[9th Story] The Rise Of The Devil

I... i... am dead :(
Why ;-; nvm.
It can happen.
Great chapter anyway

 

@LouiseXminerX Nice!

 

Nice plottwist. I get captured by some people, and I have some important information about the world etc. etc. If I say too many things it will be harmfull for the others, and for the world... (Because, just saying, I know how to make a nuclear bomb...) (Mwuhahahahaha) (Lol) (I'll stop.) (Oke, one last time!) (Kidding.) (Oh yeah, Jacky is one of the persons torturing me.)

 

Damn, Louise. Back at it again with the plot twists!
Great chapter. :)

 

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Awesome chapter!! Can't wait for the next!

 

Thanks so much for all the support! I appreciate it so much ^.^

Characters With Major Roles:
@Elfon (Elisa)
@Kryokin (Kry)
Characters With Minor Roles:
@TwageTomato (Twage)
@Sven007 (Agent S)
@BlabDaFish (Blab)
@SandyTheDog (Sandy)
Characters Mentioned:
@CaptainJackValdy
New Character:
@TheUndeadBrave
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Chapter 17 - The Light
I heard many legends about this guy, how he's been with the light for all of it's journeys.
"N-No. You are not Undead. You got KILLED by the light!" Twage shouted.
"Killed? Wait, the light tried to KILL Undead?" Blab gasped.
"Well the corruption of the darkness in the light made her kill Undead. But how are you alive?" Agent S questioned.
"Demon resurrected me."
"How is that POSSIBLE?" Kry gasped.
This was very confusing, it was just tying my mind in knots.
"Demon used it's darkness to resurrect me, but it tortured me and demanded me for information about who the light is. Yes, I do know who the light is."
Everyone's mouth was wide open, including mine. After days and days of finding who the light is, we have someone who know's exact;y who it is.
"Please, tell us who it is!" Kry gasped, looking the most desperate.
"If you go to where Neo used to be, I'll show you where the paper is hidden." He explained.
"Only one question... how do we get out of Hell first?" Sandy questioned.
"Allow me."
He turned around and held his hand out.
A purple clock spawned right in front of his finger.
He pressed the middle of it, and then a purple portal with symbols around it spawned.
"This will lead you straight to Neo." He explained.
However, no one volunteered to go inside.

With no one saying anything, Undead just jumped straight inside, making him vanish.
Kry then went inside, and so the rest of us hopped in, except for Sandy and I.
Sandy looked at me. I felt worried.
"Are you going to go in?" He questioned.
"Yeah... just a minute." I said.
I turned around and took one more view of Hell.

With that horrifying view in my way, I quickly hopped in the portal.
I was spiraling through a vortex of purple textures, which would keep leading me to infinite spaces.
But finally, a bright list faded in right at the end of the vortex.
And when I entered it, I was immediately spawned in Neo.
Sweat dribbled down my face as I kept gasping for air.
My hands were on the ground as I stared at the grass.
"Are we here... are we away from Hell?" I questioned softly.
"Well if you open your eyes, we are." Twage said.
I got up and took a moment to examine the view.
We were back to the surface. It was good to see the green trees and grass again.
Sandy then hopped out of the portal, and then the portal vanished.
"We're here." Undead said.
Neo still had burnt down buildings with bones scattered around. Everything was burnt and destroyed.
Undead walked forward without saying a word. We followed him and so we arrived at the graveyard.
Captain Jack's body was still in the Light's grave.
"Sandy, dig here." Undead pointed. His finger pointed straight next to the grave.
"Okay..." Sandy responded.
He dug his claws in the dirt then pushing it behind him. He repeated the process until he found something.
"I found some kind of grey chest!" He called.
Agent S grabbed the chest out. He rubbed the dirt off and opened the chest.
The paper was inside the box.

"Who's volunteers to read the paper?" Undead asks.
Everyone was too nervous to read the paper, except me.
"I volunteer..." I said nervously even though I tried to stay brave.
"Excellent. Hold the paper and gently open it and see who's name is in it." Undead instructed.
I walked slowly towards the chest on the ground with the paper folded inside.
I slowly pulled the paper out and laid it in the palms of my hands.
Everyone held their breath. I took one giant breath and slowly lifted the paper.
I saw the first letter, then the next... oh my gosh.
I dropped the paper, feeling stiff and shocked like I've seen a ghost.
I took a couple of steps back away from the paper that laid next to the chest.
"The results are shocking, I know. Would you like to tell who's name is in it?" Undead asked.
"But... it's impossible for... this person to be the Light..." I gasped.
"Elisa, please, just SAY IT!" Kry shouted.
I walked towards the paper again and looked at it one more time to make sure I wasn't imagining things.
But the name was clear.

"I'm the light..." I answered.
"No... you must be making up things." Twage said.
I shook my head.
"It's true... my name is on this paper." I added.
Kry grabbed the paper out of my hand and looked at it.
"This can't be... but..." Kry gasped while looking for the appropriate words.
"Your the darkness as well! You can't be both!" Kry shouted, trying to make this paper false.
"Kry. I've trained the light for many, many years. And I knew she had some darkness inside of her. It is possible for someone to be the light and darkness." Undead said.
"Wait, you've trained the light?" Sandy questioned.
"I've been with the light on all it's journeys. I've taught her many things. I was pretty much the master of her." He explained.
"But... I just don't understand how YOU can be the light. You act like the darkness in so many ways, but I haven't really seen a trait of you that is the light." Blab said.
"Many traits of her is the light. But none of you can see it since you compare her to the previous light. All lights are different." Undead said.
"That is true..." Agent S said, looking down.
"So... since your pretty much now the leader..." Sandy paused.
"... where shall you lead us?" He continued.
That was a good question and fact. Since I'm the light, they'll have to obey me.
"We... umm." My mind was blank. What DO we do now?
But there was something that we need to accomplish that is needed.
"We find out who Demon is."
"But that's impossible! Have you seen it's dark powers? We cannot go there unprepared!" Agent S said.
"Then I shall train you all." Undead suggested.

