5th Story: The Planets Of Shadows

Please do not complain if your not in the story yet, you'll be in it!
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@svenjongejan2
@Ninjaman
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
New Character:
@TheBlackHamood
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 5 - The Battle Of Truth Part 1
"We're Alpha's, OKAY? Why does she want to battle us?" Sven shouted. "She thinks your still humans. So you need to battle her to prove your Alpha's. If you win your safe, if you loose, then death." The guard explained. I slammed my head on the desk. "Fine, we accept, Lead us to this battle." Radii said without questioning. "Are you INSANE? We're toast now." Ninjaman sighed. "We have no choice. It's aether live or death." Radii said.
As we walked to a huge arena, huge crowds of people... I mean Alpha's surrounded the arena, all shouting "GO QUEEN NALA! GO QUEEN NALA! YEEAAAH". I didn't hear a single person cheer for us, which I guess is a sign that they think we're humans. "People of Kye! The battle to proove if their a friend or foe will begin. Team uhh..." The announcer stopped and thought... "Team Loser! Select who shall battle first!" We all seemed embarrassed. "Good luck, I'll cheer for you... in my mind, other wise they'll probably know I'm human." Undead whispered. He galloped to a seat next to Queen Nala. "I'll go first!" Radii held her hand up. I seemed surpirsed. Usually she's shy and weak, but today she seems... strong and brave. "Very well! You will all have to try and defeat Queen Nala one at a time. Now everyone, please welcome QUEEN NALA TO THE ARENA!" The announcer pointed to Queen Nala, and the crowd was as loud as a dinosaur. "Now please... ehm... welcome... Rabbit!" Announcer giggled. Everyone kept saying "BOOO" at us, and some people even tried to throw junk at Radii. "I'm not a rabbit... I'M A WARRIOR!" She screamed. The crowd laughed, making us feel more embarrassed. As Radii took her place and Queen Nala, Queen Nala took a long sharp spear, while Radii just had a tiny knife. "Alright... Battle... BEGIN!". People played the drums and everyone cheered and shouting. Queen Nala held her spear in front of her, ready to fight, while Radii held her knife in front of her with one hand. Radii charged, but Queen Nala used her spear as a pole vault and jumped over here and swung her spear under he feet, making her fall down. She got her knife in front of her and consentrated... and saw where Queen Nala was about to move. When she was about to charge, I knew this would always work, so I cheered. But then someone from the crowd threw a banana in front of her, making her slip. She dropped her knife and it was metres away. Queen Nala stepped on her stomach super hard, making her cry. "Give up, your hopeless." Queen Nala laughed. "I... I give up!" Radii cried. Everyone cheered and the drums played. "QUEEN NALA IS THE WINNER FOR ROUND 1! EVERYONE GO WILD!" The announcer screamed. Everyone was all fired up.
Radi came crawling to us, full of tears and pain. "Just hang in there..." I said, trying to feel brave without crying. "You take care of Radii, I'll go and teach this princess a lesson!" Ninjaman sure did feel sorry for Radii as she held her stomach in pain. "PREPARE TO FEEL PAIN FROM THE MIGHTY NINJAMAN!!!" He screamed. Everyone just laughed, saying how pathetic he looked. He got his sword out and got ready to battle.
Before I could watch the battle, I saw something behind some purple bushes, staring at me. I sneaked closer. Using my best eye sight, I saw him to some sign language, and his hands said... 'Black... Hamood...' Before he could do more sign language, the announcer shouted. "AND QUEEN NALA IS THE WINNER OF ROUND 2! EVERYONE! GO CRAZY!" Without hesitation, I rushed back to our team and saw NinjaMan, kneeling down and crawling like a baby. "Unless one of us is like a ninja... I think we're dead." He sighed. I turned back to the purple bush, but the mysterious figure already disappeared... "I'll go, and I promise, I'll do it for all of us!" Sven cried. I saw a tear roll down his cheek, full of sadness. I could see the feeling inside the tear, how sorry he was for Radii and NinjaMan, and also had some anger for it, due to what Queen Nala has done to them.
Sven marched to the centre of the arena, letting out a mighty roar, full of anger and a bit of sadness.
To Be Continued...
I know it's taking a while to let everyone into the story, but I don't want to rush the story and try and make it the best one, so please be patient and I promise, time will run quickly, so you might be in the story in no time!
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I don't wanna be soo mean D:

 

You might change, don't worry ^_^
Remember: In every story, all bad people always turn good, so no need to worry :D

 

Ooooohhhhh, i feel super 'super' right now, lol

 

I'm a king!! Yeaaaa boooiiiiii!

Great story so far Louise!

