Maia put on her spacesuit. Asher put on his spacesuit. They where going to reach space. They started up the rocket and waved goodbye to everyone. Peace filled the air except the noises from the soaring rocket. "It's sooo nice to get away from my little sister," Maia said. "She needs to learn NOT to talk." "I know, right?" Asher said, blushing. "It's so glad--- I meaaan, good, to get away from you-- I mean them." Maia laughed. She knew Asher had a crush on her. Though, Maia liked him, too. She actually kept it as a secret instead of blabbering shamefully. They soon saw the last of blue skies, and headed their way to Mars. ♥♥♥ As soon as close to Mars, their rocket seemed to rattle. "What's that?" Maia yelled over the loud rattling of ROCKET ANGER. "We're out of Earth's gravity," Asher said. "But something is going on..." It rattled with more fierce and anger. Maia and Asher hung on tight to the nearby poles. Maia couldn't breathe. Between alarm noises and the soaring-high wind. Asher was saying something-- he was a foot away from Maia, but she couldn't hear him. She closed her eyes, it was a blur. She heard some explodes, and dead silence. She opened her eyes... saw Mars up close, and blackness behind her. Asher was in the distance, too. But Maia knew she wouldn't make it. Her hand being controlled by warmth. She gasped slightly in fear. It was nothing of warmth. It was Asher, holding Maia's hand. "It's time we have to go separate." Maia cried slightly. "No... no..." she whispered. "Yes," Asher said. "I love you." He let go... and nothing filled the air between the movement of Asher and the slow rotation of the planets. "NO!!!" she yelled. He was gone... she didn't have the chance to tell him... She whispered... into the distance,
They went to Mars. The trip takes a year or more lol. Your realism isn't great but youre a really good writer!
Make this on Wattpad, Extend the story, The story popular. You will be Professional Author in no time. *Likes the story*
Great story, I need to learn from you, I have good language and am amazing at writing essays, occasional stories and so, but you obviously are better than I am. If you have time on the server (After maintenance), can you come to Creative 3 and peer-edit/read over some of my books? I would love you to do so. :p
I made a Wattpad account and I'm going to confirm it soon and make my story. And other stories, too. My account is Erove_111. Or it might be Erove_11. EDIT: It's Erove_11.