After hours of training, I felt like we didn't make any progress. It just made us exhausted.
"Undead... can we.... have a break..." Twage questioned while out of breath.
"If you want to defeat the lord of all darkness, then we must continue to train for another hour." Undead commanded.
The diamond crisp moon shined brightly in the sky. The moon seemed 10 times bigger then the moon back on earth, making it glow the planet a bit.
Undead stared at me for a couple of seconds, then narrowing his eyebrows.
I seemed bemused by this expression. Am I supposed to keep training? But I felt like this training is just making us feel weaker.
"DEMONS!" Blab screamed.
I turned my head and did noticed a couple of demons.
I was about to get my sword, but before I did, something controlled.
Instead of using a sword as my weapon, I used a golden axe.
My body stopped listening to my commands. I was only able to see and hear what I was doing.
I charged forward and sliced a demon's head off, making dark blood spit all over the place.
Then I charged at the next demon, and chopped it's legs off.
The view was painful and horrifying. I was then stabbing the demon right in the chest.
I turned towards Undead. Oh no...
And so, I charged forward towards him too.
I got my golden axe out. Undead didn't move a muscle and just stared at me, looking bored.
I was about to leap forward, until he held his hand out, and took a step forward.
He then flipped his hand around and made his hand clawed.
Then I froze into place. What did he DO to me?
Then my body just fell to the ground, and then I was able to control myself again.
I was no longer holding my golden axe. How did he do that?
"Your demon powers is growing stronger. You must control them otherwise you may end darkness and lightness.
But I still felt speechless from how he controlled my rage.
"B-But before... how did you..."
"I learned this move right after the previous light went messing. It can make anything that's transformed back to it's original form. But it makes my energy a lot weaker, making me not able to fight. So we shall rest, and in the morning we go to where Demon is." He explained.
"Wow! Your magic is like, WAY better then mine!" Twage cheered.

"Undead... how have you grown so strong with powers that I've never seen before. No offense, but the last time I saw you you were a lot weaker then today." Kry questioned.
"When I escaped the Demon's torture, I trained extra hard to prevent anymore harm from Demon and it's servants. Instead of being the weak Undead in the past, I've now become stronger to assist the light and it's helpers." Undead explained.
"Well... we shall rest now. In the morning I'll try and smell anything that may lead to Demon." Sandy said.
We laid on the floor. Everyone fell to sleep in less then 5 minutes, but I couldn't close my eyes for 10 seconds.
Every time I'd try to sleep, I'd see Captain Jack, giggling as he smoked his cigar.
I knew I couldn't continue being a slave for the darkness. I stood up and headed towards the forest without letting the others know.
I stay in the forest all night without a single minute of rest. I had to prepare for the wrath of Demon.
To Be Continued...
Another plot twist ladies and gentlemen! But in the next chapter will leave you speechless with one more plot twist, which is the true identity of Demon, the enemy hidden in shadows. The next chapter will be out in 3 or 4 days, so be prepared!
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Great Chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

 

I'm the light and the dark? dayuuum.... but anyways brilliant chapter, Louise! I love the pictures you added, they look cool! I can't wait to read more!!!

 

Awesome chapter! c:

 

Awesome chapter!

 

Really sorry for not posting in a while. Life is going down hill fast for me due to loosing many friends for unknown reasons, sleeping in a room full of bugs, crying everyday and of course just being depressed. Apologizes for the depressing post, but I just wanted to let you guys know that I'm having a hard time atm.
But anyway enough with the sad stuff, the identity of Demon has been unleashed and will shock you all. Read this whole chapter to uncover the long, forbidden truth.

Characters With Major Roles:
@Elfon (Elisa)
@Kryokin (Kry)
@SandyTheDog (Sandy)
@TheUndeadBrave (Undead)
Characters With Minor Roles:
@TwageTomato (Twage)
@Sven007 (Agent S)
@BlabDaFish (Blab)
@CaptainJackValdy (Captain Jack)
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Chapter 18 - Behind The Shadows
Sandy's Perspective:
I was awoken by screams of worry.
I blinked and stretched, ignoring the panic around me.
"We cannot loose another Light! Arg!"
My eyes flicked opened due to those words.
"Elisa is GONE?" I gasped.
"Oh yeah. Mornin' Sandy! And yeah... Elisa is missing." Twage said.
I looked around for any evidence of where Elisa has gone.
Only green textures stood in my view.
"Was a single person awake last night?" I questioned.
Everyone just shook their heads or looked down.
"Well I did wake up for like a couple of seconds. I heard footsteps, but then I fell right back to sleep." Blab answered.
"So either someone took her away or she ran away herself for an unknown reason." Agent S said.
"Sandy. Sense the air. It's possible to pick up Elisa's smell." Undead suggested.
I understood the command and sniffed the air, trying to sniff every detail of the area we were standing in.
No smell seemed to be like Elisa's. Where could she be?
I sniffed one more time, and noticed some kind of 'sweat' smell...
I followed where the smell was coming from.
I heard a grunt. I jumped right behind a tree, hiding from danger.
I poked my head around the tree to see who's there.
Someone kept stabbing a demon even though it was clearly dead.
Black liquid squirted all over the place.
This was chaotic... is this person crazy?
Then I realised it was Elisa.

