1st Story Ever: The Key

Alright, So I was Banned for a Week, and during This Week i Was Like: I Have Nothing To Do Anything Anyways, So Why Not? And i Wrote 10 Chapters of The Story. I Will Make More Soon.
Special Thx to @LouiseXminerX, @MappyTurtle, @TheBlackHamood, @Perceisha, @Killy_Kiid (Just Because It's Killy), @whazzupman33, @Katy9078 and @IDeadlyFighterI For Applying For Being Characters. If You want to Be One Of The Characters, just Say Add me And Tell Me How You Want To be.
Ex: Add Me, I wanna be Awesome, cool And transform into Devil when im Mad. (Louise ;))
Alright? Ok, if You DONT Like yourself in the Story, just Say it as well and im gonna edit the chapter. Enjoy! :)
Note: It's Not Fantasy Story So your Character Can't have anything Special Like Having The Power Of Flying. I am Really Sorry. :(

Chapter 1-Ship Wants Blood. It All. Happened in a Caribbean sea… once it was a peaceful land full of romance, parties etc. but it’s no longer fun When the Spanish government has made a Deal with AU. AU was an assassin unity that kills for money. The members of this unity were pretty agile and strong, Spanish government got it as their main weapon… the long five years passed till they have made this deal, au during these long years, AU have grown more powerful, more numerous, until they got almost the full power on the civilians. People with special permission can write the “dead letter” and send it to the AU. Now almost everywhere in cuba, there are boxes for send these letters. Because of this, many pirates have left these lands or died because they were (in government’s opinion) too dangerous for the community. Only the the strongest pirates such as Henry Morgan or William kidd weren’t afraid of the “two devilish letters” (the pirates called AU like this) but not only the strongest pirates stayed… one smarty called captain Jack Valdy with his ship called “Arlene” were still having fun of these lands… except that they no longer killed people, they didn’t want to get attention to them, especially if we are talking about the Spanish. Not all of the pirates are, let’s say, gentlemen, and “Arlene” had these “not gentlemen”.

-We Waited enough!-Shouted one man on Valdy’s ship.-I waited for five bloody years! If I don’t cut someone’s head, it’s gonna be yours jack!!!!

-What did yaw say?-asked jack aiming with his musket at the man’s head.-what’s gonna be mine? I didn’t hear it.

-bloody…-sayed the “not gentlemen”

-What? Man, say normally that everyone hears you!

-we… waited for five darn years!

-oh, well…-jack was especially known for its special way of thinking. He always had a crazy idea, no exceptions. At this moment he saw a Britannic ship (not Spanish) and sayed-see that ugleh ship? Well, we attack it today!

-hooray!!!!-screamed the whole team. The Britannic ship was pretty far and almost at the same speed as the “Arlene” itself, it took 5 hours for reach it… but they haven’t reach it… during those five hours, the sunny day turned into a storm, a huge storm! The waves were really huge! The both of the ships were pushed by these giant monsters, until they hurt the both ships into a desert island! Both of the ships were ravaged to pieces! Jack got rejected to land so hardly, that he woke up only in the morning…
To Be Continued... Next Chapter Will be Out The 18 February :) Thx For Wasting your Time :) Pls comment c:

 

Guess I Will Have To Break The Double Post Rule ;=; (Dont Ban Me Pls, It's Not My Fault That No One Comment)

Alright, Lets Start This:
(New Characters: @Perceisha)

Chapter 2-The mysterious key

Valdy finally woke up, when he opened his eyes he found Ruins of “Arlene” and of The british Ship, he also saw The Dead bodies with blood around.

-…¿Cuál es la clave? (So What’s about the key?) -Heard Jack in Spanish, He looked around, he saw a few men staying not far from him.

-Sorry, I don’t speak Spanish…-answered one of them.

-That Guy’s dressed just like the “two devilish letters” gang.-thought Jack-also, what darn key?

-Ok Monsieur.-sayed one man-We need encontrar food (encontrar means find).

-Yes, sir. My Skills of an assassin will help me, try to give a signal to other ships.-Now it was certain… That man was one of the AU. Jack was a curious one, so he followed the AU member in the jungle for find some more info about that key. About 2 minutes later, the “two devilish letters” guy has found a wild boar. He hid himself, waited till the victim approaches… and… Stabbed him with his hidden blades.

