5th Story: The Planets Of Shadows

I'm back from the cruise, as you probably know now.
But anyway, I did say I would make a new story when I come back, so yeah welcome to my 5th story!
Also, my next story is going to be special, where all my previous stories will join into one!
But anyway, please enjoy, remember to ask below if you want to join my story :D
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@LilaRok
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 1 - The Discovery
As I finally woke up, hardly opening my eyes, I slammed my head onto the ground. Yep, that's how tired I am. As I finally got up, without looking where I was going, I slipped and fell down the stairs, while Lila watched in horror. "Louise, you really need to work on sleeping." She sighed. "I'm sorry, I couldn't sleep, so what's for breakfast?" I asked. "Pancakes, your favourite." Lila cheered. As I snapped out of my tiredness, I grabbed all the pancakes on the table and zoomed to the couch. "Are you serious? 10 pancakes? Now what am I going to eat?" She whined. "I'll share, let's just see if I'll break the record of 'The quickest time to eat 10 pancakes!" I cheered. As I gobbled the pancakes up, 40 seconds past and I ate about 4 pancakes. Suddenly, my armed pressed the 'on' button on the TV remote, and the TV flicked on.
"Last night, a massive discovery of unknown planets was found. Little is known about these planets, and not sure if any life is on any of these planets, but today in the afternoon, 2 astronauts are going to blast off into space, onto the planets taking months to visit all the planets." The new reporter said. I spit about 2 pancakes out of my mouth, full of shock. I love space, and this would be a dream holiday if I could go there.
"Don't even think about it. We've got work, we're author's if you forgot. We got a order to write 5 books for the school that's down the road!" Lila shouted. "Come on, we can write the books while on the rocket ship. Just imagen us on a tropical planet, filled with unknown creatures as cute as..." I thought for a moment... "ME!" I snapped. "You mean all animals with your face on them?" Lila sighed. "Never mind that, anyway forget about the pancakes we've got work to do!" I said.
"Work? We're not working until 2 o'clock, and that's 4 hours away." Lila sighed. "I'm not talking about that, I'm talking about that." I went outside, pointing into the sky.
To Be Continued...
So yeah, hopefully this was a good start, remember to ask below any suggestion or if you want to be in the story.
Hope you enjoyed, and I look forward to continue this story!
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

#1 bitches

Such beaty, such, awesome!

 

Great start! Can you add me in?

 

I really liked it keep up the good work.

 

I'm glad you all like the story ^_^
Here's chapter 2, and please feel free to ask if you want to be in the story!
I love the meme's and gif's too xD
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@LilaRok
New Characters:
@svenjongejan2
@Ninjaman4646
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 2 - Sneaky
As my arm started to get tired, Lila just sighed. "I've got 3 reasons why we can't go, 1st, the security won't dare to let us in. 2nd reason, the astronauts would probably just kick us out while we're in space, and thirdly, if we miss work today we're probably going to loose our jobs!" Lila shouted. "The 2nd reason isn't true, don't you know the astronauts? Sven and NinjaMan. Their famous, kind and their way too kind to kick 2 cute little girls out of space. 3rd reason though, we can just become astronaut instead, and 1st reason... is about to get sneaky." I said. Lila just face palmed. As we sneaked to the front of our annoying neighbours house, we saw his bike sitting in front of the garage doors. As I tip toed towards it, Lila became furious. "Okay, this is too far! We're stealing a bike just to go on a rocket ship? That's just lame girl!" Lila shouted. "Shhh, he'll hear you" I whispered. "NO! I don't care if my voice is as loud of an elephant, we're not going on the bike even if we're going to DIE!" She shouted. Suddenly, the door slammed open, and our neighbour looked as red as a tomato. "YOU GIRLS! WHAT YOU DOING NEAR ME BIKE?" He snapped. Lila seemed frightened, so she just ran towards the bike and hopped on, and we drove away. "HEY! GET BACK HERE YA MONGRELS!" But we already left him to eat our dust.
As we drove to the NASA base, security guards jumped infront of us. "Hey you young girls, your not allowed to be inside NASA." They said. "Who said?" I sneered. "Only people who work here are allowed! And I don't think any little girl's like you work here." He shouted. "We do work here, we got our job yesterday, while you were sleeping." I said. "I wasn't sleeping last night! I was up alllll night. On duty for 24 hours a day, no lie's can work on me, so I think you need to scram!" He snapped. "But don't you remember you sleeping on that bench over there?" I said with a sneaking smile. The guard was thinking for a while, while his eyes looking up in the sky. I grabbed Lila's hand and sneaked past him and went inside the door. "On second tho- Wait! Where did those kids go?" He wondered.
As we went past the gate, a rocket ship was right in front of us. Before we could walk closer, 10 guards were around us. "Hault! Put your hands in the air now!" They shouted. Lila and I shot our hands up, both frightened. "Was THIS apart of your plan?" Lila snapped. "Ehm.... Not sure." I whispered. "We demand you to shut your mouth! Your under arrest for trying to-" "Wait!" Someone in the distance shouted. The guards turned to that person, and in front of us, was Sven and NinjaMan, the most incredible astronauts of all time.
To Be Continued...
Once again thanks for the great comments! Remember to ask to be in the story below.
And I also love gif's and meme's, so feel free to post some below as this makes my day brighter!
Post your feedback and comments below please aswell ^_^
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

