my First IJAH fanfiction. (ItsJerryandHarry: Oblivion) part 1

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  1. John_0696

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    this Fanfiction will be A crossover of Transformers and Minecraft (IJAH server). Bossclaires Meatball moments story really inspired me. :) this is kind of like the First movie except takes place in The IJAH survival world. Ill try my best to make this as good as meatball moments. Enjoy Part 1!

    *Silence*

    Optimus Prime: Before time began... there was, the Cube. We know not where it comes from, only that it holds the Power to create Worlds, And fill them with life. That is how our race was Born. in a time we lived in Harmony, but like all great Power, some wanted it for good... others for evil. And so began the War. a War that ravaged our planet until it was consumed by death. and the cube was lost to the far reaches of space... we Scattered across the Galaxy, Hoping to find it and rebuild our home. we searched every star, Every world, and just when all hope seemed lost, message of a new discovery drew us to a unknown planet called... Minecraftia.

    *cue Title*

    But we were already too late...

    the first scene opens up to a Large Valley, filled with Buildings and Houses, This was Bambi, the faction where the IJAH crew lived. along with others who they considered as Friends. the scene than goes to the Main characters, John_0696_, Bossclaire, MrceeAK, xMisfitCow and albinobat were all working together to build a New shop.

    John: Ok, i think this is Just about done!

    Mrcee: Really? i dont think it looks Complete.

    John: How so? it already has all the stuff you can buy-

    Mrcee: No no i mean like Decorations.

    John: Oh yeah. it does look bland, Hey Misfit!

    Misfit: Yes?

    John: Can you get us a couple paintings and flower pots? we need to decorate this shop.

    Misfit: Ok, you want Blue Orchid or Roses?

    John: Doesnt matter, we just need to brighten up the place.

    Bossclaire:hey Look! here comes Saul!

    A teenage boy walks up to the others, he had black hait, Bunny ears coming out of his head and had robotic ears on the sides. He also had Giant Condor wings. it was Saul1337.

    Saul1337: Hey guys. Is the Bambi shop finished?

    John: Not yet. but getting there!

    meanwhile, off 10 miles away, a Lone Helicopter was flying through the Wilderness.the scene then turns to a Military Base, where Sergeant NESlover1 was watching Radar to see what was going on.

    NESlover1: Commander, we have a inbound Unknown infiltrator 10 miles out.

    Yomc: Let me see.

    the radar showed a Blinking dot in the distance from the Bambi faction.

    Yomc: Unidentified Aircraft you are in Restricted Airspace, please proceed out of the area or we will use Deadly force

    No reponse.

    Yomc: Sergeant DWG, send out 2 f22s to pursue this Unknown aircraft, bogeys in the weed 10 miles out not squawking.

    *2 f22s fly off to find the unknown craft.*

    Yomc: Unidentified Aircraft, we will Escort you to Bambi faction, if you do not comply, we will use Deadly force.

    F22 pilot: Tracking the Bogey. Tail says 4500 x ray.

    NESlover1: Commander Yomc it says here 4500 x was shot down 3 months ago near Endertacos.

    Yomc: Thats gotta be a mistake. check again.

    NESlover1: i did Yomc, Nocturn_king was on that helicopter.

    *the F22s fly by the Helicopter, it starts to follow them.*

    the scene then turns back to John and the others Finishing putting up Decorations for the Shop.

    John: Wow guys we did a pretty good Job!

    Saul: if only Mrcee Didnt drop that Flower pot with the cactus in it on my foot.

    Mrcee: *shrugs* eheheheheeeh... sorry

    Saul: anyways, there are more abandoned houses on the outside of Bambi, you guys want to do a free day?

    John: Yes! id love that! i bet you in one of the houses some guy had a whole diamond stash :D

    Mrcee: im gonna get to that first!

    John: No me!

    Misfit: How about the both of you? split the Diamonds :)

    John: that actually sounds ok.

    Bossclaire: Hey guys, ever noticed that Humvees are pulling into our Faction territory?

    The 4 kids turn to see a bunch of army vehicles driving into the factions main entrance.

    Saul: What the!? where did they come from?

    John: I dont know, but we should investigate.

    the kids run up to DWG, DWG looked at them with a Stern look.

    DWG: what the fok you guys doing here?

    John: well what YOU doing here?

    Dwg: We are Coming here because our Radars have detected a Unidentified aircraft and its heading towards here. so we gotta be prepared for whatever this thing may be.

