5th Story: The Planets Of Shadows

Wanna Check Mine? (it's Nothing Compared to Those That @LouiseXminerX Makes, But still)

 

I really can't wait to be working on my 6th story, and I'm sure you all are too ^-^
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Arelane
@BunnySellz
@IDeadlyFighterI
@Kazuke
@Blumeire
@Chazzvid
@Brynstar
Enjooooy :D

Chapter 16 - The Betray
I looked out the window, and explosion was exploding on Planet Kreen as the planet faded away. Chazzvid still was crying, and I felt terribly sorry for him. Still, I was a bit curious where we were going, so I went to the front of the ship, but before I openned the door to the front, I heard shouting. "NINJAMAN! HOW COULD YOU!" Sven shouted. I slammed the door openned, and NinjaMan was pushing Sven against the wall. "THIS WASN'T OUR PLAN!" Sven shouted. "NINJAMAN! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" I shouted. "Louise! Run! He's crazy!" Sven cried. The crew heard the shouting and were standing behind me. "NinjaMan, what is all the noise?" Kazuke questioned. "I'm sure all of you would like to join me to watch me watch the planets die when the meteorites come." NinjaMan smiled. "NinjaMan, we must ask the great Alien God to remove the meteorites, not just watch the meteorites destroy the planets. We decline your plan!" Queen Nala shouted. "What a shame. We're heading to your planet right now so I can kick you off and watch you burn in flames while the meteorites arrive." NinjaMan smiled. Queen Nala tried to run at him, but King Undead grabbed her. I couldn't believe it. The most amazing astronaut has been evil this whole time, just to get all the gold out of the planets. A tear rolled down my face, and I pushed through the crowd. "Louise?" Radii wondered.
I saw Chazzvid, staring at the window with Brynstar behind him. "We can build another town on Planet Kreen, right?" Chazzvid sniffed. "Of course we can." Bryn cheered. "Guys... NinjaMan is stopping us from asing the great God Alien to save your planet and the others, if we don't stop NinjaMan, we'll all die." I sighed. "WHAT!" Chazzvid's arms turned into mini guns. "Now now! Calm down. I'll give you a cookie." Brynstar waved a cookie in front of Chazzvid's face. While Bryn tried to calm Chazz down, I saw DeadlyFighter in the medic room.
I knocked on the door for his permission for me to come in, but he just stood still. I came in anyway, but he frowned. "I know what NinjaMan is up too... it's over kid. NinjaMan is going to drop us off at Planet Kye and leave us, while we burn into ashes. Just face it, we're done." He sighed. "It's not over, don't be so negative!" I smiled. "He works for Arelane. We don't stand a chance against NinjaMan, Arelane and their army." He sighed. Suddenly, I heard a large thud from below. The doors openned. Everyone was shotuing. "We're not leaving this ship!" Radii shouted. "Get off now." NinjaMan shouted. "NEVER!" BlackHamood screamed. Suddenly, their were people on this ship, and they grabbed us.
Guards went into the medic room, and also grabbed me and DeadlyFighter. DeadlyFighter just looked down. "Unhand me! I demand you!" Bryn shouted. They pushed us off the ship, and after Bunny was kicked off, the doors closed, and the ship blasted off away. Bunny cried.
"I'm so sorry... if I knew NinjaMan was evil, I could have fired him." Sven sighed. "We can't give up now!" I cried. Everyone just frowned.
"This is Agent Kazuke, we are stranded on Planet Kye, any idea's?" Agent Kazuke questioned in the radio. "Find shelter, food and anything that would make you survive. The meteorite is coming in 2 days, and it's best to make our last days the best." BluMeire suggested. Kazuke nodded and placed his radio on his belt. "You know what he said, come on, let's go into the town." Kazuke pointed. "WAIT! The guards might be still mad at us... let's hide in the forest." King Undead suggested. "Good idea, let's move." Kazuke nodded.
We entered the forest, and weird animals I've never seen before ran away into the bushes, like this 3 headed snake with spikes on its back. "Everyone, find food, DeadlyFighter, BlackHamood and I will look for shelter. Night is coming in less then a hour, lets go!" Kazuke
To Be Continued...
Hopefully you won't mind being evil @Ninjaman :p
Hope you enjoyed this chapter, I probably don't need anymore characters but my next story is coming soon, so look out for that story and you might be a character in that story as well!
Leave your feedback below, and stay tuned for Chapter 17
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Me and NinjaMan are complices? I do for take revenge, and NinjaMan for money. I am not so honored, so could have probably change places, but dont lol, its nice anyways :P

 

I don't mind, I actually kinda like the twist c:<

 

Nice twist!

