NOTE: I am currently on my iPad, so I can't be bothered to upload a cover page and paste the links :p People added in this chapter: @DMachine487 EYES: CHAPTER 4 The fox opened up a large stone door in a dark chamber. The 4 ran for a tremendous amount of time and needed a break. "Is this, to.. Where we .. Need to.. Go?" Vaicun said, in between breaths. "Yes. This will take us to the outside world so we can all be free." Star replied. "I can't wait to get a gulp of fresh air!" Chicken said. The other nodded in approval. Star took out a bronze key out of her torn knapsack. She instantly open the large stone door with an unsettling creak. The stones shifted and the sunlight leaked in through the cracks. "AHH MY EYES!!!" Vaicun shouted. The party of 4 took one step and fell into a pitch black hole. "Ahahahha, I see you have 'fallen' for my trap!" A voice shouted. It was Cream the pony. She looked down at us. "Have fun with the monsters!" Cream exclaimed. She then walked away briskly, trotting her hoofs. "M, m, m, Monsters?!" Chicken murmured. "I'm afraid so." Riolu heaved. He readied his scythe with darkness flowing from his eyes. Vaicun emblazed her hands with sudden fire and flare sparks dashed out of her eyes. As for Chicken, he did nothing. He didn't know what to do. Suddenly, some damp lights flickered on and the fight began. Vampires, Ogres, Goblins, Dark Mages and even the occasional Flare Mage. Vaicun headed straight for the Flare Mages. She fought fire with fire, if you know what I mean. Riolu planned it out tactically. He swung his dark scythe and cut off the head of a Vamp. He then butted an Ogre in the gonads with the end of his scythe. The ogre started crying on the floor. Vaicun blew fire straight at some Mages and turned them to crisp. She then started rapidly firing fireballs at Goblins and Vampires. Riolu was getting too crowded with monsters, so he used his Elemental ability and turned Invisible. He then began slicing and dicing to his satisfaction. Vaicun then used her Elemental Powers and turned into one massive Fire thing, and started flaming every thing in sight. She ran straight through monsters and burned them so hard, it hurt their mother all the way in Germany. Star the fox just kept in the shadows and waited for the right time to strike. She bonked them across the head and then turned back into the darkness. She barely ever said a word. Chicken was crowded with Goblins and Mages. The ones that picked on the Powerless. Just as the monsters struck and Vaicun and Riolu turned around, a mysterious figure threw two Silver Oakwood daggers straight into the hearts of some monsters. The others ran away, but ended up face to face with Vaicun and Riolu. After Riolu and Vaicun banished the remaining monsters, it all became silent. Until Chicken. "That, Was, AWESOME! DID YOU SEE VAICUN?! SHE WAS LIKE PEW PEW PEW! THEN RIOLU WAS LIKE MUAHAHHAHA BISHESSSS!" After he became breathless, he asked the mysterious figure a qeustion. "Whats you're name?" "Death." He replied. That was the end of Chapter 4. I am sorry again if this was a short story, but I just didn't get around to it yesterday, and I had little time today. Sorry again. I will make an extra, extra long story on Saturday. People in this story: @Shadow_Riolu @Vaicun @Chickenbits_ @Creamcol77 @ItsStartheFox @DMachine487
"She ran straight through monsters and burned them so hard, it hurt their mother all the way in Germany" XD
Good job, again, looks great and flows almost perfectly. Also, what exactly did you choose for my ability? Or did you just make me a weapons master?
