wait dont do it to scary

story:so this guy started playing minecraft he liked using swords on people he mined a lot for diamonds gold iron coal and emeralds when people try to kill him he kills them. then he makes a house made of nothing but iron blocks diamond blocks gold blocks and emerald blocks it was then I was in a minecraft village I went into a blacksmith shop and found 50 diamonds 10 obsidian 1 iron chestplate 6 golden apples 40 gold ingots 40 iron ingots as well. I took all of those items out of the chest then went back to my minecraft house I made a diamond sword then made iron armor. I slept in a bed in minecraft then I woke up put on my armor got my sword for self defence went to wonder I mined 100 diamonds luckley then went home crafted diamond armor took my iron armor off put all my stuff in my chest then woke up put on the diamond armor got my diamond sword went off then I saw a fighting stadium I passed it I entered a built minecraft city I walked around suddnley the guy who likes swords appeared he cornered me he got his diamond sword out. then I said wait don't do it its to scary he laughed and said scary is it ha ha ha ha ha he approached me I got my sword out he started a minecraft brawl with punching and hitting with sword it was a fight ultill he got me cornered me again I got my sword i started hitting him with the diamond sword then he ran away then he stopped killing people in minecraft with swords he learned his lesson the end. (note his lesson was not to use minecraft swords just to kill)

 

Uh, no offense, but you need to put full stops in that. I cannot read that. I gave up 1/4 of the way through.

The quote above is edited. The bit with the ?'s doesn't make sense, therefore I am referencing it as a part that doesn't make sense.
You also changed point of view, I am guessing where the ?'s are.

 

I know I just for got im not jokeing

 

I would love to read the story, if you took the time to edit it and make it like my quote ^^^^
It seems interesting, but currently it's too much of a hassle to read. ^-^

 

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Your story, are you talking about yourself, or someone else? You switch from third person to first person.

 

a made up person and me