OMG I LOVE IT! :3

 

I am incredible aren't I :3

 

Im so incredible.

 

Hello. Nice story. May I please be in it?

 

thank you again for the great comments ^_^
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@LilaRok
@svenjongejan2
@Ninjaman4646
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 3 - Blast Off
"Oh... My god. Are you real?" I asked. "Yes. We needed to take two people to help us on our trip to the mysterious planets, and figured you two could help us." Ninjaman explained. "You can't be serious! These two? They broke the law for trying to sneak into the rocket and steal it!" A guard said. "We weren't!" I shouted. "You sure?" Lila with a low smile. "Nevermind that, we know these are great people. Do you accept Rok and Miner?" Sven asked. "It's Louise and Lila by the way, and we-" "Woah woah woah. I haven't packed anything for the trip!" Lila interrupted. "We can get free stuff on the planets you know, and of course we accept!" I cheered. "Excellent. Follow me to the rocket ship." Ninjaman said.
As we followed Ninjaman to the space ship, it kept getting bigger and bigger the more closer we got near it. As we finally entered it was like entering a 10 story house. "You girl's know how to fly a space ship, right?" Sven asked. "Uhh... n-" "Of course we do! That's the reason why you chose us, right?" I cheered with a weak smile, covering Lila's mouth. "Great, you can fly the ship later, right now prepare for take off!" Sven shouted. As we took our sweet, stengthing the seat belts, I could hear a person saying in the speaker "10. 9. 8. 7. 6. 5. 4. 3. 2. 1." I held my breath just before they could say 0. "Sorry astronouts, the rocket ship is in weak conditions. We'll have to wait till next year now..." When I let out my breath, while shocked, mysteriously Sven and Ninjaman started giggling. When I tried to think why they were giggling, the speaker came on again. "Just kidding! Have a good trip, ZERO!" Then the button of the ship blew fire, and the rocket ship immediately shot to the sky. We rushed threw the clouds, then it began to get dark. As I looked through the back window, earth began to get smaller and smaller. I never got to see earth is such a incredible view, I just couldn't believe it was real.
"Take off was successful. Putting power to medium." Sven said into the microphone. I finally freed my head from getting it stuck to the back of the chair since the impact of speed was really pushing it back. Lila seemed just shocked, seeing her in the middle of space with two random people and a best friend who has been dragging her all over the place.
"Welcome to space girls. Never seen it? Look out the window." Ninjaman smiled. As I looked through the window, the stars seemed much bigger, I saw the moon not so far in the distance, and as I looked at the back window, earth looked as it was as small as a tennis ball.
"Usually it would take around 4 months to get to the first planet in the new trail of planets, but since this rocket ship is brand new and the fastest one in the world, it would only take a week to get there." Sven explained.
I was just worried about one thing if we do get to the planets: Will there be aliens that think we're allies or foes?
To Be Continued...
@nala please do not worry by the way, you'll probably be in ether Chapter 4 or Chapter 5, so don't think I forgot about you :P
Like I said before, I love gifs,memes of pictures, so feel free to post any to brighten up my day ^_^
Please remember to post your feedback below and if you want to be apart of the story, of course feel free to ask and you'll be in the story soon.
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

I love it! Keep up the good work :)

 

This story is great so far!
Could I perhaps be added into the story?

