.

"Soooo can we go inside now? Pretty please?" Blab asked.
We walked forward towards the entrance as the demons dribbled more blood.
The hallway had torches in it unlike the fortress back in Hell, so we could see where we were going.
Sandy sniffed the air, trying to pick up any signs of life.
"Guys... I've got good news that may give you all joy." Sandy said.
We stopped and turned towards him.
"What it is?" Blab asked.
"This smell... I remember this smell. It belongs to someone that I knew in the past. Yes... I remember."
"...This is the smell of Louise. Which means she is in this building, alive." He added.
"ALIVE? Arg, Demon must've captured her! If we find her, she can end the darkness and end this chaos!" Kry gasped.
With that news, we ran forward, desperate to find Louise.
The hallway started to expand, which lead to a room with a black throne at the back.
And there it was, Demon, sitting on the throne holding it's rod with the red gem on it.
"Welcome, ladies and gentlemen to my fortress. Ahhhh Undead. Your looking extra fancy today." Demon giggled.
Undead just let out a small breath, not seeming amused.
"Where is Louise? We know she is here." Kry questioned.
"I cannot answer that." Demon answered.
"TELL ME!" Kry shouted.
Demon didn't answer.
Kry looked desperate for answers, so he charged forward with the sword in his hands.
"Kry! Don't-"
The red gem on Demon's rod let out a red lightning, zapping him and throwing him towards the wall.
He let out a small shout of pain. He landed on the ground, still breathing.
"I won't tell you where Louise is." Demon said.

With those words, Twage, Agent S, Blab and Sandy charged forward even though Blab didn't have any sort of weapon.
I was about to join them, until Undead held out his arm, blocking my direction.
Demon just held out it's rod, and red lightning zapped all of them, making them fall to the ground, breathing but shaking.
"Elisa, get back." Undead commanded.
I took a couple steps back, towards the hall way.
Undead spawned his golden axe.
Demon threw his rod away and clawed it's hand.
A black axe, spawned in it's hand.
The black axe shined from the light from the torches.
'See Elisa. If you join Demon, you'll get an axe like that. It is known to be only given to those who fully give their soul to the darkness.' I heard Captain Jack explain in my head.
'I'm not going to join the darkness just for a pretty weapon.' I hissed in my mind.
'We'll see... we'll see...' Captain Jack giggled.
Undead leaped forward, about to slash Demon's head.
Demon swiftly put it's axe in front, blocking the attack.
Undead moved back and tried to continually slash Demon.
But Demon's moves were so fast, that all the attacks were blocked by the axe.
Then when their axe clashed, Undead moved forward, trying to lean the black axe towards Demon.
But Demon also moved forward, and it's strength seemed more powerful then Undead.
It lead to Undead jumping back. He threw the axe, straight at Demon.
Demon just slashed it's axe at the golden axe, making it fall onto the ground.
Demon picked up the axe, and now it had two axes.
"I remember this axe..." Demon smiled.
Undead had no weapons. I felt fear crawl up my spine.
Undead moved backwards, looking defeated and afraid.
Demon threw the golden axe with such force, only letting a split second to dodge.
The handle of the axe whacked Undead, making him fall.
He shuffled back and tried to throw some pebbles at Demon, but that didn't affect Demon at all.
Demon grabbed his neck and held him high.

Demon then held it's black axe tightly, preparing to finally kill Undead.
Rage built up my body. I felt my heart race.
A golden axe spawned in my hand.
I aimed for Demon's arm that seemed perfect to slice.
But Demon seemed to be paying attention, as it also blocked my attack by holding the axe in front of it's arm.
Demon threw Undead towards the wall, making him too weak and hurt to fight.
I realised that the hoodie on Demon's face was slowing fall off it's head, back onto its back.
If I push Demon back with enough force, the hoodie would fall back revealing the identity of Demon once and for all.
So I pushed forward, trying to make Demon walk back.
Demon took a step back, but started to lean forward.
I was starting to lean back, soon I'll be on the ground, admitting defeat.
But I put my foot forward, used all my energy and leaped forward, making Demon fall.
Demon crashed into the wall, and the hoodie fell.
Everyone started to get up and look at Demon's face.
"I believe there's no point hiding it now." Demon said.
Demon took off the robe, revealing the clothes under the robe.
I examined the face clearly...

"N...No..." I gasped.
I took a couple steps back.
"It's not true... it's not possible!" I screamed.
I pushed my back to the wall.
The face, the clothes. It matched someone perfectly... someone that shouldn't be Demon.
Everyone started to realise who Demon was too.
"N-NO NOOOOOO! HOW COULD THIS BE!" Kry screamed.
Twage fainted, while Agent S screamed... like a girl. Blab was sobbing, Undead looked down in disappointment and Sandy breathed heavily, full of shock.
All this time... I should've known. The disappearance, the fake grave.
"I... I trusted you." Undead sighed.
I fell on my knees. The atmosphere was dark and stiff.
"So you all know who I really am." It sighed.
"Yes..." I said.
"I know your name... I know exactly who you are...

Your Louise." I said.

To Be Continued...
Sooo... yeah. Quite shocking, am I right? So welcome back to me!
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I love your chapter Louise. You never cease to amaze me! And if you ever wonna talk just let me know!

Elfon · Apr 10, 2016

NO!!! I need more!!
Honestly though, I love your story so much! Your episodes are just so amazing, you make me determined to make my own. I can't wait for the 10 story no srsly I can't. So please Senpai, make you next story asap!

TheUndeadBrave · Apr 11, 2016

This story was awesome!

mochi · Apr 12, 2016

Amazing chapter, sorry for such a late response! My friend was over when you posted this, so I couldn't read it then.

blamecoopa · Apr 19, 2016

Nice! I was looking around and found this! It's good to know I'm not the only Minecrafty Writer.
Good job, though. 9 stories? You must write a lot. It might sound crazy, but have you thought about publishing?

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