Lobby/Spawn

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by Lontalius, Sep 11, 2016.

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Do you like this build?

  1. Yes, it's great!

  2. I could see this being spawn for a minigame!

  3. Could do with some work.

  4. No, I do not like it.

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  1. Lontalius

    Lontalius ˗ˏˋ joseph ˎˊ˗

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    Hello! First build I've ever done that is professional.
    I am a terrible builder, so this is pretty bad but oh well.
    http://imgur.com/a/lsATp
    This lobby could be used for any minigame/part of the server.
    Feedback/poll votes are appreciated!
     
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  2. Jabitin

    Jabitin Special Person Donator

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    Now, while I love the spawn, I think it fits survival more rather than creative.

    Nice Building!
     
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  3. Lontalius

    Lontalius ˗ˏˋ joseph ˎˊ˗

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    Thanks!
     
  4. Jabitin

    Jabitin Special Person Donator

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    No problem!
     
  5. Darkstorm77

    Darkstorm77 Former M.od+ Donator

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    I also feel this might go well with a server like survival.
    The size is the only thing that bothers me. Good job.
     
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  6. StonN

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    This fits for factions lobby IMO.
     
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  7. bluetrashbag

    bluetrashbag hi Donator

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    Not bad. Keep it up!
     
  8. Gamerrizz

    Gamerrizz Minecraft Realms MapMaker | Creator of Dodge!

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    I like your idea but the structure is simplistic. As the scale of the structure is small and detial/shape lacks quite a bit. Good luck with it though.
     
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  9. iRachel

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    I sometimes play on survival factions and I hate it how the spawn is so tiny. I would love it if this was the new spawn for survival factions.
     
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  10. iWolf

    iWolf Retired Donator

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    Looks pretty good overall, but could use some more detail. Definitely a work in progress though, keep it up! :)
     
  11. BrokenRadio

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    It's small for a Lobby :/
     
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  12. gippy

    gippy DO IT Donator

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    It's really cool and I like it. It could be a lobby, but it looks more like a Survival spawn. Good luck!
     
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  13. JCeroOne

    JCeroOne Donator

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    It'd fit perfectly with some work. But its still good build.
     
  14. Zackery

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    It's too flat imo, adding some variation of heights to make it pop out more would make it 10x better! It's still a great build.
    But as gamerizz said, it's very simplistic and not enough details.

    Some Ideas:
    - Don't make it square, a lot of people make their lobby spawns for a mini-game, a square. Try using a different shape, or a made up shape for that matter to make it original.
    - More Textures. I don't mean texture the ground, I mean a more variation of wood for some buildings, or different trees. Don't make it all the same. Make it stand out and blend together, not just be, bland.
    - Don't make a build on creative without the intentions of making your own mountains, high lands, etc. Go on a normal world in creative, find a nice place that has high points, low points, etc, and build off it. I have ideas for a spawn, but I don't want to give out my ideas, since I want to be the one to throw them into the mixture of submissions.

    That's all I got right now.. anyway, goodluck with your submission.
     
  15. safoya299

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    It's nice but would be even better with more detail