Who's in it: @Erove @Shadow_Riolu @MappyTurtle @ItsStartheFox Chapter 3 - Hidden Power [ Horror ] Erove was coughing from the smoke and tripped unexpectedly. "Ow..." she said, getting up from the wood floor. Riolu and Star gasped. "YOUR BLEEDING!" Riolu yelled. Erove ignored it. "Let's just be careful on what we see on the ground." she said. They kept walking and ended up near a door. "Door 69," Star said. "Let's go!" She opened the door and the group was sucked in. A shape with a hat in a red glare was on a mountain, it was a shadow... Riolu recognized it. "That's one of the most dangerous people in Dark Empire!!!" he yelled, running back to the door trying to open it. "It's locked!" Riolu yelled. Star and Erove tried helping. "You guys, I have a van!" the creature yelled in a scratchy voice. The group pulled harder on the door. Not a budge. The creature stepped forward, Star recognized it right away. "MAPPY?" she yelled. "Your in the Dark Empire?" "No," Mappy said. "I'm here to collect children." "This is an adult path!" Erove yelled waving her arms around. "Your bleeding. It doesn't sound like your much of an adult... AND YOUR 14 YEARS OLD!" Mappy yelled. "Shhhhh!!!!" Riolu said. "You'll wake up the----" the door slammed open cutting him off, Star climbed on top of Erove. Mappy got off the mountain and went behind Riolu. A huge demon stood in front of them, there was a huge hole in the wall from its size. "-- Lead Demon." Riolu said finishing himself off. "I'll slay it!" Erove said. "No!" Star yelled. "You've been in enough pain, your hair is now a bit red." "EEEUWUWUW!" Erove yelled. Star, Mappy, and Riolu jumped in front of Erove. Erove saw a safe behind her. She quickly opened her backpack, took out of the book and try finding the code. "6," she said, hearing loud grunting behind her. "2," "9," "4." She unlocked it and took out Power 2. She combined the book and waved it at the demon. "Hey, lookie what I got!" Erove yelled waving Power 3 Handbook in front of the demon more. One step shook the whole building from the demon. The group gasped. Erove wasn't in sight. EDIT: I changed the thread title to Hidden Powers - Story. So now all chapters of Hidden Powers is going to be in this thread. I'm starting from Chapter 3, please read my other threads for Chapters 1 and 2. I may post the link here soon. If you want the story to not be such a fright now that you read this, read it again. And DON'T read this. It's just for the feelings matter. Thank you Heatdude for reminding me about the thread spam. :D
Okay, please listen: I've said this before, but it was a while ago, so I'll say it again: If you are making a story, or something where you make many posts on your thread, do NOT, I repeat, do NOT make a thread for each new one. It's not TECHNICALLY against the rules, but it spams up the section it's in and makes it much harder for somebody else to have their stuff on the first page, where most people look. Please don't do this again. I can't enforce it, as I'm not staff and as the rules read it isn't against the rules, but it does get close to double posting threads, because, in some ways, it is the same thing over and over, just different... if that makes sense. EDIT: I forgot to make my reply about the story xP It's a good story, maybe add a bit more detail into it action-wise? Good luck :D
I'll just change the title to Hidden Powers - Story, and I'll post stories just here. Thank you for reminding me about this.
Sorry for having no stories... in like a week. But meh. People in this: @Erove @Shadow_Riolu @MappyTurtle @ItsStartheFox @GoobyHasAnOpinion Chapter 4 - Hidden Power [Betrayal] Star screamed. Riolu stood there. Mappy was just slowly falling to the ground. Star just started to talk very fast, like it was another language. "Riolu this is all your fault!" she yelled after blabbering. "How is it my fault?" he asked offended. "If you didn't bring your stupid garden hoe out to fight the demon Erove wouldn't be smushed!" Star said crying. Riolu was mad at her. "I'll show you what I do with my 'garden hoe'." he said, taking it out and throwing it at Star. She immediately fell to the ground. "RIOLU." a voice yelled. "EROVE?!!" Mappy yelled. She stepped out of the wall of the demon's foot. Riolu pulled the scythe out of Star's leg and threw it at Erove. Erove ducked and it flew right over her. "Mappy, now!" Erove yelled, and Mappy acted like he was arresting him. "Your gonna have fun in my van." Mappy said. "NO! WAIT!" Riolu yelled being dragged away from Mappy. Erove looked behind her and ran over to Star in pain on the ground. She knelt down over by Star. "Star," she said, nudging her. "Star wake up!" Star rolled over, and Erove heard a scratchy noise up beyond. "KIT COMIN' IN!!!" the voice yelled. "Guebi?" Erove yelled. "Guebi, throw that to me!" Gooby threw the first aid kit at Erove and she caught it. She took out a healing potion and made Star drink it. The magic was appearing... But was the new Star there?
You included the betrayal of me and Mappy's van. Amazingly, this was pretty recent after the thread of... THAT...
