My 7th Story Created: Dimension Corruption

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  1. Katerina

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    Can I fit in it? c:
     
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    Sure ^-^ Welcome to the story :D

    Thank you everyone btw for so many likes and comments. These really make me feel happier when typing this chapters. :)

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    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 13 - The Axe
    I screamed and walked backwards a bit and fell on the ground.
    "What... what are you doing here?" I gasped.
    "Give me that axe NOW!" Silent screamed.
    He then grabbed onto the axe I was holding, then Sandy ran behind Silent and pulled on his torn shirt with his teeth.
    Silent turned around and punched Sandy in the face, but he seemed to be fine.
    Silent then let go, making me fall again, then grabbed Sandy and threw him in a large lava pool.
    My friends gasped and went to the lake, standing there holding out their hand so Sandy can get out.
    When I watched Sandy paddle through the lava, Silent grabbed the axe and ran away.
    Sandy saw him run away and spawned his demon wings again and flew after him.
    He was too fast and we were out of breath, so we had to stop and take a break.
    "Hopefully... Sandy will know where we are..." Kono sighed.
    We heard a loud yelp in the distance, sounding like Sandy.
    We then saw Sandy fly above us and land with huge cuts on him as blood oozed out of it.
    "The axe... Sandy do you know where Silent is now?" Xenoh questioned.
    Sandy shook his head, looking down at the ground.
    "That axe is too dangerous, we have to find Silent before..." We heard loud screams, interrupting what Twage could say.

    Sandy's wounds seemed to be healed quickly, and we needed to go to where the loud screams were coming from.
    "He's too small to make us all ride on him, what do we do..." Agent S sighed.
    Sandy then looked at Kono, which made Kono confused.
    "Uhh... why are you staring at me?" Kono asked.
    Sandy then jumped on Kono and punched him in the head, making him unconsious.
    "HEY! That doesn't mean you have to hurt anyone! ARRG!" Agent S screamed.
    Everyone was mad and tried to grab Sandy, but I stopped them as I stepped in front of him.
    "Louise, out of the way..." Twage said as he held out his hands as sparks of magic appeared.
    "Did you see what he did?" Agent S screamed.
    "I know his plan." I smiled as Sandy smiled back at me.
    "Are you insane, he just-" Agent S stopped as he slowly realised Sandy we getting bigger.
    They turned around, and saw Kono shape shift Sandy.
    "Oooh... I still don't get the plan." Xenoh said.
    Most of us knew the plan. Sandy punched Kono to make him unconscious to make him bigger so we can ride him. Smart little dog...
    Twage explained Xenoh the plan, and then he got it and Sandy was then 5 times bigger then before.
    Kono finally gained consciousness, and seemed confused why Sandy was so big.
    "Has it been 5 years already? Cause you've grown so much..." Kono said.
    We giggled a bit and jumped on Sandy. He grew his wings and flew through the air.
    It was like boarding a plane and we enjoyed the view of hell.

    Sandy slowly started to land to an area with many dead bodies on the ground.
    Sandy then shrunk and we hid behind a bush.
    We saw Silent with the axe, killing many... humans.
    How did so many humans get here?
    "Guys... I think so many holes appeared on earth that everyone on earth fell in all the holes and got here. Now most of them are dead... we have to maybe... talk to the great demon." Twage explained.
    "The damn great demon? He's like all evil and stuff! How could he help us?" Agent S shouted quietly.
    "It's the only way." Twage said.
    Sandy had enough and pounced out of the bush straight at Silent.
    I jumped out as well to chase Sandy, because Silent might use the axe on him.
    Silent turned around and smiled as he saw Sandy.
    Then some demons out of no where jumped out of some trees and landed with a cage on Sandy.
    Without Sandy's axe, he couldn't escape.
    Sandy howled, attracting attention to get someone to help.
    "Yes! I finally have the true God of all beasts!" Silent laughed.
    He then threw the axe on the ground.
    "I didn't want the axe at all... I used it to attract Sandy here, oh yeah those humans aren't dead. They just... changed." Silent giggled.
    We then saw the human things get up, and I noticed their faces were all mutant... like a demon.
    "You mean... all these demons... USED TO BE HUMANS?" Kono screamed his head off.
    Silent nodded while smiling.

