BlakeSenpai's Own Urban Legend (aka CreepyPasta)

Edit: Due to recent suggestions I am going to edit the story. A big thank you to @ActuallyImJerome for these suggestions.



Hello everyone so something I thought I would do is write my own CreepyPasta on here, and not the actual website. Don't ask.
Keep in mind I'm new to this so I may not creep any of you out.

The title of this story is 'Don't Open the Door'


A man and his daughter had moved into a suspicious log house in the middle of a forest. The house was mostly filled with nonsensical furniture with irrelevant decorations here and there. The man was alerted by the original owner that there was a door that he was to never open, or the consequences would be terrifying. At night the man would hear scratching noises at the door, and his daughter would here voices of her dead mother. The next morning as the man was sitting in a recliner drinking coffee, he heard a horrific scream coming from his daughter's bedroom. He dashed upstairs to her bedroom to find a body nailed into the wall with 'GET OUT' written on the wall with an unknown substance. The man then contacted the police who performed an autopsy, and found the hand prints of the man's dead wife. Further investigation proved the body was the original owner shaved of all the hair on his head, and his eyebrows were shaved of as well. The man and his daughter were shown a sinister and odd tape from the house's security cameras of a distorted woman dragging the original house owner's dead body and nailed him to the wall in a supernatural way. A woman was then identified, and was given the death penalty by lethal injection. From then on the two started to experience ridiculous , and creepy events. The TV started sharing eerie messages with them, that weren't in the show's original script. At night the man awoke to a muffled scream in the hallway. As he stepped out of his room he saw a quick blur run down the stairs. Then a vase mysteriously was thrown by a supernatural force that hit the daughter's head. Finally, the man walked over the forbidden door with a shotgun. He opened the door to see the same woman who nailed the body on the wall of his daughter's bedroom, and all of a sudden the man and his daughter suffocated to death. It is now a rumor that mentioning the woman, and then insulting her will result in immediate suffocation. The suffocation is rumored to be by a supernatural force strangling you.


I hope you enjoyed the story, and if I need to improve upon anything leave some feedback.

 

Not bad. Very unrealistic though.

Try explaining more. Why did the house disappear? Who was the mysterious force and how did they get out of the door? What did they want against the man and his daughter?

 

I thought most CreepyPastas were supposed to be unrealistic o_O

 

Yes but.. that one is beyond unrealistic.
Like, the house just disappeared? They found a body nailed in the wall, just like that? They didn't call the police?