Eyes: Chapter 2

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  1. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    So this is Chapter 2 of my current fan-fiction that I am writing. Here is the link to Chapter 1 if you need to catch up on the story:http://www.itsjerryandharry.com/threads/eyes-a-minecraft-fanfic-d.17915/
    Alsoooooo, here are a few people I will be adding in this chapter:
    @ItsStartheFox
    @CrazyIcicle
    @Vaicun
    Alsooooooooooooo, if you want to be in the story, (BTW Read the story first, it will make more sense) scroll to the bottom to see how you can join in! :)

    I hope you enjoy. Also, here is the cover for part 2:




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    (BTW, I didn't draw this, my beloved friend did <3)
    Anyways, back to the story:



    EYES: CHAPTER 2

    Riolu and Chicken were savagely pulled out of the english classroom.
    "Tell me boys! What happened in there?!" Cries Mr.Wattson.
    "Sir, it was an acident, I swear!" Riolu pleads.
    Mr.Wattson scowls an unpredictable noise that could determine wether they are going to be left for dead or saved by a miracle.
    "Oh, you boys are coming with me! If you're not gonna spill, then I'll just spill you! TO YOU'RE PARENTS!" Mr.Wattson jokes. He has a really weird sense of humour.
    "Oh jeez." Chicken squeaks.
    Riolu notices a black shadow scattering around near the tap water fountain.
    Suddenly He sees a pair of flashing red eyes, and on comes the fire bell.
    "EVERYBODY OUT! THERES A MOTHER F*CKIN FIRE! AHHHHHH!" Mr.Wattson screams.
    Everybody lines up straight lines and march out the front door.
    "C'mon, Riolu! Lets go!" Murmurs Chicken.
    "But I-" Riolu was cut off by Chicken's grab as he pulls Riolu away.

    Outside, Lunch:

    "I swear, Chicken. Those eyes, they were like, flashing a bright colour, then they suddenly faded." Riolu says.
    "MMmmmmm..." Chicken mumbles.
    "Yeah, thats what I thought!" Riolu puts his elbow on his knee to indicate that he was thinking.
    "No, I meant 'Mmmm' because this sandwich is incredible! You're mom makes the best!" Replies Chicken.
    "Oh, I knew that." Riolu sighs.
    Both of the boys were about to pack up their lunch when a Girl with a slightly ripped shirt and enchanting red eyes came up to the both of them.
    Riolu gazed in astonishment.
    "You're the-"
    "Yes, the one with the flashing eyes, I know." The girl says.
    "Here, my name is Vaicun!" Vaicun says, with an un-easy smile.
    Vaicun puts out her hand for Riolu to shake it.
    Riolu just slaps her on the back.
    Chicken gives her an overly excited hug.
    "HIII!!" Says Chicken.
    "C'mon Chicken, lets go." Riolu says.
    The trio walk back to the hall ways.
    "So, Vaicun, you have that weird eye problem too?" Asks Chicken.
    "Chicken, its not a problem, its rather a gift of super natural powers." Riolu says.
    "WAIT! WERE SUPERHEROS?!" Chicken exclaims.
    "Uh, kind of?" Vaicun stutters.
    Then the intercom starts blurting out names.
    "Riolu, Chicken and Vaicun, please report to the principals office immediately." Speaks the intercom.
    The group give each other weird looks as they rush to the office.
    Vaicun knocks on the door, and they wait patiently.
    "Ah, I see! You have come!" Says a voice.
    The lock opens and the three pile in.
    "Welcome to my lab!" Crackles a voice.
    The three stand up and see a girl in a lab coat with crazy (HINT HINT) hair.
    "Icicle, what are you doing?" Vaicun says.
    "Why, I am just testing a few DNA samples, why do you ask?" Icicle replies.
    "No, I mean, Where is the PRINCIPAL?!" Vaicun yells.
    "Oh, that fatty? I shipped him out." Icicle exclaims, happily.
    Riolu face palms.
    "Well, why did you call us up here?" Chicken questions.
    "I need DNA from the 3 of you to create 3 separate powers only you three can with hold." Icicle says.
    "Each of you have diverse elements inside of you, and my goal is for you to be able to use them."
    "But, how do you know?" Riolu says.
    "All three of you're eyes' are different colours, Correct? They also flash when you use you're 'secret' powers, Correct?" Icicle responds.
    "Yeah," The trio say, together.
    "So, That means the colour of you're iris's depend on you're element." Icicle explains.
    "Example, Green Eye Colour, means Life, Black means Shadow, and so on."
    "Okay, so I would be shadow then! Cool!" Riolu shouts.
    "So, that means I'm fire?" Says Vaicun. "Sweet!"
    "Now, Chicken, you're eyes don't match with any current elements, which Is why I brought you here."
    "To test what element I am?" Chicken squeaks.
    "Precisely. Step inside this new machine I have recently built." Icicle says.
    Icicle punches some buttons on a remote pad, and out comes some smoke, and a few electrical buzzes.
    Icicle then punches a big red button, and out comes the door which Chicken stepped in.
    "So, let us see you're results." Icicle says.
    Zzett, tish..Beep! The resluts flashed above the screen. They read "Water" on a big LED screen.
    "Water? How is 'Water' got to do with anything that I have ever done? I mean, Riolu is darkness because he always wears black, Vaicun is fire because of her ripped shirt and burnt shoes, but what about me?" Chicken says.
    "I have no Idea. I guess you were just born that way." Icicle says.
    Suddenly, there was a loud pounding on the door. Icicle opened it and was shoved back so far that she hit her head on a file stand.
    Out of the door came a robotic mecha representing Star, the fox.
    She swung her metalic bat right at Riolu he dodged and they all ran out of the lab. Icicle followed. They were all suprised how she had recovered so fast.
    "Here, drink these coloured liquids. They will unleash you're elemental abilities, once and for all." Icicle says.
    They all drink the coloured liquids assigned to them. Chicken is the last one to drink his one.
    Suddenly, Riolu starts to fall to the ground. He starts shouting 'Stop! Please make it stop!' and Vaicun gets red in her face and looks like she is going to throw up. Chicken starts to feel weird things as well. His arms feel like jelly and he starts shaking. They all fall to the floor and pass out.