 

Woah nice story xD. Can I be added?

 

I want to be in it

 

Epic story

Can I have a role?

 

Woah, never knew everyone would actually like the twist and I've got to add so many people in the story xD
Okay, @SS_Ace , @NINJANAYLIN123 and @Cally8484 is going to be the last characters added, I'm so sorry ;-;
But my new story is coming soon, so you might be in that story instead :D
Here's the characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Arelane
@BunnySellz
@IDeadlyFighterI
@Kazuke
@Blumeire
@Chazzvid
@Brynstar
New Characters:
@SS_Ace
@NINJANAYLIN123
@Cally8484
Enjoy ^-^

Chapter 17 - As Night Falls
I pushed hanging vines from the tree's away, not a single crumb of food spotted my sight. We all were tired as no progress was completed. Suddenly, Kazuke, BlackHamood and DeadlyFighter found us. "We have found shelter, there is also some food in there and also a fire. Come!" BlackHamood leaded us to a small cave, and it looked quite cosy. We sat down on some blankets and we all got some wooden plates and ate some chicken. Sadly, I was the last one to get food, but all the food was taken. "Louise, maybe you should find some food outside, don't worry, we won't leave." Radii suggested. I nodded and walked out of the cave. Night fell and it was freezing cold. I walked slowly, and I saw some sort of Dingo with horns on its head with 5 tails. I walked slowly, and slowly... but before I could grab it, it flew away like a helicopter using its tails to fly away. I sighed and kept walking. My stomach growled loudly. I haven't eaten for days, the last time I ate food was before we went on the rocket ship, and my stomach was twisting in knots.
I knelled down, breathing heavily. This could be the end. Before I could stand up again, some light was flashing in the distance. I stood up and walked slowly to the light, holding my stomach tight. The light grew brighter, and 3 figures were standing there. I felt pain in my stomach, but they then put their arms around me. "Who are you?" I asked. "Booga Ooga Eek Na!" One of the figures said. I was confused. They started to speak all sorts on languages. They spoke Chinese, French, Japanese then finally they spoke English. "Do you speak English?" They asked. I nodded. "Come." The person behind me whispered. They leaded me away from the cave. I was too hungry to think where we were going.
"Where is she?" Sven wondered. "She most be hunting for animals." Kazuke said. Chazzvid kept pushing the stick of chicken at his face, since his face was like a computer. Bryn grabbed his stick and ripped the chicken of the stick, and placed it through a hole under Chazz's face. "Hunger full. Thank you Bryn. Have a lollipop." Chazz handed a lollipop to Bryn. "I'm worried about her... I'm going to look for her." Bunny stood up and walked out of the cave. "Bunny wait!" BlackHamood chased after bunny.
I sat down, in a smaller cave then the other. They rapped a blanket around me and offered me some steak. I chomped the steak down, I just couldn't stop eating. "I am Ace. this is NinjaNaylin and that is Cally." Ace pointed out. I just nodded while still chomping on the steak. "You might be a help to us... can we request you a mission?" Cally asked. I nodded. "Some theifs took our cave and stole it. We need it back, can you kill them and return the cave to us?" NinjaNaylan asked. When I finally swallowed the last piece of steak, I nodded. "Good. The cave is in that direction." Ace pointed. He pointed out east. Cally gave me a spear. "Be careful. One of them is a robot." NinjaNaylan explained. "Robot? Are you talking about Chazzvid?" I asked. "Who?" Ace questioned. "Don't worry, I'll return your cave to you. I'll be back." I waved and headed off, when I suddenly spotted BlackHamood and Bunny in the distance. They waved and I ran to them.
"What's with the spear Louise?" BlackHamood asked. "These guys gave me some food and they asked me to kill some people who stole their cave. Do you want to help me?" I asked. They nodded and we headed east.
Queen Nala peeped out of the cave, but she saw nothing. "Maybe we should go to bed, they might come back in the morning." Queen Nala suggested. "Good idea. Let us rest." King Undead nodded. They all fell asleep.
I saw a cave, and I held the spear in front of me, and I saw people sleeping. "These must be the theives..." I explained. "Are you out of your MIND? These are your friends!" Bunny shouted. Turns out, it was the same cave we found. "They might be talking about another one. Come on." BlackHamood pointed west and we headed that way. Chazzvid woke up as he heard footsteps. Chazzvid slapped Brynstar awake. "What?" Brynstar shouted. Chazzvid was pointing at us, so they quietly tip toed out of the cave and followed us.
To Be Continued...
I'm sorry but no more characters are going to fit in. ;-;
Leave your feedback below, and any suggestions are nice!
Also, please let me know if your in the story and your not used much in the story. Sometimes I accidentally use some people too many times while the others don't get mentioned much at all in the story.
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

This one is also epic :D

Thanks for putting me in there

 

This story is awesome!

