depressing story (idk what is wrong with me)

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    There once was a young girl named Clare. She was a smart, beautiful girl, but she had

    depression.

    As Clare walked down the hallway of her school, she spotted a new young man, whose name

    was Billie.

    As he turned to walk to his class, he looked right into Clare’s eyes. Both parties stopped in their

    tracks. It was love at first sight.

    As one month has passed, Clare and Billie have become boyfriend and girlfriend.

    As Billie came to Clare’s front door, he knocked. Clare’s father answered the door. He told him

    to go away, and Billie said “No. I want to see your daughter.” Infuriated, her father replied, “ I

    told you to go away. Now leave before I call the Police.”

    As days passed, Clare was forbidden to speak, see, or be in the same ZIP code as Billie.

    Months passed, and finally, Clare saw Billie walking down the street with another girl. Had he

    given up on her? She ran down the stairs, and ran out of the door. “Billie!” She called, Billie

    looked her way, and stared blankly at her. “Who are you?” He said. “Your girlfriend!” She stated.

    “ Who’s she?!” The girl with billie said “ His girlfriend!”

    “No!” she yelled. “I’m his girlfriend!”

    “Stop it, both of you!” roared Billie, “ I have never seen you in my life! “ He looked at Clare.

    “What do you mean?!!!” demanded Clare. The girl Billie was with stormed down the sidewalk

    with Billie at her heels. Begging her to hear him out.

    Clare was devastated. She ran back inside, to her room, and broke a mirror in her room.

    As she stood up, finishing a note, she took the glass shard and slit her wrist. In her last

    moments, she thought about all of the good times she had with her dad and mom when they

    were still together

    Her father, just waking up from a nap, heard her screaming. As he ran up to her room, he called

    911.

    At the hospital, he met her mother, who had divorced him when Clare was three. “What have

    you done?!” shouted his ex-wife. “Nothing!” He said.

    As the doctor walked down the hall, he said, “Forgive me for the words I am about to say, I’m

    sorry for your loss.”

    That night, Clare’s father read the note for the fourth time.

    “Dear father, I’m sorry for this, but I’m just a waste of space. You were the best friend that I ever

    had, but I was born in the wrong time, and in the wrong place. I’m watching you from the stars

    above. You can get through this, just hug your pillow tighter. Well it’s time to go, and I’m running

    out of room to write, I guess I’ll see you on the other side.

    Your beloved daughter,

    -Clare”

    As her father bellowed at the moon, he blamed him for her death, and vowed to get revenge for

    his daughter. He called the police, and told them what had happen.

    Two years later, Billie behind bars for Assisted suicide, Clare;s father standing over her grave,

    He imagined his beautiful daughter, smiling down at him.

    Five years later, the ex-wife standing over the father's grave, which was next to Clare’s, she

    thought about her daughter, who had died so horribly, and her husband, who had passed from a

    stroke. Then, her daughters dog, who had been with her when she passed, walked up to her,

    and laid down, and went to sleep.

    Two years later, the dog had died in its sleep, the ex-mom/wife suffered from depression. She

    walked to the roof, sad because everyone in her life died, she walked to the edge, she looked

    down at all the people recording, she jumped.
     
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