    TO BE CONTINUED.
    Thanks for reading, I put a ton of effort into this chapter, so I hope you like it. Also, like I said, If you want to appear in a chapter, comment down below what you're element would be, and you might be added in some future chapters.
    Cheers,
    ~Chickenbits :)
     
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    Fawn as if

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    My power is fire and I have red eyes? THIS IS A DREAM COMING TRUE.

    Can I hug you (>*-*)>
     
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  3. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    Oke C:
     
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    Icicle is a girl ehehehehe

    Also, CAN I BE IN IT!? How about how about how about uhh uhh uuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh LIGHTNING lightning is cool… dat would be nice… ok ty good story btw i luff et
     
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  5. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    K, u in da next 1, K batch <3
     
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    I wanna be in et Fgt c:
    My element can beee....idk....love? does that count xP?

    If you can't do love...then Music i guess? idk I'm bad at this shiiz :p
     
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    Add me in the story or your death is my faith.

    My power is an attacking strength with eerie blue eyes of death and hope.

    I'm so weird. :P
     
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    I like the fact I am in this, but one thing:
    I am really dark.
    I don't plead, I force, you know.
    (Soulkeeper, taking souls, hiding in the shadows, yeah.)
    Otherwise, amazing.
     
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  9. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    So, Incredibly darker than this, or just a little bit darker than this? Because I am planning to write Chapter 3 now, so I can find some way to implement it.
     
  10. Shadow_Folf

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    A lot darker, as in emotionless kind. You know. Also refer to my Soulkeeper title.
     
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  11. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    Whats you're elemental power though?
     
  12. Erove

    Erove creme de pirouline Donator

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    Duh. Airbending. I'm not stupid.
     
  13. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    Oh, Okay.
     
  14. Shadow_Folf

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    Just saying:
    My powers:
    -Taking souls (Obviously) and using them as an "Army."
    -Being able to become a shadow (As you said earlier.)
     
  15. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    I'll make sure I use those now.
     
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