Story about piracy

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should i make more parts?

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  1. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

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    Ok, so here im gonna show u my skillz in being an author. If you like my first chapter, ill post more, if you dont, i lock les start

    Pirates Of the Somewherian
    Chapter 1- Ship wants blood.

    It was happening in a Golf of Mexico, almost no wind, the peaceful water was not to that point peaceful after the Governement has made a deal with AU (Assassin' s Unity). Tjis was a company that only people with special permission could ask an AU member to kill someone really dangerous... pirates such as Morgan were those who were chased by the AU. AU almost have the full power on civil after those 5 bloody years... in this Golf, was a ship called Arelane, with craziest captain you ever knew... He was a multi-leveled alcoholic with really special way of thinking. That captain was called Jack Valdy. Luckily, he wasn't really interesting to the AU, but he was really interested in this powerful company. He always spies on assassins when he has an occasion. Ok, let's go back to the story. Arelane had some really cruel people on it, and looking that AU is in power, Valdys no longer attacking any of spanish ships.
    -Enough!-shouted one of the mates - we waited for 5 bloody years! Ill start up a mutiny if we don't attack a ship!
    -What you just sayed?-asked valdy aiming his pistol to the mate's head.
    -we just want to loot someone already!
    -Alright!-sayed jack because everyone were pretty mad and he was scared if the actual mutiny starts-see that ship? We attack it today!
    -Hourray!
    The ship was still pretty far, so it took atleast 2 hours for reach to it. After those 2 hours, weather came worse and, it turned into a storm! Both of the ships were thrown by waves closer to land until they finally hurt a reef... the spanish boat was ok, but Arelane exploded cuz of the ammount of gunpowder, Jack was thrown to land so hardly that he woke up only in the morning, and it was only the afternoon.

    (No if dont want more, yes if you want other chapters)
     
    Last edited: Feb 9, 2015
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