Sparks Of Red | Chapter 3

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  1. Fawn

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    People in this fanfic (I may add more later):
    @KittycatplaysMC - Luna
    @Vaicun - Mizuki
    @anratork59 - Anrade
    @dmudstheaddict - Dave
    @ProCraftz - Shadow
    @KateVampire - Kate
    Luna:[​IMG]
    Mizuki:[​IMG]
    Anrade:[​IMG]
    Dave:[​IMG]
    Shadow:[​IMG]
    Kate:[​IMG]

    Chapter 1: http://itsjerryandharry.com/threads/sparks-of-red-chapter-1.17979/
    Chapter 2: http://itsjerryandharry.com/threads/sparks-of-red-chapter-2.18052/

    Chapter 3 (sorry for the short chapter, I have tons of homework >.<)

    Kate's POV

    At some point it was pretty cold. There were waves of cold breezes which kinda surprised me considering the fact it was summer. Luna and Anrade were pretty cool, I wasn't very stressed when I spoke to them. I felt a wave of shiver, and that's when I decided to finally mention the odd temperature.

    "Guys, am I the only one feeling a bit cold?" They all stopped talking and looked at me. They nodded and I heard a few whispers. "It's kinda odd isn't it? I mean it's summer after all..." they nodded again, agreeing with me. "The sky are darker than the usual" we all turned around and saw Anrade looking at the sky.

    We lifted up our gazes. It looked like it was 8pm... I looked at my phone's lock screen, no, it was still 3:56pm, so how is that even possible? "M-maybe we're just imagining it? I mean we're tired after all" Luna said and rubbed her left arm.

    We continued walking towards the park, which was apparently really far away from where we were, Anrade had to call to his friends a few times to let them know that we're going to be late so we had to stop a few times. The park was at the edge of the city, in an abandoned place surrounded with fields. We finally made it to a place surrounded in a hedge, and there was a black gate with red roses and vines on it.

    "This is the place" Anrade said. Everyone except for Anrade stared at the roses. "Wow..." Mizuki quietly said admiring the view. "If you guys think this is amazing, just wait until you see the inside" Anrade said with a smirk. He called Dave to help him open the creaky old gate.

    They pushed the gate open and me and the girls stayed back, waiting for the boys to reveal the paradise Anrade talked about so much. We had huge grins on our faces, but they quickly fade out as we saw the inside of the park. Anrade stood in the entrance shocked.

    "But... I... the park... what?" We were all confused. Instead of a beautiful paradise the entire place was covered in dry ground and dead bushes here and there. There were small bricks on the floor that seemed like they fell from an old building. "Nice garden Anra" Mizuki said laughing. Anrade shook his head.

    "No... I was here yesterday, there were flowers and trees everywhere! even a small pond with birds and ducks!" we all looked at each other. "Um..." Luna said walking inside. "Luna where are you going?" Dave said and hurried inside after her. I looked at Mizuki and Anrade. We shrugged and followed them in.

    "Luna-" "Shh!" she hushed me and looked around. We were standing behind her, waiting while she looked around with a suspicious look on her face. "I know you're here" she half-shouted. We all looked at each other confused. We heard a sound from our left and gasped.

    Me and Mizuki quickly ran behind Dave. Luna chuckled. "Told you someone's in here". She moved forward. Anrade tried telling her to stop but she didn't listen. She bent down next to a dead bush and used her hands to open the bush.

    Suddenly, something sharp went through her hand and there was blood everywhere.

    Ooo cliff hanger :3
    Quick announcement: Gummy convinced me to join Archive of Our Own (a website to share fan-fics and more stories) so I'm going to post the story there if it :b I still need to wait 24 hours until I can verify my account, but I'll post the story there soon
    (link to the website: https://archiveofourown.org/).
     
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  2. Enderbrine

    Enderbrine うちはサスケ

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    Meh, Even do its short. I like it. *Likes the Chapter 3 *
     
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  5. Fawn

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    Yup
     
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    Great!
     
  7. KittycatplaysMC

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    Am I going to die first?
     
  8. Enderbrine

    Enderbrine うちはサスケ

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    I don't think so. Your a Main Character, Main characters might die the last .
     
  9. Xadidax

    Xadidax Willy the 2nd

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    Am I gonna be a character here? like
    I have to
    I just have to.
    I love anime
    bish

    jk jk
    Nice comic btw!
     
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  10. Enderbrine

    Enderbrine うちはサスケ

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    Its Fan Fiction not comic ._.
     
  11. Fawn

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    @KittycatplaysMC you're the main character, don't worry you won't die soon xD
    @Xadidax I have enough characters for now, maybe later in the story I will add more characters c:
     
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    Enderbrine うちはサスケ

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    *Look at The Notable members. Its a tie*