[New] 6th Story: The Return Of Memories

Great story Louise!!

 

Well they were originally called 'Gods' but I didn't want to confuse you all to the 8 Gods. So I just named them Giants. I'll describe the 'giants' more in this chapter.
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Anyway, here's the characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@RichieOrCraziiR
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
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Chapter 16 - The Awakening Giants
The drill dug deeper and deeper, and that's when our skin started to burn. "Umm... Anyone got... Water..." Ninjafoya coughed. I ignored her and dug further, and that's when the ground started to burn up. I deactivated the drill and poured the water in the bucket on the ground, making the ground cool. I used the drill instead forward, and the group were behind me. "Louise, where exactly are we going?" Silent wondered. "You'll see." I smiled.
The wall in front of us kept falling apart, and when I thought we were lost, the wall in front of us fell and there wasn't another wall in front of it. Instead, a very old and ancient temple was where we seemed to be. "Woah woah woah. Okay, bad idea. No. I know what your doing. Gonna wake up the Giants huh? Well it ain't a walk in the park! It's been 6 hours digging through the floor, and no, the giants ain't gonna be happy. Nope. If you wake one of the giants, the other will-" Ninjaman covered Kono's mouth before Kono could explode. "Kono, enough. Louise knows what she's doing." Ninjaman said. I walked, and noticed a giant, sleeping. There were some vines and webs around it as well. Ninjafoya tip toed towards me, but she stepped on a twig. The giant coughed. "Husssh!" Undead whispered to Ninjafoya. I looked at a wall with a little hole through it, and noticed a music box, containing very special music that can calm the giant down if it does rage. I got the drill out but forgot to put it on low power, because the drill shouted as it got activated, and one of the giant's eyes opened with anger and rage. It stood up, destroying the ceiling and roared. "HOW DARE YOU WAKE ME!" It shouted. It punched the ceiling again, making the rest of the ceiling fall. We ducked while the stone crushed us. The giant flew, crushing the stone above it and it reached the surface. It roared and it started to also destroy the Lost City, making the Lost City get damaged more.
We seemed unconscious, maybe dead. But I didn't see anything.
The giant stomped on the Lost City and it's eyes shot lasers at the city as well, leaving stone, wood and blood scattered around the Lost Ci- I mean, Lost Destruction. The Gods laughed, but the Giant also tried to shoot lasers at them, but they got away. The giant did the biggest roar that maybe all of earth could hear. Then, on the other side of the Evil City, the ground shook and exploded. probably 1000 kilometres of grass and tree's were destroyed, and some giant came out of the destruction, and it seemed to be another giant, more huge and scarier.
Arelane saw the 2 giants, staring at each other, and giggled. "Well, if it isn't Ninjanaylin, the Light Giant, and Creeper, the Dark Giant. Ninjanaylin sure doesn't look so 'bright' Ha ha!" Arelane laughed. Ninjanaylin roared, and so did Creeper. "You'll fall to the ground as the dark stomps on you!" Creeper shouted. "My light with blind you and make you die with shame!" Ninjanaylin shouted. Then, they headed towards each other, also stomping on Evil City, then strangling each other, punching each other, kicking each other and using their powers as well.
To Be Continued...
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Thas exactly what would say! :D
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I wonder... Will I get 1000 messages first or 1000 likes?
Let's calculate this... if 1 message usually gets about 4 likes, but I like to message on other stuff then... IDK!
Okay, this is not maths class. Hi, welcome to chapter 17. Pweez enjoy :3
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@RichieOrCraziiR
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
