House of Frightmares- Part 1

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  1. PenguinHook

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    There may be a few mistakes, if you find one, please tell me and I will correct it.
    @GoobyHasAnOpinion , @LilaRok , @DurpehDuckiee , @CaitlinUchiha , @Animoes , @IBallisticMayMay , and @PresidentBacon are the characters in this story.

    House of Frightmares
    On a cold, winter night Lila woke up to find a letter on her dresser, "Wow, this is mysterious," she said under her breath. Then, she opened the letter. Come tonight, 6:00 P.M. ... 666 Death Boulevard Grand Hill, CA. Lila looked at her dog and shivered, "666 D- de- death Boulevard... That sounds a bit... Cr- creepy!"

    Lila got ready, walked out of the house and began school, she was still thinking of the letter she had gotten earlier. She wondered if someone else had gotten them. As she ran through the halls of the school, she saw worried looks on a couple of her friend's faces, they were Gooby, Durpeh, and Animoes. When school was over she walked home, staring into the empty streets, thinking what the mysterious letter meant. Later that day, she got to what looked like a mansion, she saw a couple friends, Gooby, Durpeh, Caitlin, Animoes, May May, and Pres, they all looked scared half to death.

    A tall butler, who looked like a penguin opened the doors to the mansion, staring at the teens with a smile on her face, "Come in, my friends, I am CreeperGal," she said in a booming voice. The teens all stared at each other and stepped inside. They had a nice dinner, and then relaxed. The teens went outside without thinking about what could happen. They all walked to the near cliff, when they heard May May, "Kikikikikiki!" she laughed as the crickets hopped around her feet. Suddenly a huge clap of thunder, that could be heard from miles hit near the house, and in that instant, MayMay was dead...

    "Here is a clue to help you solve who the murderer is... It's written in code so it may not be so easy...

    12B, 7E, 8F, 1A, 16D, 3C, 4G..."
    "The butler, Creeper must've written it..." says Durpeh
     
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  2. Radii

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    bootiful story 10/10
     
  3. Gooby

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    WEll that escalated quickly o-o
    Rad story though c:
     
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