 

Add me as a villain in truth battle part 2 pls (i give you cookie)

 

Yay, another chapter ^_^
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
New Character:
@Arelane
@BunnySellz
I know there are people who have asked to be in the story before, but please please please be patient!
But any who, enjoy :D

Chapter 6 - The Battle Of Truth Part 2
As Nala marched to the centre of the arena, she grabbed her spear from her belt, ready for battle. "ANNNDD BEGIN!" The announcer shouted. Everyone then started cheering and going crazy. Suddenly, someone grabbed me on the back of my shirt. I screamed. No one heard my scream since the crowd was too loud. The mysterious person whispered "Come." It let go of my back, and when I turned around to see who it was, it looked like that other guy from the bush, but his hood that covered his body was a bit darker. As I followed him into a bush, he gave my some sort of light saber, accept it was not active. "Press that button to make it open, and a huge fire blade will appear. It can murder anyone. Use it only when your in trouble." He explained. As I held the light saber in my hand, I put it in my backpack. "The name's Arelane, now go. Your friend has been defeated anyway." He said. I looked back, and Sven looked even more hurt. Blood flowed down the floor, and he looked like a zombie. "I-I... give up." He whispered. Queen Nala realised her foot off his stomach. Radii and NinjaMan came rushing to Sven, helping him back off the arena. I looked back at Arelane, and he just pointed his eyes at the arena. I nodded and ran to Sven.
"I-I don't know if I'll sur-survive." He whispered, coughing. "Sven, you'll make it! Don't say you won't!" Ninjaman cried. "We need a medic!" Radii screamed. King Undead felt guilty, not coming to Sven to help him, but he didn't want to make Queen Nala mad. "How did I go?" Queen Nala laughed. "Uhhm... Very nice." He sighed. "Now the final person... Louise!" The announcer said. Everyone was booing at me, but I marched to the centre of the stage. The words echoed in my head: "Use it only when your in trouble. Use it only when your in trouble..." It kept repeating and repeating and repeating. I got my fists ready, and everyone laughed. "No weapons huh? Looks like your going to suffer." I grabbed my hand before it could get the sword out. It kept trying to grab it. Queen Nala kept laughing. "Give up! Your going to die in pain. Blood will escape your body, leaving it as you fall." Queen Nala hissed. A tear fell down my eyes. "Don't listen to her Louise!" Radii shouted. "Your life will end in pain... blood will run away from you..." She kept repeating. Anger filled up my body. "Grr..." I hissed. "Go on. Make me laugh. Even a huge punch in my face will only feel like touching a feather." She said. "THAT'S IT!" I shouted. I got the sword out and pressed the button, and a huge bloom of fire burst out. Everyone screamed. "Where did you get that from?" NinjaMan asked. "YOUR LIMIT IN LIFE LIMITS HERE!" I screamed. I just kept going crazy, until the announcer said. "The sword! It's forbidden in Planet Kye! Guards! KILL HER!" I calmed down, full of shock. "What?" I cried. Arelane was watching in a bush giggling, and then hopped off. Guards surrounded me. A guard sliced the sword in half with their sword, and it slid off the arena. I had no weapons. "Lou... LOUISE!" Sven shouted. A guard behind me swinged his sword, until a shadow grabbed me and ran away from the arena. Everyone was in silence... and confused.
As the mysterious shadow finally let go of me, the hoodie seemed familiar. "It's me. BlackHamood." I smiled. NinjaMan and Radii then saw me, while carrying Sven. "Come, My assistant BunnySellz shall heal you back at the base. I heard the guards shouting, calling my name in anger, so we quickly followed BlackHamood as far away from the arena.
To Be Continued...
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Great as always :3

 

As, always the awesome meh saves da daaaaay! :D

 

Another great chapter!

 

These chapters just keep rolling in.
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Arelane
@BunnySellz
Enjoy :D