 

Amazingly awesome
Can I be added?

 

woah, me pls ^-^

 

Can can ... i i i ..... be be added =D ? Please ? :I

 

Jeez this story is getting popular so quickly xD
And why, look how many people I have to add, lol.
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@svenjongejan2
@Ninjaman4646
New Character:
@nala
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 3 - The Crash Landing
As I stared through the window of infinite star's covering my view, I just didn't know what to do for a week. Out of no where, a paper plane landed on my lap. I looked at Lila, and all she did was just stare at the paper, probably a sign of saying 'read it'. As I opened the paper plane into a sheet, only three words layed onto the paper saying 'Call Me Radii.' So I guess I shouldn't call her Lila anymore, I guess she figured out a new name for her.
Days past, and the more days that past, the more I got bored. "Thanks for waiting girl's, only one more day left until-" "WARNING! WARNING! FUEL IS LOW. WARNING! WARNING!" The speakers shouted as they interrupted what NinjaMan was going to say. "Impossible! The fuel can't run out that quickly!" Sven panicked. "I thought the fuel would last for months." NinjaMan wondered. Suddenly, the nose of the ship started to face down, which made Radii feel a bit sick. "WARNING! WARNING! FUEL IS NOW AT 0%. CRASH LANDING IMMEDIATELY." The speaker shouted again. Sven grabbed the headset and said without a calm voice. "This is Sven the astronaut in the space ship heading to the unknown planets, and we are about to crash land, we need assistance immediately!" Sven panicked. "Sven calm down, just hold the wheel-" The headset stopped. "Hello? We need assistance now! Can you hear me?" That's when Sven was really loosing his calmness. After shouting for 10 minutes, he threw the headset on the floor. I was about to cry, and Radii was about to as well. Sven and NinjaMan couldn't control the ship. It started to spiral in circles, which made me almost vomit. "I don't wanna die! I don't wanna die!" Lila kept repeating. I just kept repeating in my head. "We're gonna die. We're gonna die."
As I looked through the window, blue clouds suddenly appeared. The space ship shot past them, and I saw purple leaves from down below. I closed my eye's, ready for death to come, and a huge thud came from below, like a huge rock just smashed from the bottom. Then purple leaves covered the windows, making it impossible to see what's going on. I heard the metal of the space ship rip off. The ceiling even cut open. Then the rocket ship went low and entered then green water. Water immediately entered the space ship. I quickly unbuckled my seat belt before the water could touch my feet, but Radii was having trouble unbuckling her seatbelt. As water reached the half open ceiling, Sven and NinjaMan already swam to the top, while Radii held her breath as tight as she could. I then got a knife from my pocket and cut the seat belt in half. Radii quickly swam to the top, and I was last to finally reach the top.
I was exhausted and cold as I crawled onto some light blue sand. I looked around, but Sven, NinjaMan and Radii were no where to be seen. Before I could stand up and look for them, I just couldn't take it, and before my face hit the ground, I heard someone say in the distance "Take them to Queen Nala, and so as that girl on the sand." And before I could hear more, I already fainted.
To Be Continued...
If you have asked to be in the story but not yet has been included, please don't panic. You'll probably be in Chapter 4, 5 or Chapter 6.
Please leave your feed back below and if you want to be in the story, ask below.
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Incredible Story! Can I have a role?