    Bossclaire: I bet you its those Terrorists and the evil kings Precursor is here!! O_O

    Dwg: we didnt get a reply from it so it could be a terrorist, but thats why were here.

    John: Hey guys look!

    John points to a Large Helicopter slowly descending to the ground, as Humvees and Soldiers move slowly towards it.

    Soldier: Bogeys on the ground.

    NESlover1: whoa whoa, The radars malfunctioning.

    *the radar screeen makes Buzzes and glitching sounds*

    NESlover1: its coming from the Helicopter.

    as he went to grab a phone to tell the others, the lights start gonig on oand off and so did the computers.

    John: Hey guys, is it me or is our Redstone stuff screwing up?

    Saul: the redstone machines aren't supposed to act like that..

    the automatic farms, Contraptions, electronics and Doors behaved eratically. smoking and cracking like a gun until they eventually died from malfunction.

    Saul: thats not good...

    *DWG raises a Megaphone and speaks to the Pilots in the Helicopter*

    DWG:Helicopter Pilot Power down the vehicle now! have your crew step out or we will kill you.

    the helicopters rotor blades stopped, then they moved and shifted to the back of the Helicopter.
    then all of a sudden, the whole vehicle started changing and shifting into something Large.

    *Machine guns Opened fire on the giant Metal Creature*

    DWG: WHAT THE FOK!?

    *The giant metal creature stood up and started opening fire on everything it saw, People started Droppnig on the ground and some began to run. the Robot then Sent out a Enourmous Light blue Shockwave across the Faction, Shattering every window in the radius.

    Saul1337: OH MY GOD!! RUN RUN RUN!!

    The kids and the soldiers began to run away from the Attacker, the Giant robotic creature resumed opening fire on everything that moved, Humvees were tossed into the air like toys, and Soldiers were dropping on the ground some dying some Wounded.

    The Robot then Tore off the Roof of one of the Buildings, and grabbed a Server mainframe located in the middle of the room and Tried to pull it off the ground.

    Commander Yomc: Its going after the Classified Files! Cut the Server hard lines!!

    NESlover1: I dont know where they are!!

    Yomc ran towards the Cords that connected the server to the computers files and started trying to rip it, no success.

    John, Mrcee, Bossclaire, Misfit and Saul ran towards sauls Bomb shelter, As They ran Mrcee looked in the air to see Humvees and Tanks falling on the ground around them on fire. one tank fell and crushed A abandoned house left by TheEpicPieman. Bossclaire tripped and fell on the ground and Twisted her ankle, Saul John and the others got to the entrance of the shelter safely.

    *Boom*

    Bossclaire looked up, and Saw the Giant Robot creature staring down at her. She grabbed her Iphone to record the creature, but as she pulled out her Phone, a gun extended out of the robots Arm and it aimed the gun at her.

    Bossclaire: aagh! dont hurt me!

    Misfit grabbed a Explosive tip Bow and Shot an arrow at the Robot, it Damaged it a little, but not enough to Kill it. the Robot then turned towards the Others and Attempted to Shoot at them, but they escaped before the creature could fire at them. Bossclaire managed to get up and Run/limp away from the Robot. the GIant robot then turned around and Extended the Helicopter Blades and Ejected a Scorpion like robot into the ground. the attack Cause lots of soldiers deaths, and many wounded, the Bambi Faction was completely Destroyed. but did the kids make it out alive?

    TO BE CONTINUED!!
     
  2. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    Good job john!

    Where am I? ;-;
     
  3. LaurentYuri

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    Two stories now made that has been inspired by my Meatball Moments. How... heartwarming and lovely! I feel really happy right now :)
     
  4. Heatdude Da Waffle

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    So... many.... stories.... anyway, nice job :D Nice to see another good story.
     
  5. Noahnoobfax

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    A-MAZING STORY

    But can i be in part 2
     
  6. Miner

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    ;-; why am I never in these stories... I wanna be in the next one pls.
    So epic much adventure such coolness
     
  7. John_0696

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    I ll possibly Put part 2 up On Monday :) anyways Thanks for the feedback!
     
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  9. John_0696

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    Part 2! Do you guys want me to continue this? if so let me know :) Enjoy!

