[New] 6th Story: The Return Of Memories

Louise, I meant a single page on the forums, not a thread. Your posts for the story are really long so that stretches out the length of the page.

 

I know, I saw that ;)
That's not bad that a page is really stretched out, is it? o.o

 

No, it just takes forever to scroll through on my phone xD

 

Are you f**king with me now? How would they take me down so easily? I mean, you know, they should first introduce themselves, ruin the surprise effect completely, say what sh*t they did to me before... Give me Time to get the f**k out of here and a few other dumb things... well, I guess we finally got a GOOD fantasy story (certainly better than Naruto or Fairy Tail)

#SoSad.

 

So I'm guessing your mad since I didn't make you so powerful. Don't worry, in this chapter I hope you get satisfied. If not then... sorry :\

Anyway, I might change plans on my new schedule I made before how I'm going to make a chapter less. I may change this since making chapters is fun, and how I really just don't want to wait.
So if you really want me to create a chapter almost everyday, let me know then I'll think about it ;)
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Chapter 40 - The Dino Strike
As I closed my eyes, shivering due to death coming, I noticed I seemed to not have touched the ground yet.
I opened my eyes, and I seemed to be floating above the ground.
"Mondays..." I groaned.
I seemed to be not in my wolf form anymore, even though it was still night.
I tried to pinch myself from any dreams I usually have on Mondays, but nothing happened.
I looked behind me, and two angel wings were behind me.
"Oh boy... The dreams are getting more crazy." I sighed.
"Hold up, this might be one of Xenoh's powers he gave me... wow!" I cheered.
But I had no time to celebrate, my friends were ambushed, and I needed to rescue them.
As my wings boosted me up, I saw my friends getting ambushed by all the soldiers, and so I sprayed my ice and snow at the soldiers.
My friends cheered, but that's when the claw got me.
"WE NEED MORE SOLDIERS! STOP PARTYING! KILL THEM!" Captain Jack screamed in the speakers.
More soldiers came, but my arms were stuck.
The claw was about to punch me into the wall, until I shot ice to the ground, making me boost into the sky, bringing the claw with me.
The claw was jammed as it started to tear off.
That's when the claw snapped.

The claw fell as my arms got free, and it fell right in front of Captain Jack as he was still in the computer room.
As I landed near my friends, we recruited and saw if everyone was okay.
"Now, let's go and destroy this fortress and kill all the soldiers so Captain Jack cane be left with nothing!" Ninjaman demanded.
We nodded, but before we could touch anything, Captain Jack went out of the destroyed computer room, and started to... expand.
His arms became huger and his feet expanded.
His teeth grew and his legs were stretching.
When whatever he was doing was complete, there was a huge, brown T Rex, metres away from us.
We screamed, running for our lifes through the gates.
When my wings disappeared suddenly, I changed into my wolf form, and I charged at the gates, and I was free.
My friends however weren't lucky.

Captain Jack grabbed them with his huge claws, and he walked away into the distance, leaving the fortress and few soldiers inside.
I cried, chasing after Captain Jack, but as sunrise came, I was back to my normal self, slower then usual.
As he disappeared into the distance, I punched my hands to the ground.
"I should have saved my friends!" I cried as tear drops fell to the ground.
I was alone while the silent leaves floated down to the cold, bushy grass.
That's when I heard a voice behind me.