 

You really think so? :o I was thinking the story was getting a bit boring... But I'm glad you still like it ^-^
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Arelane
@BunnySellz
@IDeadlyFighterI
@Kazuke
@Blumeire
@Chazzvid
@Brynstar
@SS_Ace
@NINJANAYLIN123
@Cally8484

Enjoy :D

Chapter 18 - Planet Of Kye Extinction​

We kept walking forward, but I never had the thought in my mind to rest, but I kept walking. All there were in our view were tree's and bushes, not a single thing other than tree's and bushes was sighted, until Bunny spotted something. "I see a little cave other there." She pointed right. "It must be the cave... come on" I said. We leaded into the cave.
Bryn and Chazz were still following us, following our footprints on the ground. "Are we there yet?" Bryn yawned. "Direction of Louise, Bunny and BlackHamood almost complete..." Chazz responded. Chazz instantly pointed right, and saw the footsteps lead into a cave. "Scan complete. 3 humans are in the cave." Chazz smiled. They then tip toed in.
The cave was dark, and spiders were everywhere. Bunny was hugging BlackHamood while shivering. "I-I-I...don't like the da-da-dark..." Bunny coughed. "Don't worry, we'll get out soon." BlackHamood patted Bunny on the head. Then, the cave expanded into a room, and I couldn't believe my eyes. Dead people were on the ground with rotten skin. "It must be the humans trying to escape the Alpha's." BlackHamood figured out. "But there arn't any Alpha's left." I explained. "Then who killed them..." BlackHamood scratched his head. We realised the humans who were lying seemed to be heading to a old space ship, possibly trying to escape.
I turned around immediately, when I heard footsteps. BlackHamood got a little lighter and held it out in front of us, and it was just Chazz and Bryn. "Citizens found." Chazz cheered. "Chazzvid, can you scan who killed these people?" Bunny pointed. Some red light from Chazz's head zoomed onto the bodies. "Scan complete. Spears has entered this body. Fingerprints are also on these weapons. Fingerprints that are from Arelane." Chazz explained. "Chazz, were these people killed 4 days ago?" Bryn asked. "Why do you ask?" Chazz wondered. I peeked out of the cave, and I realised no one was alive on this planet. "It must be..." I sighed. I went back to the cave. "That means..." BlackHamood realised. I heard screaming at the entrance of the cave. Someone fell onto me. I saw the face, and it was just Radii's. "Lou-Louise! *Cough* Arelane..." Radii sighed. Everyone was here. Then a spear landed in front of my feet, about 5 cm's away from me. I looked up, and people were throwing spears at us. "Arelane's guards! RUN" Bryn screamed. We went onto the ship, but it wouldn't work. "Only NinjaMan knows how to fix spaceship..." Sven cried. "We can't die now!" Queen Nala screamed. She hugged King Undead.
Then, Arelane's guards were lying on the floor, as the blood was running out of the bodies. I looked up, and it was SS_Ace, NinjaNaylin and Cally. "Guys! Oh thank goodness!" I cheered. But then they heled their spears in front of all of us, accept for me. "Good work Louise, you have captured the theives." Cally said. "Louise, who are these people?" King Undead asked. "They rescued me before I starved and froze to death. And I don't understand why they don't like you..." I wondered. "Men, please lower your spears." Kazuke said in a calm voice. But they just held their spears closer to them. "You stole our cave! We could have froze and starved to death!" SS_Ace shouted. "You mean that cave we stayed in was yours?" DeadlyFighter asked. "Indeed. Now it's time for revenge..." NinjaNaylan said. "Wait! This is a misunderstanding!" Radii said trying to make the best smile. "We just borrowed the cave! Stealing and Borrowing are two different words." Radii coughed. "Ye-yeah! Now we'll return it to you." Sven cheered in a wobbly voice. "Just... let them go." I sighed. After 10 seconds of silence, they finally dropped their spears. "We're sorry for the misunderstanding. We shall fix this spaceship so you can escape if you wish." SS_Ace smiled.
To Be Continued...
Hope this chapter wasn't too borring.
Remember to leave your feedback below and please like as well to make myself not worry so much...
Anyway, the story is about to end in 2 or 4 chapters, so remember to check almost each day for a new chapter because the final chapter is coming soon...
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Well shoot this story's awesome Louise! I was gonna ask to be in it as someone who dies a very painful death, but I guess I came to the party late.