    1 week has passed ever since the Attack on Bambi, The whole faction was Destroyed. Saul, Misfit, John, Mrcee and a Wounded Bossclaire fled the Faction and took refuge in a old abandoned Faction known as Stonehenge. Saul was wrapping a Bandage around Bossclaires Leg to fix her twisted Ankle.

    Saul: Ok there we go, it should Heal in a couple days.

    Bossclaire, thanks saul im still a bit shaken up from last thursday.

    Saul: Me too, but dont run too fast or youll end up Hurting yourself again, you never know when we may run into another threat.

    John: All the houses... all the Shops and Fun stuff, just Gone. in a couple hours... Bambi is gone. and we are homeless, What are we gonna do!?

    albinobat: I dont know, but if theres something out there, we need to get it to the Military immediately. they may be able to figure out what this thing was.

    Bossclaire: I have proof too, look at this.

    Claire pulled out her Iphone and Tapped the Picture of the Giant metal creature that attacked Bambi.

    Bossclaire: when that thing came near me, it looked right at me. its face had a look of Pure evil.

    Saul: wow... whatever that is it is Definetely not a player. no player could be at least 30 feet tall.

    Misfit: look at it closer, it looks like it has some type of invisible Force field around it.

    Mrcee: No way, that like Sci-fi Crap. it must have been something wrong with your Phone at the time.

    Bossclaire: idk man. my phone hasnt been tampered with for a while.

    Saul: We need to get this to Jerry and Harry. This could become a Serious threat.

    Misfit: do you even know where The IJAH Palace even is!?

    Saul: Yes obviously, i am apart of the crew. they told me where it was, its just across that Mesa Biome.

    John: Ok then, i can call up my other buddies to help us out. i only need a strong signal.

    a few feet away a Scorpion like robot silently watched the Kids.

    John: theres a Jeep over there, we can just use that to get there.

    Misfit: Sounds good to me!

    the kids then all got on the car and saul got in the driver seat, they sped away towards the Mesa biome road. the Robot scorpion creature Stealthily pursued the kids by Tunneling through the ground.

    Meanwhile in a Mine underneath the Keeki Faction, Sera, Magical, Bunniesunday, Shadow and Hubble were all Mining for Diamonds to try to break a record, to have the Most diamonds in one faction.

    Sera: Haiah guys, i brought back sum Emeralds. any1 want sum?

    Magical: Aww thanks sera, but we need diamonds, not emeralds. Hubble needs you in the 2nd tunnel in this mine he said he found some Diamonds but needs someone else to help clear them.

    Sera: KK, off i go. bai

    Sera Walked to Hubble who was Mining out A lot of stone and Lapis and other ores.

    Sera: U need help? i can help u.

    Hubble: Oh yeah sera hey, I need you to help clear up these Diamonds. there are about 20 ores total. ill get this side, you get that one.

    Hubble and sera grabbed Iron picks and got to work, A while later Sera saw a Wall of cobble.

    Sera: Dungeon! i found a dungeon!

    Hubble: Oh boy! mine it! lets see what good loot they got in that!

    Sera Mined the Cobble, but when the Cobble broke, the whole wall gave away. Sera and Hubble backed up as the Stones fell, then came to see a Large symmetrical Cave.

    Sera: Wat the???

    Hubble: ive never seen a cave like this before...

    The walls were made of some steel plates, they glistened from the Shines of the flashlights, then Sera looked down. and Saw a Cube sitting on a Glowing Stand. it had Alien Hieroglyphics on all sides of the Cube.

    Hubble: what is that??

    Sera: idk, must be a new block in a update. it looks so purteh. :3 ima see it.

    Hubble: Are you nuts!? we dont know what that thing is!

    Sera Moved slowly towards the Strange cube, Hubble looked towards Sera with Fright, hoping she doesnt get hurt. Sera slowly grabbed the Cube and Picked it up.

    Sera: Whoa! dis is Heaveh. Lets *urgh* take it back to the House!

    Hubble: Ok then... *mumbles* oh god what have i done??

    Sera and Hubbble put the Cube in a Minecart and got in, they Went back to the Main part of the Mine where Magical was waiting for them.

    Magical: Did you get any diamonds? hope you did.

    Sera: we did, but we also found this!

    Sera and Hubble got out, and Sera grabbed the cube and showed it to Magical. Magical gazed at it with Awe.

    Magical: what the.. what is that?

    Hubble: we dont know. but maybe it has some type of Purpose. lets keep it and take it back to the House.

    Magical: uhh im not so sure.