"Louise, where's your friends?" The voice called.
I looked behind me, and it was the Gods, and also Connor.
"Captain Jack took them..." I sniffed.
"Impossible!" John argued.
"He somehow turned into a big T Rex... and just grabbed my friends before they could escape and he just took them away..." I sighed.
"We need to get them back." Sutho scrunched up his fist.
"No, we need to save the Golden Palace and Lost City first." Connor explained.
"Why? What's happening?" I questioned.
"Evil City is attacking both of the towns, and they are no match to them. We need to quickly save the two towns somehow." Connor explained.
"Also, due to Connor's mysterious powers, we found out some core in Lost City, turning one person into something powerful. The core must've been Silent, but since Lost City was destroyed before he could use it, he had to resurrect Lost City using his own soul." Dugee explained.
"Ok, I'll help. But after, then can we save my friends?" I asked.
The Gods nodded.
"Here's the plan: Sutho and Dugee will spawn heaps of lions and wolves so we can ride on them which will make us go to Lost City and Golden Palace quicker. Half of the God's will protect Lost City and Golden Palace from Evil City's harms, while the other half will try and destroy Evil City. You and Connor will look for the core, understand?" Katy explained.
I nodded.
Sutho and Dugee then spawned five lions and five wolves.
We hopped on them and they ran to their destination.
I looked down, worried about my friends. What would Captain Jack do to them?
To Be Continued...
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I aint mad, I was just kidding cuz in almost all of the action stories, it always happened like this.... So you don't have to excuse :)
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Chapter 41 - The Bloomed Strength
As empty minutes pasted, I already started to feel sick.
"How did you get out of hell by the way?" I questioned.
"Well, the machine Captain Jack made that kept us in hell somehow got destroyed or got turned off. Then I made a portal and we teleported right behind us. If you destroyed the machine, then I thank you." Connor explained.
I smiled, but it didn't last for long as I started to see two cities.

Evil City as now created tanks and airplanes to destroy Lost City and the Gold Palace that was sitting on a cloud no so far away from us.
"You can see why we need your help." Mappy pointed.
"Also, Ninjaman contacted us before he got taken away about how you got more powers. You could use them to help us out." Connor said.
I nodded.
The wolves and lions disappeared as we reached our destination.
"Ok. You know the plane. Group A, destroy Evil City. Group B protect Lost City and the Golden Palace. Group C, which is me and Louise will go and search for the core. Let's go!" Connor demanded.
We nodded and went to where we were commanded to go.

Me and Connor entered Lost City, and everyone was screaming and scrambling everywhere.
As we pushed through the crowds of people, we noticed a quite small tunnel behind a two story hut.
We entered it and the tunnel leaded us deep underground.
That's when we saw mysterious lights in the distance.
"The core..." Connor whispered.

"Louise, grab the core and absorb the powers in it." Connor pointed.
I nodded and walked slowly to a core with many colours.
But then, some gangster guys barged into the entrance and the entrance then got trapped with a metal wall.
"The God's must've tryed to crap these guys in here, but never released we or the core was in here..." Connor whispered.
The gangsters noticed us and charged at us.
"Grab the core!" Connor shouted.
Before I could grab it, some gangster's already grabbed me and started punching me and kicking me.
"Grab... the core!" I coughed.
"But..." Connor gasped.
"Do it!" As I was starting to faint.
Connor had no choice, and grabbed the core.
As the colours of the ore were travelling into Connor's heart, the gangsta's were confused.
The gangster's dropped me on the ground and cuddled up against the metal wall.
Connor's eyes glowed, and it was freaking me out.

Meanwhile, John was covering Lost City with a metal dome, but the tank's seemed to be real strong as it was starting to damage the dome and it was going to collapse any minute now.
Cally also guided all the people in Lost City in a little underground base that the wolves Sutho spawned dug out.
Dugee also spawned some lions around the little base so no gangsters from Evil City could come in.
Sometimes John, Cally, Sutho or Dugee would go to Golden Palace as well to protect it as well.

Katy was flooding Evil City with her huge waves and many gangsters were drowning.
Kazuke also made some buildings burn to ashes, maybe even burning a couple of people as well.
Mappy also shot many space lasers at many gangsters, killing them to their grave.
However, that's when the sentry guns came.
As metres of land opened, giant pillars shot out of the ground with giant sentry guns on top of them.
There were about 20 pillars with 20 sentry guns.
The sentry guns activated, it it broke the metal dome in less then 10 seconds.
As the metal fell on top of Lost City, many huts were damaged.
The bullets shot some lions guarding the base and almost hit some people in the base.
The sentry guns were also destroyed some golden huts in the Golden Palace.
The sentry guns looked like they were made of gold and couldn't be destroyed due to the weak powers of the Gods.
But then, the metal wall on the tunnel was destroyed and shining lights busted out.
Connor walked outside as the bodies of the gangsters fell next to him.
Connor opened his eyes, and he became a God.
To Be Continued...
Yay Connor! Your now more powerful then ever ^-^ Hope you now enjoy your new and important role.
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Awesome ...
Louise you are a master writer ... :D

 

No comment, nice.