She didn't look quite normal. She was holding an axe slashing the demon and also having red, deep eyes.
The demon's limbs were now cut off and so was it's head. Elisa just kept stabbing it's chest.
I really wanted to command her to stop, but I continued to examine the view.
Elisa then knelled on the ground, and her demon form faded away.
She kept gasping while on the ground. She didn't look so good.
I decided to enter the scene.
"Elisa..." I called.
She slowly looked at me, but then resumed looking down.
"Why did you keep slashing the demon." I questioned.
"I... *gasp*... I..."
It was like her lungs weren't working.
"Is it because you wanted to try and control your demon powers?"
Those words didn't come from my mouth...
I turned around. Undead and the rest stood there.
"That's what you were trying to do all night, right?"
Elisa's reaction seemed slow and stiff. Her body expressions seemed to be showing that she didn't want to show the truth.
"Elisa, you cannot control the darkness inside of you... it controls you. You cannot change that unless you end the leader of the darkness, killing the corruption inside of you." Undead explained.
Elisa looked up. She seemed quite interested in that explanation.
"You mean... this demon power... can end if I... end Demon?" She asked.
"Well from the looks of it, yeah." Kry said.
Elisa let out a huge sigh and just sat on the ground.
"Perhaps this is a good time to search for Demon." Agent S pointed out.
"Sandy, do you remember where the fortress was?" Blab asked.
I nodded and prepared to release something inside of me.

Elisa's Perspective:
Sandy spread his legs out and concentrated.
Then, 2 demon wings spat out of his back.
"Woah. I never knew you had wings." Twage gasped.
"Just follow my lead." He said.
She jumped into the sky and flapped his wings.
And in a flash, he glided forward, leaping through the air.
We ran forward, trying to remember where Sandy went.
He was already out of our sight. He probably tried to show off his speed.
"I never knew dogs can go THAT fast!" Twage commented with amazement.
After running for so long, we started to worry that we've lost the direction of Sandy.
"Why did he have to go so fast..." Agent S sighed.
"How are we supposed to know." Kry hissed.
"Perhaps his demon powers are a bit 'too' powerful." Twage commented.
Then in a heart beat, Sandy appeared in front of us.
"Your too slow! Come on, you have legs you know." Sandy joked.
"Too slow? Excuse me but your too fast!" Agent S complained.
"Eh. Not my fault. I already found the fortress but since you were all too slow, I had to come back and find you all." He explained.
His demon wings then entered his back.
"Fine. I'll walk this time, but you better not be slow again." He said seriously.
We followed him towards the fortress that stood tall among the trees.

We hid behind the trees while Kry thought of a plan.
"Okay, I've got a plan about how to defeat all these demons near the gate. I know it may not seem like a lot, but we're not going to risk loosing another member." Kry said.
"Well apparently we already lost another member Kry." Sandy said.
"What do you mean? We're all here! Elisa, Agent S, Twage, Sandy, Blab and I!" Kry shouted.
"I think your forgetting Undead." Sandy sighed.
We looked around. He WAS gone.
"Ahhhhh snap..." Kry grunted.
Suddenly, a horrifying screech echoed from the distance.
I looked around the tree, and noticed Undead, slashing all the demons with... a golden axe?
We waited until he finished killing all the demons, which only took a couple of seconds.
He marched back towards us feeling proud of his accomplishment.
But Kry didn't seem too impressed.
"What's THAT in your hand." Kry said seriously.
Undead looked at the golden axe in his hand.
"This? This is a golden axe." He explained.
"Which is the weapon of anyone who joins the darkness!" Kry shouted.
He got his sword out and held it right next to Undead's neck.
"Is this why your so powerful? Have you joined the darkness?" Kry asked angrily.
Undead seemed quite calm. In fact, he didn't seem quite impressed.
"I found this in the same pit where the light and darkness went missing. This was owned by Louise. I drained all the darkness out of it, so it cannot control me." Undead explained.
Kry still wanted answers.
"Isn't Louise alive? If she is she'd probably have the golden axe with her." Kry said.
"She has a new golden axe." Undead said.
Kry put his sword back in his belt.
"A new golden axe huh? Which means it must be more powerful then her previous one." Kry said.

"Soooo can we go inside now? Pretty please?" Blab asked.
We walked forward towards the entrance as the demons dribbled more blood.
The hallway had torches in it unlike the fortress back in Hell, so we could see where we were going.
Sandy sniffed the air, trying to pick up any signs of life.
"Guys... I've got good news that may give you all joy." Sandy said.
We stopped and turned towards him.
"What it is?" Blab asked.
"This smell... I remember this smell. It belongs to someone that I knew in the past. Yes... I remember."
"...This is the smell of Louise. Which means she is in this building, alive." He added.
"ALIVE? Arg, Demon must've captured her! If we find her, she can end the darkness and end this chaos!" Kry gasped.
With that news, we ran forward, desperate to find Louise.
The hallway started to expand, which lead to a room with a black throne at the back.
And there it was, Demon, sitting on the throne holding it's rod with the red gem on it.
"Welcome, ladies and gentlemen to my fortress. Ahhhh Undead. Your looking extra fancy today." Demon giggled.
Undead just let out a small breath, not seeming amused.
"Where is Louise? We know she is here." Kry questioned.
"I cannot answer that." Demon answered.
"TELL ME!" Kry shouted.
Demon didn't answer.
Kry looked desperate for answers, so he charged forward with the sword in his hands.
"Kry! Don't-"
The red gem on Demon's rod let out a red lightning, zapping him and throwing him towards the wall.
He let out a small shout of pain. He landed on the ground, still breathing.
"I won't tell you where Louise is." Demon said.