    I stared at the axe... I could use it to help Sandy.
    I ran towards it, about to grab it, until... someone else got it.
    I looked up, and a mysterious girl was there.
    "Hey! Give it back! This is extremely sharp!" I shouted.
    "I'm... I'm not going to use it. It's too dangerous for any of you, and that dog too..." She nervously said.
    She used the axe to chop the cage free. Sandy run out with glee, but she then grabbed him too.
    "Let him go!" Agent S screamed.
    "These are too dangerous... go back to earth! I'm trying to protect you! This dog... this axe... this place might hurt you! G- go!" She nervously shouted.
    Silent was confused and pretty much didn't hear anything the girl said since she was very quiet.
    "Listen little girl, this dog is mine, I'm the owner, now would you please darling-" "I'm not a little girl. I'm... I'm Kate, okay? Just... just go!" She nervously coughed.
    "Wait a second..." Silent was about to realise something.
    "Okay little girl, I'll bring them back... since they created CHAOS HERE!" Silent screamed.
    Then some demons out of no where grabbed us all. They all had wings.
    "Get them out of here!" Kate commanded.
    A giant hole appeared in the sky, an entrance to earth.
    The demons flew to the hole as we were screaming and Sandy was barking.
    "SANDY!!!" I screamed.
    When we all came out of the hole, it disappeared.
    The demons let go of us and flew away.
    We looked around, and earth seemed different... everyone was gone.
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    To Be Continued...
    Hope you enjoyed this awesome chapter ^-^
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    And... I didn't draw this picture. Got it from the internet. I can never draw that good xD
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    Yay unconsciousness! At least I didn't shrink him :P
     
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    Today at school I actually practised typing this chapter. Idk if I was just excited to type another chapter or cause I was bored at school x3
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    Chapter 14 - Shy Lie
    Everything was gone.
    The scene looked like a view from a horror movie, except its real.
    We saw many dead bodies on the ground, half eaten and with blood splattered on their body.
    Some demons flew across the sky and some tiny weird demons also crawled on the ground, sniffing for more flesh.
    A demon then came out of no where and stabbed its teeth into a body on the ground.
    The body then started to turn red, its arms was changing in many ways, and its face was starting to get mutant.
    The human got up and stared at us with its demon eyes. Both of them looked the same...
    They hissed and ran away. Wait...
    "So hold on, demons can resurrect people? Then turn them into demons?" I gasped.
    "Yeah... so? All humans are now turned into demons which will increase the chance of more humans dying then turning into demons. It's just a mess..." Xenoh sighed.
    "Do... do you think there's a way to transform them back to humans?" Kono questioned.
    "Ah! Wait!" Twage gasped.
    We all looked at him, curious what he has to say.
    "I remember! When I was a little wizard, they said once I reach twanny wun, I will have permission to learn a spell that can turn creatures like zombie, vampires and many more into humans. And tomorrow is my birthday! Soooo..." Twage beamed.
    The sun shined down and the moon started to rise up.
    "6 more hours until it will be your birthday... we could use this time to find demons and turn them back to humans." I realised.

    "Wait... do you think my friends are demons now?" I questioned.
    "You mean the ones in front of the hospital before? Maybe..." Kono said.
    "If they are, tomorrow we could try and find them and resurrect them!" I cheered.
    "Possibly... but just who knows where they are! Probably back in hell!" Agent S shouted.
    Just then, I heard a demon scream behind me. We all turned around.
    A demon in the distance, shaped like a wolf was sniffing the ground then stared at us.
    "Don't... move... a muscle..." Xenoh whispered.
    We all stood still in the silent night as the demon stared at us.
    Before we could realise its going to walk away, I heard a loud noise next to us.
    We all turned our head, and then stared at Twage.
    "Sorry... I couldn't hold the fart in..." Twage cried.
    The demon then pounced at us, straight at our bodies.
    We all got out of the way, but since Kono was behind us all he couldn't see what was going on, so he was the one to get jumped on.
    The demon then got out it's sharp teeth and stabbed it in Kono's neck.
    Twage quickly zapped a sleep spell at the demon, making it then stop and fall to the ground.
    Half of Kono's body was red and mutant. He looked like he was a half demon.

    He hissed then ran away with incredible speed, and we tried to run after him, but he was already gone.
    "We have to find him then use that spell your about to learn on him! Who know's what will happen if the other demons find him. They'll probably eat him since demons hate humans." I screamed.
    "The only way to catch him is to find Sandy..." Twage sighed.
    "Here." Someone said.
    Then something pounced at me and made me fall to the ground.
    Something was licking my face, and my friends pushed the creature off my chest.
    I wiped my pants and clothes removing the dust then looked at the person in front of me.
    "H... hi." It said.
    It was Kate, the same girl who took Sandy away and the axe.
    I then looked down, and realised it was Sandy... but different.
    He looked so normal. He didn't look cool anymore...
    "What did you do to him?" I gasped.
    "He... he was too dangerous. I had to tranform... him back." Kate said in a shy voice.
    "Don't you realise he could've helped us alot..." Agent S hissed.
    "He... he's dangerous! Plus I gave the axe away..." Kate whispered.
    "TO WHO?" Xenoh shouted.
    "A girl named Gooby..." She said.
    "Out of all the people in this world, WHY GOOBY?" Twage exploded.
    "She was very nice, gave me some cookies, so I gave her the axe and Sandy. But after a couple of hours she gave the dog back and didn't look so evil. Soo... yeah! He looks really cute now." She giggled.
    I was about to scream like an idoit. This kid is like a troll on the internet.
    "SHE GOING TO KILL US NOW! Seriously Kate? Are you a damn troll?" Agent S shouted.
    "What's a troll?" She questioned.
    "We have to find a demon and transform Sandy back to a half demon." Xenoh suggested.

    "N-No! You can't change him back! Gooby uhh... did something to him. She... made it that he can't turn into a demon anymore to protect him." Kate whispered.
    I could just facepalm myself with a damn fist.
    In fact, we all face palm, except I did it with a fist.
    Sandy looked up at me, acting all cute and stuff...
    "I did love Sandy before... and I loved Sandy as a demon too... I always loved him no matter what he is... but... just WHY?" I screamed.
    "Your weird." She said.
    I could just explode like a dynamite.
    "Now now, it's just a little girl, I mean-" "Are you serious? Your DEFENDING her? Gooby is now going to destroy the world, Sandy won't help, Kono is gone as a damn demon and your here defending someone who has done half of this?" I shouted, interrupting what Agent S could say.
    "Yeah, your really weird. I'm going back to Auntie Gooby now. She might give me more cookies! Oh yeah I'll tell her where you are." Kate cheered.
    My mouth was wide open.
    She skipped away in the distance.
    "Guys... when I turn into a demon... don't stop me when I chase her down." I whispered.
    "Sure Louise, we'll- WAIT WHAT?" Twage gasped.
    Anger hit me. I turned into a demon.
    I launched into the sky and flew through the sky, searching for little Katey to give her a lesson...
    To Be Continued...
    Damn, never made a character in any of my stories THIS annoying and tricky. Man...
    Leave your likes, comments, underwear and suggestions below to help this story grow (And my happiness!)
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    I feel like I'm reading a manga without pictures
     
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    That's good, right? xD
     
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    Welp there they go... Guess Imma have to go commando today x- x

    Anywho, this was one of your better chapters Louise. I liked it.
     
