A poem I made

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  1. Braixen

    Braixen The Gay <*w*> Donator

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    So yeah I made a poem and whatever. I basically wanted to tackle the idea of being "normal" and basically how anyone that isn't "normal" is basically harassed and oppressed. Here we go.

    The Usual Chat

    There's no need for formality,
    when we're talking about normality.
    As no amount of ribbons and bows
    are needed for "yes"s and "no"s

    But how long will it take
    for everyone to make
    an incision in their mind
    to understand how to be kind?

    We see it all the time,
    being different is such a crime.
    You're either white and straight,
    or getting lots of hate.

    And those oppressing
    can't seem to find the definition to "suppressing";
    and that's just depressing.
     
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  2. n00bhouse

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    so heartwarming. well written.
     
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  3. sss

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    Well written, it's very lovely.
     
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  4. taylorr

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    I really like it. Good job c:
     
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  5. Haruld

    Haruld Prodigal Son Donator

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    I made a poem as well last month, I'll let you read it sometime c:
     
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  6. Safoya

    Safoya

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    that's good
     
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  7. Blossom

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    Wow, well written. Very heartwarming.
     
  8. ElijahR2002

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    Well written, well thought, very heart warming. Thank you for sharing it with us. :)
     
  9. Hobsy

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    thats awesome, i can see that being a song ahah, anyone else?
     
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    me