My first story: Reality™

Lol wat, why
EDIT: Okay, so since Nikoli doesn't die this early in the original storyline, I had to change the story a bit and just make them immortal xd

 

Well, I'm waiting for the "rape" scene and I'M SO CONFUSED

 

Pretty sure that wouldn't be allowed on the forums, I just had to check the rules because I didn't think it would be

 

I know, BUT IM SO DAMN CONFUSED

 

Why?

 

SWORD FIGHTING
RAZI AND FRANZ
WHAT
I LIKE SWORDS BUT SINCE WHEN?

 

You're confused because you missed so much of the original storyline xd
There was actually going to be sword fighting, so I decided to just put it in there, because if you had the chance, wouldn't you want to stab someone if they killed your friend?

 

I would stab someone if they touched my...





SENPAI

 

There's been a bit of trouble making the next chapter, but it should be out shortly.
Chapter 5 will actually explain my forum name.
Before this was a story, it was an inside joke.
A pretty hectic one.
Anyways, Carmine will post chapter 4 here soon.

 

Yeah, really sorry for the delay, I have been extremely busy, but I've been trying me hardest to get chapter 4 done.

This chapter is written by @CarmineSnow.

<!> WARNING <!>
Please do not read this chapter if you are under the age of 10.

Chapter 4: Franz's view

[FLASHBACK]

Nikoli was throwing lemons.
Lemons.
Lemons.

What kind of man throws lemons?
What kind of person throws lemons?
Why kind of person throws lemons in a fight?

Then I threw my katana, and he got a sharp knife into his head.
But he didn't die...
Razi was fighting me with a sword.
Who knew she was an accomplished expert swordsman?
Oops, swordswoman.

She's big on sexism.
"Don't be such a sexist pig, Franz!"
She's got some big anger issues.
Damn she's feisty.
No wonder Nikoli likes her.

[PRESENT]

I walk out of the room where Razi and Nikoli are.
After the katana to the head, they we trying to kill me.

Then Nikoli came up and... He didn't do anything.
Which was surprising...
But then Razi told him to, "STOP MOVING SO I CAN PULL THE DAMN KATANA OUT OF YOUR HEAD, YOU ASS."
She's still really feisty.

They got the katana out...
I only realize now that...
There was not cut.
No mark.
No blood.
Nikoli was fine...

I stopped in the hall.
I thought about how there was silence...

I opened the door to Razi's room.
I needed to ask her about Nikoli.
I look up.

The covers of her bed are a mess.
Wait, no...
The covers are moving.
I realize I was hearing moaning and grunting.

I just walked in... On Razi and who I believe is Nik–
Razi screamed.
"FRANZ, GET OUT! WHAT THE HELL, FRANZ! YOU PERVERT! JOSIE IS GOING TO HEAR ABOUT THIS!"

Everything goes sloshy...
The rest faded into the misty fog that was my mind...
My mind drifted to the ocean...
I realize the sloshy feeling was water...
The roar of what I believe was the ocean drowns out everything... The screams, the world, my thoughts...

It's all gone...
I'm floating, drifting...

Everything goes black...

[The End]

 

Well played, anyways, more spoilers!

The ocean is.. well, the beginning of the original TBBBTS. Most of the characters were sea animals, after a failed nuclear experiment.

Spoiler: Franz is a seafox.

You're welcome.

 

More spoilers:
Josie along with the others actually becomes a fish named Blab, hence my forum name.

 

Nikoli is Bleb, Razi is Blyb, Franz is Teq.

 

Spoiler: Blyb is a beta fish.
And I believe that Bleb is a clown fish...

 

Blab is a clownfish, as well.
Anyways, this very cringy chapter was written by @BlabDaFish.

Chapter 5: Blab's point of view.
What's going on?
I don't remember anything.
It was just darkness and silence, and now I'm here.
I hear a voice a few feet away from me.
"Hi! I'm Bleb!"
The voice is familiar. It's a friend of mine, it seems.
So, am I Blab?
Heck, I don't even know who I am.
I look around. It looks like I'm underwater.
But, I'm breathing.
Must just be a dream, or something.
I mean, this just can't be real. Can it?
I don't even care anymore.
"And I'm Blab!"
I don't know why I said it. I just don't know what's going on, and I'm trying to make sense of it.
The last thing I remember is being in a white room, with nothing in it.
Next thing I know I'm in some sort of fish tank.
I sit on the floor and look down at my feet.
But, no. I don't think I have feet.
The reality is staring me in the eyes.
I'm a fish.
Everything is fading.
I hear a voice.
"This is your future..."
What?
Everything's gone. I'm in a white room.
I hear a horrible loud noise.
I realize I'm screaming.
I realize I'm not alone.
I'm remembering everything.
My friend, Razi, is in the corner. She seems to be crying.
"I can't have mac 'n' cheese anymore..." She sobs.
I know what this is about.
"Razi, calm down..."
I'm trying to speak softly, but my voice is shaky and I'm ready to scream again.
I just don't know what's going on.
I can barely handle all of this, much less understand it.
"Razi... You're a human now..."
She looks at the floor, maybe checking if she has feet.
She looks up and summons a pot of mac 'n' cheese.
At least she's back to her usual self, but I'm losing it.
I don't even know where I am.
I walk over to Razi, but everything goes black.
I hear a familiar sound.
The sound of waves crashing against the shore is drowning everything else out.
I'm not sure what happened after that.
I open my eyes and I'm in a fish tank again.
I look around. I'm the only one here.
I see something falling from the sky.
It's Bleb, falling into the fish tank...
But who is Bleb?
Razi was clearly here before, so maybe it was her...
I always thought that if she was a fish she'd be a betta fish.
Bleb is a clownfish.
Maybe it's Nikoli.
"Nikoli?" I ask.
Bleb looks at me.
"Josie!" He exclaims.
Becoming a talking fish.
Sounds like something that would happen to Nikoli.
I notice a fish in the corner, facing a wall.
It must be Razi.
After all, she can't have mac 'n' cheese.
Must be so sad for her.
Well, I can't even walk anymore!
We're fish, does she not understand?
Is this all in my head?
I hear the waves again, but this time I also hear screams.
Are they mine?
I don't understand any of this.
Everything goes black.
The last thing I remember hearing is a familiar voice.
"Nothing is real."
Wait, wha-

To be continued...

 

"Nothing is real" Obviously fucking Franz.
Here's one common trope that was in the old TBBBTS: "FISHING PUULZ!$242`4", oh, by the way, there is gonna be a cliche antagonist under the name of Ralf.

Also, Nikoli will turn into a car.
And there is be an unnecessarily weird car chase scene at the end.

Source: Am totally not @TheEntroGent's alt.

 

Actually, it's "FISHIN PUL!11!!1!!!?!?//"

 

I was close, damn it.

Anyways, excited for chapter 6.
Seafoxes.

 

Cars.

 

Fake academies that exist beyond the plane of reality.