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Chapter 17 - The Search Of The Music Box
My eyes slowly opened. Nothing but greyness covered my view. Then the greyness disappeared, and I saw the face of Cally. "I found Louise! She's injured! Help her get out!" Cally shouted. I saw the rest of the group, taking a very heavy object of my feet. My feet were filled with pain, and I couldn't move. "Louise... what's the plan." Ninjaman asked. "I... I don't remember." I wondered. "You were thinking about something that could calm Ninjanaylin. Well, do you remember?" Undead questioned. "... Nope. Don't really remember why I came here as well..." I wondered. Kono face palmed. "Now now Kono, it takes time. Remember, a good agent get's what they can, not demanding any more." Ninjaman put his hand on Kono's back. "We'll need to get some information out of someone." Silent suggested. Ninjafoya looked up the hole we came from and noticed something. "Hmm... did we hear screaming when Louise was digging?" Ninjafoya wondered. "Ninjafoya! Get out!" Cally shouted. But it was too late. Someone crashed onto her, and she seemed pretty hurt. The other stranger seemed okay, and we helped it get up. The face of the stranger seemed familiar, until I knew who it was. "Radii?" I wondered. "Nice guess... wait... you were suppost to be in jail! You destroyed Evil City! But wait... Ninjanaylin also destroyed Lost City! Ha ha! Ya Bi-" Cally choked Radii and held her up. "Cally, down." Ninjaman demanded. "Spit it out!" Cally shouted. "Wa- *cough* I can *breathe* explain!" Radii coughed. Undead slapped Cally's arm, making him drop Radii. Radii coughed and breathed. "We respectfully ask you for a way to calm Ninjanaylin down." Silent asked. "I ain't telling ya'll! You nom skulls ain't gonna get anything out of meh." Radii shouted. Kono nodded at Cally, and he choked Radii again and then let go after 5 seconds. "Don't make him do it again. Now, is there a way to calm down the giant." Kono questioned calmly. "No matter what ya'll do, no matter what ya'll say, I ain't gonna say nuthing!" She shouted on the top of her lungs. Cally looked at me, and I nodded. "Well... Guess we should just... give up..." Ninjafoya sighed. Cally ran to Radii, and one of the claws on his wing pointed at Radii's neck. "Radii, I sense something is hiding in your mind. If you don't tell us, and welcome to death." Undead said. "SPIT IT OUT!" Cally enraged. "Arg, fine. Better not tell Arelane. A music box, so special and hidden around this temple can show it's light and calmness to Ninjanaylin once played, and can make her heart finally bring peace. However, the music box is well hidden. That's all I have to say." Radii sighed. Cally put his wing on his back. Silent put some bandages on Ninjafoya's head while Kono put some bandages on my legs.
"Alright soldiers, if you want to save Lost City and earth, then better start searching! MOVE!" Ninjaman shouted. We nodded while I walked slowly and stared at the ground, thinking maybe the music box is shoved in the ground. Before Undead could walk off, he said closely to Radii "You better not lie ma'am, otherwise we'll end you." Radii nodded while rolling her eyes. Undead pointed to a wall, and Radii went to that wall and shoved the vines away from her face, looking for the music box.
Meanwhile, Ninjanaylin was choking Creeper, and Creeper couldn't breathe. "The light will end your life and happiness, and you will die with misery and shame!" Ninjanaylin shouted. Creeper got his hand out in front of him and shot a dark laser at Ninjanaylin, and Ninjanaylin stepped back, tripping onto Lost City. The God's cheered, but Ninjanaylin got up and tried to shoot lasers at them but they dodged it. John was about to shoot lasers at Creeper, but Arelane put his hand in front of him. "Now now John, he may has destroyed Evil City slightly, but that was an accident. He's our ally, Ninjanaylin is the enemy. Gods... destroy Ninjanaylin... now." Arelane giggled. The God's nodded and charged at Ninjanaylin.
To Be Continued...
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Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD

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Chapter 18 - Rage
We kept looking around, but not a single hint where the music box could be. I looked around, but nothing, not a hint of something seemed visible in my eyes, just the group searching. "Ninjaman, we've searched everywhere. We can't find it!" Kono shouted. Undead looked at Radii with a angry look. "I'm dead serious! It has got to be here!" Radii cried. Cally slowly got his claw ready, ready to shove into Radii's heart. Something was telling me she isn't lying, so I could to look fast, until something shined in the distance behind heaps of vines. And that's when I noticed it: The music box. "Guys... the music box!" I pointed at the vines. Silent quickly went to the vines and shoved it out of his way, and I was right; there was a music box. Radii sighed in relief, and Cally felt sorry but Ninjafoya put her hand on his back with a smile. "Since we've got the music box... how do we get out of here?" Undead wondered. Then we all turned to Cally, and he just sighed. "Fine... you better not all weigh heaps." He sighed. He held on to his wings, and he charged a super flight, and then he zoomed out of the hole.
Ninjanaylin punched Creeper to the ground, onto Evil City that was half damaged, and he seemed unconsious. The God's got ready to shoot their powers at Ninjanaylin, but Arelane stopped them. "Ninjanaylin seems to be interested in Lost City..." Arelane wondered. That's when Ninjanaylin's eyes started to glow, and a laser was charging. The Gods cheered. "YIPPEEE! THE CITY IS FINALLY GONNA BE DESTROYED!" Sutho laughed. The God's cheered while Mappy munched on bread with joy, but Soul noticed something. "Something.. is come lord Arelane." He said. Arelane looked down at the hole, and we zoomed out of the hole and landed safely. I got ready to use the music box, but then someone punched me really hard in the face with great force, and I fell to the ground. I dropped the music box, and the group seemed to be grabbed by the Gods. The Gods grabbed my friends, and I looked up, and it was Nala. "Why are you still friends with them! Ninjaman and Kono was villains!" Nala cried. "What are you talking about? There my friends!" I cried. "They stole both of our memories yo twit!" She shouted. "No! They didn't!" "She's right! We've never even met you!" Ninjaman shouted. Nala shook her head side to side.
The lasers in Ninjanaylin's eyes were almost ready to fire to end the city. "We did met... you kicked me out of your agency!" Nala screamed. "We did that because we knew you were working for Arelane! We had to kick you out!" Kono screamed. Nala got a gun out. "Louise... you betrayer!" She screamed. Suddenly, Cally did a super flight and when he fell down, he got his fist out, and punched Nala as hard as he could.
She fell to the ground, unconsious. Cally got the music box and pushed the button, and some music was... playing.​

