an IJAH Story: A kings arrival is never silent

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  1. MC_Scout

    MC_Scout Fearless Leader Staff Member Manager

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    You cant really ask to join a story... When john has full controll of it, it makes a better product. I dont think any of us asked to be in this story... he sorta added us where he see fit... and the product is amazing.
     
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  2. ItsPacers

    ItsPacers Well-Known-Member Donator

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    Well SORRY
     
  3. John_0696

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    Part 2 of the latest chapter! :D

    Starring:
    @MC_Scout
    @StarlightFox
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Devin610
    @ItsJerry


    The Awakening part 2 continued


    A Player named Gooby then took a flashlight and shun it down the Massive opening in the cocoon. It was slimy and dark. That’s when he saw something move in the bottom. He looked closer at whatever was down there. The unknown thing moved a little bit more, Suddenly it Charged towards the top of the cocoon insanely fast, Killing gooby and the other players that were with him. The player’s expressions then turned to horror as they saw a massive arthropod like creature with a v-shaped head and a red visor for eyes emerge from the cocoon. It let out a Loud roar once more. “GRRROOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRR” It Raised its massive claw like appendage and slammed it on the ground creating an Electromagnetic pulse that fried all the electronics. “Devin! Turn on the backup generators” Jerry said, “It fried every single circuit!” Devin said as he switched on the lights and other electronics back on. The lights flickered on to show that the Monster was Destroying the cocoon and knocking buildings over. “GET OUT OF HERE EVERYONE!” Jerry yelled as the staff ran out of the HQ room.


    Players were scattering like a herd of cattle during a stampede as the Monster began to smash its way out of the cocoon. Star and John managed to get out of the back of the truck and walked towards where all the noise was coming from. There they witnessed the Monster Clicking and clawing at the large walls that surrounded the facility. Star panicked and began to search for Scout, “Star! What are you doing here!?” Louise said, “There’s a monster on the loose, you should run!” she then continued on, Star and John kept running through the facility until john Saw scout. “Star! It’s me! I was right we got to get out of here!” Scout shouted as he ran across the scaffolding, Players watched in horror as the Monster lifted its Claw appendages, and pulled down on the cables that held up the base and the cranes. Metal poles and cables began to snap from the weight of the monster. Cranes began to topple as the hooks got caught in the cables. star and MC_Scout began to run when they saw the lights crashing down behind them. Scout was then wounded when one of the lights snapped off and slammed into scout’s leg. He fell over on the ground screaming in pain as glass shards and light-bulb parts covered his bloody leg. Star then turned around and ran towards MC_Scout, just then, she looked up and saw that one of the cranes cables snapped and a crane was about to come down. “SCOUT!! GET OUT OF THERE!” star yelled, Scout then looked up wondering what star was saying, suddenly the Crane then came crashing down on Scout and the pile of rocks and other materials. “SCOOOUUUUTTT!! NOOOOOOOOOO!” Star yelled in tears, then she heard another loud clicking noise coming from behind her, and she turned around to see the massive monster lifting itself up with its claws.

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    it lifted itself onto the ground level part of the facility. Players then scurried out of the way as the monster stomped its way through the facility Killing well known forum members left and right with a single footstep. Star fell over onto her back and looked in horror at the monster which spread its large wings and roared once more. She quickly then put on a gas mask thinking the monster was a biohazard. The monster then flew off into the distance..

    to be continued...
     
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  4. SpudHead

    SpudHead |~>The 5th Beatle<~|

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    Pls add meh
     
  5. MC_Scout

    MC_Scout Fearless Leader Staff Member Manager

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  6. John_0696

    John_0696 Donator

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    To everyone that wants to be in the story, yes I have been listening to you and yes you will be in the story, I just need to find a good spot for you to appear in and where I see fit.

    Like what Scout said, if I have full control of it, it comes out better, kind of like what @BossClaire did with Meatball moments. (Her story)

    So dont feel sad that your not in the story yet. Again, I need a place to put you in as im still writing the story
     
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  7. xX0Sven0Xx

    xX0Sven0Xx Goodbye everyone, thanks for everything.

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    Ooooohhhh, nice story, can you maybe add me?

    (PS, Check also my story out: The Legend Untold, its somewhere on creations page, too lazy to put a link, lol)
     
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  8. MC_Scout

    MC_Scout Fearless Leader Staff Member Manager

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    *ahem*
    I dont speak for John, but it seems to me that its pretty clear that he doesn't want people asking him to be in his story.
    If you let him do what he wants, with no pressure, it turns out better.
     
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  9. SpudHead

    SpudHead |~>The 5th Beatle<~|

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    Don't to start a flame war but I'm not Johns friend so there's really no chance of me being in it (I don't want to sound selfish) so I have to ask to be in it
     
  10. IAMINACTIVEBYE

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    Amazing. Stunning. What more words can I say?
    Great to be back btw, thanks so much for adding me!
    Keep continuing your story please, its awesome!
     
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  11. John_0696

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    yay a new chapter! :D finally i got to work on the story again! sorry for the long delay, life has been really getting the best of me.