-Jesus…-thought jack, in the same moment he heard a loud scream. Someone jumped off the jungle tree with a rock to the AU member’s head.

-AAAAAAH!!!-screamed the assassin because of pain. The crazy man kept hitting him with his rock.

-AU! YOU DARN Betrayers And liars!!!-he hurt him again with his rock and let the dead body on ground.

-Woo… I don’t know what the heck that was, but I saw even worse so…

-WHO the heck are you?!-screamed the savage.

-Someone…-answered valdy

-what do you want?!-asked the crazy man-what do you need here? SAY THE TRUTH!!

-alright, I’ll say it…-started jack-I was chasing a British ship that I am pretty sure it’s not british, then a storm ruined my ship and I was thrown here, then I heard this guy talking about a key which was really interesting to me that I followed him till you did that savage jump…

-I Sayed tell the truth…

-I Sayed it…

-if it would be truth you wouldn’t have say it…

-Only if I wouldn’t know that you won’t believe the truth…-the savage got really surprised after Jack sayed This, a second after he started searching the key inside the clothes of the AU member… few minutes later, he found it.

-That's it! The key that only people with special permission can carry!-shouted the crazy man.-he he… their strategies become funnier to funnier… They have changed their flag so they don’t get attacked by British…

-jeez…-started jack-is it really that key? Hahaha! Do you know What it means? We will be rich as heck! The Spanish governor will give anything for that!

-first we need to get away from the island, genius…-Sayed the savage-by the way, what’s your name? we both found it, so we share it 50% to 50%, I would like to Know with who I am having a deal.

-Cap’n jack valdy...-answered the captain.-and about how we will leave the island… those Spanish idiots are giving away a signal for other ships… we’ll leave really soon my friend… and what’s your name?
-My Name is Perceisha.-answered The Man and Kicked Again The Dead Body Of The Assassin.
Thx for wasting your time. Next Chapter Will be Out The 19 February

 

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Sorry For Late Post :0
Chapter 3-The master of disguise

-I was once one of the au,-continued Perceisha-but looking I didn’t like the deal with the Spanish, they let me on this island because of the treason, if only I knew about it…

-wow…-started jack-So your telling me that you were one of those assassins…and you killed one of those assassins… because they betrayed you… because you betrayed them…

-oh, shut up! Let’s go check what those idiots are doing right now…-so they came to the place the Spanish were giving away the signal, Jack was holding the key. Once they arrived, they saw a large galleon in a few miles away from the beach. The boat was coming for the Spanish men.

-Already?-asked Perceisha

-Guess were lucky today!-sayed valdy happily. They approached to the beach hiding in a bush. They waited till some of the soldiers get closer the stab them and steal their clothes. Perceisha stabbed one silently and quickly, as jack did the inverse… Spanish soldiers saw them.

-who are you?-asked one of the soldiers

-ohm, nobody…-answered the captain

-they killed my brother!!!-shouted one of the soldiers-YOU Will pay for this!!!-Perceisha gave up quickly, but jack didn’t, he had an another crazy idea.

-can I talk to your captain?-asked valdy

-I am here.-answered an another soldier who was dressed not with dirty clothes like others did.-what do you need?

-are you their captain?

-yes.

-are you certain that they will never let you down in any situation?

-We will never let him down!!!-shouted another soldier, and in the same moment jack took his musket and aimed it to the captain’s head.

-if you will never let him down, like you just sayed, two of you will undress and the rest will introduce us as the best soldiers in your, right now ruined, ship. The key that the au guy had, we have it right now, it’s also a reason for you to obey.-the soldier that pretended his brother to be killed undressed and gave his clothes to Perceisha. The other one that found them undressed too and gave his clothes to jack.

-Perceh, in the au… did they learn you about the disguising?-asked jack smiling and then Percy laughed and put on the clothes of a Spanish soldier.

