Spicy's The Mansion: An announcement of sorts

Discussion in 'General Discussion / Real life stuff' started by Spicy, Jul 11, 2014.

  1. Spicy

    Spicy Lurking Supreme

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    Okay, first of all, this is pretty much only for the old forum veterans. However, it might be for members who joined in the newer forum, if everything goes that way...

    So, first up. I was browsing my document history as I was trying to find a small report I wrote for a friend awhile ago. And lo and behold, I stumbled across a certain series that I wrote about a year ago, titled THE MANSION. Here's an example of the first article, I finished about 7 or so episodes.
    It was a dark stormy night. 17 limos drove up a small hill in the shadow of a mansion. 16 people were waiting in the limos, unsure of why they were here. Each of them held a slip of paper that was slipped under their doorways. It said: “WELCOME! You have been chosen for 2 weeks of luxury in a giant mansion! It features: 20 bedrooms, a five star chef, 5 lounges, as well as tons of relaxing and entertaining things to do. At exactly 5:00 tomorrow, one of our limos will pick you up! Bring the slip with you!”

    Some people were skeptical about the ominous slip, but they all accepted. One by one, the limos pulled in. A raccoon was the first person to walk into the house. A fox and a green pony walked in next. A bat flew in next. More people of all sizes and shapes walked in. None of them knew who theother was. All 16 eventually crowded into the small foyer, as one last figure walked in. He had a robe and a small book in one had. After an awkward amount of time, the figure spoke up.

    “Hello. You have all been brought in this mansion to live for 2 weeks.” His voice was deep and scratchy, but it didn’t sound old. “Please go to the room to have your first dinner.” One door, to theleft of the figure opened. “Also, you can call me The Host.” He said, as he walked into the dining room. In the room was a giant table with 16 seats. Nametags were on each plate. They said, in clockwise order from the left: Butter, Spence, Perc, Albino, Rexxie, Bunnie, Athens, Claire, Hubble, John, Finn, Flare, Video, Booze, Gallade, and finally Spicy. Every person or animal recognized one seat as their own and sat down. The first maids came in, all carrying soup. There was an awkward silence amongst the 16. As they slowly slurped their soup, one person stood up.

    “Well, no need to be shy now. My name is Athens.” The person said. The person next to him stood up and introduced herself as Claire. Slowly, everyone else introduced their selves. As the last person sat down, the next course came in, being a cooked steak, with a salad for any vegetarians. As they ate, thunder crashed, scaring numerous people. Suddenly the lights started to flicker, and slowly die out. Plenty of screams were heard, followed by what sounded like a gunshot. The lights slowly flickered on. Hubble screamed, as opposite of him, John had a clear hole in this neck, bleeding extremely. People sitting next to him jumped up, as others just looked in fear.
    He fell to the floor, dead. People looked around the room, as one person walked in, being the cloaked figure of The Host.

    “LADIES AND GENTELMAN” He spoke in a loud, but toned down voice. “As you can see, our friend John is…dead. And, I am afraid that….one of you killed him.” Gasps came from almost everyone. “Though that is all we know. Everyone, please go to your rooms. The names are on the doors. We will discuss more of this….Tomorrow.

    The remaining 15 walked up to their rooms….afraid of what tomorrow held for them.
    However, each of them found a slip of paper on their beds. They had pens too. It said:
    "Write who you think is the killer."

    It was pretty popular on the forums, probably one of the most successful stories along with Yomc's series of stories. However, it never got completed, because of both school and the forum restart.

    So, now for the most important part. I've been thinking about bringing back the series, but I had no clue how to do it. So, I have three options.

    1: Continue the series as I left it off (with Demon, Claire, Booze, Athens, Bunnie, VGG, Gallade, and myself still alive), and when I finish it show the clues on who was the murderer.

    2: Just straight up stop the story, post the parts of the story I didn't post here, and say the answers, and leave the story foooooreveeeeer.

    3: Stop the story, and start a new version, so that the writing overall can be better, and I can use newer members. I will still post the old story and answers to the story.


    So, I have no clue what the reception will be, but post what you want if you don't mind.

    Thanks!


    Tags because I forgot:
    @The_Demonstar01
    @BossClaire
    @Boozington
    @athenswill
    @bunniesunday
    @videogameguy128
    @galladepow
     
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  2. athenswill

    athenswill ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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    OHMYGODYESYOULISTENEDTOMETHEMANSIONISCOMINGBACKILOVEYOUINAHETEROSEXUALMANNER
    #MansionReturn2014
    Anyway, I personally think you should go with number 1, because it will keep the suspense of the story and the voting concept, which I found very nice because it allowed to viewers to interact. It will also keep the mysteries in the story. In other words, it will keep all of the main features of the story. However, after you complete that, I think you should make a new story with new members and such.
     
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  3. Snowwyy

    Snowwyy Veteran member - Galladepow

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    Number 1. Every story needs an ending... right? :D
    Plus I'm alive
     
  4. andrewswift

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    Ermmmm... Can you do like number 1 but post the old stories? I want to see them ;-;
     
  5. Spicy

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    That's what I plan to do.
     
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    Seems good :P
     
  7. cookiefonster

    cookiefonster Formerly known as WikiRigbyDude

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    Number 1.
     
  8. LaurentYuri

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    NUMBER 1.
    I can also copy+paste to show it to Bunnie :)

    Also...
    YOU'RE STILL THE MURDERER.
    I'M WATCHING YOU.
    #AthenswillIsTheMurdererRunAway2014
     
  9. The_Demonstar01

    The_Demonstar01 k-on most moe anime 2017

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    Number 1.
    Also Claire, if you are accusing someone else of being the murderer, it's quite obvious you are the murderer.
     
  10. LaurentYuri

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    Nope.
    Spicy said on the thread that no one knows who the murderer is.
    And maybe the murderer himself or herself doesn't know he's the murderer because Spicy is writing it.
    I was accusing Athens since about a year ago xD
     
  11. Enderbrine

    Enderbrine うちはサスケ

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    It was pretty funny what you can find in the back of the hallway of the forums. Seeing alot of old threads.