    NOTE: i edited a forum post by Daorack on the forums to fit the story. this does not have any intention to get daorack in trouble, this is just apart of the story.

    Starring:
    @WhatTheHai
    @MC_Scout
    @StarlightFox



    Chapter 6: the Aftermath

    The sun rose slowly over the abandoned city of OITC, vines and grass swayed calmly in the wind as the fog covered the streets. But nearby, a facility was left destroyed after a massive monster awakened and flew off into the outskirts of the city. Rescue teams were rounding people up and pulling people out of the wreckage. Jerry looked in horror as if he saw a battlefield after a war, people were lying on the floor both dead and wounded. Hai walked up to jerry with ocram and NES, “Jerry, Daorack told me to tell you that you and harry are being moved to a safe place while we deal with that monster. Is there anyone else that you want to bring along that could help us in defeating this thing?” Jerry then turned around and slowly pointed at MC_Scout, Star and john who were helping the medical crew load scout onto a gurney. “very well.” Hai said as he and the others walked towards the teens. Later on, star and john sat inside the medical rescue helicopter staring at the badly wounded MC_Scout, who was barely breathing, scout then slowly turned towards star and john and began to utter his last words. “star…” he said, star put her paw on scouts arm. “yeah scout?” she said in tears, “I know this may be my last time seeing you… but I need you, and all of the community to beat this monster, do whatever…it… takes…” scout then closed his eyes and breathed his last breath. Star then started crying harder and put her hands onto her face, John then hung his head down in sadness, knowing that one of his good friends is dead.


    Later that day, Daorack made a forum post explaining what the IJAH staff team is going to do about this upcoming threat.

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  12. Emeritus_IV

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    oh my god, the dao thing at the end fit amazingly xD
     
  13. John_0696

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    Hooray, another chapter, this is where people start to pop up a little more, ill be adding more people who are in the story when i find a part ofr them, but for now stay tuned and enjoy the story!

    Starring:
    @StarlightFox
    @ItsJerry
    @BossClaire
    @ItsPacers
    @DurpehDuckiee
    @Gooby
    @Vaicun
    @PresidentBacon
    @Leopard_Lover21
    @SpudHead
    @QueenAngel32
    @Ninjaman
    @KrisKrikken
    @Katy9078
    @MappyTurtle
    @LouiseXminerX
    @BlueJeansToGo
    @Devin610
    @Spykill3r
    @Killjoy
    @PandaCaity
    @SpiritOfTheWolf
    @John_0696
    @CaitlinUchiha



    Chapter 7: Operation: Takedown phase 1


    A days later, in the capital hall, Daorack stood in front of a crowd of well-known forum members that applied to be in the teams. Including Pacer, Louise, spud, Caitlin and many others. “Alright,” Daorack said, “You are now a part of the Staff defense force. It is your duty to take this massive beast down, Gooby, PresidentBacon, Vaicun, Sera Kueyar, Eli and Roc, you are in team Xenon. Louise, ninjaman, Queenangel, Mappy and Katy, you are with team Devin. Jessie, SpyKill3r, spud, pacer Leo and Claire are in team willy, The rest of the staff team are with me.” Daorack then put his arms behind his back and spoke some more. “Now I know all of you have never had hands on training with such a threat. But we need to do whatever it takes to save the province, if not the whole world from this monster. Team Devin will patrol the outskirts of the survival district, Team Xenon you will be patrolling the parkour district. Team Willy will be Patrolling the SG district. My team will protect the capital. Dismissed!” all the players then walked out of the rooms. As they were walking out, 4 players were walking down the hallway. “So you have information you can share with us Kris?” Caity said as John and star followed behind them. KrisKrikken then nodded, Later on Jerry and harry, caity, star, John and Kris all sat at a table. “We are gonna need all the information from you 3 that can help us take down this beast.” Star then sat down. “well I don’t remember that much, but I do remember Scout saying something about echolocation or something..” Caity then wrote down what star said on a piece of paper. “Anything else?” she said, John then spoke “Im not too sure if were even going to be able to stop it, the technology in minecraft isn’t that advanced, we wouldn’t stand a chance against Muto!” Kris then sighed, “Maybe so…but I believe something can..” Jerry turned towards Kris ”Like what?” he said. Kris then got up, “In 2012, when I was a Moderator on this server, me and my friends would go out into the wilderness. We one day caught a group of griefers building massive balls of tnt to lag the world, one of them set off one of these massive bombs…it awakened something, something huge.