With those words, Twage, Agent S, Blab and Sandy charged forward even though Blab didn't have any sort of weapon.
I was about to join them, until Undead held out his arm, blocking my direction.
Demon just held out it's rod, and red lightning zapped all of them, making them fall to the ground, breathing but shaking.
"Elisa, get back." Undead commanded.
I took a couple steps back, towards the hall way.
Undead spawned his golden axe.
Demon threw his rod away and clawed it's hand.
A black axe, spawned in it's hand.
The black axe shined from the light from the torches.
'See Elisa. If you join Demon, you'll get an axe like that. It is known to be only given to those who fully give their soul to the darkness.' I heard Captain Jack explain in my head.
'I'm not going to join the darkness just for a pretty weapon.' I hissed in my mind.
'We'll see... we'll see...' Captain Jack giggled.
Undead leaped forward, about to slash Demon's head.
Demon swiftly put it's axe in front, blocking the attack.
Undead moved back and tried to continually slash Demon.
But Demon's moves were so fast, that all the attacks were blocked by the axe.
Then when their axe clashed, Undead moved forward, trying to lean the black axe towards Demon.
But Demon also moved forward, and it's strength seemed more powerful then Undead.
It lead to Undead jumping back. He threw the axe, straight at Demon.
Demon just slashed it's axe at the golden axe, making it fall onto the ground.
Demon picked up the axe, and now it had two axes.
"I remember this axe..." Demon smiled.
Undead had no weapons. I felt fear crawl up my spine.
Undead moved backwards, looking defeated and afraid.
Demon threw the golden axe with such force, only letting a split second to dodge.
The handle of the axe whacked Undead, making him fall.
He shuffled back and tried to throw some pebbles at Demon, but that didn't affect Demon at all.
Demon grabbed his neck and held him high.

Demon then held it's black axe tightly, preparing to finally kill Undead.
Rage built up my body. I felt my heart race.
A golden axe spawned in my hand.
I aimed for Demon's arm that seemed perfect to slice.
But Demon seemed to be paying attention, as it also blocked my attack by holding the axe in front of it's arm.
Demon threw Undead towards the wall, making him too weak and hurt to fight.
I realised that the hoodie on Demon's face was slowing fall off it's head, back onto its back.
If I push Demon back with enough force, the hoodie would fall back revealing the identity of Demon once and for all.
So I pushed forward, trying to make Demon walk back.
Demon took a step back, but started to lean forward.
I was starting to lean back, soon I'll be on the ground, admitting defeat.
But I put my foot forward, used all my energy and leaped forward, making Demon fall.
Demon crashed into the wall, and the hoodie fell.
Everyone started to get up and look at Demon's face.
"I believe there's no point hiding it now." Demon said.
Demon took off the robe, revealing the clothes under the robe.
I examined the face clearly...

"N...No..." I gasped.
I took a couple steps back.
"It's not true... it's not possible!" I screamed.
I pushed my back to the wall.
The face, the clothes. It matched someone perfectly... someone that shouldn't be Demon.
Everyone started to realise who Demon was too.
"N-NO NOOOOOO! HOW COULD THIS BE!" Kry screamed.
Twage fainted, while Agent S screamed... like a girl. Blab was sobbing, Undead looked down in disappointment and Sandy breathed heavily, full of shock.
All this time... I should've known. The disappearance, the fake grave.
"I... I trusted you." Undead sighed.
I fell on my knees. The atmosphere was dark and stiff.
"So you all know who I really am." It sighed.
"Yes..." I said.
"I know your name... I know exactly who you are...


Your Louise." I said.

To Be Continued...
Sooo... yeah. Quite shocking, am I right? So welcome back to me!
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Holy crap.
A m a z i n g chapter!
I fucking knew it
Also, I'm really sorry to hear that you're so depressed. Hopefully things will get better soon.

 

Oh god, I didn't know you were so depressed. Hope your life will get better eventually, and your friends will come back. You can take as much time as you want to post your chapter. You got more things to take care of than making us happy by making those stories and we can understand that.

As for the chapter, amazing as always.

 

Another amazing chapter!

I hope things get better for you.

 

All of these chapters are amazing!

 

When I read the amount of support, I almost cried from joy! All of you are awesome ^.^
Things in life are getting better, but school is being a pain, but hopefully soon that gets fixed!

Also... in about a week, the final chapter will be released! Sorry if it does take a bit longer to post it, but just a little heads up that the final chapter is coming soon :D