Chapter 7 - The Base
As a came across some large rock, I was confused. "This can't be your base!" NinjaMan hissed. "Door... OPEN!" BlackHamood shouted. Suddenly, the rock moved to the left, and a huge hole with iron ladders were seen. "Hop in, no need to climb the ladders." He laughed. He hopped into the hole without using the ladders. "Ehhmm... Okay." Radii said with her head tilted a bit. She hopped down the hole, and so did NinjaMan. I looked at Sven, wondering if he would hop down as well. "Don't worry, I'll use the ladders." Sven explained. I nodded and hopped down the hole. I landed into a small pool creating a huge splash. I swam to the top and I looked around, and a huge base was in my view. I saw Radii and NinjaMan with BlackHamood near a big door. I joined them and BlackHamood explained "This is the gate way to a rocket ship I've been working for years. Hopefully I can finally use it and escape this planet." "Escape? Why do you want to escape?" I asked.
"Aye, years ago, I had a blade made of fire, that was a legendary weapon. I only used it to kill animals, and give the cooked meat to the people of Kye. Everyone adored the sword... until the wicked Arelane stole it. He spread rumors about it how it murdered children at night, and Queen Nala set a rule that the sword must be banned. Arelane disappeared after that, giving that sword to many people who did not know about the weapon, making them get killed due to them breaking the law. I managed to get the sword back, but Queen Nala saw, and everyone has been searching me ever since..." He sighed. "Arelane? I saw him!" I shouted. "You did?" Radii asked. "Yes... while Sven was fighting, he gave me that sword... That damn Arelane! I almost got killing because of him!" I growled. Suddenly, someone was hiding behind BlackHamood, and I was confused. "Now now BunnySellz, no need to be afraid. This is my assistant BunnySellz. He maybe shy, but he can help is anyway." BlackHamood cheered. "OH MY GOODNESS!" He cried. Ninjaman turned around, and Sven fell into the water, and could not swim due to his bones were not strong enough. "I'M COMING!!!" He cried. He grabbed Sven and pulled him out of the water. "Poor little thing... I shall heal him right away!" He cried. He carried Sven to a small room, and as soon as they entered the door, King Undead appeared, to our surprise. "King Undead? What are you doing here?" NinjaMan asked. "You may need to look at this..." He sighed.
As we climbed the ladder and reached the top, right next to the golden palace were 100s of homes, burned to ashes and trees turning black and brown, some of them even falling down. "Queen Nala thinks you did this..." He sighed. "NO WAY!" I shouted.
To Be Continued...
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Oooohhhh, scary!

 

Looks like things are getting.....heated!

 

Nice story, I love it! Perhaps I can be in your story?

 

I promise you'll be in the next chapter, I'm so sorry for the long late btw.
But anyway, hi. Me again, and yay, another chapter.
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Arelane
@BunnySellz
New Character:
@IDeadlyFighterI
Enjoy ^_^
Note: Some violence and blood is in this chapter,
If you do not like any blood or violence, I suggest
to not read this chapter. Thank you.
I will explain in the next chapter what happened
So do not worry.

Chapter 8 - Escape To Universe
I came closer to the destruction, and houses were burned down to the ground. Suddenly, I saw the word 'The Awesome Arelane Did This!" Before I could realise who did this, Queen Nala then ran on top of the message, making it impossible to read, and stared at the destruction. "You..." She sniffed. "YOU DIRTY MONSTER! DIE!" She screamed. "Queen Nala! You don't have any evidence that she did this!" King Undead shouted. "She's a human! Her eyes are different from ours! I KNOW! SHE MUST DIE!" She cried. She kept screaming, full of craziness, and guards surrounded us. "Kill her!" She shouted. "NOO!" Radii screamed. BlackHamood quickly punched a guard down and kicked another one. More guards tried to fight him, leaving blood all over the ground. "GO GO!" He shouted. "We can't leave him all by himself!" Ninjaman cried. "I SAID GO!" He screamed. King Undead took his hand and ran. We went into the base, but some guards followed us.
As we landed in the water, I pushed the door that BlackHamood was about to show us open, and a huge rocket ship was there. Suddenly, someone screamed, and it sounded like BunnySellz.
Radii quickly ran to the medic room, and guards were surrounding BunnySellz and Sven. "Please go away!" She cried. Radii quickly took a spear from a guard and threw the spear at a guard's face. She kicked a guard and punched another. BunnySellz covered her eyes while shivering. As the last guard fainted, Radii looked at the unconscious Sven on a bed. "We need more time for him to fully heal!" She cried. Then, BlackHamood fell down into the water and crawled onto the cold, metal ground. He looked really hurt and tired. NinjaMan helped him get up. "We must *breathe* escape this *cough* planet!" He choked. More guards came down, and NinjaMan tried to carry BlackHamood to the rocket ship, but a guard threw a needle at NinjaMan, making him fall asleep.
King Undead carried NinjaMan away from the guards, but forgot about BlackHamood, and before a guard could stab BlackHamood... A figure zoomed past the guard, taking his spear then threw it at a guard. He got a gun and shot all of them, making them fall to the ground. Then, he hopped to the ground, and a guy with a scar on his forehead looked at us. Radii leaded BunnySellz back to the group while they were both carrying Sven.
"DeadlyFighter?" She said. Suddenly, more guards came down the hole. DeadlyFight took Sven and rushed to the rocket ship. We followed him up the rocket ship. I carried BlackHamood on the rocket ship while King Undead held NinjaMan, who was still asleep.
Before the doors could close, I was surprised to see Queen Nala looking like she was being chased be the guards. "HELP! PLEASE LET ME ON!" She cried. "Louise, shut the door!" Radii shouted. The scared face of Queen Nala just made me guilty. I knew I couldn't leave her, so I grabbed her hand and pulled her on the rocket ship.
The ceiling then openned up, no one knew how to flew a rocket ship except for Sven and Ninjaman, but they were both unconscious. We were all panicking, while the screaming of our voices woke NinjaMan up. It didn't take long to realise this was a rocket ship so he quickly got into the pilot's seat and the rocket ship flew into the sky, out of the planet.
"DeadlyFighter... I thought we could never see you again." BunnySellz cried. I was confused, and DeadlyFighters serious face turned into a frown.
To Be Continued...
This is probably my favourite chapter due to the action and how exciting it was :)
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As again, an awesome chapter! I also have a request: can you make like 2 chapters in my story? I'm going to Austria without internet. If you could do that, that would be GREAT!!!!!

