Unlucky ester a fan fic

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    Once upon a time there was a girl names ester she was pritty unlucky one day she had to move witch she liked cause she hated her old school. So when she moved she liked it but on the first day of school she accdently mixed up soap and toothpaste. anyway she got to school she sat down then the teacher said pls welcome the new kid ester she walked up and every1 was cracking up she was confused. Then she relized she wet herself. Then after lesson was p.e. She was nervous cause she sucked at sports. Then a bully grabbed her and was gonna hurt her until a girl who looked emoish picked up the bully and kicked him across the room.
    Ester was so happy she thanked her she said I'm sunny now shut up before you say my names stupid. Then at p.e. It was dogeball she was teamed with. 10 kids then the bully got a ball and threw it a esters face then a tall buff kid cought the ball ester said thx but then he apologized for accdently spilling water on esters pants he felt bad


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    Omg lololololollololololol
     
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    Chapter 2

    Then at lunch after getting hit in the face by six lockers she was trying to find a table so she sat down then another kid came then they started talking his name was Bertrand so they talked for a little he was nice he then said meet me at the old abandon restrunt at 7:30 pm then they talked more about stuff then the school day ended


    End of chapter 2
     
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    Then at 7:30 ester went to the place but no 1 was there then a secret door opens so she went in the door and then she saw a secret room there was so many cool things and there even was an icecream machine then Bertrand was there and they hung out until ester had to go home
     
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    You should work on your grammar, it's really hard and uncomfortable to read.
     
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    Am I a good writer
     
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    Chapter 4


    The next day ester got to school and the bully chad and the guy ester met in dogeball Dylan where in the middle of a fight then the fight ended and Dylan said sorry if I scared you I just hate chad anyway then ester relized she had a thing for Dylan even tho Dylan already has a girl friend then she went to class
     
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    Chapter 5

    Then on the way to class ester saw a board talking about after school classes there was a acting class she thought she should try it what could go wrong then sunny came up and said everything then ester asked sunny why she was allways was so down sunny said i will tell u later on then at the end of the day ester went to tryouts every1 thought she would fail cause she never acted before but actually she did great every1 was shocked


    End of chapter 5