Characters With Major Roles:
@Elfon (Elisa)
@TheUndeadBrave (Undead)
Characters With Minor Roles:
@SandyTheDog (Sandy)
@TwageTomato (Twage)
@Sven007 (Agent S)
@BlabDaFish (Blab)
@CaptainJackValdy (Captain Jack)
And @LouiseXminerX Returns!!!
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Chapter 19 - Louise The Demon
"That's right... I'm Louise, the true darkness!" She laughed.
"You died! You fell off the cliff with Captain Jack! Your not alive!" Kry shouting, bursting his voice.
"Let me explain, Kry. Captain Jack's rod hit the ground first. The jewel broke and inserted it's darkness inside of me. Now I am powerful, no longer Light! I will follow Captain Jack's steps to victory!" Louise cheered.
"Why did you join the DARKNESS? You were born to be the Light! Your darkness is killing us, and killing the Light!" Agent S shouted while pointed at me.
"The Darkness called to me... I answered it and did it's bidding. I shall follow the Darkness that is now dead because of you." She said.
"I trained you to be the Light... and you became the opposite..." Undead muttered.
"Ah, Sandy. Looks like you made some new friends... heh heh heh..." Louise giggled.
"I loved you Louise! Why did you leave me!" Sandy cried.
Everyone's mood was shocked and stiff. The only one that seemed to be having a good time, stinging our emotions was Louise.
'Don't you see? I've already won. It doesn't matter if I'm dead. The most powerful human is NOW my slave!' I heard Captain Jack laugh crazily in my mind.
"We... we have to move." Blab whispered near me.
I took a couple of steps back towards the hall, trying to let the darkness engulf me.
But as soon as I turned around to run from this madness, the gate shut. We were trapped.
"Just because I let you see my identity doesn't mean I'll let you LIVE!" Louise shouted.
She stabbed the rod in the ground. The red jewel on the rod started to sparkle, and then it zapped the ground with red, bright lightning.
Demons then started to crawl out of the ground in the same spots the lightning zapped.

"Tomorrow I'm going to release 1000s of demons on this planet, and once your wiped out, my home, known as Hell will corrupt the whole planet, making not only the planet Hell, but also HEAVEN!" Louise laughed loudly to make her plan loud and clear to create fear.
The demons crawled closer.
"I will teach you what will happen if you become the DARKNESS!" Undead cried.
He got out a golden axe and charged straight at a demon.
He stabbed it, right in the chest and kept stabbing it as it slowly released black blood while it's body laid on the ground.
Undead wouldn't stop, even when we tried to help.
All he kept doing was slash a demon 10 times, and continue. We tried to tell him to stop and take a rest, but he didn't listen.
I noticed something, corrupting him... oh no...
Right in the corner of his eye showed a deep, red fade, slowly crawling across his eyes.
He must have demon blood too, which explains the golden axe.
"Undead, the golden axe is corrupting you! You need to STOP!" I shouted.
"This is what Louise gets for betraying me!" He screamed.
More demons crawled out of the ground, which spread more rage across him.
If he doesn't stop, he may then try to kill us.
Sandy noticed the demon blood corrupting him too.
Louise then walked towards the door, about to leave us with a devil, about to murder us.
Sandy charged forward, about to bite Louise back into the room.
But she turned around immediately and grabbed Sandy's collar.
She held Sandy's collar up high, letting Sandy hang.
"So you don't want me to leave you, huh? Well let's first... insert some more demon blood in you, shall we?" Louise smiled, as Sandy started to choke.
"Let go off him!" Twage shouted.
He quickly charged up a fireball, and shot it right at Louise.
But Louise quickly closed the iron door, shutting it tight and locking it.
The fire just splashed into the door, and then vanished.

One last demon was killed. Undead breathed heavily.
"Undead... could you please calm down and just-"
"Heh ha ha HA! I can feel the darkness in me! I can hear Captain Jack calling to me! HA HA!" Undead laughed crazily.
"Arg! Undead, you need to dang calm down! If you keep going crazy, YOU'LL probably be the darkness." Kry shouted.
"I am the darkness! This weapon shall be... my guidance! Now I can tell your all... against the darkness..." Undead paused.
"...Which means I shall do what Captain Jack commands me to do, which is to KILL you all!" He added.
"Your insane Undead!" Twage hissed.
"It's not him that's insane, the darkness inside of him is..." Agent S explained.
Blab quickly ran in the corner and shivered.
"Blab, why are you afraid?" I asked to try and build her confidence.
"Undead looks scaaary!" She sobbed.
"Oh come on. He doesn't look that-"
A golden axe stabbed the wall that was right next to me.
I turned around, and Undead stood there with his eyes, covered in blood.
Blab screamed and buried her head in her arms.
"Don't HURT HER!" I screamed.
The Golden Axe spawned in my hand. I whacked Undead's arm, but not with a massive amount of force so I don't cut his arm off.
His arm did bleed, but it wasn't a serious injury.
He took a step back and held his arm. I grabbed his golden axe and started to walk forward.
I placed the 2 axes on both of his shoulders, showing that he has to surrender now.
He stared at me, then narrowed his eye brows.
I noticed Twage, forming a light, blue flame. So I kept staring at Undead to grab his attention.
As soon as Twage shot the flame, Undead turned his head and grabbed the flame in his bare hand.
I was shocked... how can he grab a SPELL?
And before I could do anything, he threw the spell right at my face.