Light spiralled out of the music box, around Ninjanaylin. Then, the music glowed, and Ninjanaylin's rage seemed to have disappeared. "NO!" Kazuke screamed. The group escaped the Gods as they just stared in disbelief at Ninjanaylin, and when he awakenned, he seemed confused. "What? I couldn't have destroyed Lost City!" He cried. Creeper then charged at Ninjanaylin, making him fall to the ground. I tried to run at Ninjanaylin, but my leg seemed to remain in pain, and the Gods also surrounded me and my friends. Then I turned around as I heard giggling from Nala. She stood up, and she removed the mask, and under that mask was the evil scientist: Arelane.

To Be Continued...
I know, I actually almost forgot Nala was in the story, sorry >.< But I just remembered her today so I returned her :D
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Arelane=Dr.Trager from outlast, Jack Sparrow from u know where, A tf2 spy and an epic villain such as G.L.A.D.O.S.

I have so many references!! :D

 

I love the story so far! Good job Louise!

 

Sorry for not making a new chapter in 2 days, I was super busy due to events and large amounts of homework.
But here it is: Chapter 19. Please enjoy :)
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
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Chapter 19 - The Fall Of Tall
"N... Nala?" Ninjaman coughed. "Not Nala anymore. She's.... dead. The End. Now my sweet little tiny God's, please... kill them." Arelane giggled. "We're not tiny..." Soul sighed. "Whatever tiny winy. KILL THEM!" He shouted. The Gods got their powers ready, but Ninjanaylin turned her heads to the Gods and tried to shoot a laser at them, but they dodged it and we escaped. My leg still remained in a deep pain, and running would make it worst. Ninjanaylin shot a laser at Creeper, and he fell backwards, almost tripping over but remained standing. Ninjanaylin stood up and punched Creeper. But Creeper did not seem to be hurt, and punched Ninjanaylin even harder, making him fall to the ground, almost dead. "We've have to help Ninjanaylin!" I cried. "No... Creeper is too powerful." Undead said. "Ninjaman, we need a plan... Ninjaman?" Kono questioned. Ninjaman was crying in silence, and Kono put her hand on his back. "Nala... she can't be dead..." He sighed. Cally pushed Ninjaman making him fall, just dodging some iron missile that coukd have headshotted him if Cally didn't get him down. "WOW! So you think Nala is just some kind of horribly stupid person? Get lost! I'm leaving!" Ninjaman shouted. "Ninjaman, he saved your-" "I DON'T GIVE A DAMN CRAP SILENT!" Ninjaman outraged at Silent. He walked off still in rage. "I sense something... a girl who's soul is alive... but falsely believed dead." Undead wondered. "N... Nala?" Kono realised. Kono ran after Ninjaman, but then we got surrounded. "Time's up snowflake!" Mappy laughed. "Richie, get your lions." Soul demanded. He spawned some lions. "By the way, I wanna be called Dugee now. I find it quite you know, just lovely." Dugee smiled. "Whatever! Boys! Charge ye powers on Louise and her little minions at full blast!" Katy shouted. Katy charged a earth wave, Mappy got ready to create a universe slasher, John got prepared for a metal explosion, Dugee got ready to spawn a giant, deadly lion, Kazuke got ready for a ultra fire ring of death, Sutho got ready for a deadly howl of wolves and Soul, got prepared to create a orb as loud as the universe, to suck everything inside, then disappear. Suddenly, something dark was inside Cally. "Hisss..." He hissed. "Cally? Is something wrong?" Ninjafoya asked. Then, his eyes turned bright red with rage and blood, and his wings grew 3 times larger, and his teeth and claws grew, and he seemed like a devil. The God's seemed confused. "He's going to create a super sonic wind earth quake! Run for ye lives!" Kazuke cried. The Gods ran, but Soul stayed. "Soul, he's on devil mode! You must run!" John shouted. Soul seemed silence, maybe even frozen, but before he could even take 1 centimetre back, a wind zoomed past Soul and the Gods, making them fall to the ground with a powerful force, that crushed their heads to the ground. The wind was too hard to see through, and after 10 seconds, the Gods seemed... normal.
"The Gods... there back to normal!" Undead realised. Kono and Ninjaman came back and seemed surprised. "Cally... have a cookie." Kono smiled, and Cally grabbed the cookie off Kono and gobbled it up. "Cally... is that you?" Mappy realised. The other Gods realised as well, and jumped on Cally and hugged him. "I thought you guys would be evil forever." Cally smiled. "Nice wings by the way." Katy laughed. Suddenly, a deep laughter was heard and the Gods got up. Arelane was behind Soul, and Soul created a shadow shield around him. "Soul will soon end the lives of yours and Louise, you'll see the mistake you made!" Arelane laughed. Soul got out of the shield but made Arelane stay inside of it. "The shield is impossible to break..." Sutho sighed. "And it looks like Soul absorbed the power from Cally's wind and seems to be about ten times powerful." Kazuke said. Then Ninjanaylin was still in pain and Creeper kept punching him to the ground. "Cally, Kazuke, Sutho, Katy and John, you help Ninjanaylin and defeat Creeper. Mappy and Dugee, you stay with Louise and her friends and defeat Soul. Everyone, CHARGE!" Ninjaman shouted. Cally, Kazuke, Sutho, Katy and John charged at Creeper while me and my friends got ready to defeat Soul.
To Be Continued...
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Nice story! And don't stop, you write like the best!

 

Don't stop writing Louise! We love your stories!

 

Another great chapter Louise!

 

Woah, nice

 

Guess what? We're already half way through the story! :O
Only about 20 chapters to go before this story reaches the end.
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
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Chapter 20 - The Face Behind The False
Mappy and Dugee both combined a super universe laser with a earth roar of lions. The power charged right at Soul, but he just slashed the power in half using a shadow blade. "He's too strong! We need your help gang!" Dugee demanded. We nodded and my friends charged at Soul. Then I saw something spiralling in Soul's hand, and it didn't look good. "GUYS COME BA-" But it was too late. He threw his shadow orb at them, and they were stuck in a orb and they seemed to be in pain. "Lou... help..." Ninjafoya sighed. They seemed to be in pain, deep pain. Something in that orb is killing them. I couldn't run since my leg was still remaining in pain, and Soul got ready to shoot a shadow arrow at me.
Meanwhile, John tried to shoot iron swords into Creeper, but nothing worked. Katy tried to spawn a giant, universe flood but Creeper kicked her before she could fire the flood and she was flung kilometres away and when she finally landed, she seemed unconscious. Kazuke tried to shoot a fire ring of death but when it started to fire at Creeper, all Creeper did was take a big breath and blow, and the fire went out. Finally, Sutho spawned a giant wolf and it had eyes with blood and rage. Creeper seemed interested in it and finally left Ninjanaylin alone, while she was unconscious on the ground, dying. Cally flew to Katy, trying to get her to get up, but she was out. Cally took care of her while John, Sutho and Kazuke protected her and Sutho's wolf was getting hurt badly as Creeper kept punching it. Then he finally ended the wolf when he created a giant vision of a dark face with glowing eyes and mouth, flashing at it's eyes, making the wolf scared to death. Sutho despawned the wolf once it was dead, and frowned. "Creeper seems to be impossible to beat... there must be a weakness." Sutho suggested. "But where?" Kazuke shouted. "The... the heart..." Katy coughed. Katy finally woke up while dying. "The heart.... it's... the only... way..." Katy was in pain and was dying fast. Cally flew to where we were, and Soul was about to shoot a shadow arrow at me until Cally flapped his wings and the arrow deflected and went straight at Soul, but he moved out of the way. However, it shot the orb around my friends and the orb disappeared, and my friends finally escaped the orb, and weren't in pain anymore. "Kono! Your a medic, right? Katy is dying! We need all the Gods apart from Soul to charge a rainbow-solar missile at Creeper's heart to finally destroy Creeper and save Lost City!" Cally screamed. "But... Lost City is already destroyed..." Silent sighed. Ninjaman put his hand on Silent's back and Silent looked down ashamed. "But once we defeat Creeper, it can free Creeper and Ninjanaylin from the curse and they then become normal people and heal anything, including the town." Undead explained. Silent looked up and gasped. "Kono, go!" Ninjafoya shouted. "But I haven't really been a medic for-" "GO!" Ninjafoya pushed Kono, frightenning her out of her skin. "We need a town to save! Now go!" Ninjafoya screamed. Kono nodded with fright and ran to Katy. "Wow... never knew you were that tough." I laughed. Soul then tried to shoot another shadow arrow at me, but Cally grabbed me and flew to the sky, and the arrow missed. Cally placed me down. "Charging an auto-lock shadow beam, heading at Louise. Starting in 5 seconds..." Soul said. "No, Louise can't escape now! Louise, he can shoot you no matter how far or where you are!" Ninjaman shouted. But then I got an idea. I walked slowly to Arelane who was laughing inside the shield. "What are you doing?" Arelane wondered. I went behind him and Soul was about to charge a shadow beam. "NO! STOP SOUL!" Arelane shouted. Suddenly, a great rainbow light was beaming in the distance. A beam with many colours shot into Creeper's chest. The beam disappeared, and Creeper seemed speechless. He fell backwards, onto Evil City. Then, Ninjanaylin became healed and she was minimised to the same size as us. Then Creeper was at normal size and seemed to be less evil. "Shadow beam, launching." Soul fired the shadow beam, and I closed my eyes, but Creeper and Ninjanaylin combined their powers, shooting Soul, and he fell. He seemed less evil, but he was unconsious. "Ninjanaylin's and Creeper's powers were too strong for Soul..." Ninjaman cried. The Gods came back, and I couldn't believe it. The mask went off of Soul's face, and the face that no one could believe, was Sven.
To Be Continued...
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*faints at sight of twist in story*

