Story: The Wrath of Hades

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Keep going with more chapters?

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  1. Blumeire

    Blumeire slave at the local school district

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    Hello!
    So, before I get this started, I just wanted to say thanks to @LouiseXminerX for this inspiration of making a story. Second, this story will be about greek mythology. Also, this is a bit inspired by the Percy Jackson series, so you will see a few similarities with the storyline.
    The cast of this story will be the following:

    @HuskyWolfPawr Starring as: Pawr
    @KatlynBlossum Starring as: Katlyn
    Chapter One
    It was bad enough, that Blumeire was having a bad day. He stood out in the hall, where the darkness felt like it almost wanted to swallow him whole. The bright light of the classroom that he was just outside of shone out on him. He felt like a prisoner trying to escape prison. Behind him, one of his only friends at his military boarding school, was Pawr.
    Blumeire looked behind himself and saw those stormy grey eyes stare him down, like he was a teacher scolding him, just without the talking. Blumeire knew that they were weird like that. Blumeire's own eyes were a navy blue colour with a pearlescent of gold. His teachers voice, was talking in an urgent tone, to his other only friend, Katlyn. He almost didn't care that he had two friends, because they were real friends. Blumeire listened closer as he heard the conversation: "We have to get them out of here. Even you are not safe, Katlyn." "Yes I know, but i'm afraid Blumeire and Pawr don't even know who they are yet!" Pawr leaned over, "Dude, I don't know what they're talking about, but I get the feeling we should leave. It's freaking me out." "I know, Pawr, but this is serious, they know something about us, and i'm determined to find out what it is!" Suddenly I realized I was talking to loud. My teacher, Sgt.Oak suddenly walked out of the classroom. I thought we were dead meat. Me and Pawr both stood up up, then backed up, frozen. Instead of yelling at us, Sgt.Oak just shook his head. "You two, need to come with me, pack your bags quick." Pawr had the guts to speak first. "What? Why? What were you talking about that we didn't even know who we are?! I know who I am!" Sgt.Oak made a grunting noise, and then he said "Believe me, kid. You won't want to be here in 20 minutes." And at that, me and Pawr ran all the way to our dorm, packed our bags and we walked out the door. We both knew something was different about both of us. And after all these years, we we're about to find out what.


    Thank you for reading!
    Please tell me if you would like more chapters, i'm thinking of doing 15.
    I will be adding a new character every three chapters, and i'll be posting a chapter a day, so please put your IGN down, and I will pick someone at random!

    Thank you!

    -Blumeire
     
    Last edited: Feb 19, 2015
  2. Katy_

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    More please! :)
     
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  3. Blumeire

    Blumeire slave at the local school district

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    I know I didn't add you, but you are supposed to come in next chapter xD
     
  4. Katy_

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    I figured that ;)
     
  5. katlynn

    katlynn "Dear heart, why him?" Donator

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    I love it! :D
     
  6. RazorOG

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    :o This is really good, you are amazing at making stories. :D
     
  7. Blumeire

    Blumeire slave at the local school district

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    Hello 'errbody!
    I've decided to add another
    catch in the chapters, where every 3-2 chapters it will vary from Blumeires POV (Point Of View) to Pawrs, Katlyns, ...etc
    This will be chapter two featuring the
    following characters :
    @HuskyWolfPawr Starring as: Pawr
    @KatlynBlossum Starring as: Katlyn