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    Yah it is, forgot the xD
    Manga I usually read has both action elements and things that make you wanna slap yourself
     
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    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

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    Can't wait for the next chapter omg
     
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    Sure ^-^ I'll try and fit you in soon. Apologises if it does take some time.
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    @Konohito
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    Chapter 15 - Red Starved
    What is with this girl? She's nuts.
    As I kept flying through the sky, I then saw her under me, skipping along.
    I dived onto the ground, stomping my feet on the ground as I landed. She looked behind, a bit confused.
    "Eehh, you look like fried chicken with forks on your back." Kate laughed.
    I had it.
    I charged straight at her with such speed, about to charge at her.
    But she just moved to the side, making me smash into a car, almost cracking my head open.
    I shook my head and turned around, and she looked a bit bored, perhaps thinking I'm so pathetic.
    I then threw a fire ball at her, but she just walked to the side, and it completely missed.
    Then for some reason I grabbed her and tried to stick my teeth into her neck. That's when I was confused in the inside.
    Something was growling behind me.
    I let go of Kate and turned around. It was Sandy.
    He was growling a bit and stuck his teeth out.
    Then I turned back to normal. All the rage inside of me withered away.
    I saw my friends in the distance and finally caught up with me,

    "We saw that you almost like stuck your teeth into Kate. Are you trying to turn her into a vampire or something?" Xenoh shouted.
    I then heard my stomach grumble.
    "Wait... oh no. Bad news." Twage gasped.
    "I heard if a demon gets too hungry, it will start to get rapid and will try to eat anyone in its sight. We may have to tie you around a pole or something and wait till we get you something." Twage explained.
    "How long has it been since I ate something... arg." I sighed.
    "5 days..." Agent S said.
    Kate then gasped like something stabbed her.
    "Arg... um... I got to go... eh" She crawled on the ground away.
    "What's wrong?" Agent S questioned.
    She didn't answer and kept crawling.
    "Did you do something to her?" Agent S questioned.
    "No..." I said nervously.
    "We've got to tie you to something so you can't eat anyone. We'll try and get you something soon, okay?" Xenoh explained.
    I sighed and let them tie me to a pole.
    "Now don't try to escape. Agent S, you keep watch of her. Me and Xenoh will try and find something." Twage said.
    "M-me? But... I don't want to get eaten!" Agent S screamed.
    "You just have to watch her. That's it. Don't let her escape, then she can't eat you, okay?" Xenoh said.
    Agent S nodded and Twage and Xenoh walked off.

    I could just feel my stomach tie up in knots. I hope they won't take so long.
    "Fooood..." I groaned.
    "They'll be back soon! Heh heh..." Agent S cheered.
    "If they don't, your my first meal..." I hissed.
    Agent S was then panicking.
    I also realised Sandy was next to me.
    I was thinking about maybe chewing on him... just a bit...
    I shook my head. No, I can't eat him. I just have to be patient.
    It was still night and the moon was above us.
    "I think it's twelve... Twage should be twenny wun now." Agent S smiled.

    Meanwhile, Xenoh and Twage was looking around the broken buildings, trying to find a super market to get food.
    "Sometimes demons like to drink blood too. Maybe Louise might like to drink blood... I don't know." Xenoh wondered.
    "If we do find a dead body, check if the blood is okay and fresh, and maybe she can drink some" Twage said.
    All the buildings has been destroyed. Even the super markets they found seemed to be broken down or all the food inside has been eaten.
    They then heard some tiny steps in the distance.
    They tip toed towards the steps, and saw someone go in a tiny room, almost destroyed.
    "I wonder who that is... let's go." Twage said.
    When the person went inside the building, they went inside too.
    Then the lights went on, and saw a girl with someone strapped to a seat.
    The person in the seat looked... familiar.
    "Kono... wait how did that name get in my head?" Twage gasped.
    "It looks like Kono... wait... what are you doing with him?!" Xenoh shouted at the other person.
    It turned around, and it was Kate.
    "You see... my health is terribly low.... I need someone to give me strenght, and then I found uhh... Kono I think." Kate shyly explained.
    She then pulled the lever, and the little tubes in Kono's arms started to suck out the blood inside of him.
    Kono was screamed and jumping in his seat.
    The tubes were then connected to Kate and went in his back.
    "Finally... no more pain." She smiled.
    "Listen, maybe we can get someone else to give you blood, but we need Kono back." Twage explained.
    They kept talking, trying to convince Kate to give back Kono, but were forgetting about me...