 

Well...
Since you said you don't really mind if you die, there is a possible chance you would be added
Hopefully you won't mind being in the story for maybe only about 1-2 chapters

 

The story is going just as good as how it has been

 

OMG best story ever 10/10 -Ign

 

I'm so glad all of you still like this story ^-^ I was starting to get worried
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Arelane
@BunnySellz
@IDeadlyFighterI
@Kazuke
@Blumeire
@Chazzvid
@Brynstar
@SS_Ace
@NINJANAYLIN123
@Cally8484
Enjoy :D

Chapter 19 - The Direction Of Hope
As SS_Ace was fixing the ship's engine, there was just one small thought in my mind that got me worried. "Louise, is something troubling you?" Kazuke questioned. "Hmm? Oh um... just what happens if we don't get to the God Alien in time?" I sighed. Radii put her hand on my back. "Don't think negative. Think positive." She smiled. I smiled a bit too. Sven heard something outside, and he went outside to check what the noise was. "SS_Ace, I hope you fix the ship soon..." Sven coughed. "Let me guess, Arelane and NinjaMan is here?" Queen Nala sighed. Sven nodded. NinjaNaylin and Cally helped SS_Ace fix the ship as fast as they could. "HURRY!" King Undead cried. We heard loud footsteps come towards the cave. "DONE! EVERYONE! GET IN!" NinjaNaylin screamed. We all got in, but Cally, SS_Ace and NinjaNaylin stayed behind and got their spears out. "What about you guys?" I cried. "There's no time! Sven, get them out of here!" Cally shouted. "Un-Understood. Ship activating." Sven said. We all took our seats, but I wouldn't. "We're not leaving without you!" I shouted. "Louise... we'll be okay." SS_Ace sighed. The guards entered the cave. BunnySellz grabbed me just before the doors shut. "NO!" I screamed. I stared at the window. BlackHamood tried to grab me and put me in my seat, but I wouldn't let him. "NO NO NO NO!" I screamed. "Louise! Calm down!" Bryn shouted. The ship took off and blasted out of the cave into the air. I sobbed. I dropped myself in my seat while tears rolled down my cheeks. Chazzvid gave me a lollipop.
"This is Agent Kazuke here, we have escaped Planet Kye safely. However, three people were not able to come in." Kazuke said in the radio. "Aye... only 10 hours left before the planets get destroyed. Hopefully they find another ship before the planets get destroyed." Blumeire responded. "Understood. Out." Kazuke said and he placed the radio on his belt. "Sven, make the ship got at hyper speed." Kazuke said. Sven nodded and the ship went faster. "DeadlyFighter, do you know the direction of the Legendary Alien?" Sven questioned. DeadlyFighter ot a GPS out. "East. Going to take 6 hours before we get there if the ship can go at 100% speed." DeadlyFighter explained. "Okay, ship now going to 100% speed." Sven pushed the lever up, and the ship started to move much faster.
I was still sobbing and trying to wipe my tears while licking a lollipop in one hand. As my last tear finally dropped onto the floor, I finally felt a bit calm.
Hours past, and the ship remained in silence. BlackHamood and Bunny chatted, King Undead and Queen Nala were looking in a magazine, but I was just staring at the window. "Bunny, would you take care of Louise for a bit?" BlackHamood asked. She nodded and she patted me on the back. "Don't worry, I'm sure the Legendary Alien can fix all this, and not a single worry will remain in your mind." Bunny smiled. "What happens if the Legendary Alien doesn't fix anything?" I sighed. But I remembered what Radii said: Don't think negative, think positive. I started to think of the great times we had. Like when we were in Mother Base, and how we escape times that would have been our death. I smiled. "Everyone, we have arrived at Planet Souls." Sven said.
To Be Continued...
Guess what? THE FINAL CHAPTER IS COMING TOMORROW!
Yes, the story is already super close to an end.
A secret character is also coming in the next chapter.
Remember to leave your feedback below and like this chapter
Because the 6th story is also coming, and its going to be the best out of all my stories.
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

I wonder what I will do in the end :D

 

Oooohhh, very fast question for next story, can i be in it?

 

Nice story. In next one, can i also be villain? (Not the honorable one doe... i wont take revenge like this murdering everyone, im just a smarty one who thinks about himself only) also, what will the story be about?