I took a couple of steps back. My vision started to go blurry.
My eye lids felt heavy. I tried to keep them open for as long as possible, but their weight increased every second.
I was on my knees, my muscles became droopy.
I saw Undead, walk forward with the two axes.
I thought this would be the end, until Kry ran behind him.
But my vision faded away before I could see if Kry has saved me, or not.
Another meeting with Captain Jack begun.
"It was my plan to make Louise fall with me, because I knew she couldn't remove the darkness inside of her unless death came." Captain Jack smiled and took another quick smoke from his cigar.
"I just can't believe... that she's the enemy..." I sighed.
"Anything can happen, hun." He winked.
I wondered if that was true; that anything CAN happen.
"I guess I won't need you anymore since Louise is under my command. So yeah, expect for some pain soon." Captain Jack giggled as he threw his cigar away.
Everything then withered away, and my view came back.
My view was blurry and still. I could see faces, but examining the details were difficult.
I blinked a couple of times, and my view then started to focus.
Blab's face was in front of me, and she smiled.
"Wow Elisa, thanks for saving me before. Don't worry, Kry knocked Undead out. Not sure when he'll wake up though..." Blab explained.
I stood up and examined the room.
"Wh-Where's Sandy?" I gasped.
"Louise took him... I heard that she'll add some more demon blood in him, which means he may not be able to control himself soon." Twage explained while looking scared.
I started to shiver. Not only Sandy is missing and Louise is our new enemy, but we're also trapped in here.
"Guys, Undead is waking up. Hopefully he's no longer a demon again..." Kry said.
Undead's eyes started to twitch. We waited to see if he was still a demon.
His eyes open, and they were back to normal.
Twage sighed. Kry helped Undead get up.
"Arg... the darkness inside of me is corrupting my body." Undead groaned.
He then noticed me, and his expression lightened.
He walked towards me. I knew that he'd talk to me how my demon blood is getting uncontrollable.
"Elisa... you were able to control your demon form quite welly. You didn't kill and you were calm. Perhaps the darkness inside of you is withering away."
"Say what?" I gasped.
Is the light inside of me corrupting the darkness? I didn't remember that I was able to control myself while I was in that demon form.

"Well, that certainly good news... but anyway enough about that. You almost KILLED us Undead!" Kry shouted.
"Arg, here we go again..." Blab groaned.
"It wasn't me that wanted to kill you-"
"Oh, I know your going to say 'the darkness inside of me instead tried to kill you.' But if Elisa can control her darkness, why can't YOU!" Kry interrupted what Undead had to say.
"Because she is the light. I'm just an assistant." Undead answered.
"Hmm, and what about your golden axe? Ever since you picked it up, it's been corrupting you! If you didn't pick it up, Sandy wouldn't have been taken away and Louise wouldn't have escaped, you stupid idiot." Kry argued.
"I picked up the golden axe to prevent any of you to pick it up. I also picked it up to study it and see if there was a way to remove the darkness inside of the axe." He explained.
"Okay, that is a good point." Twage commented.
"Shut up Twage you rotten tomato." Kry hissed.
Twage started to sob. Agent S face palmed his head.
"How about we stop focusing on Undead and focus on getting out of here. Louise might return and kill us all!" Agent S shouted.
I looked around for an escape. No window or opening was in this room.
"Allow me." Undead insisted.
He walked towards the wall and placed something on it.
I looked closely, and it was a BOMB.
I ran towards the very back of the room. When I leaned my back on the wall, so did the rest.
And in a heart beat, dust and smoke blasted in our faces.
I was blinded as pebbles landed on my body.
When I heard movement, I opened my eyes.
The wall was crushed open with plenty of room to escape.
We rushed out and discussed a plan.

"Where do you think Louise is now?" Agent S asked us.
We all shrugged.
"Well... what was her objective?" I questioned.
"Wasn't it to spread 100s of demons on this planet and spread Hell across the land?" Twage answered.
"Gee, you aren't as dumb as I thought you were." Agent S commented.
"That's it. She must be in Hell then!" I cheered.
Everyone then started to look nervous.
"But... Elisa... we aren't quite ready to fight... 1000s of demons and Louise." Agent S said nervously.
"Well it's my mission to guide the light and their assistants... so I'll guide you to victory." Undead said.
He walked past me and stared at the spiky, mossy trees.
"This planet is dying due to the hands of Louise... it's our only hope." He sighed.
He looked down for a couple of seconds.
We stood their patiently to see what he was going to do.
He immediately looked up and placed his palm in front of him, which spawned a purple clock.
He turned the clock a bit to the right, and it then created a portal gate that seemed like a vortex.
He turned towards us and pointed to the portal.
Twage walked forward and hopped in first. Agent S then went inside.
Kry entered the portal and so did Blab.
I slowly walked forward and stood right in front of the portal.
I looked at Undead. His eyes were full of worry and stress due to the great battle that's right on the other side of this portal.
I looked back at the portal and stared at it...
Then I hopped in and prepared for the battle that maybe my last.
To Be Continued...
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Awesome episode!

 

Awesome chapter, sorry for the late response!
Wow, Blab probably had a panic attack when Elisa was unconscious. She probably has panic attacks all the time and stuff... She's probably socially awkward... She's such a nerd. Oh, wait- .3.

 

Sorry about the bump and long wait. School is beating the crap out of me >.<
Ladies and gentlemen, the time has come! This final chapter will uncover a shock and create one final beginning in a couple of weeks. Please, enjoy the final moment of Elisa's long journey. Get your pop corn, and let's begin!
Warning: This chapter contains a bit of violence.
Characters With Major Roles:
@Elfon (Elisa)
@TheUndeadBrave (Undead)
@SandyTheDog (Sandy)
@TwageTomato (Twage)
@Sven007 (Agent S)
@BlabDaFish (Blab)
@CaptainJackValdy (Captain Jack)
@LouiseXminerX (Louise)
Enjoy ^-^