 

Another good chapter Louise!

 

Aweaome

 

Wow thanks :D I appreciate it.
Anyway thanks for the replies guys! Time for a new chapter
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Chapter 42 - Spawn Of The Myths
As Connor turned around, he realized Lost City and the Golden Palace are starting to get damaged.
Connor pointed in front of Evil City, and something was coming out of the ground.
As I stared at the ground, a mythical creature was starting to come out, and it was a giant guy, with a huge beard with some kind of lightning rod in it's hand.
It pointed its rod at the Evil City, and the sky was covered with dark, misty clouds.
Lightning sparked, and then a giant, lightning crushed into Evil City, forcing Evil City to collapse.
When the destruction was complete, it then hovered down into the ground, disappearing.
"That... that must be your power..." I gasped.
"The power to spawn mythical creatures." Connor explained.
However, some gangster's crawled out of the destruction.
All of the gangster's were steaming with anger.
Connor tried to spawn another mythical creature, but it seems that his power has run out.
"Each day I can only spawn one creature..." Connor sighed.
The Gods seemed to have ran away since they were shocked by Connor's power.

The gangster's bolted at me, but I was too injured to run away due to the incident before.
When they reached me, they punched me, kicked me, and even hit me with some baseball bats.
That's when the pain was too much.

I started to expand and grow, and I seemed confused.
Scales grew on my skin, my hands grew and my body was becoming larger every second.
That's when I became a T Rex.
"Another power..." I realised.
The gangsters' seem to be shocked, but that didn't stop them to bolt at me again.
I roared and ran, stepping on all of them.
I squished each body, making them as flat as a pancake, protecting Connor from any further harm.
As my work was done, I returned to my normal size and smiled at Connor with delight.
As the Gods returned, they seemed to return without any notice of my new power.
"Wow Connor! Nice power!" Mappy cheered.
"Thanks, but didn't you see Louise's new power?" Connor questioned.
"Yeah we know. The ice power, wolf power and angel power. Yeah nice. But yours is like... godly!" Katy smiled.
As the Gods kept saying how cool Connor's powers are, the sun fell and the moon was raised.
As I became a wolf, I noticed some planets in the sky that I've never seen before.
"Guys, look!" I pointed with my sharp claw.
They saw the planets too, and were also curious.

"We must go there, maybe Captain Jack is there." Dugee suggested.
"Okay, but exactly how do we get there?" Sutho questioned.
"We could use Cally." Kazuke stared at Cally.
"No, my wings can't fly that high. There must be a way..." Cally wondered.
"Maybe Louise's powers?" John suggested.
"Ok, we'll go in the morning." Connor smiled.
To Be Continued...
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Nice, do you still have space for another role, that role will then be me. Doesn't matter if it can't as I already enjoy reading your story's.

 

I would really love to put you in my story, but sadly there isn't enough room and it would get too crazy then. I hope you accept my apologise and still enjoy my story :)

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Chapter 43 - Firing To The Planet
When the sun was up again and I transformed back, it was time to visit the planets of unknown.
"Louise, how do you activate your wings anyway?" Sutho questioned.
"Last time I got wings was when I was falling from a great distance..." I answered.
Connor nodded at Cally, and Cally grabbed me.
"What are you doing?" I demanded.
He flew into the air with me in his arms, then when we were about a centre metre below the clouds, he let go of me.
I was screaming and wriggling, trying to wonder why Cally did this to me.
But that's when my wings flew and I was floating in the air.
"Ooh..." I realised.

As I landed on the ground while flapping my wings, the Gods smiled.
"Excellent. Now, John, you create a light box with us to stay in. Make sure the box is as light as possible." Connor demanded.
John nodded and create a fin, light metal box for 7 people to fit.
Apart from Cally, the Gods entered the box and the door closed.
I grabbed onto the handles on the box, and Cally did as well.
We flew into the air, slowly but balanced.
Cally couldn't fly anymore, so he just sat on top of the box, creating extra weight for me.
When we reached above the clouds, my hands and the box crashed onto a cloud, almost going through the cloud.
The box disappeared, and everyone seemed cross.
"New plan." Kazuke explained.
"My power has recharged..." Connor said.
"How about you spawn something strong and big enough to bring us to one of the planets." Katy suggested.
"Good idea, let me just wonder which creature I shall spawn..." Connor wondered for a minute.

