ItsJerryandHarry story, the last portal gun

story: It all begins at the house of Jerry and Harry.
Harry was on his computer playing team fortress when Jerry called...
Jerry: Harry! there's a package for you!
story: Harry dashed towards the door, he was hoping Mira had replied to his love letter with flowers and a note saying *I love you too*.
but it was no love message, instead it was what looked like an extremely old and tampered box addressed to him
Jerry picked up the box and gave it to Harry then left the doorway.
Harry glanced at the box for a good 5 minuets before slowly opening the box.
his attention was instantly brought to a small piece of crumpled paper tied to some newspaper of which was tied around a mysterious object, harry read the tampered note which had written in blue pen * Dear great great grandfather, I am from the future, but it is horrible, have you ever heard about the game portal? cause it has became reality, a man found a portal gun around your time, he made aperture but it was a horrid version, I was told that he got his gun from a place called Canada, my time we call everywhere valve. I know it does not give you much info but this was all I knew, I know you wont believe me so I sent you proof, please help, I sent this through a anti paradox machine, nothing will change for my universe but I hope you succeed.
Good luck, your great great grandson Joey*
Harry trembled as he unraveled the news paper revealing an very dirty scratched object, no, it can't be...
The gun from Portal!
end of part 1

 

Nice little story can't wait for part 2 :)

 

Um...

I'm going to hunt down Harry. Mira's already taken by me...lol brb

*Gets gun and travels to Harry's house.*

*Knocks on door and with best Mira voice impression, says* Harry! Its Mira!

*Harry opens door and gets shot in the knee*

Its not exactly an arrow, but its the best I have...

*Leaves*

XD

 

oooh, Harry x Mira~
As a fan of Portal, I like where this is going.
Friendly word of advice: Try to clean it up a bit, and proofread to knock out any errors you see.
Otherwise, can't wait for Part 2!

 

thanks for you feedback

 

Kewl story, keep it up! :D