Final Chapter - The Devil's Fall
I hopped out of the portal and landed on the hard, red sand. The group stood in front of me, looking around.
"So... this maybe how final moment together..." Kry sighed.
"Final moment? But if we win, we could still be together!" Blab cheered.
"When we kill Louise and end Hell, I'm going to leave and find another planet that needs my help." Kry explained.
"But this planet might still need your help when Hell has been defeated. Neo is still destroyed and we're the only humans left!" Twage argued.
"You guys take care of this planet." He said.
Kry is leaving us? This was a shame, since he's been with us since the beginning, and also with Louise for a very long time.
I noticed a great, glaring red light, spreading in the distance.
I looked closer, and 1000s of demons stood near the light, and I saw Louise, hovering over them holding her rod high up.
The rod zapped the ceiling, making the rocks and stones from above spread, letting a giant hole sink in.
"Arg, she's going to teleport them all to the surface!" Agent S shouted.
This was my indication to rush forward and stop Louise.
Leaving the others behind, I leaped forward and headed towards the demons, preparing to leave.
"Elisa, wait!" I heard Twage cry.
I stopped and turned around. The others were still near the portal. Why is only Twage coming?
He stopped in front of me, panting and breathing heavily.
"Right near the portal, I found this piece of paper. Take a look." He passed the paper.
I held the paper in front of me and read each word slowly.
This was a spell.
I understood what this spell was, and I knew this would be very useful.
"I don't know what this spell does... do you know when I should use it?" He asked.
"Use this spell when I say so." I said.
He nodded and the rest then came.
I quickly threw away the paper in the lava before the others could see what it was. I knew they wouldn't like this spell at all when Twage uses it.
"All of you stay back. I must defeat Louise myself to show that she needs me." Undead said.
"But what about us-"
"I said, stay back." Undead hissed at Blab.
Blab took a step back, looking pitched like she was going to sob.
Undead spawned a golden axe, which triggered Kry's anger.
"Undead, do you know what happened before when you spawned that golden axe? You almost killed-"
"I know what I'm doing Kry." Undead said seriously.
Kry narrowed his eyebrows and took a step back.
Undead walked forward, then started to sprint.

"He cannot defeat all these demons and also Louise himself!" Agent S cried.
"If that's what he wants, then let him." Kry hissed.
I looked at Kry, angrily. Gosh, he can be so annoying.
Undead slashed his axe at the demons in the way. He made it to the middle where Louise was above him.
"Louise! Get down here NOW!" He screamed.
Louise turned around and laughed. She hovered to the ground.
"Hello Undead. Quite a surprise to see you here." She giggled.
"How dare you try to spread Hell to the whole planet! You should be stopping this!" He shouted.
"I've changed, Undead. I've chosen my own path instead of following yours. I hate it when you controlled me, but Captain Jack accepts what I choose, which is why I'm following his path! And I can tell he wants you dead. So I shall obey his controls and end you!" Louise laughed.
"Captain Jack is USING you!" Undead shouted with a tone of anger.
"Well if you think Captain Jack shouldn't control me, then you should end me first!" She smiled.
I could tell by his face that he was full of anger... the axe is now corrupting him like last time.
"Guys, we seriously have to stop him. The axe is-"
"I said, if that's what he wants, then let him!" Kry shouted.
"But if we don't stop him, he might kill us!" I complained.
I could tell he wasn't paying attention. I sighed and just concentrated on Undead.
Undead held his axe back, then swung it towards Louise.
But a demon grabbed his axe and tried to take it from him.
He punched the demon, letting it fall and tried again to slash Louise.
But a dark axe spawned in her hand and blocked his attack.

Louise kicked him, letting him take some steps back.
She held her rod in her other hand high, and it zapped every demon.
Then they all disappeared, and I could hear the cries of the demons above me.
"They are on the surface!" Agent S screamed.
Blab started to panic.
"But if Undead kills Louise, the demons should also then be destroyed and Hell as well." Kry explained.
"Kill? He can't kill Louise! We have to cure her." I complained.
"There is no possible way to cure the darkness inside of her..." Kry sighed.
I looked back at Undead and Louise.
"Let me show you what I did to my little puppy." Louise winked.
Her rod then zapped the floor in front of her, and started to spawn something...
The legs were shown, then the body, and also the head.
It's eyes glowed red and it's claws were as sharp as a katana. His legs were slender, and his teeth was covered in blood.
"... What has she done to him..." Twage gasped.
"Behold, my ultimate, demon filled dog: Sandy The True Demon! Ha ha!" She laughed.
Sandy did not look good at all...
I could tell he was starving due to him looking so thin.
"Hmmph. I'll kill him as well then." Undead said.
"Noooo! He can't kill little Sandy too! It's obvious that he's been tortured and been inserted with WAY too much demon blood to overflow his mind!" Blab cried.
"I've had enough of this!" Agent S hissed.

He charged forward towards Undead.
"Agent S, no!" I cried.
I chased after him, and so the others also followed me.
I tried to grab Agent S's arm, but he was always one step ahead of me.
Suddenly, a giant orb surrounded his. I pounded on the walls, but a giant zap of electricity bounced around inside of me, stabbing all my organs.
I leaped back and laid on the ground, trying to breathe.
"Who did this?!" Kry shouted.
"I said, let me end Sandy and Louise!" Undead shouted.
"Undead, YOU did this?" Twage gasped.
"I only want myself to end them." Undead sighed.
Sandy charged at us and bit the walls of the orb.
The electricity did not affect him at all, which meant that he could create a hole in the orb, letting him enter and kill us all.
Twage knew that Sandy could enter here too. He charged up a spell, but that wasn't a good idea.
"TWAGE, DON'T-"
But it was too late. A red orb escaped his hands, heading towards the wall.
But it bounced off the wall and bounced all around inside, about to hit someone.
And it hit Kry.
He fell on the ground, unconscious.
"God dammit..." Twage said.