    Sera: Oh come on, no one would want to steal it.

    Magical, Sera and Hubble walked back to Magicals House, Sera and the others Put the cube on the table and sat and looked at it.

    Magical, i don't understand what this thing is.. maybe its a New ore?

    Hubble: It could be some New item. we can find a use for it.

    Sera: Like uhhh.... a Paperweight!

    Hubble: GOOD IDEA! :D

    Magical: sometimes i wonder about you guys xD.

    meanwhile near Magicals house, a tiny Insect like robot flew towards the window. and Perched itself on the Windowsill, it monitored Sera and Hubble setting the Cube down on there Desk to use as a Paperweight.

    The Insect robot then extended a tiny satellite Dish and Spoke in a Alien language that translated to: This is Insecticon, The cube has been found.

    in space, a alien sattelite got the Signal from the Insect robot, the Satellite was a robotic creature with a head. its eyes Lit up and moved.

    Soundwave: Soundwave acknowledges. Pursue them, Retrieve it.

    To be continued :D in PART 3!
     
  10. LaurentYuri

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    It's like watching it all over again...
    Where is Bumblebee? :p
     
  11. John_0696

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    hes coming... soon maybe in part 3
     
  12. budderlover XD

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    Could I be in it?
    Anyways, I love the story. I'm on the edge of my seat just thinking about the next part... OW. I fell off my seat. That was a bad idea to sit like that.

    Butt anyways, nice story :D Can't wait for da next part!
     
  13. Heatdude Da Waffle

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    No, I don't want you to continue this. I just spend my time reading it because I hate it. (sarcasm)

    MORE MORE MORE!!!
     
  14. Xadidax

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    wat


    Cool story John.
    How do you guys even do this?
     
  15. John_0696

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    part 3! Ok guys this fanfiction is going good already, and Also i am thinking of tying in meatball moments and my story together. Its not gonna have the same things as Bossclaires story, but more like why it happened. and references. Anyways ENJOY!

    A couple days later after Sera Found the Mysterious Alien cube, She went back to her Usual derpy life, But Magical sat at his chair looking at the cube wondering what and where it came from.

    Magical: (thinking to herself) What is that? Theres no way that this is Human, look at it it has Alien writing, since when do Blocks have Alien writing on it?

    As she started to ponder more, a Panda wearing a blue coat ran in with a Frightened look on his face.

    Shadow: Magical!! there's a group of Raiders Heading towards Keeki! We need to get to the armory!

    Magical: What!? grab all your Valuables! we arent fighting these guys, we'll get killed!

    Sera: Nuu plz i dunt wanna dai!

    Hubble:Grab the Alien thingy! if they see it, their gonna take it.

    Sera: kk!

    Shadow, Magical, Sera and Hubble grabbed there most valuable belongings and Went to the Bunker underneath Shadows house. they Put all there stuff in the chest and hunkered down.

    Magical: Ok you guys all here?

    Sera: Yep

    Hubble: Yep

    Shadow: Yes

    Magical: Ok, Sera you grab the alien cube?

    Sera: The wat?

    Hubble: You didnt grab it!?

    Sera: Oops i derped out again sorreh :P

    Hubble: Ugh Now the Raiders are gonna steal it >:( Great job Sera.

    Sera: Well excuuse me! i cant help when i derp out.

    Magical: Guys stop fighting please. Hubble, go grab the cube and bring it here, but stay low they may see you.

    Hubble: Slowly stepped out of the Shelter, and Looked around, Sure enough there were raiders breaking down houses and Carrying Chests out and loading them into a truck.

    Hubble: ok, sneak past raiders, grab cube, Run back.

    Hubble managed to get into Magicals house because there were no raiders in there, he ran towards the desk and Grabbed the Cube.

    Hubble: Ok yes! i got it! now to get back to shadows house-

    *Bang* the Door flew open and a Member of the people that were raiding keeki walked in and Held a Sword towards Hubble

    Henchman #1: Give me that Diamond block. NOW!!!

    Hubble: No way! not with that attitude!

    Henchman #1: I dont have time for your petty games kid! GIVE IT TO ME!

    Hubble: You calling me a kid?

    Henchman #1: Shut up! give it to me or else your friends wont be able to find your remains!!

    Hubble: Id prefer to be called.... EXPERIENCED!