 

Awesome story! I love this chapter <3

 

I love all the action in this chapter! Great story!

 

I loved Chapter 8, and I'm pretty sure you loved it too
If you couldn't read that chapter since you didn't like any blood or violence, well a new guy called DeadlyFighter rescued us and we got into a rocket ship and now we're in space, just a quick summary
But anyway, here's the characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Arelane
@BunnySellz
@IDeadlyFighterI
New Character:
@Kazuke
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 9 - The Planet Of Unknowns
"DeadlyFighter, I thought you were dead!" BunnySellz cried. "DeadlyFighter, could you explain this conversation? Cause I'm so confused." Radii asked. "Bunny... I left to protect you and BlackHamood. Let me explain:
I found a case with 100 billion dollars in it, but I didn't want to tell you because you might spend it all, since you two are a bit greedy. Aparntly, a spy saw the case and armies tried to kill me. I knew if they found you two you might get killed too, so I left and hid so no one can hurt me or you. I kept the case and built a new base for us, and I made it possible for you two to find it. So yeah, the base is actually made by me..." He sighed.
Bunny started crying. "DeadlyFighter... I missed you so much!" She cried. She hugged him, while DeadlyFighter was a bit embarrised. "Oh and of course! I need to take care of Sven and BlackHamood. NinjaMan helped Bunny carry Sven and BlackHamood into the medic room.
"So Queen Nala, why were the guards chasing you?" I asked. She looked down. "They found a diary of mine and I wrote in the diary I was actually human. So they tried to kill me since there is a stupid law I made to not let any humans on the planet. I made that law so no other humans know I'm a human as well, as they would probably know." She sighed.
Suddenly, NinjaMan was sweating. I came closer to the control panel, and I saw a screen showing the back of the ship, and I saw a missile shooting straight towards us. "I don't want to god damn crash again! I DON'T WANT TO GOD DAMN CRASH AGAIN!" He screamed. The others figured out that something was wrong, so they started to panick. "Only Sven knows how to stop missiles! We need him to wake up now!" He cried.
Radii rushed to the medic room, and Sven seemed half awake. "He is at the moment okay now, but he may feel some pain in his arms. BlackHamood how ever need more time to heal... and I don't think he might heal in time!" She cried. "Sven, are you able to control the plane?" Radii asked. "I... I think so." He sighed. "We need you! Are we might go down!" She cried. Sven slowly got off the bed. Radii held onto him so he wouldn't fall.
He walked slowly through the plane, and everyone was silent, like it was time to see what the master has to do. As he took the pilots seat, he pushed some buttons then steered the ship to the left. I fell down and King Undead fell on me. He steered it onto the right, and I fell on King Undead. The missile kept following us, but as he steered to the left, he held on and the missile was just about to miss us... but he felt pain in his arm so he let go, and the missiel blew the 1st engine. and 2nd engine was almost gone, so the ship's nose pointed down. "EVERYONE! GRAB ONTO SOMETHING!" NinjaMan cried.
Everyone grabbed onto the wall, while I stayed in between NinjaMan and Sven. "WE'RE GOING DOWN! WE'RE GOING DOWN!" NinjaMan screamed. Sven was crying with tears, and everyone was screaming. I saw the screen go through the clouds, and I saw yellow grass. I closed my eyes, and then, silence...
I saw darkness... I couldn't see anything. Something grabbed me and my legs slid across the ground. I peeked at the ship, and almost everything was destroyed. The only part that wasn't was where everyone was standing, the front of the ship and the medics room. The weapon room, and engine room and ceiling was destroyed. Then my eyes closed again.
Someone from the bush peeked through the bush, and saw me and the others getting grabbed and going somewhere. "This is Agent Kazuke, and some strangers are getting carried away, I'm going to follow them and try and get information out of them, over?" It said into the radio. "Understood! Watch your back, and be careful. Out." The radio responded.
To Be Continued...
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That's really nice! :0
I like it a lot because i'm such a book nerd, lol.

Is it too late to ask, if I could be in the next chapter? :3