Undead leaped forward and try to slash Louise, but she held her black axe in front of her.
She quickly slipped her axe away and slashed Undead's face.
Black blood escaped his cheek...
"Black blood... wait that means... the demon blood has corrupted his whole body!" Agent S gasped.
Not only was Undead now a demon, but there as also a mad dog, about to chew us to bits in seconds.
The crack grew bigger as Sandy kept scratched the wall.
Then a small hole cracked and he entered the orb, licking his lips...
The golden axe spawned in my hands, and I smashed the wall to bits.
The walls crashed onto the floor, then vanished.
It startled Sandy while making him bemused. Twage kicked him away so we can quickly charge at Louise.
But Louise just slashed them all in one swing, making them all fall, except for me.
"Sandy, look what we have here! A big, juicy meal just for you, standing right in front of your face." Louise giggled.
Sandy looked at me and grinned.
He leaped forward and bit my arm. His teeth dug deeply into my flesh.
The stabbing pain made me scream. I flicked my arm, making him jump back.
Red jump dripped onto the floor, creating a small puddle.
Sandy took a couple steps forward, licking his lips...
But he wasn't focusing on me.

He was focusing on the puddle of blood... of course.
He licked the blood, and the red glow in his eyes slowly faded.
If he drinks enough normal blood, it would be enough to make him go back to normal!
So, I slowly make a huge cut in my leg, letting more blood ooze out.
The blood added to the puddle.
He continued to drink. The fade in his eyes started to fade away.
But before he could continue to drink, Louise grabbed him and threw him to the ground, harming him.
"Don't drink her blood... bite her face off and stab your claws into her until she drops dead!" Louise commanded, angrily.
Sandy looked at her.
"N...No." He said.
"What did you say." Louise hissed.
"I am not going to KILL HER!" He screamed.
He leaped on Louise and stabbed his claws in her shoulder.
She slashed her axe at him, making him fall.
She held her axe up high, about to stab him.
But I blocked her attack, just in time.

Flames of fire slashed onto her arm out of no where.
Twage was awake.
He fired another fire ball, but her rod zapped the fire ball, making it drop to the floor.
With her distracted, I prepared to slash her.
But someone elses axe was in the way.
I turned my head, and Undead stood there.
"Stop getting in my WAY!" He screamed.
He pushed me back and slashed me twice, creating two giant cuts on my belly.
Agent S tried to stab him using a dagger, but Undead just punched him right in the face.
He then kicked me in the stomach, and the cuts on my belly created bonus pain.
Blab grabbed his arms, trying to stop him, but he just shoved her away and threw some kind of orb at her, making her unconscious.
My golden axe disappeared, I shuffled back.
He took a couple of steps forward and stood on me.
He smiled and aimed his axe.
Someone stood beside me and punched him right in the forehead. He fell back, unconscious.
I looked to my side, Kry stood there.
He held his hand out, offering me a lift.
I grabbed his hand and he pulled me up.
He smiled at me, and I smiled back.
"ELISA!" I heard Blab cry.
And a great, stinging pain entered my chest.
I slowly looked up, and noticed the black axe in my chest with Louise, holding it.

Kry looked shocked, and so was everyone else.
She slowly pulled the axe out of me and smiled.
I got on my knees, my view went blurry.
"Don't you dare die on me dammit! Elisa, we need you!" Kry shouted.
I was then laying on my chest.
"ELISA! DON'T GO!" Agent S cried.
Before I could end, I said one more thing.
"Twage... do the spell... NOW!" I shouted.
And everything faded to black.

Twage's Perspective:
I stood still, frozen and dead, but I knew I had to do the spell.
I didn't know what it did, but I hope Elisa knew what it does.
I held my hands out, creating a golden flame, then I fired it at Elisa.
The flame entered inside of her, I waited for anything to happen.
Then I noticed her body, evaporating.
"What are you doing?" Agent S questioned.
"I don't know... Elisa told me to do this..." I gasped.
I looked extra closely, and noticed small, golden particles hovering above her body.
Then when her full body faded away, a bunch of particles hovered above her.
"No... no!" Louise cried.
Why is Louise afraid of this spell?
The particles slowly hovered towards Louise.
"ARG, DON'T YOU DARE ENTER INSIDE OF ME!" Louise cried.
Then the particles entered her heart.
She stood still, looking dead.
The faded red in her eyes withered away...
"Wait... I know what this spell did!" I gasped.
Elisa was a genius!
"This spell turned her into light particles! And those light particles are making the darkness inside of her vanish! Marvelous!" I cheered.
"You mean that... Louise can go back to NORMAL?" Kry gasped.
I nodded while grinning proudly.
Kry hopped up and down while smiling greatly.
But Louise then laid dead, on the ground.
"Umm... is that supposed to happen?" Blab asked.

Louise's Perspective:
A sudden grasp of light, started to fade into my view.
The darkness withered to the back of my eyes.
My eyes opened and I pushed myself up.
People stood in front of me, also a dog.
I breathed heavily.
"Wha...What happened?" I gasped.
"Louise, your back!" One of them cheered
That name made me confused...
"L-Louise? Who's Louise?... Who are YOU?" I gasped.
I shuffled back.
"Ooooh no... this is bad." One of them gasped.
They turned towards the one who spoke.
"She's... she's lost her memory... which means... she cannot remember that she's the light!"
"L-Light? Wait what?" I gasped.
Everyone seemed shocked. What was going on.
"Do you remember anything?!" One of them gasped.
"All I remember is..." I paused.
"...Captain Jack." I said.
They all froze in their place.
To Be Continued...
The 10th story will be released in a couple of weeks to finish off the timeline of my stories.
The next story will show what will happen to me and the others.
Thank you all for supporting me through everything.
Please be patience for the final story.
~LouiseXminerX