Need some opinions c:

Haha, thanks c:

I did... I always do xD

Also, I put a lot of detail in this. If you mean that some lines get out of the original outline, that's how I wanted it. Looks more realistic ^-^

 

I also have you on my friends list on DeviantArt ^.^

 

Comp-Letly tr-ash, your a oven so pls[jk dis is 2 gud]

 

Beautiful just like you ♥

 

O u lil' shiii (Jk thank u)

Thanks and so are you <3

 

This is really good, but maybe you should work on cleaning up the line work, it seems a bit sloppy and rushed, another thing is the hair seems to be one solid color with little shading and highlights, maybe if you could try to fix that it will help bring the piece together even more. Another thing is, the skin seems to have a lack of shading or highlights aswell, the line art around the skin is very peachy, maybe change it to a darker color (such as brown) to show the contrast. Other than that, its some really good work, keep practicing, and you will become even better. :^ )

 

Yeah, Im working on the shading etc. Also, the art style (line work etc) was on purpose. Thank you anyways!

 

You're amazing at shading already! Pfft, I have no clue what you're talking about. Your drawings are truly amazing. Were these made online or on paper?

 

Just on my computer by using painttool sai c: And thanks a lot!

 

Oh okay, thanks for letting me know :)

 

Are you using a mouse or a drawing tablet?

 

A drawing tablet, I'll attach a picture soon.

 

It's very beautiful!
The only suggestion I have is to play with the pressure/pressure settings a bit to get a some more depth with your lines. ^-^

 

It's amazing!

I honestly don't know how people can draw like this. I have a drawing pad and Photoshop, but I just have no artistic talent whatsoever XP

 

Thanks!

Thank you omg c:

 

Can I save this I really like it!? c:

 

Sure! Go ahead c:

 

#PhoenixIsTalented

 

Thank youuu >.<

 

A little update since this looks better: