My 1st story: The legend untold.

I want to be in it

 

It comes out this evening. =3

EDIT: Sorry guys, unexpected visit destroys it this evening, and tomorow i have not much time left, so wait for saturday, sorry guys D= )

 

Stunning! Wow, you might be as good as me :D
Keep making those awesome chapters! And this was a great way to welcome me back xD

 

GUYS, I'M MAKING A NEW CHAPTER, BUT PLEASE LEAVE SUGGESTIONS FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER, I'M OUT OF INSPIRATION!

(Aslong as it has nothing to do with anime. Or Pokémon. Or things that dirty old man watch. (You know what i mean, Boom Boom.)

 

1- YOU DIDNT ADD ME IN THE STORY
2- 14 JANUARY IS MY BDAY
3- (Something stupid again)

 

If you could add me, that would be cool...

 

Chapter 5: Past

Starring:
@svenjongejan2
@LouiseXminerX
@ItsJerry
@ItsHarry
@MrDeathWilliam
@RobyNub1337
@KateVampire
@XenonHD
@Slevin
@kadinator

NEW CHARACHTER:
@ItsChubix​

Jerry's view

"So, if that is meant to be us, aren't we like... Legends?" Wow, that i had the balls to ask that. ''Well, we are already 'fargends', FARTLEGENDS!" OMG, that was a good one! "OMG, Harry, so good!'' ''Guys, seriously, we're being captured, remember.'' "Seriously Sven, thats why we are trying to make fun. So we can forget that we are captured!" Sven Sven Sven, he is grumpy, and he smells. ''Did you know you smell like grumpyness?" KATJING! $.$ That joke is worth 1 million dollars! Louise said: "Sven, they're right. Make some fun! Act like normal Sven!" Slevin looked behind him. ''Something wrong?" Roby answered. "Since the crash he turned different, he lost his memory. He used to be so happy, now he is very grumpy..." Thats so trueeeeeeeeeeee. Jerry, this is your mind, make a joke about grumpy Sven... "Sven, do you remember Harry Potter? I think Snape infected you!" Harry started laughing like a beast! Slevin looked towards Sven and then towards Harry and me. "Calm down guys. I think that some doctors and nurses can bring his memory back!" William got a smile on his face. ''Wait, does that mean no grumpy Sven anymore?" Kate looked to Sven, while holding hands with Xenon. "Yes, it does, if he gets his memory back, his personality gets back to, right Slevin?'' "Correct, and talking about right, turn right here guys." I looked behind me, and saw Kadin walking alone. I whispered to Harry something. "We need to give Kadin a warmer welcome, i don't want him to be a loner..." ''K, lez go." We started to slowly lose walkingspeed so we could get in one line with Kadin. "Sooooo, Kadin, how did you got captured?" He looked towards Harry. Well, thats not a good begin. ''I was sailing on the amazone, when my boat sank. When i reached the side, i found a small village. It contained crazy people, and i saw William being tied to a pillar..." "Mhhh, whats with me?'' William stopped walking untill he was on the same line as us. "Oh, i saw you being tied to a pillar, almost burned to death...'' Harry and me lifted our eyebrows. "So you also saw Roby saving him?" "Yes i did." "Guys, here we are." I turned my head around and realised i was surrounded with more paintings. "Here, see that ring? Thats what i am searching. And you see those 2 towers? Those are the Twin Towers. And you see those birds? That are the planes that fly in." Wait, 9/11, that happenend 12 years ago! What does that have to do with it!? "But, there is also one version where the buildings stay." HOW!? ''But how? I mean, we can't travel in time..." Roby had a point there, but Slevin... "Yes we do, Chubix was able to build one." Xenon suddenly got an OMG face. "SLEVIN, NOW I REMEMBER YOU! How are you doing buddeh?" "Wait, are you that Xenon? Yes, ARE YOU!? GUARDS!" Guards showed up out of the dark. Take him to the Memoryroom! He knows who i am!" Two guards grabbed the arms of Xenon and dragged him away, even tho Xenon resistence was at its maximum. Kate screamed to Slevin. ''LET HIM GO YOU BASTARD! (If you read this Slevin, sorry, need to do this =3) WHAT DID HE DO WRONG BY KNOWING YOU!?" "Calm down Kate, i will explain all of this later, now let's walk back!'' As we walked back to Slevins HQ, We saw a random guy walking towards Slevin, i think it was a guard. "Sir, the machine, it works!" "Guys, change of plan, BRING XENON HERE! And you guys, you are going back to 10 september 2001... As we walked towards some stairs, Xenon runned towards Kate and hugged her. ''XENON! Are you oké!?" "Yes i am, luckily.'' I walked towards my brother. "TRUEEEEE LUVVVVVV, TRUEEEEEE LUVVVVVVVV!" ''Jerry, no times for jokes now!" We reached a chamber with a giant machine in it, it looked like a portal. Slevin said something to the random guy. Then he said something towards us. "Guys, Chubix is going with you to 2001. Have fun in 2001." But then a loud explosion came from the control pannel. "SVEN!" Sven was playing with the controll pannel. Slevin runned out of the chamber and did leave us alone. As a giant force was pulling towards the portal. Everything got sucked in. ''Guys, we need to jump in! Otherwise we will die!" It was Louise who said that." Chairs and cabels rushed towards the portal. Sven said something that sounds like he agreed. My foot came of the ground and i got sucked towards the portal. I fast grabbed a pillar, but it wasn't going to hold me for that long. A giant sound was filling the chamber. "Guys, we need to-" Kate and Xenon flew in the portal, and thats the moment that the pillar i was holding on to broke, and i was flying, through time...