"Got it." Connor smiled.
He waved his hand in the air, spawning something, and in the air was some kind of bird with fire around it.
"Great Phoenix... Take us to the planet!" Connor shouted.
The Phoenix screeched and flew straight at us, grabbing us with it's claws.
It then flew into the air, faster then a cheetah, and we were in space.
For some reason, I then turned into a mermaid.
"Uhh... We're not in water, right?" I said.
"Maybe you turn into a mermaid if your in water, OR if you don't have any air left." Dugee explained.
"That explains it!" Mappy cheered.
"How come your still breathing fine?" I wondered.
"We're Gods! Come on, look at our powers." Mappy showed off.

The Phoenix called, warning us that we're going to land on the first planet we sighted.
It's head pointed to the planet, then bolted right at it.
As the strong wind pushed through my face, I was screaming, like the wind was grabbing my face.
"Oh Louise, grow up." John joked.
We pasted the purple clouds, and the Phoenix flapped its wings, slowing itself down.
When the wind finally stopped, the Phoenix placed us on the ground, and it disappeared.
As I was catching my breath, everyone was gasping with delight.
I wondered why they were like this, so I looked where they were, and the view was just glorious.
To Be Continued...
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Might not be able to make another chapter until its Friday, so I'll make a chapter today just in case ^-^
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Chapter 44 - The Planet Of Secrets
The view was breath taking, like a painting.
A peaceful, little village, so small, it just looked perfect.
Villagers chatting, harvesting crops and riding horses scattered around the different kinds of buildings.
Then, behind the village, were trees with golden trunks and branches, waving as the wind passed by.
A giant mountain watched over the trees and village, as tall as the clouds. Also a cave inside, too.
Mappy was crying, and Sutho was hugging a wolf he spawned, possibly a emergency hug.
Mappy was crying so loud, the villagers spotted us.

"Visitors! Visitors everyone!" A child called.
People then came out of their huts, amazed by our looks and bravery.
"Are you a awien?" A little girl questioned.
"Nope." Kazuke said.
The crowd came closer, curious and asked many questions as children giggled.
But the crowd came to a sudden pause, as Xenoh spawned right next to us.
The crowd seemed afraid, and ran back to their huts, locking the doors and some kids were crying.
"Um... hi?" I coughed.
"Fascinating crowd. Anyway, good news! Captain Jack is missing! We will never see him again in our lifes. Pack your luggages and back to earth. Off we go." Xenoh cheered.
"What?" I cried.
"What? You like Captain Jack? Oh screw you." Xenoh hissed.
"It's not that! Captain Jack took her friends, thats why!" Connor shouted.
"Ohh... hmm... what a shame... he must be on earth. Okay, off you go. Hop hop." Xenoh commanded.
"What's with the hurry dude?" Dugee questioned with a slight temper.
"Captain Jack might be escaping right now! Ooo... scary... so um... earth we go!" Xenoh cheered.
"Can we please stay here for just two more days? We just arrived here, its breath taking here!" Katy complained.
"Arrg... fine. Whatever. I'll follow cause you know, reasons reasons. Kay." Xenoh sighed.
Xenoh was staring at a mountain for some reason, something caught his eye.
"Yeah... the view is nice..." Mappy smiled.
"Is there a problem?" John questioned.
"Hmm? Oh no... nothing... maybe we'll camp in that cave. You stay here and I'll check if its safe, heh heh..." Xenoh coughed.
He then disappeared, perhaps teleporting to the mountain.

The crowd came back, shivering but small smiles were on their faces.
"Why are you scared of Xenoh?" I questioned.
"Umm... don't worry... he's just... umm... stranger danger?" A man said.
"Hmm..." Connor wondered.

"Why... why are you doing this to us."
...
"Are you going to say something or is your mouth super glued?"
"Sir, they are here..."
...
*click*
"ARRRRGGGGG!"
*click*
"Stop... Please..."
*click*
"GRRR... ARRRRGGG! RRRGGGHH!!!"
To Be Continued...
Yeah... made the ending of this chapter more mysterious...
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Much mystery...

 

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