    My stomach was probably as tiny as a crumb.
    "Food... I need FOOD!" I was screaming like an idoit.
    "Don't think about food! They're coming back..." Agent S said.
    "I need... BLOOD!" I screamed.
    The rope around me was starting to get less tighter, so I jumped out and stared at Agent S.
    "Don't eat me! There's probably someone else tastier then me you want to eat! Like Kate... no not Kate! I mean... a kite?" Agent S panicked.
    "Kate... her flesh is mine!" I screamed out.
    I grew demon wings and flew into the sky, flying towards where Kate was.

    "Okay... I might give back Kono if there is someone else who can help me." Kate smiled.
    "Good." Twage agreed.
    A massive stomp was heard outside.
    Everyone went out except for Kono, and saw me.
    I saw Kate standing there with a disgusted face on her.
    I then charged at Kate and grabbed her to the ground.
    Before I could stick my teeth in her, Xenoh and Twage grabbed me and pulled me to the ground next to Kate.
    I seemed to have low energy and felt tired and weak... no food means no strength.
    "She's getting tired and weak due to the lack of food. Keep making her still." Twage shouted.
    "If you don't give me food... I'll starve to death..." I whispered.
    "Arg, there must be another way!" Xenoh shouted.
    I saw Kate run back inside.
    I felt my heart rate getting slower and slower... I only have about 10 seconds to live before I starve to death.

    I jumped out of Xenoh and Twage and ran inside.
    "RUN KATE! SHE'S GONE EXTREMELY RAPID NOW!" Xenoh shouted.
    "Wait what? She's going to sing me a rap?" Kate questioned.
    I jumped on her and finally stuck me teeth in her before my heart could stop.
    The blood flowing down my throat felt so good... I kept going even when I had enough.
    Kate was looking smaller and pale. I kept going.
    Xenoh grabbed me off her and I felt my stomach so full.
    "Woooooooo, that felt good..." I smiled.
    Kate looked like she might die, but she pulled the lever so more blood could go in her, making her less pale.
    Kono now looked pale and small.
    "KATE! STOP!" Xenoh screamed.
    Agent S and Sandy finally arrived at the scene.
    Kono looked tired and beaten up...
    Kate looked like she won't stop. There maybe another human gone today...
    To Be Continued...
    This chapter is based on one of my favourite episodes from Adventure Time called 'Red Starved'. As you can see I also named the chapter by that too.
    Leave your comment, likes and suggestions below :)
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
  13. Kono

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    Damn. Cliffhangers. Wait, so am I still half-demon? Uggh I kinda want to watch that Adventure Time episode now.
    Nice chapter Louise btw xD
    Edit: just watched it. Now I know where you got the "she's gonna rap for me?" part xD
     
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    Might need ideas for my next story... this story will end soon btw o.o
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    Chapter 16 - Using The Innocent
    Kono was starting to get more soft and pale. And Kate kept sucking the blood out of him.
    "How do I stop this machine? HELP!" Kate cried as more blood entered her.
    Her skin was starting to get larger. She might pop.
    We stood back, preparing for a large explosion. Then suddenly someone pushed us out of the way then chopped all the tubes in half.
    Kono looked unconsious, with little blood inside of him.
    Kate finally looked fine, but Kono looked the opposite.
    "Thank you Auntie Gooby! Also your sword is really shiny. I wike it." Kate cheered.
    Then I saw Kono started to get bigger and look more normal. His eyes were deep in white.
    "He is making his blood inside of him larger. His powers sure do come in handy alot." Xenoh smiled.
    Kono then looked normal, but still half a demon.
    I looked at what Gooby was holding closely. Is that... Sandy's axe?
    I saw Sandy next to me, licking my leg.
    "Now, due to you idoits being so annoying, I'm going to turn you into demons then turn you into my slaves." She smiled.
    Then the walls were starting to break. Demon came crawling in.
    Gooby also chopped the ropes around Kono using her axe, and Kono looked crazy and stared at us.
    A robot demon came flying in and grabbed Gooby and Kate out of here, leaving us to suffer.

