My Minecraft Fanfic: Alterbrine

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  1. Emrys_Castiel

    Emrys_Castiel You have to imagine the dragons.

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    Alterbrine

    By: Emrys_Castiel

    A Minecraft Fanfiction


    Chapter 1

    Herobrine has joined the game[​IMG]


    “Herobrine has joined the game.” I hear the Siri-like voice in the sky say. I look up in the skies and see him hovering so beautifully over the devastation that this world has become. He’s a good-looking man, Herobrine is, even his terrifying, yet sexy, glowing-white eyes. I love[​IMG] them. It instills terror in the hearts of our enemies. His hair blows around in the wind. His scruff is something that makes the women swoon. His muscles… don’t get me started[​IMG] on the muscles.


    I should probably introduce myself. I’m Mattie. I’m a girl. The reason I tell you that, is because if you are reading this, you’ve found my log. Anyway, I have lived in this world for a long time. But so has Herobrine. I had heard tales of his legendary apocolypse-like battles with Notch and some of the other major Minecrafters. I saw evidence that I just plain, didn’t believe. But now[​IMG], now is when I tell my story, and mine alone of when I became the Alterbrine, and how I fell in love with the unlikeliest of people.


    It all started on a sunny day in a plains biome. I spawned all bright-eyed and happy to be here. I started my journey like anyone else. I punched down a tree and got to work on[​IMG] making myself some tools when I heard a noise. It sounded like those ghasts that I hadn’t yet fought. It had a higher pitch, though. I just shook it off as a noise of a mob down in the cave I was next to.


    I moved on to building my house. It was small but it got the job done. I had a bed, a furnace[​IMG], crafting table and chest. One torch inside and three on the outside. I remember it like it was yesterday. Obviously, I now live in a nicer, larger house.


    Anyway, I started out one day on my horse, Max, and rode out to the mines where I have my end portal. I put him in the pen that was outside the stairwell I built and made my way down. About halfway to the portal, I saw glowing eyes and a shiny sword. I ran up the stairs and went for Max when he popped up[​IMG] in front of me. I jumped back, swinging my enchanted diamond sword. I figured Sharpness III would do some damage. But nothing happened. Not so much as a paper cut was left on this gorgeous, terrifying man. I started shaking as he was hovering over Max. My fastest and most reliable transportation away from this situation.


    “Who are you?!” I screamed. No response. “How did you get the IP to this world?” I was backing up slowly, now[​IMG], crouching.


    “Turn back.” He says. His voice is almost like a tranquilizer it’s so smooth.


    “Can I have my horse, then?” I asked. How brave I was to ask a favor of him. Obviously my mortal weapons weren’t strong enough.


    “Turn back.” He says once more[​IMG].


    “Why are you telling me that?” I ask. I never knew I could be so brave. Although, I guess brave is another word for stupid.


    “My name?” He asked. It was a nice change of pace from ‘Turn back’.


    “You’re asking if I know your[​IMG] name? Yeah. Herobrine.” I hoped that flattered him; my knowing his name. Hopefully he’d think I was good enough to keep alive.



    “Turn back, child.” He says to me. I now remember the sound of sympathy in his voice. I was so emotional, I hadn’t detected it, before. Basically, I am starting[​IMG] to get angry and my sense of fear is running thin.


    “Then give me my horse!” I screamed. I put my sword away as I said that. Should I have; looking back? No. Probably not but I was getting annoyed. My patience is, again, running thin. I walked around to the gate and went inside the pen. I pushed him out of my way and jumped on Max’s back. I got him to start running when Herobrine teleported and knocked me off of my trusty steed. Then, he disappeared. My friends, SRSnonsense and Aphmau told me that boys pick on you when they like you, sometimes. I hope that’s the case, here[​IMG]. He won’t kill me if it is.


    I hadn’t seen him for a few weeks since then. I was suspicious and worried that he wasn’t showing himself because he was hiding; stalking me, maybe?. I wanted answers.

    So one day I went past the build limit and entered[​IMG] into Notch’s sky castle. When I got to the top, I went to his storage room after creepily following his icon on the map... Don’t judge. I told him about my encounter with this creepy…kinda hot man and he had this look on his face that was so surprised, but almost humored. I asked him what he thought was funny and he told me…


    “It’s been a long time since someone’s seen, Brine; much less tell me he was hot. Then again, I suppose he’s the better looking of us.” I froze for a second. Then it did-slash-didn’t hit me.



