This is really interesting, There are jumps where the Slow-mo looks great, and I think the bigger ones are worse. but good job over all.
The music is nice. I highly suggest putting the slow parts a bit less frequently. You wanna do the slowmo if it looks quite literally impossible, so the viewer is left with one word: 'wow'. Other than that, just dont use an effect that makes my eyes bleed from the same color(Orange was very frequent here). The video was allround decent, both those were the two biggest mistakes, which I highly suggest you should fix next time around.
This is nice. Just try to work on the Velocities. =) A Velocity is that thing that goes slow, then fast, then slow, then fast, etc.