    I saw a tiny demon grab Sandy and started scratching him. Then stuck its teeth in him.
    I screamed and pushed the demon out of the way, making Sandy unconsious.
    I held him, wondering if he was still alive.
    "Oh yeah... it's my birthday today! Happy birthday to me. Happy-" Agent S slapped Twage before he could keep singing with that terrible singing voice he has.
    "Wait... your twenny wun... Use the power you just got!" I shouted.
    "Oh yeah." Twage realised.
    He held his hand out in front of all the demons, then they started to not look so red anymore and had a light pink of them.
    The horns and wings on them vanished and their eyes were going back to normal.
    All of them are now humans, including Kono.
    I looked at Sandy, and he looked like a demon too... again.
    "Oh I forgot about him, hold on." Twage held his hand in front of Sandy.
    "NO WAIT! Isn't what we want him to become?" I gasped.
    "Where am I... Oh meh gawd humans! Humans! We will gather as one and defeat hell and make it never return to earth again! Who's with me?" Kono cheered.
    They all smiled until they then saw me.
    "IT'S THAT DEMON GIRL WHO DESTROYED SOME OF THE CITY BEFORE! RUN!" A guy said.
    The crowd left into the distance, leaving us coughing in their dust.
    "Maybe you could have not shouted so much... then they wouldn't have been so scared." Twage said.
    "Wait... you destroyed some of the city before?" Xenoh gasped.
    "I... I think? I don't know, it was a while ago." I sighed.
    I then saw Sandy wake up, then licked me and smiled.
    He jumped off my arms and grew demon wings.
    He barked while smiling as he looked in a direction.
    "Oh yeah, once I'm twenny wun, I understand animals. So he said... "Twage is the best guy eva. I wuv him." " Twage explained.
    We stared at him with a straight face.
    "KIDDING! He said he knows someone who can help us and can get his axe back." Twage continued.
    We believed him and followed Sandy as he ran.
    "Why can't we use Kono to make him larger?" Xenoh suggested.
    "He can shrink things too you know..." Agent S sighed.
    "Right... Imagen a cute little baby Sandy the size of the crumb? That would be cute." Twage giggled.

    As we kept running for almost an hour, he then stops.
    We looked above his shoulder, and saw a massive hole with tiny demons coming out of it.
    "We can't go back to hell. It's too dangerous..." Kono gasped.
    "We've been in there for like days before. What could possibly go wrong?" Twage cheered.
    "Well let me let you know that EVERYTHING CAN GO WRONG!!!" Kono screamed his head off.
    We ignored his complaints and jumped in the hole as Agent S grabbed his arm.
    "NO! I'LL PUSH YOU IN LAVA ONCE I GET THERE!" Kono screamed.
    As we landed in the red dust, hell seemed normal like before to us, not really much has changed... except ten times more demons then before.
    "So... over 7 billion people on earth and now they are turned into demons... there are 7 billion demons around this area. This is chaos." Xenoh shouted.
    "How do you know there isn't any humans still humans?" Agent S sighed.
    Xenoh shut his mouth completely like a book.
    Sandy then looked around and barked looking in another direction.
    "He says keep going, we're almost there." Twage explained.
    We followed Sandy once more, rushing past the lava pools and demons.
    We finally stopped after 20 minutes and hid behind some rocks.
    As we watched a person walk around in circles, Sandy barked quietly to us.
    "He says this person should help you. You've met him before... right?" Twage explained once more.
    I looked extra closely... it was Silent.
    "Yeah we've met him... but how can he help us? He's crazy!" Kono whispered.
    Sandy just stared at Kono like he can't understand him and looked back at Silent.