 

Chapter 21 is here, and hopefully you all haven't had a heart attack ue to the huge twist, now let's begin.
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@Konohito
@nala
@Ninjafoya
@Arelane
@TheUndeadBrave
@Cally8484
@Kazuke
@Suthos
@Katy9078
@John_0696
@MappyTurtle
@Dugee
@Radii
@NINJANAYLIN123
@CreeperInHD
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Chapter 21 - As Time Escapes
Staring at the still body, there was a sudden silent, gazing through the atmosphere. Everyone just couldn't say a single word as everyone realized how shocked they were. "We're... we're sorry..." Ninjanaylin sorrowed while Creeper kept sniffing. "It's okay Ninjanaylin and Cre-" Suddenly, Arelane bursted out laughing and clapping him hands, while interrupting what Silent could say. "And you thought I was just a dumb, stupid scientist. What such pity is dominating your mind. It's quite... beautiful." I noticed Radii walked towards us. "Where the hell were you?" Kono shouted. "I was planning a little plan for you all... Arelane, the missile is fully complete. Call the plane." Radii sneered. "You..." Cally hiccuped. A plane covered in a dark, night sky color landed, and Radii and Arelane walked on and closed the door. "And I really thought she was our friend..." Ninjaman sighed. "We've got to find that little 'missile' she's planning... well, we should split up then. Spread out!" Ninjafoya shouted. We all nodded and we spread out, looking for a missile or possible a clue on where Arelane and Radii are going. Undead and Dugee stayed around Sven, who still remained on the ground.
I noticed something light grey in the distance. I shouted with glee and screamed "MISSILE!" Everyone came towards me while Undead carried Sven. I went towards the missile, slowly that was on the ground. Suddenly, there was a note attached on the missile, saying 'This was a trick to make you all not realize where we were actually going, and say goodbye to time.' "Time?" Ninjafoya wondered. Then, we froze for 5 seconds, then we finally were free. "Did we just lag?" Mappy wondered. Then, a flashback dominated my mind, and the view was breath taking.
It was me, staring into the city while the birds stayed in the sky and the leaves falling from the tree's suddenly froze in the middle of the air. Then I saw me and some other friends, staring at a large dragon, controlling time.
The view disappeared, and I saw Undead's wondered face in front of me. "Um, do you mind? Personal space please." I sighed. "Flashback of a dragon, right? We've got the move then." Undead said. "Exactly wear Mr mind reader?" Katy shouted. We froze again, this time for 20 seconds, and when we were free, we realized time was getting worse, and time was starting to disappear. "I know someone who could help us, this way." John said and he pointed the way and marched, and we just walked behind him while I held Sven, and I held his body tight, just wondering if there's a way to resurrect him.
Meanwhile, in the plane, Radii and Arelane was drinking beer and just laughed at almost everything they said. "Oh Radii... your me best friend any pirate has ever seen in the sea!" Arelane hiccupped. Suddenly, the light out of the window was getting darker, and the sky would soon be blind. "Too bad Louise and the gang hasn't eaten for day..." Radii giggled. "Now Radii, let's get some more beer." Arelane walked off, but Radii stared at the window, without taking a single hint where Arelane was going. "Flow Louise, Flow your friends to victory like the river." Radii smiled with hope.
To Be Continued...
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Hi you said you needed one more person and I am a person that exists and hi can I be in the story please hi

 

Oi, we getting into some Dragon of Time stuff!