    Chapter Two
    Blumeire

    Blumeire would never have admitted it out loud, but he was scared. It was all happening so fast. Katlyn, his only other friend besides Pawr, was in the car when me and Pawr got there. I could tell she was shaken up, because when we entered the car, she only regarded us a bit by mumbling "this is bad.." Blumeire just didn't get it. Soon enough, Sgt.Oak came into the car, he was always, short, maybe just over four foot two, but he could be pretty menacing when he wanted to get his point across clear. I leaned over to check on Pawr, he seemed calm, but a little shaken up. Sgt.Oak started up the car, I was about to start talking to Pawr, when Sgt.Oak started talking as we raced down the highway. "Alright kids, you've probably learned about all those greek myths, right? The gods, monsters, titans, etc?" I said "Of course. That's one of the only things the school teaches us besides survival in a battle." "Well, the thing is, the gods, the monsters... They still exist. I don't know how to break it to you exactly, but... Som-" "What?! Are you kidding me? You kidnapped us in the middle of the night to tell us that some greek myths are real? C'mon seargent, are you s-" "Enough!" Barked Sgt.Oak. It startled me enough to shut my mouth. Katlyn was still sitting in the front seat, looking as worried as ever. "I'm going to continue my pep-talk. After i'm done you can raise your hand and ask all the questions you want, but let me speak." "Okay" I said glumly. I couldn't help but believe him. Me, Pawr, and Katlyn.. We were different. "Now, the greek gods, and goddess' come down from the ol' mount Olympus up in the skies-" "Right.." I mumbled. "..And when the come down, sometimes they have affaires, with mortals. The mortals realize of they are seeing, but that's only when the mortal is special. "What do you mean?" I asked. "The mist is like a shield to human eyes. So if there were a bunch of monsters running around, mortals wouldn't see the monster, they might see, other humans, or something else. Nobody really knows what they see. Anyways, your parents, they met one of your fathers/mothers. A god. Then, they had you, a child filled with powers from your godly parent." "So what does that even mean?" Pawr asked. I forgot he was there, he had been so silent the entire time. "Well, that means that you three, are Half Mortal, Half-" "God." I said completing Sgt.Oaks sentence. "So.. what am I then? Am I called a Half-God?" Pawr said. "No, you're called a Demigod. Some people call Demigods, Half-Bloods. But it's easier to say Demigod. We sat in silence for a few minutes. "So.. you're a Demigod?" Sgt.Oak grumbled something useless. "No, i'm a satyr.' I racked my brain tying to remember what the satyrs were. Then I said it out loud, blushing since I didn't realize what I said. "You're a goat!" Sgt.Oak Sighed and grumbled some more useless comments. "No, half human, half goat." I didn't want to, but I knew that all this was true. "So, who are our godly parents?" "Don't know." said the Sgt. "You'll end up finding out, tomorrow night at the campfire." "What campfire?" "At the camp." "What camp?!" I asked, obviously not satisfied with any of my answers. "Camp Half-Blood! The camp where all the Demigods like you go." I sighed. Out of nowhere, the loudest noise I ever heard shattered my ears. Almost like a dinosaur screech. I turned around, as Sgt was grumbling, Katlyn screamed. I saw the ugliest, scariest monster ever.
    And it froze my heart.

    Alright guys!
    I can't wait to write chapter three tomorrow. If you would like to be added to the story, just tell me. I'll be adding a new character on the fourth chapter, so if you would like to be added, please just tell me. The next
    two characters being added, will be:
    @Katy9078 Starring as: Katy
    @RazorScythe99 Starring as: Razor

    Okay guys, thanks again!

    ~Blu


     
  8. JuniDaBawz

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    Beautiful story! Could I be added or?...
     
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  9. RazorOG

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    This is really cool :D. probably the best stories I have seen on the forums. :)
     
  10. JupitersDarling

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    Wow! Amazing! If you don't mind, could I possibly be added? :)
     
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  11. Blumeire

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    Thank you both! :)
    And of course you guys can be added by chapter 4. Thanks again!
    ~Blu
     
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  12. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Could I plz be added? :P
    Also, I'm glad my story inspired you, and it makes me proud making stories now cause now almost everyone is making stories cause of me ^-^
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
     
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  13. Blumeire

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    Thanks! And sure, you'll be added in chapter four, like Kazuke and Jupiter.

    Thanks again! :)
     
  14. katlynn

    katlynn "Dear heart, why him?" Donator

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    I love it! :D
     
  15. ImJustMrpie

    ImJustMrpie Farewell

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    Nice story C:
     
  16. OfficerDeadly

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    Nice story
    Could I be added ?
     
  17. Silent_Arrow

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    Amazing chapters @Blumeire Keep up the good work my friend!

    If possible, can add me to the story, if yes that would be great, if not, not bigge.
    Thanks and have a great day :)
     
  18. Blumeire

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    I'll try to have you added in by chapter 5-6
    Thanks again everybody! :)

    Edit: Sorry about not being able to post a chapter today. :c
    I had a lot of homework from school, then I had to do some other things, like walk my dog, etc.
    I ended up hanging out with some friends IRL, so that happened too.
    Lol, thanks again guys! :)
     
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    Hoping I'm not the
    "ugliest, scariest monster ever"
    xD but excellent job!
    I can't wait for more!
     
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  20. Blumeire

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    Hello everyone!
    First I need to say:
    Sorry for not posting in a little while, like I said
    yesterday school and other things IRL. Thanks for sticking with me though, and giving me support! :)
    Anyways, since I wasn't able to
    post yesterday, i'll be posting chapter 3 today! Enjoy :)
    "Demigod's" Starring in this chapter are:
    @HuskyWolfPawr
    @Katy9078
    @KatlynBlossum

