1. sebastiann

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    so i had to write a poem for my ap english class, based of another poem but about myself. "I am from"
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    I am from the deepest of punk roots
    from the small venues, and gloomy places of New Jersey
    I am the micheal jordan of avoiding conversations
    even though I do try my best to contribute what I can
    i am from most vibrant of communities,
    but of those who are different, those who are oppressed

    i am one of the most creative people you'll ever meet
    but is the mother Teressa of procrastination
    i'm from the loved
    i am from the hurt
    and the from forgotten
    i'm from the most enlightening tastes in music
    from the most punk, pop, and hardcore

    i am from getting sick too often,
    the sinus infection,
    the Abraham Lincoln of getting a migraine
    i am from the most of alive of people
    but from the most dead

    i am from quiet nights creating
    making music no one has seen
    from the coffee grinds at the bottom of your cup
    the paper cuts in between your fingers
    the chapped lips, and broken ankles
    i am from the faces who give me hope
    filled with joy,
    and those art whom make me as happy as can be
    i am from the bad times, and the good times
    from the rejected
    from the perfectly imperfect
    as I should be.
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    anything else i can add, or remove? do you like it? I also have to include pictures and or drawings with it, what should i include?
    hope you like it c:
     
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    Nicely done, Eli.
     
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  3. ElijahR2002

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    Perfect the way it is! Bet those pictures/ drawings are just as good as the poem.
    Nicely done, Eli. :)
     
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    This is amazing, Eli! I don't think I have as much creativity like you do. Love it <3
     
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    noice