    "I think I know Sandys plan... such a smart doggy." Xenoh said.
    "What is it?" Agent S asked.
    He explained the plan to us and we agreed.
    We pushed Twage out of the rock and looked at Silent.
    As we popped out heads above the rock, he slowly walked towards Silent.
    Silent turned around and almost had a heart attack.
    "HOLY... GO AWAY!" He screamed.
    Twage grabbed him as he tried to wriggle out.
    "Stop... we're here to chat. We have a request for you... a really important one." Twage said.
    "Go away! I don't like you!" Silent screamed.
    "Say... do you like shiny axes then?" Twage smiled.
    Silent stopped wriggling.
    "Oooh... I know what your plan is..." Silent smiled as well.
    To Be Continued...
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    And don't worry @TheUndeadBrave , you'll be added to the story in a couple more chapters. Just be patient!
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    LadyGaga The cake isn't a lie Donator

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    You better don't end this story without... You know what I mean... I don't wanna spoil anything.

    Prim dies in Mockingjay part 2.
     
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    My singing voice is not bad ._.,
    I'm not going to go into a shpeal of bragging, but I'm in my school's chamber choir, one of the best in Texas...
     
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    Kono Former Staff Donator

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    Wow, demons and someone with a horrible singing voice. Reminds me of this old Bolivian legend I heard last night.
     
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    Don't worry ^-^ I'm not being mean. Remember, its a stoooory. Story don't always come true. Maybe this one does come true... wooooah o-o

    Tomorrow is father's day btw! Hope all your fathers will have a great day tomorrow! :)
    Starring:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Konohito
    @Sven007
    @Xenohs
    @TwageTomato
    @KateVampire
    @Gooby
    @SilentSwifter
    New Character:
    @TheUndeadBrave And congratulations to him for starring in almost every story I've created! Thank you for being a part of my great stories :)
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 17 - The Father Of Loss
    "Your good at... stealing stuff, right?" Twage said.
    "Yeah... I think. Let's go!" Silent jumped and ran but Twage grabbed him just in time.
    "Not yet. We need a ride." Twage said.
    Agent S punched Kono with force and knocked him out.
    Kono opened its white eyes and started to make Sandy enlarge.
    "Sweet. Let's go!" Silent cheered.
    We hopped on Sandy as Agent S carried Kono and Sandy grew demon wings and flew through the air.
    The demons under us looked like ants and the lava pools looked like puddles.
    Sandy landed and Kono made him shrink back to normal size.
    Kono woke up and didn't look too alarmed.
    "Did I make him grow big? Hopefully." Kono questioned.
    "Yeah you did. Come on." Xenoh said.

    We hid behind a rock and peeked our heads over it.
    "Gooby's fortress... Kate might be in there." Xenoh whispered.
    "Help! Please... Stop!" We heard a loud voice coming from the fortress.
    "We have to go in there and help that guy. What if Gooby does something to him... like turn him into a demon?" Kono gasped.
    "Then let's quickly get in there before it happens." Xenoh said.
    Xenoh quickly went invisible and tooked out most of the robot demons and we went inside.
    Xenoh was visible again and leaded us through the fortress.
    The voice of the man started to get louder and clearer.
    We stopped and leaned against the wall next to a door. The voice was definitely coming from this room.
    We stood still and listened carefully....
    "Why... why are you doing this to my daughter? She was perfect! Now your turning her into a monster. Why are you doing this?" The guy gasped.
    "Oh please. She'll be so bad-ass in that awesome demon form that she'll be like a pet guard to you. Listen old man. I ain't giving this girl to you cause she loves me now. Throw him in the lava." Someone said.
    "Sounded like Gooby... GO!" Twage shouted.
    We quickly went inside and grabbed Gooby.
    "Release this guy... NOW!" Xenoh commanded.
    "Do you... want me to release this guy... into the lava? S-sure!" Gooby giggled.
    I saw a man in a cage. The cage was right above lava.
    The floor under him started to open. He hanged onto the bars.
    "H-HELP!" He screamed.
    I then saw Kate, staring at him.
    "My daughter... please save me!" He gasped.
    "Your not my dad..." She sighed.
    The face on his face looked like his heart just fell out of his chest.
    "WATCH YOUR MOUTH KID!" Kono screamed.
    He was about to grab onto Kate, until the man said "Don't hurt her! I know she still loves me!" He gasped.
    Kono stopped right in front of Kate. Then Kate tried to push Kono into the lava.
    Sandy quickly came into the rescue and bit Kono's leg, trying to pull him back to safety.
    "Go away stupid dog." Kate hissed.
    She then kicked Sandy into the lava.
    We all froze. Xenoh let go of Gooby and stared at the lava. All of us did.
    Then Gooby kicked Xenoh into the hole to lava.
    "NO!" I screamed.
    Then something flew out of the lava and caught Xenoh. Sandy was alright.
    Sandy landed with Xenoh on his back.
    "Thanks Sandy..." Xenoh smiled.
    Then Gooby grabbed Sandy and held a knife.
    I looked behind me, and noticed Silent has the golden axe.
    "How'd you get it?!" I gasped.
    "No time for questions... Gooby, give back Sandy, now." Agent S hissed.
    "If you give me the golden axe back, I won't kill Sandy. If you don't.... I'll kill Sandy and also that old guy." Gooby hissed.
    "H-Heeeelp!" He screamed.