To be continued!
If you see some grammar errors, please correct me, i hope you liked the 1st chapter of the story!
If you wanna join, just ask me, i will keep editing this thread to continue till the last chapter...
Enjoy!


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Awesome ! :D

 

Now working on next chapter! It's gonna be Harry's view! Don't forget to leave ideas!

 

Awesome Story! Can I be added?

 

Chapter 5: 9/11 (Part 1/2)

Starring:
@svenjongejan2
@LouiseXminerX
@ItsJerry
@ItsHarry
@kadinator
@XenonHD
@Keitue
@MrDeathWilliam
@RobyNub1337
@ItsChubix
New Charachters
@BunnySellz
@IDeadlyFighterI​

Harry's view
I looked around me. We are traveling through time at the moment! I said ''Wait, whats happening to us!?" When Sven wanted to answer, we could feel the ground under our feet again. Sven said: "Well, since i saw that it was a timetravel machine, we just traveled through time i think.'' As Xenon asked to Kate if she's oke. William pointed at a datesign. "11 september 2001, not the best day for us to be here.'' Suddenly someone rushed towards us. "Please, help me, I don't know where my flight is!" "Attention Attention, American Airlines flight 11 from Boston Airport to Los Angeles Airport got delayed with 30 minutes. I repeat, American Airlines flight 11 from Boston Airport to Los Angeles Airport got delayed with 30 minutes!" Roby tried to say to not bord that flight, but William said: "Shhhh, we may not tell we came back from the future, and why can't she bord it?" ''Wanna know why, its one of the 9/11 flights that crashed in the twin towers!" "But, the paintings, we can stop the attack on one of the towers, it will save 1000 lifes!" Kadin said. As Jerry showed the lady the way, we walked with her untill the security section. "Well, here it is, if you see Gate B27, bord that plane fast!'' Jerry said. As we all said goodbye, a Boeing 747 landed with the noise so loud as a giant whale! "So, who was that lady Jerry?" Why did i ask that, its not that i liked her. "Her name was Bunny. Her voice was VERY sweet." As we looked to Bunny walking away, I saw Sven trying to sneak behind the security! "Guys, Sven sneaked through the security, we need to cancel that flight!'' Kadin said." As we sneaked past the security and followed Bunny, a man collapsed with Louise, said sorry and walked to Gate B27. As we reached B27, we sneaked, again, past the ticket showing point and borded the plane. "Gate B27 is now closed." "Oke, so we are in the plane, lets find a seat and wait till it's time.'' Louise said.

To be continued!
If you see some grammar errors, please correct me, i hope you liked the 1st chapter of the story!
If you wanna join, just ask me, i will keep editing this thread to continue till the last chapter...
Enjoy! ​

 

Loiuse sry bro :D
It's not @KateVampire
It's @Keitue

 

Thx, fixed it.