    Kris then pulled up a screenshot of what appeared to be a Massive scaled Reptilian creature rising from the Ocean. “Him…” Kris murmured. Jerry was shocked, he has never seen a creature of this size before. “Wait, Kris you knew about another Giant monster and you didn’t even TELL us!?” Jerry exclaimed. “Oh god I need to tell Dao about this-“ Caity then interrupted him.” Jerry, let him go on We need this info” she then turned towards kris again.” Go on” she said. Kris then sighed again “ I call this monster Gojira, a force of Nature. I’ve been secretly studying him ever since I saw him. He dates back all the way to the ancient alpha era, he is what they call an “Alpha predator” and I think maybe from territorial instincts he might go after the muto.” Caity then got up. “Thank you kris. This info can definitely help us with our situation.” Caity star and john then left the room. Jerry was still standing there with a frustrated look on his face.” Kris, I oughta have banned you for doing this, if you see anything that could jeopardize the safety of our players, you were by code to report it to me or harry!” Kris then took the screenshot back out of the projector, “jerry, if you would listen to me, I think this monster is able to beat this monster, Im sure of it!” Jerry then sighed and walked out of the room.
     
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  14. _Magical

    _Magical Pokémon trainer

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    Yay I'm in none of these ;D



    literally crying on the inside
     
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  15. Silent_Arrow

    Silent_Arrow Cartoon Arrow Looks BadAss

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    Amazing chapters @John_0696
    Can I be in the story as maybe an archer or anything
    It's okay if I don't
    Thanks, keep up the good work :)
     
  16. John_0696

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    yay, a new chapter! i am really enjoying writing this part, as the action is starting to pick up.

    Starring:
    @Devin610
    @LouiseXminerX
    @BlueJeansToGo
    @Ninjaman
    @QueenAngel32
    @Loling

    Enjoy!

    Chapter 8: Operation takedown phase 1 part 2


    2 days later..


    The wind blew on a warm spring night through the Forest biome as team Devin was walking through the tall grass, they had there bows armed ready to strike at anything that threatens them. “keep moving, the disturbance was reported to be coming from here: Devin said to the others following him. “im not sure if were supposed to be out here, im afraid that monster may sneak up on us when he least expect it.” Louise said. Devin then turned around, “Get a grip louise, we took down plenty of Creatures, we will be able to take this thing down too.” The players kept moving, for hours and hours they searched but there were no traces of the monster. “ damnit I thought Willy said the monster was around here!” Ninjaman said, “Are you sure he was correct when he told you the coordinates he found in the logs?” Devin pulled out the paper with the coordinates on it.” He said it was around here, not in the exact location. And were really close, we just can’t stop now.” Ninjaman sighed and kept walking. All of a sudden Queenangel stopped. “Shh guys! Listen, do you hear that?” Devin turned his head, “It was probably just a spider, we have a lot around here. Anyways stop fooling around and keep moving-“ he was then interrupted by a loud crashing sound in a nearby cave. Louise’s legs then began to shake knowing that the monster was down in the massive cave, Devin signaled the others to follow him, they walked into the mine and began to look around, Minecart tracks were warped and torn apart and stone walls were toppled over. the players knew something had to have been here, They then came up to a man-made opening Devin walked in and flicked the nearby switch and the lights then slowly kicked on. What they saw after that was Horrifying, Players lay dead on the ground crushed and mangled. Buildings and bases on the inside were completely destroyed as if a bomb went off, QueenAngel, louise and the others were terrified, Devin then pulled out his communication device. “HQ this is devin…we found the monster”


    They then heard loud clicking and growling sounds coming from nearby, Devin then turned his head towards Large redstone crystals sticking out of the side of the caves, then MUTO slowly rose up holding a redstone crystal in its mouth. It bit into the crystal before swallowing it whole. The players then slowly rose up there fire bows, “Don’t. make. Any. Sounds.” Devin whispered, “we don’t want this thing knowing were here.” They moved slowly towards it, bows armed. That’s when a rail from nearby collapsed and came crashing towards the ground. There was Jessie and Loling wearing their /fly jetpacks ready to take on the monster, MUTO looked up and saw the players, it Snarled and begun to move towards them. “FIRE!” Devin yelled, they then begun to shoot arrows at MUTO, Jessie then flew towards its head getting ready to try and blind the monster, it then turned and tried to snag Jessie with its mouth but she quickly dodged it, the arrows were becoming ineffective towards MUTO. They then quickly switched to plan B, Devin pulled out his High powered Crossbow, armed it with an explosive tipped arrow. He then quickly aimed at MUTO who was smashing its way through the mines trying to attack the players, “hold still you big black Cockroach..” devin said. The MUTO’s claw then began to glow a reddish orange. It then lifted its arm into the air and roared. Louise, ninjaman and Queen than began to scramble towards the entrance of the mine. but before they could even leave, It smashed its claw into the ground and let out a Electromagnetic pulse. It fried all the circuitry in the vicinity, Jessie’s jetpack then fried and she went careening towards the ground, killing her. the MUTO then spread its wings and flew out of the cave. towards a large city several miles away...
     
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  17. jessie

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    Wow cute death I had thanks
     
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  18. Gooby

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    Well
    that was short lived lmao
    But I least I died fabulously

    Wait I'm alive again
    I have risen from the dead
     
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  19. John_0696

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    if your wondering what the Mosnter sounds like, Listen to this video :)

     
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  20. QueenAngel32

    QueenAngel32 I'm up ❤

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    You're doing a good job!
     
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