    Chapter Three
    Pawr

    Usually, fighting a giant monster with no experience, wasn't on Pawr's top ten list.
    The roar of the monster was so loud, that he ended up screaming. He was about to look over his shoulder, when the car pretty much exploded. There was a terrible pain in his left leg, he was pretty sure he landed on it. When his vision cleared, and his ears stopped ringing, he looked around, there was fire everywhere, and he saw people. Not the so-called "regular people" or as Sgt called them "mortals". He looked around, hoping to see Blumeire, sadly he was no where in sight. For a moment, panic seized through Pawr, hoping that Blumeire wasn't dead. The shouts were louder now, and then he realized his hearing was back. A girl came up to him, he wasn't sure who she was, but she looked grim, strong, and ready. But in a pretty way. "What's your name?" She half yelled, half spoke to him. It took Pawr a moment to regain his voice. "My name.. Euh.. It's Pawr.." She nodded grimly. For the first time Pawr looked at the monster, and so many emotions raced through his body. Fear finally taking over. The monster.. Well.. It was a dog. Not your average, german shepherd or greyhound. This dog looked like a lab, except it was around nine feet tall, ten feet wide, and it had three heads. A name flashed into his mind, Cerberus. How did he know that? He wasn't sure. Probably all the greek mythology training at his boarding school. He noticed a figure running towards the dog. "..Who is that?" The girl who found Pawr earlier, asked. Pawr almost wanted to laugh. The thought of Blumeire running up, and killing the three headed dog was almost kind of funny. Pawr realized Blumeire was carrying a sword. Where had he got that from? Pawr watched, as he was amazed and stunned as Blumeire was about to be the biggest hero, and save so many people by killing this thing. Blumeire ran up to the dogs feet, jumped off it's paw, grabbed it's collar, swung up with amazing strength, just as he was about to bring his sword down on the middle head of the dog.. BOOM. A blinding flash of light flashed into a bubble, poor Blumeire went flying. Pawr's wits finally came over, with incredible speed Pawr started running to the flying Blumeire, who looked unconscious. Pawr almost reached him, maybe 4 feet off, when Blumeire landed in the grass with a nauseating thud. Pawr ran over, sliding to Blumeire. "Are you okay?! Blu?, Blu!" He looked over at the dog. A man in black robes, olive skin, and black long hair with a black long beard was riding Cerberus. His voice boomed as he spoke; "Demigods! ..Around the world. I.. Am Hades." When Pawr heard that name he jumped. The god of the dead, the underworld was riding his three-headed dog. The myths came back to Pawr. "I have been forgotten, ignored and shunned from my family.. The Olympians. I will have my revenge, by bringing the underworld, to here. I will raise my domain, destroy Olympus, and claim the throne for myself! Demigods around the world, hold back your sword. Pledge your duties towards me. When I overthrow the gods, you will be given a spot in my domain. I wil-" A silver arrow shot Hades straight in the shoulder. "Gah!" Hades roared. He looked over at the girl from earlier. "Come on, Pawr! We'll take your friend to somewhere safe! We can heal him, just help me with him." We both carried a bloody, unconscious Blumeire. Sgt helped us put him in a random car. Katlyn ended running by. I realized there we're a bunch of demigods now fighting. At least I assumed they were demigods. Some held swords, others held Bows. I realized Hades was fighting back. Demigods were going down. Darkness enveloped a part of the road. Cerberus roared, biting demigods.. As the darkness literally swallowed The road, it caved in. Demigods were dragged into the darkness. The hairs on Pawr's back stood up. He had a terrible feeling that all those Demigods had just died. Sgt started driving the car, Katlyn was in the front seat of the car. Blumeire was in the back of the car. "Pans pipes!" Sgt shouted "Hades? In the mortal world?! This could be bad.." Sgt continued. I ended up biting first. "What the HECK was that!?" "Cerberus," Said the newcomer, confirming Pawr's worries. "And Hades. It was a warning." Even though Pawr should have asked about that, he asked about the girl. "T-Thanks for saving my life, and help me with my friend, Blumeire." "Yeah, No problem." "You're a Demigod?" She paused. "Yes. I'm a daughter of Artemis." Pawr went through the names in his head. "The goddess of.. The Hunt, nature, the moon, and archery?" She allowed herself a thin smirk. "Yeah, that one." Pawr digged a little deeper. "What's your name?" "My name.. Is Katy. Daughter of Artemis, friendly archer." "Huh." said Pawr
    Katlyn spoke up; "Sgt, I think we should head for the camp." Sgt finally said something; "Yup." then grumbled something else.
    Pawr said "Well, I hate to ask this question but.. Who is my godly parent?" Katy replied. "It depends, once we get to the camp, you'll find out. You'll be claimed. "Claimed?!" I asked "Yeah. Your godly parent will claim you. A symbol of a god/goddess will glow above you and your friends head. And voila. You'll be claimed. "Alright so.. I have to wait?" "Pretty much." Katy spoke up again. "So, Pawr, what's your story?"
    Pawr hated talking about his past. Surprisingly, he started talking about it without difficulty.
    "Well.. It all started when I was seven years hold.."

    END OF CHAPTER 3
    Thanks again guys! :)
    Hope you enjoyed this chapter. It was a bit longer today making up for the missed chapter yesterday. I hope you guys
    enjoyed!

    Thanks again! :)

    -Blumeire
     
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