My first minecraft story: The last creatives

Hey guys, some of you may be confused about the title. "No Riley this is your second story!" Well, thats sort of true, i have made another story, but it wasn't actually, well, a story, it was more like an accurate depiction of my recent vacation to Disney world, which you can see here: http://itsjerryandharry.com/threads/my-first-legit-story.44174/ But i don't consider that a story, much less a minecraft story, so this is not only my first story, but my first minecraft story, You can send me a PM if you want to be a part of the story. and leave positive feedback so i that i know to make more of this stuff. enjoy!

Chapter 1. From the sky

I opened my eyes, and the first thing i saw was light, blinding light, with heavy breezes whipping my hair back and forth. After a while my eyes adjusted to the brightness of... of what? I didn't know where i was, i didn't know what i was doing. I looked around and saw the color Blue, i looked up and it faded into a much darker tone of blue. I looked down and saw clouds, "Okay so I'm pretty sure I'm on earth." I thought to myself. "But where on earth?" It was cold, it was very cold, but it wasn't painful. but those clouds.... i was way above them, i was in the sky, which meant... which meant I was falling! I began to panic, looking for something to grab onto even though i knew there was nothing. After a while of panicking. i just decided to accept my death, I was falling and there was nothing I could do about it. I waited, and waited to hit the ground, but I didn't. I looked down, and the clouds were just as far away as they were before. Was i really falling? Was this even real? What if it was a dream? I had so many questions in my mind that couldn't be answered. Maybe i was... flying?
How was i supposed to fly, was I stranded here forever? It was like i was in space, there was no gravity for me at all, but i wasn't in space as far as i could tell. I tried making poses and yelling words like "Fly!" "And off!" "Launch!"
Nothing.
could just tell myself in my mind to fly? just will myself to go? "I tried, and a first i couldn't tell. but then i noticed the wind was hitting me more intensely, my hair was going even more crazy than before, so I knew i was moving somehow, but I could mess around, i need to figure out where i was. Maybe if i go down to the earth I could get my bearings, but how fast could I get there. I began to descend, the clouds got closer and closer and then i passed them in a milesecond, but then i noticed the ground, coming towards me faster then a rocket, and my only instinct was 'STOP!'
Many things happened at once , all the wind stopped blowing past my face, my hair had a standstill, my head jerked downwards so so hard my chin smacked the top of my chest, and i stopped going down, but my stomach certainly didn't. Then i realized something. How did i not just die?

 

Why isn't this getting any replies? strange...

But sorry for the double post, i just wanted to tell people that i fixed a few things.