-you two, you will hide here, if you will scream to the others that we are the imposters, your captain will die.-both of the soldiers listened and ran far in the jungle.
Next Chapter the 20 February :) Thx For Your Time

 

Hello Again! :)
Chapter 4-the interception

When the boat has arrived to the beach, the pirate and the late assassin were already dressed. The two soldiers have hided far in the jungle. In the boat That arrived , there was one man who sayed:

-Get in there porfavor.

-gracias.-looking that there was only 5 spanish men that survived, and the boat was pretty huge, all of them, including jack and Percy, have got in without a problem. Once they arrived to the galleon, one soldier asked:

-how did you get there?

-long story…-answered jack before the captain who was actually going to answer.-hmm? What were waitin’?

-everyone! To the positions!-shouted the soldier that just talked to them. As the galleon started moving, Percy came to jack for ask one thing:

-where are they taking us?

-who cares?-answered valdy smiling-where ever they take us, it’s Gonne be too late…-at this moment, he showed Percy his musket.

-a, hem!-shouted jack-can I know who is the captain of this ship?

-me-answered the man that just talked to him.

-is your team trustworthy?

-of course, they never betrayed me these long five years! And why are you asking?-in the same moment, jack aimed with his musket to the captain’s head, and Percy took a knife and held the captain of the destroyed ship.

-where ever we were going, we are now going to Tortuga!-shouted jack to others-if I am not mistaken, it’s to north from here. It’s time for you to learn the valdy’s rules! If someone, disturbs me, insults me, attack me, or something like that, your captain will have a little hole in his head.-sayed valdy evilly smiling.-the boat is ours!
Sorry For Short Story, Next One Will Be Longer, Nxt Chapter The 21 February :)

 

Cool Story :D

 

Heres The Moment People Were Waitin Fo', Appear In my Awesome Story!
So @LouiseXminerX and @Killy_Kiid Are New to The Story, If you Dont Like yourself, Just tell me and i Edit it. Enjoy :)

Chapter 5-the pirate land

After 2 days, the Spanish galleon, captain jack valdy and Perceisha have arrived to the docks of the tortugan island.

-I heard this place is where all the drunk idiots and those who are wanted live there.-sayed Percy

-they do.-answered jack-but not only them, smarties like meh and other interesting people live there. You will really like it!

-I don’t think so…-percy sayed, jack was a smarty, and he knew what he did. Coming on this island is a stupid and suicidal idea, but if you are someone like valdy… it’s other story. Once they docked, jack sayed to The spanish Galleon Men: alright idiots of all sorts, here’s the place you should live in! here are even more sorts of stupidity and idiotism!-Percy and valdy laughed so hard together that one drunk fisherman fell in the water. They came in the middle of the village. All around the place, there was dancing people, bars and ladies coming from everywhere trying to impress men.

-oh Tortuga!-started the pirate captain-if all the villages of the world would be like this one, men wouldn’t need any tricks for impress ladies and live Happily-when he ended he saw one 20 years old girl running to him-hey louise!-but instead of getting something pleasant, Jack got a strong slap to his face.

-you stole my brig!!!-shouted the girl

-I didn’t…-but he didn’t even finish and got an another slap.-I took… took it without permission, but I was going to give it back…

-but You didn’t!!!-shouted the girl that jack got even a little bit scared.

-you’ll get another one!-sayed Perceisha

-which one?!-asked the girl

-better than the old one!-sayed Percy.

-yeah, better than the old one!-jack joined.

-that one!-sayed Percy and showed with his finger the ship they stole.

-that one?!-asked jack nervously but when he saw the face of the girl he confirmed-yeah! That one! What d’ya say?

-I take it!-shouted the girl and ran to the ship. Valdy, happy of escaping trouble, came forward in company with Perceisha. They walked for about 10 minutes and got pretty far from the village, instead, they arrived to one, really broken, farm.

-Jackie!!-screamed someone from the house, in the same moment, one man ran to them hugging jack.-oh jackie!! Long time no see!!! Is that your friend?

-no, we just escaped together, long story…-answered jack.

-oh then I am not asking! Especially about your ugly Spanish dress.Alright, come in, I will feed yah, you both must be really hungry!-when they slowly started walking in the house,percy asked:

-who is that?

