TF2 FANS! HERE GOES AN EPIC STORY!!!

So, Looking My First Story actually Did Poop, I Decided to Make a Shorter One And About TF2. The Characters Are The Same Who Applied On Characters Needeeed Thread. My Story Is Pretty Short, If It Would Be A Movie It Would be 20 Minutes Long. Ill Make the Intro and If You Like It, Ill Put The Rest. I don't Want The Same Thing As My First Story.
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For Applying. :) Let's Start Up With The Story!

The End Of The Most Bloody War.

Intro

How Huge Is Our World? If You are a Normal Man or Woman You Will simply Say That It's Big Enough For Everyone. If You Are an Astronaut, You Will Say That it's Bigger Than anything You Saw, But If You are One Of The MANN Co. Soldiers, You Will Answer That it isn't Big at All. What Kind of Men are They are If They Think that it's Small you Ask? Well, as I Said Before, They are MANN Co. Soldiers. If You Don't Know What Is MANN Co. well You Came In A Good Place! In fact You May Have Heard That It Doesn't Exist, Or That It Got Destroyed in 19s. Yeah, Dumb Journalists Don't Know Anything about it, about What Happened, Who They Are, And Why aren't They Visible. Well, MANN Co. is In fact a Shop. Yes! A Simple Shop! Well... It Was a Simple Shop until Mrs Mann Have made two Children. Mr Mann Was a Great Owner and Business Man! He Made Loads and Loads Of Money! In September 1898, The Poor Man Died. His Two Children, Mr Redmond And Mr Blucher, Have Both Got A Half of Mr Mann's Property. Mr. Redmond Have Made a Company Called R.E.D. Or Reliable Excavation and Demolition, And Mr Blucher Have Made a Company Named B.L.U. Or Builders League United. The Both Brothers Hated Each Other and Always Want To Get Other's Half Of Dad's property. And Finally Once, They Both Agreed To Start a Bloody War. Both Companies have Hired A Bunch Of Professionals and Killing Machines. The War Continued Till 1914 Because Of The First World War. In 1915 They moved The Both Companies in United States far From Europe. The War In USA Continued Till 1917, So Both Companies Got Arrested and The Men The Companies Hired Have got themselves In Jail. A Year After The First World War Have Stopped, Blucher And Redmond Both Escaped To Erafraw. You Probably Never Heard of This Place, It was Only discovered By The two Brothers. This Country Isn't Big at All, A Little Smaller Than Burundi (African Country). This Country Was a Complete Desert With Coldest Mountains and Forests You Ever Saw. The two Brothers Have rebuild Their Companies, i Have No Idea How They Did This Alone And Less Than 2 Years. Once They Were There, They Hired More People From Every single place Of The World. The War Continued. The War Continued Till 1956, Because a B.L.U. General, Have made a Huge Mistake.

 

Nice story =D

 

the caps...
my eyes <.<

 

Nice start ^-^
However, some letters do not need to be capitalised, so maybe you can fix that to make it easier to read :P

 

No story i guess? :/ well, if till 3 pm, there wont be at least 3 more comments, i lock.