Hidden Powers: Chapter 2

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  1. Erove

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    I'm continuing the new series, bish.

    Chapter Two - Hidden Powers [ Long Trail ]

    Riolu, Star, and Erove = More than exhausted.
    "Erove..." Star said, panting loudly. "Why didn't you pack ten water bottles and not 4?"
    "I didn't think it would be a long trip!" Erove said.
    Riolu face palmed.
    "We're going WAY north." Riolu said. "There is most likely to be seven water bottles."
    The wind was more than whisky. Erove's hair was in her face.
    She tried pulling it back but no use.
    "I think we entered the zone!" Riolu said.
    "Webbed Pines?" Erove asked.
    She looked on the map as it wiggled away with the wind.
    "No," she said nervously, trying to grip it.
    "What?" Star asked.
    "No, no, no..." Erove said more nervously.
    The map flew away.
    "DAMMIT!" she yelled.
    "Now how will we get back to the house?" Riolu said.
    "Well, the important thing is we are going to save the world." Erove said, making her backpack snug. But then dust filled the air.
    Star coughed uncontrollably.
    "Is this... cough cough... meant to be... cough cough... like this?" she asked.
    Erove took the book out of her backpack and scanned it. Riolu slapped it out of her hand.
    "It is supposed to be." Riolu said.
    Star looked in Riolu's backpack.
    "What's up this garden hoe?" Star said pulling a scythe out.
    "STOOOP!!!" Riolu said getting off his knees and then tackling Star.
    "Guys, focus!" Erove said. "We're going in."
    Erove opened the door and just saw a hall of endless doors.
    "The 174 doors." Star whispered.
     
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    I start to sense my betrayal. Good story. Erove, keep it up.
     
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    Or you think you will...
     
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    I sort of hope to. Once again, your story, still like it either way.
     
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