-my Friend.-answered jack- His Name is Killy. he keeps thinking that this island can be civilized. As result, his farm that he made himself is now ravaged.

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Characters: @Me, @Perceisha, @LouiseXminerX and the Handsome @Killy_Kiid! (and @MappyTurtle, Get Ready To appear!)Enjoy! :D



Chapter 6-the conversation about loot, boat and the team

As jack and percy got in, valdy’s Friend started talking about the life on Tortuga. He mentioned the fact about a 20 years old girl that they met, this girl was called Louise.

-what brig have you stole from her that she keeps raging?-asked jack’s friend

-remember “Arlene”?-answered jack

-ooooh… then I understand! Me too I would rage, and also, I forgot to introduce myself to your friend. My name is Killy Kidd.

-nice to meet you-answered percy-my name is Perceisha.

-come on! Sit on the table!-sayed Killy-we have a lot of things to discuss of! As I know, jack would never come back to Tortuga for no reason!

-yeah, and about the reasons…-for one second he started sniffing-is bobby still in your darn house?!-in the same moment, a dog came out of the other chamber.

-i couldn’t have let him outside…-sayed Killy-and I thought it was you who killed our aunt for he stays in my house…

-I did!-started jack-because she started saying things about my life and other stuff. And then our dear uncle asked me to choose, the dog or her, and you know the rest!-Percy was really shocked, killing his own aunt! It’s inhumane! Just because she sayed something bad about your life doesn’t mean that you need to kill her for it, well jack was a mentally insane man.

-yeah, petunia was a still a worst woman I’ve ever knew…-sayed killy-alright so what are the reasons?-but one second after, killy was really surprised, jack was aiming at his dog’s head.

-where…is…my…Chest?!-shouted jack

-I have no idea!-shouted Killy in answer

-well, I am gonna shoot him!

-oh, like I didn’t know you… I know you won’t Shoot Anyone Except This Mappy Guy. You kept this bullet for ten years, and also, here it is!-finished Killy and gave jack the chest.

-alright!-sayed jack happily-lookin’ were all here! i am gonna show you something really shocking!-finished valdy and showed off the key.

-merry mother of joseph!-shouted killy-well, I know your style… so you need a ship and a team?

-yes.-answered Percy-but first I would like to change my dress.-Killy instantly came in the another room and came back with 2 large brown coats. He also gave jack a triangle hat and a sword.

-I’ll get a boat and a team this morning, right now, sleep peacefully.

Thx For Your Time! :)

 

Jeez i forgot to post it :O wait till tommorow pls (dont hate)

 

Honestly, what is up with you and Pirates?

 

And whats with people always saying that?

 

Is it bad that people ask a simple question to you?
What is up with you and Pirates?

 

Well, its repetitive... and i just like them.... :3

 

such a long story ... I gave up when I saw how long this story was

 

f**k me and my memory... ok So finally... theres a new chapter! :) And Another Thing, THX for 5 Guys Who wants The Continuation! :D
(Characters: @me, @Perceisha @LouiseXminerX and @Killy_Kiid)
Chapter 7-the way back to sea

As They woke up, Killy was already outside farming, jack woke up and Shouted:

-Did you Find a boat and a Team?!

-yeah!-answered Killy-come here, you will like that! It’s a lady… And you probably Already know her.-after hearing That, valdy got really scared and happy in the same time, he took a bottle of rum that was on the table and ran outside.

-Percy Wake up!-shouted jack-we already have everything! Alright, where’s that lady?-asked jack smiling

-I am here…-answered a 20 years old girl behind him, it was Louise… jack looked behind him to check if it was really her and got not a good surprise.

-are yaw still mad?-asked jack nervously smiling

-how to be mad at someone like you jack…?-started Louise-at the gentleman like you… that gave everything back… and didn’t even run away from the most dangerous girl ever…-Louise was actually the number 1 wanted on the list of the “two devilish letters”, if you would be jack you would surely run away like a little girl… two minutes later, Percy has came outside too.

-alright… how do we share this…key…?-asked jack.

-In your style… we are four (including Me) we sell this key... get the money... and we Share the money 25% each…-sayed Killy

-Hey! What about it was me who found it!-started Percy.-it’s me who decide no?

