My poem.

Discussion in 'General Discussion / Real life stuff' started by ForeverDoomed, Sep 24, 2016.

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    ForeverDoomed

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    Okay, so recently I've been thinking and decided to write a poem. I'm not the best at them but I always had a passion. I kind of judged myself for some sentences I wrote, but whatever.

    I definitely can't express in simple words the way I felt so I expressed them through the poem.
    And no, I don't have a mental illness.

    This one can be defined as an unconventional poem with a bit of monologue, you could say. In other words, sentences that link to each other like invisible wires. So I don't know, nor sure.

    Depends on how you see it, I guess.

    I hope you'll enjoy?

    These visions...
    They keep on appearing
    These feelings I feel...
    It feels like both happy and lost souls

    I am here
    They are here
    I know...
    And they know too
    It feels like a dream...
    Like something lead us to each other

    We all are dead, free and levitating in the woods
    We are all connected

    They're receiving my help and support
    The lost souls are getting a lesson on fighting for oneself and for their loved ones
    The happy ones are learning about pain and understand how others feel
    They both know that in order to know everything happening, they need to admit they know nothing
    It feels like an eternal, happy dream
    Yet it somehow feels wrong too

    Is this empathy I feel?
    Was all my efforts, love and care for them worth it?
    Is this the future that I predicted or calculated or was that something else?

    And here we are...
    Getting near a beautiful village near the sea
    With vessels waiting to sail...
    This journey... it is going to be a tough one
    They know it, and they're ready for it
    They're making a change
    They're there, standing proud
    They smiled for a few seconds
    And I along with them, made an insouciant sigh

    We're sailing back home...