My Another Try: Time Travel

Hewwo. Sorry for posting this late, had 2 exams going on. Please reply so I can finally finish this (I estimate 2 chapters left) and I hope u enjoy. :)

Chapter 24 - The Attack

Still inside the cell, Jack looked outside to see what's going on. "What do you see?" asked the assistant. "Hard to describe, a bunch of Neanderthals shooting from outside and the other bunch of Neanderthals trying to fight back." said Jack. "What sort of "Neanderthals"? asked Sven. "The ones in ugly costumes Tree Killer costumes and the ones with dirty costumes, they look like-" Jack wanted to finish his phrase but a rocket flew his cell's window so he jumped away from the window to not get hit. "Woah!" said Safoya. The rocket got Jack's cell's door and broke it, freeing Jack. "Well that's very convenient." said Sven.

Jack got out of the cell looking for keys to open other cells. He finds it soon and frees his friends. When he got to the assistant's cell and opened it, something he wasn't expecting happened. He punched him. "Ouch, what was that for?" asked Jack. "Have a better aim next time you shoot at me, bastard." said the assistant. A tree killer guard appeared soon. "Where do you think you're going?!" asked the guard. "You're staying in!" Bruno, who was also free now, got closer to the guard. He grabbed the guard. "Let's have a deal, you let us go, and you still have your teeth in your mouth" said Bruno. "No-" the guard was interrupted by Bruno's violent punch in the face that knocked the guard out. "Let's go" said Bruno heading for the exit.

When they got out, there was mayhem going on. Houses on fire, everybody screaming, gunfire that was killing ears, dead bodies. "Okay, this looks, not good" said Louise. "We need to find Blab and RHG before all of this becomes a bigger problem." Said Killy. "We should split! You (Killy pointed at Bruno, Sven and the Assistant), go this way! Safoya, you come with me. Jack, you're with Louise." finished Killy and everyone ran different ways except Jack. "What are you waiting for?" asked Louise. "I think we should find someone else too." said Jack and ran away from Louise. "Hey, wait!" screamed Louise and started chasing him.

Sven, Bruno and the assistant were running around looking for Blab and Red Hat Guy. Instead of finding them, they found someone they would prefer to avoid. "No need to hurry, my friends." said Tree Killman with his helmet on. "It's been a while that I've been waiting for this..." said Bruno and ran towards Tree to hit him but Tree moved out of the way and made Bruno fall. Sven knew that they have zero chance to win this fight in melee. He looked in his pockets for guns but there weren't any. Assistant didn't have any either. "Screw it." said the assistant and rushed towards Tree, not surprisingly, Tree dodged again and hit the assistant back. "Your turn." said Tree looking at Sven. "I suppose it is." said Sven and slowly approached Tree ready to lose.

Tree jumped on Sven and Sven tried to fight back but was too slow to react to Tree's hits. He no longer tried to win this fight, he knew he couldn't, he just tried to lose in the least painful way possible. Tree put Sven on the ground and pointed his mini rocket launchers on his hands at Sven. "Welcome to Oblivion" said Tree and shot but not where he wanted. Blab and RHG shown up on a truck trying to hit Tree with it but before they could, he already shot the truck's tires with his rockets. Sven used the opportunity of this distraction and pushed Tree away from him. Blab and RHG started shooting at Tree but he dodged every shot and eventually decided to run away. "Oh great, we were looking for you, guys." said Sven.

Jack ran around. "Where is he?" thought Jack. "Jack! Where the hell are you going?!" Asked Louise running behind Jack. "Looking for a kid..." said Jack while still looking around. "What kid?" asked Louise, she looked behind her and saw a rocket heading their way. "Move!" Said Louise and pushed Jack while she jumped the other way to dodge the rocket. The explosion made both of them land a few meters further than Louise expected. "Hey!" said a childish voice from the distance that was getting closer. Louise looked to see who that was and she noticed that the voice was going in Jack's direction. "Hello Jim" said Jack laying on the ground. "You might wanna get out until you're blown up" said Jim helping Jack to get up. "Have you seen a huge twat somewhere?" asked Jack. "If we're talking about the same twat then he ran inside of this" said Jim pointing his finger at a house. "Okay, let's go then" said Jack, called Louise and they came inside of the house.

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Great chapter!

 

IMO you keep improving! I really like it!

 

Great work Captain Jack :) Remember, if you need any ideas, feel free to read my stories. ^.^