    I looked at Silent, he seemed confused.
    Sandy barked, looking serious and confident.
    "He said he can handle it. He'll be fine. Don't give back the axe." Twage explained.
    "Silent, don't. I can save the guy and Sandy." I said.
    Silent looked like he was about to listen to us and smiled.
    Then he threw the axe to Kate.
    "I've got it Auntie!" She cheered.
    "WHY did you do that?" Kono hissed.
    Sandy also hissed, looking like he could bite his leg off.
    Silent giggled.
    Kate then chopped the bar the guy was holding onto to and fell.
    "Silent... you traitor." I hissed.
    Sandy was about to die. This poor innocent was about to die due to this annoying girl. And someone who we thought would help us betrayed us... It was too much.
    I grew demon wings and red eyes, flew and caught the guy and made him land to safety.
    I held a fire ball and was about to shoot it at Gooby. She smiled and stood still.
    Then I noticed Sandy. He's going to get hurt due to the fire...
    My demon wings disappeared, and so did my anger.
    Gooby then entered the knife in Sandy. I screamed.
    Sandy kept smiling. Is he dead?
    Sandy slowly turned his head towards Gooby without blinking or anything. It was creepy...
    "How are you NOT dead?" Gooby pushed the knife in his chest harder. He didn't look like he was in pain.

    Sandy grew his wings and flew out of Gooby's hand. No blood came out of the cut. Instead it healed immediately.
    "Auntie Gooby, forget about them. I have the axe!" She cheered.
    I realised Silent was right behind her.
    "GRAB THE AXE! GO!" Agent S commanded.
    Kate wasn't paying attention at all and she wasn't holding the axe so firmly. This was a perfect chance.
    Silent smiled without doing anything.
    "Go Kate! They might steal the axe then! RUN!" Silent shouted.
    Kate snapped out of her day dreaming and ran out with Gooby.
    As we watched them run out of the room, we all turned slowly towards Silent.
    "He he..." He hissed.
    He threw a grenade in the air and blew up. Dust blew in our faces and coughed.
    As the smoke cleared, Silent then had like a hook and threw it in the air, grabbing onto something.
    He was fished out of the area and he escaped.
    "Louise..." Someone said.
    I looked at the guy.
    "How do you know my name?" I gasped.
    "It's me... It's Undead. Remember?" He sighed.
    "Undead... the guy who has been in all my adventures and now is in this adventure too?" I questioned.
    He nodded. Another useful guy on the team eh?
    To Be Continued...
    Remember to leave your comments, likes and suggestions below!
    I'll also need any ideas for my next story too. Don't be afraid, no matter how crazy the idea is, just leave it below and that may give me ideas for my next story.
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D