 

Once again, thanks so much for the nice comments!
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@svenjongejan2
@Ninjaman4646
@nala
New Character:
@TheUndeadBrave
Enjoy ^_^

Chapter 4 - Looks Are Deadly
As I woke up, my legs were dragged onto the ground, with white mud on my knee's. I looked up, and two humans were dragging me. It didn't take long to remember I was on a completely different planet, and that's when I realised that HUMANS were on it. Suddenly, they let go of me, which made me fall to the ground. I looked up, and so beautiful girl with a dress full of jewellery stood their sitting in a diamond throne. "You look like you belong here, but I've never seen you before. Are you sure your a Alpha?" She asked. "Alpha?" I wondered. "That's the species we are. So I repeat, are you one of us?" She asked again. "No, I'm a humans." I replied. "Humans? Leave our planet at once. Or you shall lead to death." Her calm face went into a furious face, like it was going to turn to fire. "But... we can't! Our rocket ship crash landed here! I can't escape!" I cried. "Then you shall die. GUARDS!" She cried. Guards came running towards me, with spears. "STOP!" I heard a voice. I looked left, and I saw someone that had even more jewellery on their suit. "Queen Nala. We do not need violence." He seemed mysteriously familiar... Like someone we have been with on many adventures... but just who is it?
"King Undead, she does not belong here. She is a human!" She shouted. "She is an Alpha! I could see it in her eyes..." He said. I seemed confused, but I didn't want to blow it and die, so I kept quiet. "Queen Nala, I hate to remind you but... he is the true leader of Planet Kye, you are the queen just to replace his... wife." A guard whispered. Queen Nala looked down. "Okay fine. Guards, realise the others." She asked. "Yes your majesty." They replied. Then I turned to my left, and Radii, Sven and NinjaMan came. "Thank goodness your alright!" Radii cried. "So what is your names, strangers?" Queen Nala asked. "I'm Louise, that's Radii, that's Sven, and that's NinjaMan." I pointed. "Very well visitors." Queen Nala said. "Queen Nala, sorry to interrupt your chat, but may I have a moment with them?" King Undead said. "As you wish." Queen Nala nodded.
We followed King Undead to a golden palace, with knights with golden armour and spears. They held their spears, blocking the door to the entrance of the palace. "Hault! Who are these strangers King Undead?" They asked. "Alpha's. They have lost their home 100s of years ago, and we finally found them." They nodded and moved the spears out of the way, and we entered. NinjaMan, Sven and Radii seemed confused and didn't know what was going on. "Don't worry, just leave it to him." I winked. As we entered a room with walls of diamonds, we took a seat on some diamond chairs. "I have lot's of explaining to do, since your probably really confused." King Undead said. We nodded. "It's me, Undead." He said. He removed his crown, and his hair seemed familiar. That's when I saw a flash back:
2 years ago, he spied on us while saving a lost city... and helped us save the world before the Dragon Of Time could freeze time. I realised it was Undead, and I couldn't believe it. "UNDEAD!" I screamed. "Shh... It's forbidden to shout in the palace of gold." He said. "Sorry..." I sighed. "Okay, let me begin explain everything:
100 of years ago, our planet was known as Planet Kye, and trillions of people lived here. It was very peaceful, and of course, we looked exactly liked humans. Back then, they knew how to know if their humans or Alpha's. Alpha's are the people who lived on Kye. Apparently, population raised quickly, and we did not have enough room for more houses, so we asked the legendary god alien, who's name was unknown created a new planet called earth, and many people moved there. Apparently, about 90% of all the people in Kye moved to Earth, which made the population only 1 billion at the moment. People blamed the legendary god alien for making earth too big and how too many people moved there, so they turned him to stone on a far away planet, still missing to this day. This is why we Alpha's hate humans, as they made our planet seem useless and pointless, so it was forbidden for any humans to come here. And let me tell you a secret..." Undead took a deep breath. "I'm a human as well." He sighed. "So that's I protect any human that comes here, but sometimes I'm not successful." He sighed.
Suddenly, before he could explain more, someone knocked on the door and came in. "Queen Nala wants to battle you 4, because she does not... trust you." He said. "WHAT?" We all shouted.
To Be Continued...
I'm probably going to add only one person at a time for each chapter, so please be patient.
Once again, thanks so much for the nice comments that make my day! And sorry if this chapter was a bit too long...
Hope you enjoyed, and remember to leave your feedback below! ^_^
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Nothing it too long compared to my chapters, lol.