 

Hello everyone, You might be confused why the hell I'm making a chapter while Sven should be making them
Well he ain't gonna be here for about a week, so he asked me to do some chapters!
Hopefully these arn't bad though...
But anyway, I'm known for making awesome stories you probably have seen, so I hope you enjoy!
Characters:
@xX0Sven0Xx
@LouiseXminerX
@ItsJerry
@ItsHarry
@kadinator
@XenonHD
@Keitue
@MrDeathWilliam
@RobyNub1337
@ItsChubix
@BunnySellz
@IDeadlyFighterI
I'm so so sorry if I don't include some people in some chapters >.<
Enjoy ^_^
Oh yeah, this will be Louise's (Me) view, just to make it easier ^_^

Chapter 6: 9/11 (Part2/2)
As we took our seats, I realised we were the only ones onboard, no others were on. "Did we go on the wrong flight again?" Jerry asked. "I thought this was the right one..." I wondered. "Hello passengers, welcome to flight 73, we will be flying to the place you all know of course and we'll get there in 1 hour, thank you." The speakers said. "It's suppost to be 2 hours untill we reach Los Angelus, I'm so confused." Harry wondered. "Maybe we got the information wrong..." Sven said.
As got fastened our seatbelts, the plane started to take off. After 10 minutes the seatbelt sign went off. "Lady's and gentlemen you may now release the seatbelt and eather go to the bathroom or just I don't know... look at the other seats. Your choice. Bye." The speaker said. "The pilot seems suspicious..." I said. "Seem's fine to me." Xenon said.
"I'm going to talk to the pilot, this plane is suspicious." I sighed. "Oh come on Louise, remember what Elsa said in that movie? Just let it go, let it go." Sven said. "That's just a movie okay? I'm going to see the pilot anyway." I said. I unbuckled my seatbelt and went to where the pilot was. I was confused, as only one pilot was there, usually two was here. "Excuse, just cause I'm curious, where exactly are you taking us?" I asked. "To the forest my lady..." He sneered. "We're suppost to go the Los Angelus!" I shouted. He got a gun and held it in front of me. "What the..." I coughed. "Get... back... in your seat miss. Don't tell anyone about this gun by the way." The pilot said. I was sweating, and I ran out of the door.
"So, how did it go?" William asked. "Uhmm... He said we're going to Los Angelus, now sit back... enjoy the flight... *cough* and uh yeah." I said. "Louise, are you okay?" Sven asked. "I'm as happy and Jerry!" I said with a wonky smile. I sat back in my seat. "Ladies and gentlemen, was have arrived in uh... a place you might not believe is Los Angelus, take your seats and hang on." The speakers said. "This was only 15 minutes! Da hell is wrong with this plane?" William shouted. Jerry farted, and the odor filled the plane. "Jerry, like, NOW?" Harry shouted. "I couldn't hold it in..." He sighed.
As I looked out the window, tree's covered my view. "Um..." I said in my mind. The plane landed on some smooth stone, which was weird.
Then suddenly, guards went in the plane and surronded us. "Put your hands up!" They shouted. "WHAT THE HELL?" Sven shouted. They put handcuffs on all of our arms and leaded us to some jail. "He he..." The pilot laughed. We went into some jail, and we were all stuck in cells. "Oh come on! Captured AGAIN?" William shouted. "Louise, what did the pilot tell you?" Xenon shouted. "Ehhmm..." I sighed. Then Jerry spotted someone. "Bunny?" He said. I saw in another cell a lady, the same one Jerry helped out. "Jerry! Please help me... I'm scared of jails..." She cried. "Don't worry! We'll get you out soon." Harry shouted.
She cried, and I tried to use my squeaky voice to make her laugh, but it made her work. "SILENCE!" A guard shouted. We all shut out mouths, while Bunny kept sniffing and sobbing. "What do we do?" Harry wondered.
To Be Continued!
I'm sorry if I missed anyone who is suppost to be in the plane or whatever... I sorta didn't understand the story, but I hope you like it!
I may need to make about 1 or 2 more chapters.
I'm so sorry however if this doesn't make sence due to anything that happened before in the story sohuld have changed this
but I hoped you enjoyed it! Don't worry, Sven will be back right next week.

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Which crachter am i ?

The story ended ? ;/