Killy, jack and louise have laughed together.

-my friend… here, in Tortuga, everything is noticed by a rank… and if you are a Captain… then nobody has even the right to Open his mouth without permission…Im The Cap... Louise is The Controller Looking she has a Ship... Killy is my Second...And you are a Mate! Learn The Pirate Codex My Friend! Alright, show me your lads!-finished jack, By Lads he meant his New Crew.

-they are inside!-answered Robert

-What?-asked jack nervously-MY CHEST!!!-he ran to the house-ANYONE WHO HAVE EVEN TOUCHED MY CHEST IS GOING TO HELL BECAUSE MY PISTOL IS NOT HAPPY TODAY AND WANTS TO SHOOT!!!-when he finished saying this, Louise laughed hard and showed to others the Chest.

-Jack calm down!-Shouted Louise-Your chest is here! And they Are not inside! They are on my Boat.

-Is It Really That one?-asked jack and came out the house

-yes.-answered louise Smiling, let’s go to docks, they are waiting us there!

I Hope That i Post The Next Chapter Tommorow! :) thx for your time!

 

Nice story c:

 

F**k the Hopes... but ok here New Chap'er.
(Characters: @Me, @Killy_Kiid @LouiseXminerX @Perceisha)
(New Ones: @Suthos )

Chapter 8-The introduction to others

When they finally arrived to the docks, there was line of men standing in front of the ship.

-say “hello” to your new captain!-shouted Louise

-HELLO CAPTAIN!!!-shouted the line of men. When they shouted it, jack walked forward and back until he finally stopped on one guy, that Guy didn’t have one eye.

-what’s your name?-asked jack

-Suthos sir!

-do you promise to never betray our team even if it will cost your 2nd eye?-asked jack smiling.-Mr. Suthos! I Wait an answer!

-i…I will never… betray The team even if it will cost my 2nd eye!-answered Suthos Nervously.

-awesome!-Shouted Killy

-and what do we gain when we complete the voyage?-asked some other man in the line. Jack approached, and asked.

-what’s yaw name?-asked jack evilly smiling

-yaw think I am afraid of you!-shouted the man, but before he could say something else, he got pushed away in the water.

-any questions?-asked Jack, nobody answered-great! Everyone! On the boat! Next station: Havana (it’s a city in cuba)-The Line Of men Came to the Ship, They Were Scared of their Captain Now, So They Didn't Say Anything.

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yolo!
Ok Characters: (same as the previous one :3)

Chapter 9-Jack’s secret

When they finally left Tortuga, the team was occupied, Louise was screaming to others for they do better, Killy was cooking and jack was sleeping in his cabin. Percy Was Pretty Curious About The Jack's chest, What Could it Keep? What is So Important for him? He checked Others Working and Then Percy entered jack's cabin and asked:

-what’s inside this chest?

-first, knock before entering. Second, it’s not your business.-answered jack.

-you was going to kill someone because of it! I don’t wanna be the next victim!

-well then do not approach to it…

-does killy and Louise know what’s inside?-asked percy.

-yeah they know, but first I trust them, second they weren’t members of the AU…-after jack sayed this, Percy got really surprised… what it could be if he doesn’t even want to show it to the au member. Probably something really important to the government.

-alright my friend, get outta my cabin!-sayed jack, Percy left. He waited until the night. When the night has finally arrived, everyone except some members of the team that were working didn't sleep, the rest was sleeping. Valdy slept as well. Percy came into the cabin silently, approached to the table which had a chest on it. He took it, and left silently, like if nothing happened. Just when he got out, he opened the chest, it had a letter. It was written:

You Really Thought that I am to that point dumb? I wasn’t sleeping, also for the real chest, you’ll need a key. -Captain Jack Valdy



Percy thrown the chest away in the sea because he got really mad.

-Jack, how do you do it?-thought percy.

-His Magical Logic...-answered Louise Behind him.-No One Can Know What He Actually Think About Anything, no one Knows about His Way of Thinking.

Thx for your Time! Pls Rate my Story from 1 to 10. I Wanna Know If i Should Continue Making Those.

 

10

 

Aww no me :(