First Story of Mine !

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  1. OfficerDeadly

    OfficerDeadly Donator

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    Hi guys.I'm IDeadlyFighterI and I wanted to give it a shot.I usually suck at writing a story but yea here we go
    (This Story will be 7 chapter long)

    This story is about a US Army Force whose trying to save President from an unknown group .
    If you guys wanted to be added then leave a comment down below !

    Roles:
    @BunnySellz =Leader of the Force
    @SS_Ace = Force Member
    Me=Force Member
    @TheMint = Force Member
    @Cally8484 = President
    @Ninjafoya =Leader of Unknown Group
    @Sarahhh =Helper Leader of Unknown Group
    @Katy9078 =Hacker of the Force Team





    Chapter 1
    Kidnap of the President
    -California-
    It was a usual sunny day.The President was going to stay in California for a week .When President got to his house in California.He was ambushed by Safa.Secret Service tried to protect the President but Safa sliced and diced them all .When Safa got into the house .Cally had a gun in his hand pointing it towards Safa .Safa was still smiling ...
    Cally asked ''Why are you smiling ?''And Safa answer ''I will end your life(No offence xD)''Then the window behind Cally broke and Sarah knocked Cally out.Sarah said ''LOL GG EZ NUB SCRUB REKT''after that Safa calmed Sarah down,and put Cally in to the trunk of her Buggati .

    -DC-
    The team was tired after an operation.They were resting,eating and chating in the Hangar .Then Deadly made a joke and said ''What is the favourite drink of a crocodile ?''And he answered it by saying ''Croko Cola''Mint looked at Deadly's eyes and said ''Will you shut up ?'' after that he threw his pie at Deadly but Deadly dodged it.Then Sell arrived near them and talked to them about The kidnap of the President .And give them the file of Safa and Sarah.Safa had a lot of crimes in her past (Manslaughter,Robbing a Bank,Murder of Orie I had to do it xD)but Sarah was clean ... It was her first crime ...

    To be continued


    This was the first chapter of it .I know It's kinda short but I'm not creative right now .Second chapter will be much longer
     
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  2. ImJustMrpie

    ImJustMrpie Farewell

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    Nice story c:
     
  3. Ninjafoya

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    Nice! :P
    Orie isn't dead stoopid.
     
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  4. OfficerDeadly

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    Sorry for forgetting about this but I didnt have anything ideas not I do c:
    New roles:
    @KrisKrikken =CSI
    @Slevin =CIA agent

    CHAPTER -2-
    -California-
    Team was working 24/7 got a clue in the crime scene after they met a CSI member Kris.As he got into the crime scene said the Team to not touch anything .Kris then walked towards a wall and there was a paper on the ground.It was called
    ''Sarah's What to do List''
    After Ace read that he faceplamed and said ''Are we sure they are pro's ?''Then Mint answered''No fingerprints not even a recording ... They shot the camera as they got in ... I mean ... yea they are pros...''Kris got froze for a second and said ''Guys as it says here the last thing in the list is ... to break in to California CIA .''After that team jumped in to their cars and rushed to the base ... When they were there Sel organized the attack.Mint and Ace were covering the door ,Kris Sel and Deadly were going in .As they got in there were a shootout.There were a lot of attackers ,bullets were flying around.Deadly said ''Sel can you open a cover for me ?''Sel shaked his head saying yes and Kris followed Deadly .While running towards the elevators Deadly got shot in his leg he fell down!Everyone heard someone shouting !''Minions get back !We got this.''As Deadly rise up he saw Safa which took a shot towards him.Deadly got in to cover with Kris.Then Safa shouted again and said''Who is your leader ?''.Then Sel raised up and shouted ''I AM'' but then as Sel got up Safa shot him and Deadly saw Sel fell down.Deadly got up with anger and took a lot of shots with 3 of 'em hit Safa with made her fell down and Deadly got close to her and shouted ''WHERE IS THE PRESIDENT !?''Safa was smiling again and saying ''You and your*Cough* friend are *Cough* dead.As Deadly thought everything in his head.He turned around and saw Kris punch him and Kris raised his gun towards Deadly and said ''President should go away and dissappear.''Deadly answered saying ''Kris ...''and looked down and hitted Kris gun and tackled him but Kris kicked him cause he was ready for something like this ...Deadly fell down but got up quickly and punched Kris in the stomach and kicked his neck .Kris instantly fell down.Then Deadly heard a gunshot towards him .But it was another person, a CIA agent .He shot Safa cause Safa was nearly shoting Deadly ...Then Deadly called for an ambulance saying ''This is
    lieutenant O-59 we have a sergeant down ! I repeat SERGEANT DOWN!Immediate backup and medic needed!''

    -TO BE CONTINUED-
     
  5. OfficerDeadly

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    WOHO Two Chapters One Day !
    Lez GO !
    New roles :D
    Homeland Security Agent #1 @Puller
    Homeland Security Agent #2 @05ocram05


    CHAPTER -3-
    -California-
    After the shootout in the CIA building 2 members were injuired ,1 suspect was caught alive and one was dead ...Mint ,Slevin and some LAPD officers were securing the building.Deadly and Sel were in the hospital and Sel's status was critical .Deadly was near Sel , in front of his room door.Then a woman got close to Deadly .Deadly slowly reached for his gun but the woman show her ID and said ''Homeland Security ,I am Special Agent Puller and this is Special Agent Marco.And who are you again ?''Deadly was waiting for this ... It wasnt a surprise for him .Deadly answered saying.''US Army,Lt.Deadly .Nice meeting you ma'am .''Puller explained that Sarah was the only thread left ... but she had the president but not only the president she had a nuclear gun with was made by the Goverment ...After Puller talked she asked a question to Deadly ''What happened in the building?''Deadly didnt even asnwer ... and left .When he got to the HQ He saw Katy and said ''Where is Kris ?''Katy answered saying''The Interrogation Room...''Deadly rushed towards the Interrogation room opened the door and punched Kris and said ''WHERE IS THE PRESIDENT?''Kris answered ''I dont know...''Deadly shouted again''Do you know ANYTHING?''After that Mint got into the room and intrupted Deadly ''If you know something tell us lets make a deal right now right here ...''Kris said ''I have an adress for a house''After he wrote the adress Mint and Deadly got into a car and rushed there they saw Puller and Marco on the way there.When they arrived they rushed in they found two attackers in side .One of 'em was Sarah one of 'em was another one...When Sarah saw 'Em she grabbep here weapon and started shooting .Macro got shot and fell down.Puller started chasing Sarah and the other attacker .Mint saw Marco on the ground and called for medic.Deadly was going after Sarah just like Puller.Sarah took cover and took some shots which made Deadly and Puller get into cover.Some LAPD officers were behind Deadly and Puller . Puller was running but a car ran her over which made Deadly stop but Puller said ''Run and catch *cough* 'em there are officers *cough* here...''After tha Deadly ran after Sarah.Deadly saw Sarah running around the park Deadly ran straight towards here and tackled Sarah .Sarah pulled her gun out shot two rounds.One of the bullets got into Deadly's arm but Deadly succeded getting the gun out of her hand.Sarah got up punch Deadly twice but Mint came behind her and neutralized her with a gun shot to the leg.

    -TO BE CONTINUED-
     
  6. ItsPacers

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    Wow. Nice story