    Hubble ran up to the Henchmen and roundhouse kicked him in the chest and sent him flying backwards towards the door, the others ran up to him and tried to grab the cube out of his hand, But Hubble Fought his way through the Raiders and Ran towards Shadows house, He looked back and Gasped, they all were following him in there Truck, and one had a Machine gun mounted on top of the truck.

    Magical: Hubble! Come on we gotta get out of here!

    Hubble: You think!?

    Hubble and the rest of the teens ran away from the raiders into a Abandoned Faction, that was disbanded not too long ago.

    Magical: We will never be able to outrun them since they have a truck! what we need is another form of transportation! like a Car or Something!

    Shadow: over there! theres a Car!

    Shadow pointed to a Yellow and Black 1976 Camaro sitting near a Abandoned house left by a person named Jbrobinett, they all got in and closed the doors.

    Magical: Do you guys Have anything to start this damn thing!?

    Hubble: I dont know!

    Sera: There gaining on us!! There gaining on us!!

    Shadow: Here use this Key!

    Shadow gave Hubble a Key and Hubble put it in the ignition, the car started up and Hubble hopped in the Driver seat and Hit the gas, they Managed to speed away from the raiders who were just Moments from ending the teens lives.

    Magical: So where do we go now?

    Hubble: Only one place, Endertacos...

    To be continued! :D
     
  16. John_0696

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    Lel i really wanted to make you derpy in the series. ;) ty for posting
     
  17. John_0696

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    part 3! I may limit myself to Updating every wednesday, cause my current IRL life is Really Crazy. and i havent really been having time to write the fanfiction, You know, school, Personal life all that stuff. Trying to Graduate school. I gotta focus more on my education more than Minecraft. but still i am Obligated to keep making this story :) Enjoy! and thank you for Understanding.

    In the mesa biome, the teens pulled up to a nearby Gas station in a small town and Got out. Saul Payed and Put the gas nozzle in the Jeep.

    Saul: Claire, can you Get a signal on your phone here?

    Claire: Only one bar, ill try to make a call.

    As claire dialed ItsjerryandHarrys Military service number, Sand and Dust shot up and went towards the Telephone pole and Knocked it down.

    John: What the hell was that!?

    Albinobat: The telephone Pole fell over. Thats not good.

    Claire: Crap and i was just about to reach them!

    Misfit Sat and Wiped her face with a Napkin, but didnt notice the large Robotic Scorpion tail behind her opening up about to Stab her, before it could John looked over and Panicked

    John: MISFIT LOOK OUT!

    John pulled out a Pistol and Began shooting at the Tail, Misfit ran away from where she was the Robot emerged again before burrowing into the sand again.

    John: Stay where your at! dont move!

    The Large Robot Scorpion Jumped out of the ground and Stabbed Albino in the back with its Sharp tail Before burrowing into the ground again.

    The teens began running as John Turned around and kept shooting at the Scorpion, they ran into a Small faction with about 14 people in it, thinking it was a Attack they all ran into there homes, some grabbed Bows to get ready for them, but then they found out that they werent the attackers.

    The Scorpion robot Jumped out of the Sand and Started Firing at the teens, Claire ran into a nearby house to see if she can get a signal to make a call, John and Saul took cover and Fought back at the Creature. Saul Picked up a rifle nearby and Started loading it with rounds while John Kept firing his Pistol.

    Claire: Hello? Is any Moderators there!? we have a Emergency To report! Please Answer me-

    *Window shatters from nearby explosion*

    the robot Scorpion (Scorponok) Fired a Laser right at Saul, Damaging his Left wing, it left a Rather big hole.

    Saul1337:AAAAGH! IT BURNS!!!

    John: Dont worry ill cover you!

    John runs over towards Saul while under fire and Tries to Stop the pain in Sauls Wing, While Shooting at the Scorpion creature.

    Claire: Please! i need to get to The JH military line!

    Operator: Sir will put you on with them in just a second after you listen to this Progressive ad-

    Claire: IM IN THE MIDDLE OF A WAR RIGHT NOW! IM BEING SHOT AT FOR GOD SAKES!! just put me on with the Military Right now!!!

    Operator: Ok ok.

    Mheljean: Sir were tracking a group of teens under fire in a Small faction, they say theyre survivors of the Bambi attack.

    Daorack: Survivors!?

    To be continued!
     
  18. cookiefonster

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  19. John_0696

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    you come later :) i promise
     
  20. _HUBBLE_

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    nice story
    :)