    “You’re friends?!” I screamed. One of his guards flinched in fear of my attacking him but Notch calmed him. It was kinda funny but I tried my best not to laugh. My best wasn’t enough. I kinda chuckled.


    “I guess we were, in an instance.” He said ominously. I hate it when he does that. But, there’s nothing I can really do about that.


    “What do you mean, sire?” I asked all excited. I really wanted to know every little thing I could about this strange, handsome man. Plus, I figured Notch’d know something.


    “He’s my brother.” He said. I fell to my knees in shock. The legends I had heard were true. The stories from all the major Minecrafters were actually true! CaptainSparklez, SkythekidRS, House_Owner, Mithzan, RedVacktor and many others had told me all about this man but I never really believed them. I just assumed they were trying to mess with me.



    “I… I thought the stories were false, my king.” I said.


    “Most Minecrafters do. Though, some tales are false. My brother was not a bug. He was not some random mob that ‘evolved’. You see, child, when I started[​IMG] to create the game, he helped me code it. We spent about a year together in our offices, pulling all-nighters and having laughs during our breaks. When it was finished, we decided on the name for our figurative ‘child’. We named it Minecraft. Herobrine wanted to take over the leadership of the game while I took over coding the updates. I suggested that staff take care of updates while he and I both ran the game. But he was stuck in his ways, sadly. I told him we should sleep on it…” Notch said. I was now sitting on the ground in a criss-cross position[​IMG] and listening to every single sound he made. At this time, he had pulled up a stair-block-chair and sat on it.


    “What happened after that? How did he get so angry, sire?” I asked. I needed more information. I needed to know!


    “I regret this decision to this day. But I tricked him. I hacked him out of the game and took him out of the company’s logs. I basically erased him from existence in those aspects. I knew my brother. I knew he’d go mad with power and terrorize all Minecraftians just because he could. Sadly, the thing I tried to avoid, was the thing that ended up happening. But when I tried to console with him, when I tried to make amends, he refused. He said he was happy in his life. I, like an idiot, ignored it and assumed he’d moved onto another project and forgave me.” His eyes were all misty, now. I saw the pain that he was experiencing over his brother’s mental and moral loss. I stood up, crouched to bow and I left the room to give him some time. I then saw something appear in my hand.


    A book. Then I saw another book appear in my second inventory slot. One is signed by Notch and the other by…Herobrine?! Yup! That’s the guy! He spawned in a written book for me.


    Notch’s book read:


    “Child, you must be careful. My brother is filled with rage that cannot be taken out on me. He’ll do it to the people that he can hurt just to get to me. You must be cautious of his powers and lay low until I tell you I am sure he’s out of this specific world.”


    It was fine but not as crazy as Herobrine’s.


    “My brother tells you things that are true. Yes, I am wrathful. Am I not justified in my anger? I have not killed anyone. Those are false rumors. I have terrorized people but I don’t want to. Notch sees himself as the hero to all Minecrafters. I am the night to his day, as he sees it. There is no hero without a villain is there? He wants everyone to follow in his leadership by making me look terrible. He’s said he’s coded me out of the game but he can’t. I made half the game. I made underworld plans in case, God forbid, he did something like this to me. I now live in the nether because of this; hiding from my own flesh and blood. I hate it here. No grass, no beautiful flowers, no deep, blue skies, and most certainly no WATER. Notch says I wanted to rule the game by myself. I wanted us both to rule this magical game. Please, don’t be fooled by his illusion he’s created for all of you.”


    I believed Herobrine for some reason. I threw the note in the lava pool below the sky castle after taking a moment to memorize it for my log.




    (That's all of it so far. Let me know what you think and if you want more updates on the story.)
     
  2. j0sef

    j0sef resigned Donator

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    This made me uncomfortable on so many different levels.
     
  3. Emrys_Castiel

    Emrys_Castiel You have to imagine the dragons.

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    Can you let me know why for future reference?
     
  4. j0sef

    j0sef resigned Donator

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    The constant referring to Herobrine as "hot" or "sexy" made me cringe a bit. However that is just my opinion and I'm sure some people are okay with it.
     
  5. SweetTooth

    SweetTooth 01010000 01111001 01110010 01101111

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    The Unlikely Love:
    SweetTooth And A Girl.
    Nope Not Happening The End.
     
  6. Emrys_Castiel

    Emrys_Castiel You have to imagine the dragons.

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    To be fair, it is a fanfic. lol. But thank you for your input and I will take it into consideration. :) Those references are going to slow down, though because of the rest of the story.

    I'm hoping to make the end really unpredictable.
     
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